FF:'Jazba' chappy 2 updated on page 5

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Hey babas, Ab toh u remember me na..😃
Ok,if u don't thn it's ok also 😆

Actually,m writing my 1st ever ff on both NeSam n ArDhika. Since m a big big wala fan of RK. So m bringing Raneeka also, ab 1st ff mein apni 1st crush ko toh lani chahiyena..😳

N I named the FF"Jazba"



It will b a musical journey. Hop u will lyk it. N I want comments, no actually critiszm. So guys do critisize it tell me if u really want me 2 cont it... 😊

Maine mari entriyaa re
Dil mein baazi dhukdhukiyaan re...
Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk Dhuk 🤣

_ _ _ The joker Rockstar Mugdha aka Maggy ⭐️

Character sketch:

1.Ranbir Kapoor:
The handsome hunk of college. The famous rocksrar n guitarist.


2.Neil Kapoor:
Younger n step bro of Ranbir.Another hunk of college.The biggest flirt.


3.Arjun Malhotra:
Best friend of Neil n another hunk of college. BT is very calm n quiet,introvert.


4.Deepika Ahmed:
New girl in college,self-confident. The anarkali wearing Muslim girl.


5.Samaira Thakur:
The Bengali nerd yet stylish. Best friend of Ranbir.


6.Radhika Singh Rathode:
The most stylish girl,fashionista n new in college. Full extrovert. Hopes 2 b a world famous model.


7.Varun Ahmed:
Big bro of Deepika. Is the famous comedian of college.


8.Shah Rukh Khan:
The music teacher n the mentor. Rough behaved person BT soft from heart.



9.Tanusree Sarkar:
Another fashionista. Tough competitor of Radhika. Lyks 2 b flirted.


10.Another characters:
Teji,Kritika,Mrs.Katrina,Principal Samrat,Rishi kapoor,Neetu Kapoor etc.

Prologue:
Zindagi ki safaar mein kabhi bhi much bhi ho jaati gain
Kabhi khushiyon ki barsaat toh kabhi ghamo ki dhup aati hain
Tabhi toh yeh safaar surili hain
Sangeet lahro ki tarah kabhi ucha kabhi niche chalti gain
Zindagi sangeet hain
Zindagi dosti hain
Zindagi dosti hain tabhi toh is mein sur aati hain... Dostoki pyaar bhari majako se
Phir aati hain pyaar
Mithaas bhar deti gain tikhi we zindagi mein
Phir yeh safaar Khatti-meethi-tikhi ban kar puri hain
Par jab dost hi dost na rahe...
Pyaar hi pyaar na rage toh???

Neil:Bhai,tujhe sach much aisa lagta hain ki tera bestest friend aisa kar Santa hain?

Ranbir: Toh u don't biliv ur luv? Ur bhai? Maine aapni aankhonse dekha hain.

Neil:BT bhai hamesha ankhon Dekhi baate...

Sam:Neil,tu mujhpe bharosa nahi karta?

Neil:Bt may b tujhe galat phayami hua hain.

Arjun:Baas mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna. When my best friends don't biliv me toh m going.Forever.Bye.

Neil goes after Arjun.

Neil:Arey arjun,ruk.Please.

Ranbir just stands still,was nt able 2 move.Sam burstd out crying...



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love_never_dies thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting to read 😛
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make it awesome darlo... want to read it. all the best.
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Thnxx all 4 luk ng it n 4 the inspiration. Plz critisize abt the prologue n character sketch also 😃
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Thnxxx all 4 the inspiration. Plz critisize abt the character sketch n prologue also 😃
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like the prolong... and character sketches omg. i like it.
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eager to read further
all d best bud!
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Thnx a loot sharab n 123456me😃
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Jaldi update karna.. this is fun 😉😆
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Thnxxx a loottt yaaros...😃
Tum logo me aapna precious tym nikala iski liye...Him toh dhannya ho gaye ⭐️
Meooowww...will update the 1st chap soon 😉
Character sketch meet n did chotusa changes. Lara ki jaga dekho kisko laya hain😈 n Sam ko bangali bana dia 😆
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