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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_

Thnxxx a loottt yaaros...😃

Tum logo me aapna precious tym nikala iski liye...Him toh dhannya ho gaye⭐️
Meooowww...will update the 1st chap soon😉
Character sketch meet n did chotusa changes. Lara ki jaga dekho kisko laya hain😈n Sam ko bangali bana dia😆

tuh maar khaegi mere haat se... yaar mein toh soch rahithi tuh mazak kar rahi hein.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@sharab:baba,I always do majak n bringing u here was a seriouswala majak 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_

@sharab:baba,I always do majak n bringing u here was a seriouswala majak😛

ab kya kar rahi ye yaar..ab 1st chapter post bhi kardo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Sharab:yaar,posting from mubilu is very difficult. Phir will post today or tomorrow.😊
@Zaruk:thnxx yaar😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnxxx a looot yaaros n dostos 4 liking it n 4 comments.Sry,couldn't reply individually coz m uploading from mubilu. Bt can update thus after returning home from my PC. Nw here goes the 1st chapy...😃



... Chapter 1 ...


The railway station. Students gathering there. Some1 tense, some1 excited, some1 old, some1 new.
A new girl in anarkali entered.

Deepika(monologue):Finally,new journey of my lyf. New college, new experience.

Suddenly she heard some1 screaming.

The voice of a boy:E anarkali wali chashmish,hat samne se...

She movd 2 face him n saw a girl chasing the boy.She movd frm there hurriedly. The girl finally caught him n was hitting him badly.

The girl:Ranbir ki bachche,How dare u?Tune meri haat se chocolate chhin kar kha liya. Aj toh tujhe nahi chhorne wali.

Ranbir:Par Sam. Maine aapne bachcho ke liye hi toh Chhina na.

Sam:What? Tere bachche?

Ranbir:Yup,u jst said na Ranbir ke bachhe..

Sam:Why?? Tu bhi na..nach baliye 2 much.

Both bursted out laughing.

The whole scenery was seen by 2 persons. 1 is deepika who was also laughing n the other was some1 standing far behind,just looking at them.Then his best frnd called him from behind.

Arjun:Neil!!

Neil:Arey,Arjun, when u came? OK,let's go.

Arjun:Tu abhi tak bhula nahi paya hain na usey. Meri wajese...

Neil:Arjun..Stop it,yaar..

Arjun:Toh why were u staring lyk this?

Neil:Vo meri jo ankhein hain,beautiful girls in shorts mein dekhkar starts hilling.

Arjun:Kya?

Neil:Haan,Actually na main Teri tarah meri draupadis ko share nahi kar sakta.After all, u r Arjun.

Arjun:Wht was this,haan?

Neil:My sense of Pagalmar,SOP, lyk ppl have sense of humor, I have SOP.

Arjun:Neil,shut up. Tu Sam aur Ranbir ko dekh raga tha.

Neil:Nop,tanu ko. See,my draupadi in shorts is coming towards me.

Tanu:Hi,Neils..How r u??Missed u much in the vacation.

Neil:Baby,I missed u 2 3 4 5 ... Infinity. Do u knw, how I stays these long 30 days widout u.

Tanu:Oh,really.

Arjun felt irritated seeing this flirting n all.

Arjun:Neils baby,u wait here.Main train mein jataa hoon.

Neil:Ok,babu,jaa. Don't disturb us.

Arjun was going 2 the train, his face covered wid bandages due 2 the wounds caused by an road accident happend recently n sunglass in eyes,when he saw a girl who was also liking fashionista lyk tanu from behind.

Arjun:tanu is there wid Neil. Toh yeh kaun hain?

The girl move 2 face him.She was going somewhere hurriedly n suddenly "thud". Arjun fell over the girl. N they shard an eye lock.

The girl:How dare u!! Just stand up.

Arjun stood up hurriedly n thn the girl.

The girl:How dare u,haan? Mujhpe ajtak kisine hath lagane ki hilwat nahi ki thi.

Arjun:Hilwat?

The girl:I meant none dared 2 touch me.

Arjun:Oh achcha,himmat.

The girl:Yeah whatever. U knw what, m Radhika Singh rathode. Hum Royal family se hain. London mein model banne hi wale the ki dadaji became sick n m here 2 do bardhrusht dumbs lyk u.

Arjun:Bardhrusht nahi bar...

Radhika:Just shut up. Go 2 the hell.

Arjun:Miss Rathode u were doing hurry n so all this happend.

Radhika:U knw why,just go from here. U mommy,designed wid bandages.

N she went from there.

Arjun(monologue):Yeh kya thi.Whatever,lemme go 2 the train.

On the other side,Deepika was waiting 4 some1. Then she heard a voice from behind.

The voice:TipTip barsa pani,panic ne aag lagayi - Par jab tune maari entriyaan,toh aag pani baan gayi.

Deepika movd n screemd: Bhaijaan.

N he was her bro Varun.

Varun:Choti,plz mujhe bhaijaan maat bula yahaa. Bhai,bhaiya bula. Dekh meri pyaari behna,here I have an image.

Deepika:Bt😕 bhaijaan,ammi abbu ne bachpan se yehi sikhaya hain na.

Varun:Arey meri ma, yeh tera purana college nahi hain.

Sam:Arey,Varun. Toh yeh hain Teri behen. Don't worry issey bhaiya bulana main Sikha dungi.

Varun:Thnxx yaar sam. Choti,meet her. She is Sam,my frnd n now my savior.

At the same tym Neil came there.

Neil:Arey,Varun, u r ri8. She is a savior. She can save any1 from happiness.

Varun:Kya,bro,phirse start ho gaya.Neil...

Sam:Arey,chod na, aisi baato mein don't waste ur mahatwapurn dimaag.

Varun:Toh aj tune maan hi liya ki meri dimaag mahatwapurn hain.

Deepika:Let's go guys,late ho raha hain.Train will start nw.

Neil:Haan,varun bhaijaan n bhaijaan ki choti let's go. I don't have tym 4 faltu ppl.

Varun:See,chidhana shuru bhi ho gaya. Chal koyi nahi,sallu is also bhaijaan n waise bhi main toh superman-salman ka fan.

All laughs together.

Deepika:Uff..Chalona. (Monologue)Akhir what's the prob between Sam n Neil.

They all in the train.The train whistled n all got seated. Deepika just came near the door n at the same tym the train started. N she saw Ranbir running, running so fast 2 reach the train.
Deepika just raised her hand n Ranbir somehow reached 2 her hand, held it, put his leg on the train n she pulled.
Finally,he is on the train still holding the hand of deepika, giving the sigh of relief...

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Note:Guys do lyk if u really lyk n do critisize on the comments plzzz. Hop u will lyk it.😊


Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i look bimbo to you huh???!!!! ... well nice chapie ...chalo show mein toh arjun aur neil ka convo dekhneke liye milte nahin yeha se hi kam chalana parega...
darlo edit the tittle and put chapter 1 updated there.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravanfan

i look bimbo to you huh???!!!! ... well nice chapie ...chalo show mein toh arjun aur neil ka convo dekhneke liye milte nahin yeha se hi kam chalana parega...
darlo edit the tittle and put chapter 1 updated there.

Ok,sharab. M editing. Thnxx a loot😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
update soon.interesting story👏👏.please dont make us wait for long
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx a lot guys n will update soon.Actually,m busy aid studies n may b will b able 2 update 1 or 2 day in a week 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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seriously mein sarah khan lagti hun tujhe.

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