PART II ( Now its my turn)

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Part III-will be the last part of my story.😃

Anu approaches the man in black, and stands directly in front of where he was staring in the air, and all the mixed voices are still going on in his head. Anu is elatedly shocked when she sees the man, and screams "Chaitanya!", "Chaitanya," the name echoes in his mind, as all the voices in his head say it. Then he points a finger at Anu, and she anxiously says "Anupama," as if understanding precisely what he was asking. Then all the voices in Chaitanya's head start saying "Anupama, Anupama," and the last voice in his mind is his own, saying her name, Anu. With all these voices he feels dizzy, and clutches his head with both hands, and falls to the floor, fainted.

Anu shriekes his name and then screams for help. In a second, a lot of people come up, and help take Chaitanya to the hospital, where they admit him. When everyone had left the room, Anu came near Chaitanya, and tried to touch his face. But as she brought up her hand, her ring got stuck in her munglesuiter, preventing her hand from touching his face. Stunned, she sits rigidly on a nearby chair, closes her eyes, and goes over all the changes that had taken place in her life. She was so deeply engrossed in her thoughts, that she doesn't even notice Chaitanya wake up, look at her, smile and then fall back asleep again. When the nurse enters, Anu softly whispers, "I'm going to leave now. And if he wakes up, please don't tell him about me". The nurse promises.

As soon as Chaitanya wakes up again, the first question he asks is where Anu is. When nobody answers, he runs out of the hospital and to his house. There the servant tells him about everything that had happened, and from there he rushes to Vikram's house. The whole way, all he can think is "I know Anu was in my room at the hospital, but why did she leave without me?". When he halts to a stop into the foyer of Vikram's house, the three witches are really dazed and start throwing questions at him rapidly. However, his eyes were searching for Anu, as he blurted out mismatched answers, to make them stop talking. Finally Chaitanya demanded "Where is Anu?". All the witches are taken aback as they look at each other, and suddenly an evil idea forms in Maya's head.

There is a party this evening, and there I will have a surprise for you," Maya said casually. " you won't be able to see her until tonight's party. Now you go rest in Anu's room. As he enters Anu's room, he starts seeing her everywhere, missing her incredibly. "How will I be able to wait till this evening?" he asks himself. Downstairs, Ridma and her nani question Maya about her new plan. "Now is my time to get revenge from him for rejecting my daughter. Today Daksh's family is holding a party in Anu's honor. If we take Chaitanya with us, then he will see Anu with Daksh, and she will see him. Both will feel bad, but they won't be able to do anything. Therefore I sent him in Anu's room, that he miss her more and more. We should just be grateful that Vikram isn't here right now, he'll just arrive straight at the party". The three witches crackle with laughter at the plot of their plan.

Daksh's house is decorated very elegantly. Daksh, his bhabi and bhai, were welcoming the guests in the reception. When Daksh meets Chaitanya he says, "Your face seems familiar, but I don't recognize from where". "It must have been at some business meeting," Chaitanya replies. "Maybe," answers Daksh. Chaitanya enters the house, searching for Anu among the party guests. Maya stops Vikram at the door and tells him about Chaitanya. "Why did you bring him here?" he asked, appalled. "He has to know someday, so why not tonight? He should know Anu is happy with Daksh".

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 good going...nice creation...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that is very nice and creative. keep it up!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW...Great thought

CAN you remove the evil witches from the scene.....POOR ANU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think you may have to write the story going forward and give all the happiness to ANU...and kick Maya, Riddhima, Nani ,Bhai, Bhabi's BUTT..... And also make Anu's and Dadi Character strong....

thank you

Edited by anna44 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks, for your appreciation.The PART III I am going to post very soon. 😃 It is the last part.
Edited by samia siddiqui - 17 years ago

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