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Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

Wow divya.. whata dhamakedar update..

Thanks Riyu
so as i predicted... he hireda private jet.. kyun?😆

Haha, yeah, did u guess this jet idea?😉
rantara tashan going on...😆.. man i love their tashan ion every form..❤️

Yeah, Me too in ur stories😉😆

that scene when he came close to her... isss!! having goosebumps...

Thanks u liked it, I really had hard time writing this scene
he refused to un-cuff her hand... lets see what happen now...😛
all in all dhamakedaar chapter...⭐️

Originally posted by: pampz

Dear Shalini ... first of all thanks a tonnn yaar for gifting us this awesome story 🥳

Thanks pampz dear

u know for a long time we yedis r not getting a real rantara story ... u know we were all starving like hell. i was saying this to riyu and she told me to read ur story.

Yeah me too, bahut kam writers reh gaye hai forum abh

when i found out ur story ...shamefully i saw that i kept a res on ur thread and just forgot to read it and give comment. i was taliking just after u gave ur prolouge. but its not my fault entirely dear ... i was not in good shape of mind ...i was not in a proper shape to start with a new unknown story.

Yeah I know, I get it what you are trying to say, mera bhi mood aisa hi ho gya hai abh

and voila after months today i started ur story and i just got drowned into it . i cant tell you what a fantastic hypnotic writer you are 👏

Thanks dear😳😳

i loved it ...i cherished it and enjoyed it with everything i have in me . it was beyond dark and really scary ...and hatts off to you, u maintained the same rough mysterious dark raghu in each of your chapter. i am just flooded with joy now. taras gayithi ek genuine real rantara dark story padneko ...and u gifted this to me and is me Riyu ka bhi hath hai ...usine bataya yaar ...nahito am just missing this awesome splendid work for months.

Thank u again and thanks Riyu yr

i must mention that u r now the best hypnotic dark writer of Raghu and Antara story. 👏

Thanks for compliment dear lekin tumse achi nahi 😉😳

am elated reading those fantastic expressions of Raghu ...DARK RAGHU ...haha lolzzz

I love DARK Raghu😳😳

and again am sorry re for not reading it earlier and commenting it ...plzz mafi dede ...and plzz pm me also ...i don wanna miss this story anymore.

Oh don't say sorry yr, I get it

And of course I will pm u😉

luv u shalini 🤗

Originally posted by: Ajju15s

Fantastic update...👍🏼

loved it..

Thanks Ajju dear😳😳

Kahi antu Koi khoyi Hui princess to nahi..Oops..may bhi na..😆

No dear, it's not a fairy type story, guess something different😉😉

Story aur bhi interesting hoti jaa rahi hai..

Abhi picture baki hai mere dost, yeah toa suruvaat hai

Raghu ka character bahot unique hai..boley to ek dam mast..😳

Thanks dear😳

Ab jaldi se next update dedo ji..😛

OK ji, I will try

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Hey Divya...

I am so SORRY dear...

I was real busy...

Well i will be reading and giving u all the feedback now...

Prologue:

Well i LOVED it...

The push was a very good one...

Antara landed straight in his arms...

But Why a mistake???

Chapter No 1:

Ok it was lovely...

Antara's aunty and auncle...

They take antara as a thrash...

Well what is he gonna do about aunty now...

Antara broke her phone now what?

no messages??

Ohh i am waiting...

Chapter No 2:

Yayyy ho auncle aunty gone for 2 days...

Finally a relief...

But how did the phone?? hmmm...

Antara had a nice day...

I loved it...

Its amazing...

Chapter No 3:

Divya Divya Divya...

I LOVED this chapter...

Raghu took her...

Antara struggled and he is all playing...

The glass piece was unexpected...

Now what?

Chapter No 4:

So raghu took her to his house...

I loved the part where antara was trying to smash the window with a chair hahahhah...

Antara thoughts are also known to raghu...

I loved it...

Chapter No 5:

America...

Are u serious?

YAyyy...

I loved when he fed her food...

Raghu is angry not good...

Chapter No 6:

Ok a big fighty action romantic chapter...

Raghu will take her with him the hard way or the easy way...

Ok antara finally smashed the window and jumped...

Raghu is here...

Oh finally she gave up...

Antara is happy for no passport but he is raghu...

Chapter No 7:

Private jet...Yayyy hooo...

Ok this update was amazing...

Antara is heavy with questions and raghu is not answering...

She is really angry...

And Raghu is not giving up...

I cant wait for more...

Update ASAP...

Pm Me 4 sure...

And thank u for the last pm's...

Love u...

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Awesome update dear