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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Ajju15s


Wow..beautiful poem👏

Loved it...😃
love rantara..😃
Tnx for pm
Keep writing..😉


Thanks di... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful shivi darling🤗

Shabd ki kami padrahi hain Rantara confession ke poem ke baarein main comment karne keliye😆😆😆

Tune toh first episode se lekar unki poori journey ko yaad dilaadi mujhe😊😊😊

Raghu aur Antu ka jagda, unki dosti, Raghu ka sorry bolneka anokha andaaz, phir rootna, manana, vo choti choti, pyaari pyaari mulaakat, dono ka paas aana its just fabulous

Aur confession its just outstanding. Its was so real, so heart touching.

Raghu ka mouth organ bajanaa, Antu ka aana uss dhun ko sunkar, antu ka realisation that he is one who was playing that. Aur Raghu ka special wala confession. Vo Rose dena. Haaye I'm just lost
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awww Sweety...
What a lovely, heart-touching and memorable poem👏
Jo show me confess hua tha uske place me tumara poem bolta toa
Sab ladkiyaan aur bhi fidaa ho jati apne Raghu pe 😳😳😳
Poem padte padte mein unke scenes yaad kar rahi thi, WOW
U sweet little girl, I wanna hug u tight🤗
Keep Writing, U r Wonderful👏
Love u❤️


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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

<font color="#CC0099"><font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful shivi darling🤗

Shabd ki kami padrahi hain Rantara confession ke poem ke baarein main comment karne keliye😆😆😆

Tune toh first episode se lekar unki poori journey ko yaad dilaadi mujhe😊😊😊

Raghu aur Antu ka jagda, unki dosti, Raghu ka sorry bolneka anokha andaaz, phir rootna, manana, vo choti choti, pyaari pyaari mulaakat, dono ka paas aana its just fabulous

Aur confession its just outstanding. Its was so real, so heart touching.

Raghu ka mouth organ bajanaa, Antu ka aana uss dhun ko sunkar, antu ka realisation that he is one who was playing that. Aur Raghu ka special wala confession. Vo Rose dena. Haaye I'm just lost
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No thanks di for such a beautiful comment...
Maza aa gya padh k
I am in love with your colourful comments 😳
Aapney apne busy schedule Mein time nikaal Kr comment kiya uske liye...

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EK PYAALI SI KISSY...
MUWWWAAAHHH!!!!!!!😳 😉
(aapko kya lga thank you bolungi?? How can I?? Apni di ko gussa thodey hi dilaana h thanks bol ke)

Love you a lot di... 😳
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: salini143

<font size="4">Awww Sweety...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">What a lovely, heart-touching and memorable poem👏</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">Jo show me confess hua tha uske place me tumara poem bolta toa</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">Sab ladkiyaan aur bhi fidaa ho jati apne Raghu pe😳😳😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">Poem padte padte mein unke scenes yaad kar rahi thi, WOW</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">U sweet little girl, I wanna hug u tight🤗</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">Keep Writing, U r Wonderful👏</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">Love u❤️</font>




Awww...
Thank you so much di...
You wanna hug me...okay come 🤗
Love u di... 😳
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Poem


Hi!!!! 😃
I am back. I wrote this yesterday night when I was just having a look on my past...
And comparing it with my present
I was once a girl who tried to commit suicide just bcz I got lowest marks
Well later I realized that it was the worst decision ever...
When I was in full depressed mood for few days then I received a msg from one of my friends
If you focus on problems, u will have more problems
But if you focus on Solutions,
You will have more OPPORTUNITIES

this single msg changed my life...
I started to think positively...

And one more person who is my role model
My very own SANJU DI she inspired me a lot
Di jinki life ka hi mantra hai EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON

Di you have suffered a lot of problems but you never lose hope...
And ofcourse ROHAN BHAIYYA who was always there for you...
I just... Kya kahun yaar...
Wait!!!!
👏👏👏
And pata h Maine AYAZ se bhi kuch seekha h
Once in his show he said
Jab life aa kar tumhe dhakka maarey na to us key aankhon Mein aankhein daal kar bolo
Come BABY!! LETS PLAY THE GAME...


okay bohot bol liya now come to the poem...
That I am still learning from my life...
And I will learn till the day I die...

Tedhi medhi raahon pe chalna seekh rahi hoon
Girtey girtey sambhalna seekh rahi Hu

Behtey aansuon k saath muskurana seekh rahi hoon
Apno se hi dard chupaaney k bahaaney dhoondh rahi hoon

Har haalaat k saath dhalna seekh rahi hoon
Main toot tey toot tey judna seekh rahi hoon

Har pal badaltey waqt k saath chalna seekh rahi hoon
Main haartey haartey jeetna seekhna rahi hoon

Har galti k saath sudharna seekh rahi hoon
Main har dhaltey din k saath ubharna seekh rahi hoon

Logon k peechey chupey asli chehro Ki pehchaan Ni mujhe
Isiliye ab yaaron Mein bhi mohtaat(alert) rehna seekh rahi hoon

Aaj pucha jb Kisi ne 'k aisi to nahi thi tum'
To muskura kar ye keh Kr aagey badh gayi main

SHAYAD AB MAIN JEENA SEEKH RAHI HOON



So!!!! How was it???
Ni pasand aaya to I am so sorry
Kya Karun Mann Kr rha tha dil Ki baat share krney ka to likh dala Jo dil Mein aaya...
Agar pasand aaya Ho to...
Please comment...
I will be waiting for your valuable feedback...
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Bacha hugs...🤗
Not only you yaar each and every people gets through such phase in their life. Life is not a bed of rose for anyone.. and even rose has thorns... AND THATS WHY ITS A ROSE...

Personally i feel that we all aspire for happy life, but its also true that this hard times makes the happy moment glowing... this hard moment inspires us... and if we get through such moments keeping faith on our will at the end we all found ourself better than before...

Loved this poem a lot bacha... true words...👏👏

shayad hum sab bhi aisey hi jeena sikhte hain... and there is no other way of learning...life ka exam pass karne kaa bass yahin ek funda hain...


PS: bacha... tumahara signature kamal kaa hain.. i love that song...😛
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Beautiful poem shivu 😃
Sacch hai if you focus on solution u have more opportunities 😊
Humesha positive sochna chahiye ye mujhey kisine bataya 😃
And yes everything happens for a reason 😊 ammu sahi kehti hai 😃
Thank you for pm dear 😊
Hugs 🤗

Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
This so beautiful & true😊
Bohot khoob Shivi😃
Loved it & thanks for the PM!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Res for two days. 😃
Golu molu remind me to unres it 😆

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