**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-2](note@pg34) - Page 7

Originally posted by: rima4ever

beautiful emotional update

Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Riuuu...🤗...kya start dia yaar...👏...

prologue mein seedha Kashmir scene k track...😳...loved it...Antu ko hosh aaya...aur Raghu ko (atleast uski parchayee ko...) darwaje se kisakthe dekh liya...😳...
he he... thank you😆

awww...itnaaa dard...dono kitna kuch seh rahe hain...aur unke saath-saath unse jude huwe saare log bhi (unme hum bhi shamil hain...)......😭...

Dard kee baad khusi bhi too ane wali hain..😳

par koi nahi...just waiting 4 dem to live happily as a couple......yeh bhi din zaroor ayeinge...(haina Ria...😉...)wid d cookies scene m imagining also d cricket playing scene now...😆...😃...😉......

Aaap too abhi see imagine karne lage.. thamba thamba jii...😆

i wanted to know about d Kashmir scenes long back...😊...i thot u'll b giving d story back n forth...but i think it wud b too confusing to juggle between d present n d flashback scenes...n difficult too...😕...

yup... it will be a bit confusing for all of us... so i didn't go that way...

i love watever u write......❤️...its of super-dooper-hit types...i wud never b able to explain it properly...but u give such awesome scenes yaar...👏...👍🏼...😎...BLOCKBUSTERS indeed...🥳......

Blockbuster nahin hain. jii... bas samajh loo rantara effect see sabkuch acha lagta hain.😆

ok i wanted to ask u dis question long bck...but never cud actually...ummm...

Antara's House is in Kashmir, in Shrinagar...near Dal lake right...?...but were exactly...?...i mean do you kno d district 's name...as u have visited it...d area's name...were in Shrinagar is Dal Lake situated...?

Sorry if u got confused...but i really wanted to know...dat were exactly in Shrinagar...is d place...???...

Shrinagar is the main city of Kashmir dist... Daal lake is the the huge and main water reservoir at the center of city... daal lake shore is a quite large area .. so i couldn't explore the place.. cause it stretched almost half of the city... antara's house was somewere near to daal lake... but i can't say the exact name of the lane or road...

Ok...i'll b back wid other chapters...ASAP...just continue writing...as i read dat u wer planning 2 delete all ur writings...😲...

...if nt for Pampz......thanks 4 her interuptions...

...n e1 i have told u b4...if feeling low den do read d previous comments/reviews/analysis...u'l feel better...(hopefully)...😃...

...my humble request to u ...YEDI BEHNA...plz never do stop ur stories...tc...n keeep spreading RaNtara Mania...☺️...😃...lot of love...❤️...

Originally posted by: pampz

Riyu i must admit this was the best ever scene of a boy giving flower to a girl ...

i my whole life i have never gone through such an intense beautiful scene of flower giving ...i was wondering it was just a simple thing ...happenes every now and then in cenemas daily soaps and in real life too ...have seen a lot ...but nothing touched me , moved me , soothed me THIS MUCH .

Is that so?! then it must be for rantara effect.. each and every scene looks different for them na😳

i am in awe after reading this beautiful piece of update...its beyond fantastic ...and the last line "Alarmingly Different" ...OMG ...those words just blew my sleep away from my eyes ... i was smiling endlessly after reading this ...

Whatever happens... Even in the worst condition.. Heart never fails to beat till it is alive.. Antara's mind is yet to understand the alarmingly different feeling but as usual her heart had already got the signal😳

kudos to you that how u make Antara feel HIM differently ...that was so subtle so delicate and so mindblowingly beautiful ...the sensation that u created was wonderful ...

Thanks.. .😃

it was so obvious that a girl can never feel anything for a murderer of her parents except severe hatred...it happened here also ...Antara had absolute hatred and rage for him in her heart but ...BUT Raghu simply broke away the harsh and hard wall between them ... am sure he is able to break it without any sound ...now the thing is she needs to realise it and accept it in her heart ...she needs to understand she wd never ever feel for someone if he is truely a wrong doer ...God can never let it happen ...

It is said that na.. ki kisi see itna bhi mat nafrat karo kii nafrat karnee wale see pyar hoo jayein.., 😉... here its going exactly same like that... there are so many obstacles to bve overcome for both of them to understand the ultimate feelings for each other... but before everything.. their hearts has somehow attracted to each other... 😊

loved it with my soul dear ...update the next part jaldi jaldi ...

Will try to update soon vampy ji...😳

Chapter 36

"Aap kaa muskarana arzoo humara

Aap ki sikayadein sar akhon pe sawara"

Raghu's pov:

As soon as I saw the smile on antara's face I forgot about all the pain irritation and frustration I was having a moment ago. While she grinned huge looking towards the tulip flower kept on the bed it felt like she didn't need to switch on the light, her smile was enough to remove the darkness from the whole room. She rushed towards the bed like a careless chirpy butterfly attracted by the vibrant flower. At that moment the dupatta slipped down from her neck and I chocked all of a sudden. She slowly touched the petals of flower with her fingertips and I felt shiver rushing down my spine. I wonder how it would feel if her fingers caressed over my skin just like the flower, how it would feel?! That thought shivered me more. She slowly picked up the flower in her hand. I didn't know but I never felt so happy and satisfied in my whole life. Her smile was like the best prize for me, for all my troubles to search that flower. She still didn't notice me as she was busy in adoring the flower. Ruksana was right; she really loved that flower a lot. A little smirk appeared at my lips seeing her childlike enthusiasm after getting that flower. She didn't even notice that her dupatta was off and someone was gazing her from the window. I always saw her stern determined side, a girl who was mourning for her parents' death, fighting with the world but never saw that innocence in her who was so happy just to get a flower.

Sometimes I felt like she was hiding her true face behind that stern sad mask. She was not like that and her chirpy smile which sometimes caressed her lips indicated that how much life she was hiding inside her. I noticed her eyes which were a bit moistened. Was she upset?! Nope, her smile was of genuine happiness.

The red tulip was just inches away from her lips. Her lips had a natural red sparkle which didn't need any extra color. Even those crimson rims were looking like flower petals, more tender and glossy. I literally forgot to breathe. Antara lifted the flower and touched the petals with her chicks closing her eyes. I remembered the moment I touched those flower and felt the tenderness. At that moment I couldn't decide which was softer, her chicks or those petals? My head was almost plastered between two metal rods of window and it invoked more. My lips were parted in amusement. She detached the flower from her chicks and held near her chest. Her chest was uncovered due to fallen duppata so I clearly noticed the flower resting in between the curves of her soft chest and caressing as it moving ups an down with her rhythmic breath. Following the every movement my heart thudded. I kept on staring her breathless, lifelessly. I didn't know how I managed to hold the grill steal. All power, pride had literally left me at that moment making me numb, powerless.

Slowly she opened her eyes with that content happiness reflecting in her gleaming eyeballs. Then her eyes fell on window and our eyes met. Her eyes widened as the shock reflected in those dark brown orbs. Her lips parted and mouth made a perfect O. With a deep chocking breath she almost idolized on the bed looking towards me. I was expecting her to freak out but her comical face made me smirk a bit. She looked really cute like that. I was observing her eyeballs, dark brown color full of warmth, innocence; something would make you drown into them. She blinked a bit while I smirked, making obstacle between our eye contact. Even that some second of disconnection made me annoyed a bit. I frowned looking at her. By then she gained her consciousness. She quickly looked away from me looking sidewise. Something hit me hard at that moment, soundless but powerful when she avoided my gaze. I felt that, each and every moment when she rudely ignored me. I looked away and sighed and then I understood that I was not breathing for long. In no time I looked back to her. She was steal seating there in same posture looking sidewise. Her eyes were squeezed shut tightly, she was beating her lips and her hands were squeezing the tulip . Looking at her expression it felt like she was having some inner battle. I quietly observed her for a min and then decided to get her attention. After all I couldn't stand there for long.

"Eee... Chchhk..." I made sound and she opened her eyes. She looked at e sternly with composed face. I chuckled a bit. "Fir see Jhansi kii rani ban gayi... Apun kaa thobra itna kharab hain kya?!! Dekh te hii gussa aa jata hain issey?!!" I questioned in my mind. She slowly stood up from the bed without shifting her stern gaze from me. I gulped hard as I understood the upcoming explosion. "S**a raghunath. Tu too gaya aaj.." My inner voice alarmed me. She stood at the front of window throwing her hardest gaze to me. "Ghoor kyun rahi hain?!! Apun kaa thobra bahut pasand aa gaya kya?!" even in that condition I couldn't stop myself making a joke. She bit her lips hard to stop her frustration which was clearly shown in her facial expression and burning eyes. I sighed. If the lamb wad about to get sacrificed then at least it should finish his last pending work of life and I was the sacrificial lamb there! "Acha chal chor... pichli batein cancel kar de... Dekh, das min se jyada latak raha hoon idhar... hath dukh raha hain apun kaa..."

"Yee tulip tum layein hoo?!" her straight and stern question made my mouth shut. Her voice was so cold and calm, just like the calmness before storm. I almost lost the track listening to that voice. I sighed again and said, "Chal.. Tu too khud hi samajh gayi..." I tried to keep my voice firm, "Waisey bhi aur kaun hoga joo tere liye akha mumbai chan mare gaa bas ek phool ke liye... Haan apun hii laya tera yee tulip." I didn't know what I was blabbering in annoyance and confusion. For some days I lost my control over my speech especially when she was around. Even in the tremendous anger her eyes rounded a bit in amusement, her lips also parted a bit but soon she controlled that. "Ab yaar color pasand naa ayein too complain mat karna... Udhar bas laal rang kaa hii milta hain." Her anger changed into unbelievable gaze. "Dekh yaar... ab tere koo tera tulip mill gaya too jald see mere koo mera sorry de de aur apun idhar se khisak leta hain." at last I finally said my words. For a moment her face turned complete blank listening to my blabbers."What?!!" she asked in confused tone. "Arey watt(what) lagane koo nahin kaha re. Sorry dene koo kahan. De de yaar... teri iss sorry ke chakkar mein apun ki nind aisa urr gayi hain ki do bottle bubbly aunty maar ne se bhi wapas nahin ati..." her mouth turned into big O listening to my words. Taking that as a positive sign I continued, "nind nahin ati fir bhi sapna ati hain... aisa sapna jis mein tu..." I quickly controlled myself and bit my tongue. If I going to tell about those illusions I have for her the situation wouldn't turn good after all effort. I sheepishly met her eyes which were a bit annoyed and also confused. "Chor woo sab... Yaar tujhe apun kii feeling samajh nahin ati kya?! Kyun khata pita mast insaan koo takleef de raha hain?! Issiliye fatafat mafi de de... Tu bhi khus.. apun bhi khus." I looked towards her eyes expectantly. She kept on looking to me silently which kills me all the time. her face was stern and eyes were darkened again. The sign didn't look good for me. "Get lost..." She just said in her cold voice after such a long pause. "Kya boli tu?!!" I frowned. "Just leave... Chale jaoo yahan see..." Antara said greeting her teeth. Her eyes were reflecting anger. But I was also desperate at that moment. "Tu baheri hain kya?! Apun nee itna der tak kahan tune kuch suna nahin? Apun nee kahan mere koo mafi de de apun chala jayega." I reminded her with annoyance. "Really?! Aur agar naa doon too?!" she said stubbornly crossing her arms. "Too apun bhi idhar hich latak taa rahega..." I said grabbing the grills tightly. Her lips twitched as annoyance reflected in her eyes. She moved forward a bit and grabbed the wooden doors of window. "Tum jate hoo ki nahin!!" she asked greeting her teeth. "Naah!! Paheli mafi chahiye.." I chanted like all the time. With irritated face she was about to close the window and I interrupted quickly. "Ehhh... Miss kaul.. kya kar re li hain?! Yedi hoo gayi hain kya?!" I said quickly. "Dekho mr... aaj main waisey hi bahut thak gayi hoon... tumhara bakwas sun nee kaa mode bilkul nahin hain mere pass. Iss liye bhehtar yahin hoga kii yahan see chale jao warna main khirki bandh kar raahi hoon." She said sternly. "Abey... Tune khirki bandh kar diya too ek too apna hath kaa papar ban jayega yaa fir apun niche gir kee humesha kee liye upar char jayega...mere koo maar kee kya fayda higa tera?!! Murder case mein too tu hi fasegi..." I said trying to stop her anyhow. She again turned silent and observed me thoroughly with her angry gaze. There was a slight pain in her eyes. I badly wish if I could read her eyes sometimes, then I could understand why she hated me so much from the very beginning.

Antara's POV:

I was gauzing to raghu silently and trying to detect that how far he would go. My worst enemy, my parent's killer, the snatcher of my happiness was there at the outside of my window and I was listening to his all useless blabbers. Even I was so surprised with my tolerance level but I know what was going inside me. I didn't know how much I have to face further. But with the passing time I was becoming cold and emotionless, focusing more towards my aim rather than allowing my emotions to control over. Still sometimes it was hard. When I was about to close the window he asked me if I really wanted to kill him? I didn't know what to answer him at that moment. Grabbing the window doors tight to control my anger I kept staring on his sheepish face. He looked like as if he didn't know anything and such a innocent guy, but he didn't know that I was already aware of his actual face, who was nothing but a cold blooded murderer.

"Noo Raghunath naik..." My inner voice spoke in my mind, "I won't do anything like that. You don't deserve such a simple punishment like death. Rather than I want to see u and your god mothers pride crushing on the feet. I wanted you both to feel the same pain which I went through. Your godmother had lit up the fire in that houseboat which took away my innocent family's life. I am the flame of that fire that had come to burn your empire!! I won't kill anyone of you; rather than I will make you people suffer to death for what you have done to my family, not just my family but for also those peoples whom you affected till the time!! I will make sure that u and daya naik loose everything like i did. Then you will understand what I am going through now!!" As my inner voice stated those words inside; he kept on staring at my silent face with a bit wide eyes and amusement. As if he was trying to detect what was going in my mind. a small smirk appeared in my lips. he wouldn't get that anytime. The pain had turned my heart into stone and he would never be able to break that stone wall and peep inside, I wouldn't allow him ever. He twitched his head slightly and said, "Eee miss kaul... Apna thobra tank jhank khatam hoo gaya hoo too jaldi see kaam dham rafa kar yaar.. Abhi kuch der baad sayad apna hath retirement le lega!!" he said in irritated face. I sighed and composed myself. "Too kis nee kahan tumhe khirki see latak nee kee liye?!!" I asked greeting my teeth to suppress my frustration. God!! I just wanted to get him off my head anyhow otherwise I would lose my patient. "Too tune balcony bandh kar kee kyun rakhi thi haan?!! Udhar darwaza khulla rakhti too udhar see hi ghus jata... khali pili yee free kaa kasrat nahin karna parta." He stated barking towards me. I kept staring on him blankly. What just he said?! I should keep the balcony door open for him?! How dare he?!! Just unbelievable he was always. I had to again control my rage to keep the calm face intact. I just looked away from him and turned my back to him. "Abey piche kya dekh rahi hain?! apun idhar hain." his irritating voice hit my ears but I didn't bother to turn back. I looked down and observed the red tulip still in my hand. God!! why did he had to bring that?! I was so happy to get a tulip flower after long but my all happiness again left me when I came to know that he was the one who brought it. How could I accept that? A lone tear escaped from my eyes and touched the petals of tulip flower. "Ehhh miss call, dekh tu apne baat see mooh kar rahi hain. Tune ruksana see kya kahan tha ki ek tulip kee badle tu kisii koo bhi maaf kar degi. Tere ko pata bhi hain.. tere iss tulip kee chakkar mein mere koo kitne papar belne pare?! S**a mai see bhi jhoot bol diya..." his voice blabbered just to break out my patience level. "Nahin chahiye..." I said loudly and moved to him. his face was stunned listening to my harsh voice. "Nahin chahiye mujhe tumhari layi huyi tulip... Aur naa hii kuch chahiye mujhe tumse.. bas mujhe akela chor doo." I said quite loudly looking to his stunned face which again changed into anger. "Kyun nahi legi?! Apun kee hath laga nee see phool gandha hoo gaya kya?! Detergent see dho kee laoon?!" his sarcasm didn't make my mode light rather than it boiled my head more. "Kuch daag kabhi nahin jatee.. yee too jaan tee hoo naa tum.. chahe kitna bhi dho loo... puri zindagi kee liye satata raheta hain." as I said those words the pain was clear in my voice which I couldn't hide, "Kissi koo tulip gift karnee kaa matlab jaan te hoo tum? Tulip dene kaa matlab kissi koo zindagi bhar ki khusiyan dena... and I am sorry... Mujhe uss insaan see koi bhi khusi kii ummed nahin hain jissney mujhe sirf gham diya hain." I said in chocked voice holding my tears back in my eyes. "Ohh gyan mata..." he was back in his irritation mode, "Bandh kar teri bakwas bhasan... Pak gaya hain apun yee sab sunte sunte... Aur mat paka mere koo nahin too aisa kuch kar dega ki..." He said greeting his teeth. "Acha kya kar loge??!" I asked stubbornly. "dekh tu..." Raghu was going to say something but at that moment we both heard a female voice which shook both of us. "Bhangu... Mangu!!!" that clear female voice echoed from a bit distance but we both recognized the voice. Our eyes froze on each other and we quickly looked at the balcony of naik sadan. With our horrible fate we both find Daya Naik standing at the balcony of naik sadan and if her eyes somehow moved to our direction she would clearly see raghu hanging from the window. My eyes widened in anticipation and something flashed in front of my eyes startling me. Raghu was gone from my window. Where did he went so soon?! I peeped out from the windiw and looked here and there.

Raghu's POV:

I jumped inside the balcony of antara's room and bend down hiding myself from mai. If she saw me there at that moment I didn't know what would be the result. I kept an eye on the surrounding from seating position. Bhangu and mangu were not as usual on the gate. They rushed out of nowhere and saluted mai. "Kya kar rahe the tum dono.. gate mein kyun nahin the?!" Mai asked them loudly. "Arey mai woo apun log... woo... bhajan sun raahe the." I chuckled from my hiding place listening to their answer. I saw mai nodding her head in disappointment. "Raghunath koo ate dekha hain kya tum logon ne?!" she asked. "Raghubhai?!! Nahin woo too sayad abhi nahin ayein.." bhangu answered. Mai's face looked thoughtful. Perhaps she was worried cause I took so long to return. I even switched off my mobile, she must be worried for me. Mai's eye moved towards the side of balcony where I stayed. Suddenly a frown appeared in her face and she moved to that side. my brain gave me the alert signal. If she moved to that side of balcony, she would surely get to see me there. I was quickly searching for an escape when I heard a sound behind me and a soft hand tucked my left arm's sleeve. I quickly moved behind and found antara bending down on my behind looking towards me with anticipated gaze. I was a bit surprised seeing her there. "Jaldi.. andar chalo..." she said hissing and I quickly moved inside as soon as possible. Antara followed me and was about to close the door. I stopped her and she looked at me awkwardly. I pushed the door keeping a little space from where I could keep an eye on mai. I peeped outside and saw mai checking out something at my place. Her face was frowned a bit. she looked towards the garage with thoughtful face. Then I understood the fact that she must have seen my jeep there. Damn it!! so she came to check if I was there or not. I had to reach naik sadan as soon as possible. I felt something and moved at my side finding antara at my side. She was also peeping through the slight space and keeping eye on mai. I couldn't understand her sometimes. Just a few min ago she was quarrelling with me like I was his enemy from previous seven birth. But then she let me come inside so that mai couldn't see me. she changed her mind in split of second and that's what made me confuse sometimes. I couldn't afford to smirk seeing our arms touching each other to her unconscious. Whatever happened, there was pleasant warmth while she was near and I couldn't deny that I like that somehow. However I concentrated back on mai. She was steal standing there with frowned face steal looking towards the garage. After some moment Mai slowly moved out of place and we both sighed in relief.

Antara's POV:

As soon as Daya Naik moved out of place I felt relived. I sighed keeping my hand over my pounding heart and felt something odd. Confusingly I looked down and my eyes widened. I was not having my dupatta!! Before I could react, someone put the dupatta around me and I startled. Twitching my head behind I found raghu there. He was putting the dupatta on my neck but he was not looking at my side. His eyes were fixed on the wall. I kept staring towards her with startled eyes. I felt his fingertips touching my skin slightly. An immense shiver ran down my spine and I quickly grab the dupatta in my hand and flinched away from his side. What was that I felt at that moment?! I didn't know. I was unconsciously thinking about the awkwardness while arranging the dupatta on my neck. I heard his deep sigh. Was he looking towards me?! I didn't get the courage to look around and see. I didn't know from when I was in that state, without my dupatta and he was watching over me all the time. With the embarrassment and irritation there was something more which I couldn't understand. I didn't know why my heart turned uneven all of a sudden. It didn't seem the effect of embarrassment to me, not even the immense hatred which I always feel for him, it was something different which was something unknown and yet felt dangerously clear. I didn't look towards him even after arranging my dupatta. He didn't even say anything. The awkward dead silence never felt so huge like the moment. I didn't know what to say to him. I couldn't even say to him get lost like before, as if someone numbed me at that moment.

I felt him coming at my side. I lifted my eyes and find him staring at me with his silent deep gaze. His eyes were unreadable, yet tender. We couldn't say anything and just keep staring at each other. Might be we couldn't find what to say at that awkward silent. I didn't know why I looked to those deep black orbs I started to break. Those eyes were no doubt powerful, as if like it could even pierce through your soul, nothing could be hidden from those eyes. My heart bleed each and every moment feeling my enemies eyes on me which I couldn't avoid. I felt tears welded down my eyes and I didn't stop. For the first time I cried in front of him conciously.

Why did u hurt me that much, leaving me a state beyond repair? I never thought that I had to lead such life where I couldn't even cry if I wanted. I didn't even have the freedom to breath in fearing that someone would hear my saddened sigh. I never wanted that. I never wanted to disappoint someone who had made such effort to bring a tulip for my happiness. But still I couldn't do that because I was bounded by my oath. I couldn't forgive the man who killed my family that brutally.

While my silent eyes were saying those words looking straight to his eyes I see a chink of pain in his eyes. Did he understand what I was saying to him?! I hope not. Cause I never wanted him to understand.

I heard the sound of wind chime at my room's window as an air passed inside and touched me, making my hair lock fell over my face. He was gazing my face silently breaking my heart into several pieces with his every gaze. Suddenly to my shock, raghu lifted his hand and touched the unarranged hair lock and tucked that behind my ears. As soon as his fingers touched me I again felt that shock in my nerve. With wide eyes I quickly moved back away from him. My wide tearful eyes stared to him in shock. Raghu was still gazing to me with that stern face. Still it felt like I could see a chink of disappointment in those black eyes. Was it possible to feel pain for someone like him?!

The calling bell rang breaking our trance. I gulped and quickly looked back. Again the doorbell rang and I heard mamu's voice. I heard the sound of balcony door and looked back. Raghu was nowhere to be seen and the air was passing by through the open balcony door. I wished if he was not there; all were just a bad dream. But no!! The red tulip kept on the bed indicated that he was there indeed with all his presence.