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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Chapter 31

Lovely update Riu darling. Raghu Bappa se apne dil ki baat kehne laga. Haha I loved it. Haan Raghu tumne bina jaane Antu ka dil dukhaadiya hain ab uska dard ko bhi tumhe hi kam karna padega. Locha kiya hain usse sudhaarna bhi tumhe hi padega na? Bappa ishaara kya denge tumhe?

I was just lost jab Raghu Antu ko chup chupke dekhraha tha. Aww Raghunath Naik toh Antara kaul main khogaya aur main Raghunath naik main

Raghu is smirking seeing Antu smiling. Aww Raghu😉😉😉 Raghu wanted to hear her inner voice & solve all her problems. So sweet of u Raghu.

Rather than anger or disappointment which I expected there was a huge shock and amusement in her hazel eyeballs - Antu gussa hone ke bajaaye she was shocked to see Raghu in temple. Kyu na ho? Uske nazariye main Raghu ek khooni hain, gunda hain. She was not expecting him there.

Raghu ne khud prasad maanga warna Antu madam toh dene se rahi

Aww Raghu ne Antu ko ghirne se bachaaya. DDEJ ki scene yaad aagai. I just loved when Raghu said Bappa ne kaha ki jaa tujhe ghirne se bacha. 😆😆😆😆

Aakhir kaar Antu ne apne badaas nikaal hi li. Raghu bhi yehi chahta tha ki Antu apne dil ka saara dukh nikaalde.

Raghu Antu ka kitna khayaal rakta hain. Vo jaana chahta hain ki aakhir kya huwa ki Antu jaisi ladki itni badal gayi ki uski muskuraahat gaayab hogayi

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Chapter 32

Antu Raghu se itna nafrat karti hain ki uska gussa hanky pe nikaal rahi thi. She was more hurt with his words on / off. Death is on / off for him? Antu ko bhi pata nahi hain ki Raghu ke past main uske saath kya huwa tha. He has also lost his parents. He is showing his gratitude to Mai who took care of him. Jis din usse pata chalega ki Mai uska sirf aur sirf faayda utaarahi hain uss din uska bhi Mai ke taraf nazariya badal jaayega. Antu ko thoda waqt lagega sachai jaane main.

Rhea is surely n truly Antu ki saviour hain. Antu aur uski bahut acchi understanding hain. Rhea knows that Antu zaroor upset hojaayegi jab vo Raghu se milegi.

Sukhi ghaas!!!! Yeah Rhea n Raghu r right. Jab Antu roti hain toh aise hi lagti hain.

Raghu ek pal keliye bhi Antu ke baarein main sochne se apne aap ko rok nahi paaraha hain. He wanted to do something which would lessen her sorrows.

He enquired with Rhea par vo bhi Antu ki behen hain ziddi. Kuch nahi batayegi

Par hamaare hero Raghu ko kisiki zaroorat nahi. Vo khud pata lagaalega sab kuch.

Tiwari ne Mai ke godown par radi karli. Brave Tiwari tussi great ho. Par ye kya Tiwari toh commissioner ke orders follow karraha tha. Vo khud dara huwa hain Mai se?

Samsher khan? Ye kaun hain? Mai itni tension main kyu hain uske naam sunkar? Zaroor kuch na kuch gadbad hain. Usne Raghu ko jeep ke paas hi rehneko kaha. Aakhir lafda kya hain?

Antu was taken aback to see different Aman Sir in beach. She was confused to see him. Ye locha kya hain bhai?

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Chapter 33

Raghu's POV

Raghu ko shaq hogaya ki aakhir Mai, Tiwari aur Kaka baat kya karrahe hain? Vo bhi Raghu ko jeep ke paas khade honekeliye kehkar? Tiwari Mai ko kuch samjaraha tha aur Mai toh baukla rahi thi aur as usual kaka Mai ke haan main haan milarahe the. Raghu ko dekte hi Mai ne uss baare main baat karna band kardiya. Aisa kya hain jo Mai Raghi ke saamne baat nahi karna chahti?

Commissioner ke ghar Mai? Wa re wa ye toh kamaal hogaya? Aakhir Mai ke dimaag main chal kya raha hain?

Iss commissioner ki himmat ki daag deni padegi. Mai ko office main aane ko kaha. Aur Mai ne maan bhi li. Kuch toh katarnak pak raha hain Mai ke dimaag main.

Antara's POV

Antara ke baaton par Kirti aur Parth vishwas hi nahi karrahe hain ki usne beech par Aman Sir ko dekha. Aur uss din Railway station par bhi?

Antu chiku ko dekhkar Ishaan aur uske Papa ke cricket match ko yaad karrahi thi. She went to those days where Ishaan used to play with his Papa.

Antu ne Raghu ki catch pakar li. Raghu Out!!! Vo sirf cricket match main hi nahi asal zindagi main bold out hogaya hain Antu se.

Antu is so sweet. She gave chocolates to those cute little childrens. She doesn't replied to Raghu's words. Antu turned back. Aww DDLJ ke palat palat scene yaad aagaya DDEJ main

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Riu darling maine Thread 1 ke saare updates ko khallas kardiya

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ifians

Tu yahan kaise aa gayi re?!!!😆
anyway thanks😳

Kya matlab kaise aayi?😆😆😆

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Wonderful, funny and herat touching update 👏
Anti ne Raghu ka murder kar diya 😳
Apne aada se Raghu Ki saanse le gayi 😳
I loved Raghu's dialogues 😆
DM aayi 😲 , Raghu vanished, Antu shocked
Antu Raghu ko Ander le gayi 😉 , Raghu was shocked as well as happy 😳 😉
Eyelook Rantara
Antu breaking down 😭 in front of Raghu first time 😭
Last scene was breath taking but mama mami kahan se aaye 😡
Galat time par entry karte, They ruined Rantara moments 😭
Next time inne bichme mat Lana ji 😉
Overall very beautiful update
Waiting for next update eagerly 😳
Update soon 😊

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Ria,it was beautiful! I loved it very much. Mera dil garden garden huwa issliye Mayne pura garden utta kar bhej diya just for you. I'm enjoying this story a lot. Don't give up ji,continue writing. Thank you for a fabulous update,waiting for more and more. Enjoy the garden I sent you and smile

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Ajesha

@Ajju15s

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Hey riu..i kw may thodi late I mean bahot jyada late ho gai bt congo on new thread..😃 🤗

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Ajesha

@Ajju15s

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Chapter 33
Tu mohobbat se koi chaal to chal,

Haar jaaney ka hausla hai mujhko!"
Aww..beautiful lines riu..actually yeh meri favourite gazal k lines k lines hai 😳to partey hi merey face pe badi si smile aa gai..😃
Now coming to the update to awesome update jii..👏
Chalo thodi hai sahi lekin raghu ko dm pe shak hona suru ho gaya hai..chalo accha hai
Dm commissioner se milney uske ghar gai lekin usney milney se mana kar diya..yeh banda mujhey interesting lag raha hai..shayad dm ko pakad ne may ye antu ki help karega..
Raghu ko cricket kheltey dekh ddej ka scene yaad aa gaya..uff ye mr.hottie 😳
Antu ne catch pakad k raghu ko out kar diya ji..
Waisey raghu k dil ki wicket to tab hi gir gai thi jab antu ko paheli baar dekha tha..😆
Aaj paheli baar thodi der k liye hi sahi par antu k raghu ki taraf Koi hatred feel ni huaa..chalo acchi suruaat hai..😳
Antu k dil may raghu k liye anjani hi sahi lekin kuch kuch wali feeling aa rahi hai..😛
To isi baat pe arz kiya hai..
"Mujh mein lagta hai ke mujh se zyaada hai woh,
Khud se barrh kar mujhe rehti hai zaroorat uski".😳

Edited by Ajju15s - 10 years ago

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

hey Riyu abh kya kahoon ??? this update was soo deep i really had to dive down hard to reach the depth ... it was awesome YEdi !!!👏👏👏

i must admit that each and every line i was reading twice to understand the situation fully to feel the emotion entirely...it is such a simple thing a boy giving flower to a girl seeking sorry from her ...but deep down there were so complex emotions and each time u described it so beautifully so wonderfully ...kudos to you for this 👏

i loved how Antara was happy like a child getting the tulip and the most presious part to me was how Raghu was gazing her every minute details 😳😳😳

hai Riyu even in such a tensed situation ki ANtu ko pata chal jayega kisne diye tulip to kya hoga ...i was feeling like flying reading raghu's pov ...i loved it completely.😳😆

the most heart wrenching lines in ur update was "

Why did u hurt me that much, leaving me a state beyond repair? I never thought that I had to lead such life where I couldn't even cry if I wanted. I didn't even have the freedom to breath in fearing that someone would hear my saddened sigh. I never wanted that. I never wanted to disappoint someone who had made such effort to bring a tulip for my happiness."

there were some moments in this update where i just can not give any review ...like this one ...its just so flawless effortless ...so truthful painful yet soo lovingly tender and lovable ...hatts off to you Riyu for this one ...

if i give u a bunch of tulip also then also i don think i can thank u much for this awesome update ...

luv u waiting for the next update passionately 😃