**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-2](note@pg34) - Page 4

I am turely and badly speechless after reading this update. Ria u r talented that i know ...but ur talent is shining more n more ...getting sharper day by day ...along with this story. OMG what an extraordinary update it is ...

Tell me Ria how could you ???? How could u portray the pain of losing parent so deeply ...we all know losing a dear one hurts to an extreame extent ...but writing it down so beautifully and perfectly is something like moving through the same fire of pain and feeling it actually.

I stopped reading the update further when i reached there where u have written ..." Main kya karoon pappa?! Kaise samhaloon apne aap ko? Aap too yahan nahin hain pappa, kis kee kandhe pe sar rakh ke main royungi abb. Bahut man kar raha hain aap koo dekhnee ke liye. Ek baar mere sapne mein aa jaiyen naa pappa... Please!!..."

U know few years back when i lost my mom ...the words were exactly same in my heart ...i too was writting down my pain in a diary...and the words were exactly the same.

When a writer writes a story and makes a reader to enter the soul of a character and feel the same sorrow pain love and joy so minutely with the character then it means u r an extreamely powerful writer...u have the power to imagine such difficult and sensitive stuffs so minutely ...u have the power to make the readers cry in sorrow and be happy n smile in joy flowing with ur story ...u have the power to unite the souls of ur readers and put life in the characters of ur story and make it live in front of ur readers' eyes ...

OHH Ria ...i am feeling so proud for u.

Then when Antu realised that she has written hindi in English letters in her diary ...unknowingly obeying his instruction...omg that was a marvellous moment ...again a small victory of Raghu on her ...i loved it.

Coming to the second part ...i was feeling like bohot dino baad DDEJ dekneko milraha hai ...i loved Machmach and Ruksana here ...the dialogues were awesome ...and i loved Raghu's confusion. So Raghu nikal pada Tulip dhundne ...wow...and loved the meaning of gifting a tulip to someone ...such a nice heart soothing thing ...OHHH Riyu Kamini !!!! again i dreamt to get a tulip from someone ...LOLLLZZZ

And again i loved this line ..." Yede hoo ekdum.. arey larkion koo fool kyun diya jata hain... iss liye kii fool dene kee stah larka ek promise bhi karta hain.. ki uss key zindagi mein woo foolon kaa rang aur khoosboo bhar dega.." ruku said with a huge grin and again my heart thudded for some unknown reason." ...sacchi mein yaar mereko bhi nahi pata tha ki ladke fool kyun dete hain ladkiyon ko ...such a nice meaning is there behind this...loved it when Ruku said it to him.

And now am waiting how Raghu is gonna collect a tulip in Mumbai (waise Mumbai mein sabkuch milta hai ) and how he is gonna present it to her saying sorry...

This wait is gonna difficult for me ...please update jaldi jaldi Riyu ...

Luv you.

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever

i am just speechless with this update

Originally posted by: Rasika9

Riu 1st of all i would like to give u a compliment for all the updates now...before starting ur update...u type those 2 beautiful sentences...they always capture my mind first...i never told u...but could not resist it telling u now...
coming to the update...machmach n raghu r the bestest friends on screen...love their chemistry very much...aaj to ruku madam cha gayeee...kya idea diya hain aur antara ke sare feelings bhi bata diye...lovely...bechara mera raghu ab tulip lane kashmir na chala jayeee...😆

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Part 29

Raghu was lost in Antu's pain. He could not see her like this. Ye Buntiya ab Raghu ko batayega ki Raghu ka karna hain ki nahi. Iski toh😡😡😡

Yaar buntiya koo too chor de.. woo too bechara aise hi naukar hain ghar kaa..😆

Raghu is crying? Raghu math ro yaar. DDEJ forum doobjaayega yaar agar tu roya toh.😭😭😭

Haan yaar. Raghu koo pahelibaar feel huya antara kaa pain. ussey abtak pata bhi nahin tha naa ki woo kis halat see guzar rahi hain. Aab thora bahut pata chala too ussey samajh mein aa gaya ki usney locha kar diya, woo khud bhi too ussi dard see guzar chuka hain fir bhi uss ney antara koo kuch jane wagar ulta sidha kahe diya. Issi lioye bechara dukhui hoo gaya..😭😭.. aur raghu koo rota huya imagine kar kee main bhi sad hoo gayi thi..

Ajji was telling abt Arshad miya's bakery aur Raghu toh apne hi duniya main hain. He is guilty that he hurt Antara aur tab jab vo itne bade sadme se guzar rahi hain.

Ajji aap bahut hi pyaari ho. Raghu ke chehre dekhkar hi pehchaanliye ki vo pareshaan hain. Raghu toh na na kargaya par Ajji na kabhi kisiki suni hain. Aur kyu sune vo Dayan sirf kehneko mai hain par Ajji ne Raghu ko mai ka pyaar diya hain😃😃😃

Woo too bilkul sahi hain. Dayan too jhut mooth ki mai hain joo sirf apne innocent raghu kaa fayda utha te hain..par ajii kaa joo pyar hain raghu kee liye woo ekdum dil see nikalte hain..😳

Rukku aur Saroj aunty ki baaton main khogayi main. Kitna dard chupa hain Antara ke dil main. Phir bhi vo muskuraati hain. Rukku u r such a sweet girl. Sacchi dosti kya hoti hain vo koi tumse seekhe👏👏👏

Bilkul sahi... Sachi dosti milna bahut mushkil hota hain aaj kaal😳

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 30

Machmach is too funny. Shetty ke baarein main kya kya bolraha tha vo. Raghu ji itne gehre soch main dooba huwa tha vo bhi MM ki baatein sunkar hasa. 😆😆😆

MM too hain hi funny. Uss kaa competetion too kapil bhi nahin kar sakta🤣

MM aur Raghu dono Rukku do dekhkar pareshaan hogaye? Seriously Rukku MM ko rayte ko taste karnedeti hain? Rukku tujhe aur koi nahi mila?

Bechara MM. Raghu aur Ruku dono pareshan karta raheta hain..😆

MM aur Raghu dono hairaan rehgaye jab unhe pata chala ki Antu hi vo cookies banati hain? Raghu ko Rukku ki baatein sunkar bahut bura laga. Koi itna dard kaise sehleta hain?

Kabhi kabhi hume bina chahte huye bhi humein bahut kuch chupana parta hain.. Ye sab assan nahin hota par humein yee karna parta hain. Kabhi apne liye too kabhi dusron kee khusi kee liye. Par bhagwan dard dete hain tpp dard ki dawa bhi sath mein bhejte hain. 😃

Antu ne saare laddoo un bachhon ko dediya? Sach kaha pandit ji ne gareeb logo ka seva karna bhi toh bhagwan ki seva karna hain👏👏👏

Us mein aur raghu mein yee ek to similerity zarrror hain.. Dono humesha sabki madad karne kee l.iye ek tang mein khare rahete hain..Hain na?😳

Antu Raghu ko mandir main dekhar aise expressions derahi ho? Raghu tumhaara peecha nahi chodega madam😉😉😉

Raghu Antara koo kabhi nahin chorega yee too guranteed hain.😆 Chahein antara raghu see kitni bhi door bhagne ki koushis kare, raghu humesha uss kee saamne jaa kee khara hoo jata hain.😳

Originally posted by: salini143

Riyuuu, abh me kya bolu 😕
Tumara update humesha ke tarah speechless tha yr 😳
I am really feel bad for Antu 😭 , poor girl
But she wiil be happiest girl in the world in future 😳 😳
I love relationship b/w Raghu and Machmach 😆
Rukssana Toa Rukssana hi rayegi 😉
Raghu abh Kashmir jayega kya 😲 😲
I hope, Raghu ko tulip mil jaye, Anti darling ko Jo Dena hai 😳 😳
Waiting for next update eagerly 😉
Continue soon 😳