~Ye Sazish Hain Boondon Ki(Rantara OS,Last Chapter @ Pg18)~

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@Niyaz_Lover

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

OMG...This Was Sooo Romantic...

Everything Was Just Sooo Perfect...

God..RI You Made My Day...

BTW What Was In The Cupboard It was Not Mentioned...

WHY??!...No Please Tell Me...

Ri You Have To Tel Me..

ANd Great Job..Don't Ever Call Your Work Crap...

You Are An Awesome Writer..

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

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Sry yar busy hoon if late hojate review mera 1st exam hai monday ko to

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hahaha... How could u ria?
Sapna toot gaya mera... 😭
You are unpredictable! Saree ke baarey me may socha hii nai 😕
OK you left me speechless...but whatever u wrote was beautiful as usual 😳
Upcoming scenes update Karo na!
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Edited by sanjinimala - 10 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
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Sry yar busy hoon if late hojate review mera 1st exam hai monday ko to

koi baat nahin bacha.. ache se exam doo.. study always comes first.. all the best..🤗

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pooji145

@pooji145

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

really intersting romanrice dear..lovely os plZ contiine

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Liana

@liana2304

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Aww . Very nice update .

Loved it .

Thank you .

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jaan..rantara..

@jaan..rantara..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Wow..

Riu..mar dala

So perfect updateupdate..no mistec..

YaarYaar..abhi collage main mera lecture chal raha hai.. An main chup ke cmnt kar rahe hu..

I have no words

Rain.. Rain..

Ye sazis hai boondan keep

wow..

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Hayee..Do Dil Ek Jaan ki yaad dila di tuney ria baby!
Chamkili...hehehe... It was beautiful! 😳
That memory card wala line and ankhon ke pipe wala line was fabulous!
Their romance was too too good. 😳
Full of love emotions and feelings .
Hats off buddy! 👏
Can't wait to read more..I'm wondering ye dono jaa kaha rahe hain?
Loved it from top to bottom...mera matlab from beginning to end 😉