~Ye Sazish Hain Boondon Ki(Rantara OS,Last Chapter @ Pg18)~

Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Ssshhh!!!! I read this over and over again...this was so romantic 😳 (whispering)
Rain and Romance drives me insane 😉 (whispering)
This was very hot and wild 😳 (whispering)
May issey baar baar parungi.(whispering)
I copied and printed it and guess what? I'm keeping this in my diary as this was my birthday gift.
This piece of art will be preserved in my diary as long as I live 😃 (whispering)
Thank you for this special gift. (Whispering)
Love you!!!(screaming)

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Rohan Kumar

@Rohan30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sanjinimala
Ssshhh!!!! I read this over and over again...this was so romantic 😳 (whispering)
Rain and Romance drives me insane 😉 (whispering)
This was very hot and wild 😳 (whispering)
May issey baar baar parungi.(whispering)
I copied and printed it and guess what? I'm keeping this in my diary as this was my birthday gift.
This piece of art will be preserved in my diary as long as I live 😃 (whispering)
Thank you for this special gift. (Whispering)
Love you!!!(screaming)

Gotcha! I heard everything! 😆
Whispering itni zor se nai kartey!

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Rohan Kumar

@Rohan30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Ria ji this update was the hottest!
Very Romantic and you penned it down nicely. Well done dude 👏
Rajeev bhaiya was your silent reader for sometime now but for me ..this is the first time that
I have read your update. I loved it. I think this is why sanju madam is crazy about your stories.
Carry on girl. Thanks for dedicating it to sanju..this update is printed out and safely sitting inside
sanju madam's diary as a souvenir for her birthday. 😃
Thank you sanju's chamkili!

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Pehle tho I'm so so sorry yaar. Itni romantic story kaise miss kardi maine?😭😭😭

Riu this story reminded me of Gun and Guitar. Antara waha bhi Raghu ko bardasht nahi karsakti thi par baad main usse aise gulmilgayi ki Raghu ek minute keliye usse door nahi rehsakta tha

Ok Nethra Gun & Guitar se baahar aa. Phew... Ek hi chapter main Antara Kashmir chaligayi, Raghu apne family ke saath waha bhi tapak pada aur shaadi bhi karlee?

Ye falguni tho bahut naughty hain😳😳😳

Antara ko explain karrahi thi kya kya hota hain aur Antara ko kaise lagega. Antara ki haalat pehle hi karaab hain upar se ye falguni😆😆😆

Antara ki haath tande tande aur maathe main paseena. This shows her nervousness of SR😳😳😳

Usne apne pyaar Raghu se kyu naa shaddi karleeho par SR par jo vo karega usse ghabraarahi hain bechaari. Ajji ki baaton se thodi himmat tho aayi par phir flashback main khoogayi

Raghu kab aaya ye bhi pata nahi usko. Isse kehte hain kisike khayaalon main kaise kote hain

Raghu ne baaton hi baaton main jewellery sab nikaal di aur Antara ko kuch dekhne ko bola

Saree which was connected with their past where they came closer to each other. Haayee kitne sambhaalke rakha Raghu ne uss yaadon ko.

Raghu hamesha kidki aur balcony se hi khood tha hain. Yaaha tho hadd hogayi apne saath saath Antara ko bhi kidki se khoodna sikhaadiya. 😆😆😆

To tum pehle pati hoge Raghu jo apni patni ko SR ke din baahar leke jaarahe ho jaha tumdono kareeb aaye the

Waha jaatein hi sone pe suhaaga ki tarah baarish hogayi aur that kiss. Haayee kya describe karti hain yaar tu Riu. Main tho sharm se laal laal tomato hogayi hoon ye update padte huwe bilkul Antara ki tarah😳😳😳

Ye s***a ye latern beech main kaha se aagaya. Intense kissing session chalrahi iss latern ko bhi abhi Antara ke pao se lagna tha?😡😡😡

Aur vo hair stroking wala time. Haaye kitna romantic tha.
Raghu licked the water droplets from Antara's face.

Aage ka main kya comment karoon. Bas pade jaarhi hoon, pade jaarahi hoon. Usse kaise likh sakti hoon😳😳😳

Aur jab Raghu ne apne feelings kaha jo uss din vo Antara ke paas rehne ke baad usse choo nahi sakta tha. No hidden emotions. He clearly said what he felt on that day. That's true jab koi khaas paas main hota hain aur aap khud ko control karte ho tho that would be the painful moment in ur life. U just want to feel him, touch him but that situation doesn't permit to do so.

Antara felt alive when he made her his in every manner. Its truely said that a girl becomes a woman only after becoming one with her husband. Oh gosh main kya kahe jaarahi hoon.

I am hiding somewhere. Mujhe doondna math Riu.

Ek aur baat
Thats really true that ek choti si baarish ki boond main kitni saari baatein, kitne anjaan jaadu chupe huwe hain. Aur ek baar jab destiny do logon ko milaane ki decide karleta hain tho duniya idar ki udar hojaaye vo dono milkar hi rehte hain chaahe kuch bhi hojaaye

Ab tho main pakka chupne jaarahi hoon😳😳😳

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pampz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

what an UPDATE Riyuuu...and overall what a story ...👏

this is not fair yaaar u everytime make me speechless by ur tremendous terrific writeups...😕

i mean yeh kya tha ???? each n evry word u wrote compelled me to mehsoos each n every passion of Raghu on Antara...OMG tujhe andaza bhi hai yeh kya torture tha ????

yes it was a torture ...hardcore torture ...bur surprisingly i loved it cherished it enjoyed n elated by the sheer effect of this. it was something which created so devine exitement n extreme urge to read more or mehsoos more ...if i say i loved this story ...it will be less...if i say i madly enjoyed this ...it wll be less ...actually it created a beautiful feeling within me which is so indescribable ...i got read this story after a long time ...

it is something that quenched my thirst for love or should i say it increased my love thirst more ...

u r awesome Riyu ...i hv no words to praise u ...i just only pray to God u keep on writing and writing ...and we be blessed to read ur devine stories till our last breath.

luv u dear😃🤗 luv u so so much

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Ajesha

@Ajju15s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Beautiful beautiful so beautiful update RIA..n
hott too...😳
Kya mast likha hai yarr... Too good...
loved each n every bit ...
Rantara hayee..so pure n devine love..after reading your update..am just blushing..blushing..😳 😳hehe..
Story ki happy ending ho gaya..will miss tis story..😭
Season 1 se leke season 3 tak what a wonderful n Devine rantara journey..dear.👏
Aap ki har story ek beautiful dream ke tarah hoti hai..agar mera bas chale to mein khatam hi na hone do..😆
Hum sab bahot lucky hai ke aap is forum mein ho riu..
Aap jitna magical stories likhti ho na utne sweet friend bhi ho..lv yaa...hugs dear.. ⭐️

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Awesome Update Ria...🤗...

Kitna HOOOTTT n LOVELY description...😳...

Ekdum Pure n Divine bhi...

Kya explain kiya hain aapne...woh bhi Antu k POV se...

...(...Mujhe doubt horaha hai..kahi aapki shaadi toh nahi huwi na...😲...😉...😆...mere tedha dimmag ka aur ek namuna......🤪...Yedipanthi jayegi hi nahi...😆...)...

Aap toh jaanthi hai HUM AAPKE UPDATE k DEEWAANE...RANTARA k SAATH-SAATH...❤️...😳...aur aapke EDITS k bhi...😳...

Keep writing...Luv ya..❤️...n bolne ki zarrurat nahi...aap toh humesha hume..especially RaNtara Lovers ko SURPRISE karte ho...😉...😳...bole toh supress...(...Raghu Style...)...😉...😊......

So aap jaise expert n genius ko...aur kya kahe...😃..bas yunhi RaNtara Love ko SPREAD karte raho...aur awesome se mind-blowing se...tadaktha-phadaktha updates dete raho...😳...

tc...🤗...n jaise-jaise mujhe waqt milega...main FORUM pe tapakti rahungi...❤️...😃...

MISS U all...😔...lekin m trying to catch up wid all d posts...plz mujhe bhul mat jaana...😔...IS FORUM SE NATHA... YEH HUMAARA HAI HUMESHA KA>>>>😳...

OK...gtg nw...bye...Happy RANTARA Memories...😊...❤️...

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: honeybees22
Yayy guess what?
I READ THE UPDATE!!!!!
FINALLY
congratulation...⭐️to me... as i get ur reply at last!!😆
i am redd right now!!
Sattu koo yaad karle... fir se normal hoo jayegi!!😆
seriously this was like the most romantic update ever
GAG see bhi jyada romantic?!😉
i have read nothing like this before
Chal ab jyada maska mat maar... 😆.. there are so many stories much better than this one.. .😊
the pure love, desires omg u just blew me away ri
Blew away.😕.. blow hoo kee UK see kahan chali gayi?! india too nahin aa gayi?😆
i had literally stopped breathing with each and ever word
hayla.. sans lena bandh mat kar... suffocation hoo jayega
the intensity of this update was seriously too much to bear
Aisa kya?😆
rantara all alone.. away from everyone.. in each others arms hayee best thing ever
Haan haan.. samamh mein aa raha hain teri halat.. 😆
i am running out of words
the heat is still in the room
acha huya naa... tujhe cold mein room hitter ki zarurat nahin paregi😆
raghu intense touches, kisses and love bytes omggg..
i am shaking right now
wapas normal hoo jaa meri maa😆
i think you were planning to kill us with this update😆 and seriously i am sitting in burning hell right noe🤢 i cant get out of this update
urghh i cant say or type anything😳
Fir bhi tere hath too type too karti jaa rahi hain..😆
when you wrote that bit of raindrops conspiracy..
i was crying..
it was so magical and touching
i will remember this update forever..
touched my hear
is that so.. i am glad😳
at last antara said i love you
and now rantara are complete and forever each others
you know u described antu not liking raghu at first
i always say this to everyone
a reason to cry becomes a reason to smile..
so true😳
raghus intensity was over the top of me
i couldnt imagine raghu having such intensity uff toba
i am blushing soo much right
ab blush karna bandh bhi kar meri maa😆
i loved this sequel soo much
these three squels are the most magically touching beautiful things in the whole forum till now
ri hats off to you got writing this
i am overwhelmed😳
u are romantic yaar don't say ur not😡 daanda parega 😡 or rider ko bhi mei le jaoge😎
i wish this could go on forever and ever.. but everything ends
i will always read this
BEST ONE EVER!!!