Pitch Black-A forbidden love story last part page 15 - Page 4

Chapter 2 updated. Enjoy and let me know Thanks.



Raghu woke up as the watchmen banged on the bonnet with a stick. "Saab lagta hai aap raat bhar yahi soh gaye. Watchman said. "Raghu rubbed his eyes and opened it. Looking around the surrounding he then realized where he was. He smiled looking at the second floor balcony. Chuckling he saluted the watchman and left. "Tu baar baar kiya sochney lagta hai bhaai?" Khoya khoya sa rayta hai tu..baat kiya hai? Mm asked worriedly. Raghu just smiled away." Tu chal terey ko doctor ki zarurat hai. Mm said. "Arey nai yaar tu khaali pili me tension lera hai..apun ekdam fit and fine hai..kuch nai huwa merey ko. Raghu said. Whenever these two friends were alone they loved to talk in their tapori style. "Kal Saturday hai aur our day off toh party kartey hai..kiyu? Mm asked. "Arey kal nai..apun udhar Jyoti Niwas jaaneko socha hai. Raghu said while driving. "Bhaai tu toh gaya! Mm said shaking his head. Raghu didn't say anything. The team was busy whole day. Raghu's mind was on the blue eyed girl. He wanted to take her out as his heart mind and soul wanted to spend time with her and get to know her better. Coming home that evening Raghu called sister Mary."I want to take Antara out somewhere. .I want to know her..I want to talk to her and spend some time with her. .please mana mat karna..Raghu said to sisters Mary on the phone. "Lekin sir I haven't sent any of my girls out with anyone...you know Antara cant see na? Sister mary replied. "Sister mary I promise to bring her back safely. .aur han I know ki woh dekh nai sakti..aur may unka pura dhyaan rakhunga. Raghu said. "You are a cop and I trust you..uss din tumney hum sab ko bachaya God aapko bless karey my son..."I Will ask Antara to get ready if she wants to come with you..agar nai aana chahegi toh I cant force her na. Sister mary said. "Woh zaroor aayegi sister. Raghu said confidently. After talking to sister Raghu got ready..he was excited to meet the blue eyed girl once again. At the Niwas..sister broke the news to Antara. "Listen my child. .if you dont wanna go I'll refuse him. Sister said. Antara's heart leaped in excitement when she heard Raghu's name. She remembered how he carried her to safety. .his touch..his breath on her face...his scent..she will never forget. "Ussey patah hai na may dekh nai sakti? Antara asked. "Yes my child he knows everything and he said he will look after you. Sister said. Antara smile and said that she will go. Late that evening Raghu left towards Jyoti Niwas. A smile was playing on his lips. "Mujhey patah hai tum merey saath aaney se mana mat karogi. Raghu said while driving. Meanwhile sister mary helped Antara to get ready. In her short blue evening dress..she looked breathtakingly beautiful. With her long silky hair on her shoulders. ...two crystal studs on her earlobe with matching simple chain with Crystal heart pendant. .crystal bracelet on her wrist..light lip gloss on her soft lips and a touch of kajol around her eyes added more to her beauty. She smelled Jasmine. Raghu was totally lost when sister brought her down to Raghu. "I knew you would come. Raghu said in his heart. "Sister. .my stick please. Antara said. "Uski zarurat nai hai..mera haath hai na tumara sahara. Raghu said. Antara's heart raced at the sound of his deep voice. Raghu neared her and gently took her tiny soft hands in his palm. Raghu felt good at the feel of her touch. His touch gave Antara goosebumps as she felt her throat drying on her. Raghu thanked sister and left towards his jeep. Raghu helped her up on the jeep. Soon they were on the road. Raghu thought she looked so pure and innocent. She was still holding his hand as he drove. "Tum theek ho na? Raghu asked to start a conversation. "Jee..aur aap? She asked. "May bhi theek hu. Raghu said and gently squeezed her hand. Antara felt the warmth from his hand ran up and down her body..paralyzing her for seconds. "Hum jaah kaha rahe hai? Asked Antara. "I'm taking you to a quiet beach where we could sit and talk under the moonlight. Raghu said. "Wow!" View kitna khoobsurat hoga nai?" Lekin may dekh nai sakungi..Antara said sadly. "May hu na..may bataoga tumey..tum merey ankhon se dekh lena. Raghu said. Antara's eyes welled up when he said those last few words. "Lo finally we are here! Raghu said while parking his jeep. The sea breeze brushed antara's cheeks as if welcoming her for the very first time. Raghu helped her down and took her to a nearby bench. They both sat down. Antara was nervous. "Aap mera haath toh nai chorogey na? Antara asked nervously. "Kabhi nai. Replied Raghu. Raghu's hand came around her shoulder and slightly pulled her gently on him. Her slim figure collided with his hard one. Antara inhaled deep. Raghu saw her uneasiness. To make her comfortable with him..he started to tell her about the surrounding. .the stars and the moon above their heads..the waves crushing on the shore...and few lovers walking by holding hands. Antara started to visualize them as a beautiful smile crept over her lips. Raghu was once again lost in her beauty. Raghu gently tucked all her hair strands behind her ears. His fingertips brushed her earlobes and her cheeks. His eyes had so much care and concern for her. Antara squeezed her body as his hands were sending shivers down her spine. "Antara. .He whispered. "Jee..Antara said. "Tum duniya ke sab sey khoobsurat ladki ho. Raghu whispered in her ears. No one ever in her entire life has told her that she's the world's most beautiful girl. Antara's cheeks suddenly changed its shade. Pink then red. She was blushing. Raghu smiled at her blushing face. "Sharmatey huwey tum aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho. Raghu whispered again. Her heart fluttered in excitement. Suddenly her expressions changed. Raghu saw pain and sorrow in her eyes then her eyes moistened. In a shaky voice she spoke. "Kaash may ye nazara dekh sakti aur apney aap ko bhi. Antara said as her tears rolled down her cheeks. Raghu's heart wrenched. Raghu cupped her tearful face and buried it in his chest. His hands caressed her back in assurance that everything will be alright. Antara cried her heart out. "Miss kaul..tu roh mat..sab theek ho jaayega..tu ek din dekh sakegi mera vishwas karo. Raghu tightened his hold around her. After crying on his chest..Antara felt light as some of her burdens were lifted up by his words. She felt safe and secured in his powerful arms. Kuch apnapan thaa uski bahon mey.."kiyu Raghu ne sirf mujhey hii yaha par lekar aaye jab ki aur bhi ladkiya thii merey saath. Antara thought. "Suno..she whispered. "Sunao. Raghu said. "There were other girls with me fir aapney mujhey hii yaha kiyu lekar aaye? Antara asked. "Kiyu ki tum mujhey pasand ho. Raghu said. Antara quickly broke the hug and composed herself. "What's wrong? Asked Raghu. "Kuch nai..bas aysey hi. Antara said while Raghu smiled." Chal lets go for walk. Raghu said while taking her hand and getting up. They went walking around the beach hand in hand. Raghu told her stories while Antara just laughed. Raghu was again lost as her laughter spread around him. He took out a white rose from his pocket and gave it to her." Ye lo miss kaul.. gulaab ka phool terey liye. Raghu said while putting the rose in her hand. Smiling Antara took the rose and sniffed in the fragrance. "Thank you! She said. First time in life Antara was so happy. After spending some more time together Raghu dropped her off to Jyoti Niwas. "Tum fir aaogey na? Antara asked."If you want i'll come everyday. Raghu said. Antara was shy again. Sister mary took her inside as rantara bid goodbyes. Antara told everything to sister..and sister was very happy." God must have sent him for you my child. Sister said. Antara put the rose in her book and closed it." I will preserve this for forever. She said smiling.

Days went by. Raghu was busy and couldn't meet Antara for a week but he was talking to her on the phone. Today Raghu came home early. He needed to see her badly.Longing and desire took him over to her.With her soft beautiful hands she was playing a violin.She had a face of an angel .And huge deep blue eyes that stared at him .She moved around him so quick yet so graceful ..Sometimes Raghu felt that her heavenly bright light Will blind him.He tried to close his eyes But she won't let him.She came to Raghu and whispered softly close to his ears.."Will you be my angel..Angel by my side? IHe saw her soft beautiful hands stretched out to him. Without hesitation Raghu forwarded his rough hands to her. Their hands touched..she took his hands as a beautiful smile appeared on her lips. Raghu was lost in that breathtaking smile of hers. Raghu's eyes moistened for the very first time in his life. How can God be so unfair to her? Such a beautiful girl covered with darkness. "Why bhagwan? "Why? "Why cant she see like others? "Why cant she live life like others.?" This is not fair! His heart cried. "She deserves all the happiness in this world..Raghu's trance broke when she played another tune on her violin. She swayed to the music. .her fairy dress dragged behind her as she played and danced. Raghu was totally lost in her pure beauty. "Tum bhi aao na..hum saath me dance kartey hai..humarey dosti ke naam? Her sweet voice hits my ears as I moved towards the blue eyed girl. Raghu looked around..the girls that were there with Antara had left when they saw Raghu. Antara knew that raghu was coming to visit her today that's why she came out in the lawn and waited for him while playing her violin. It was a beautiful night with stars shining bright. Raghu took gentle but firm steps towards. She looked so happy..her smile was intact on her face. Raghu reached her..took the violin from her hand and put it away on the grass. Antara stilled as raghu pulled her in his arms. "Ek dance humarey dosti ke naam. Raghu said as they did a close dance together. Her belly trembled as raghu squeezed her hips. Her cheeks flushed with the heat but cool night breeze wafted over her skin moistening with perspiration. After sometime later..rantara sat on the grass and talked. Raghu took her hands into his. "Miss kaul..I'm looking a donor for your eyes. .may pura koshish kar raha hu ki tumey aankh miley aur woh bhi jald se jald. Raghu said. "Thank you Raghu. .aap merey liye itna kuch kar rahe ho. Antara said. "May khud ke liye kar raha hu. Raghu replied. "Kiya? Antara asked. "Tu nai samjhegi..accha ye bataao jab tumhey aankh mil jaayegi toh tum sab se paheley kisey dekhna chahogi? Asked Raghu. "Sab se pahelay may aap ko dekhna chahogi. Antara said. Raghu felt like the happiest person alive. He cupped her cheeks and said. "Idhar dekho merey ankhon me.."I cant..mujhey kuch bhi nai dikhaai deta raghu. Antara said. "May tumarey bilkul saamney hu..move or eyes some more. Antara did whatever he told her." Bas..aysey hii dekhti rahena..patah hai tum merey aankhon me dekh rahi ho. Raghu said. All Antara could see was pitch black! Nothing else. Her heart was crying to see him..no matter how hard she tried..the truth and the reality was ..she was blind! Tears streamed down her cheeks as she sobbed in pain. "Roh mat miss kaul..tu himmat mat haar..tu ek din mujhey dekh paaygi ye mera wada hai miss kaul. Raghu said and buried her in his chest.

Precap: Raghu confesses his love to Antara. Will she accept his love and marriage proposal? Being blind what decision will she take? Guys few more interesting chapters to go. Please stay tuned.

the updates of this story is like a beautiful unheard mesmerising music...it touches the heart with its devine tune and makes it flatter like a butterfly ...the sadness and pain of Antara lends so well with raghu's pure love and attraction ...waiting to read more this wonderful story ...

Originally posted by: pampz

the updates of this story is like a beautiful unheard mesmerising music...it touches the heart with its devine tune and makes it flatter like a butterfly ...the sadness and pain of Antara lends so well with raghu's pure love and attraction ...waiting to read more this wonderful story ...

loving it so much Sanji ...and hatts off to you ...i really don understand how u manage to write so many stories each one containing different flavour and beauty ...hatts off to you dear ...

u r the ⭐️of this forum ...LUV YOU 😃

Omg! Pampz thank you darling. You guyz are my inspiration yaar. I'm the star of the forum! Yay! Love you too. Mwaah mwaah mwaah!

Raghu ne Antara ko beech mein ghumaane legaya. Antara was very happy ki ye jaanthe huwe bhi vo dekh nahi sakthi koi usse itni attention deraha hai

Both spend romantic moments together.

Raghu said Antara that he is looking for a donor & Antara said that vo apne aakhon ki roshni lautne ke baad pehle Raghu ko dekhna chaahegi.

Precap is too good. Raghu confessing to Antara. Wow. That's so sweet

beautiful chapter...

sry for a let comment...
really heart touching story... raghu antara pure love ...really nice fresh consept...

Chapter 3 updated please enjoy and comment. Thanks.

Raghu kissed her forehead and wiped her tears. Cupping her cheeks he said softly. "Bahut raat ho chuki hai tumey andar jaana chahiye..I'll come and see you tomorrow. Antara noded. Raghu helped her to get up and he took her inside the building where sister and others were chatting. Raghu handed Antara to sister mary. "I'll come tomorrow to visit her. Raghu said. "May chalta hu miss kaul. Raghu said to Antara. Antara noded. Raghu smiled and left. "Raghu sir tumko pasandh karta hai my child. Sister said to Antara. Antara blushed. Soon they all retired for the night. On the other side Raghu was not able to sleep. "May pyaar karney laga hu miss kaul se! "Chahaney laga hu ussey! Raghu confessed while tossing and turning in bed. "Shaadi karunga uss sey aur apna banaoga ! "Duniya ki saari khushiya unkey kadmo me laakar rakhunga! Raghu said while running his fingers through his hair. He picked up his phone and called mm. Mm was shocked to hear. "Tu khush toh apun bhi khush bhaai. Mm said. Raghu was on cloud nine. "May tujhsey apney pyaar ka izhaar karunga miss kaul..bataonga tujhey apni dil ki baath. Raghu said. Whole night he couldn't sleep. Good thing next day was Sunday. Next morning Raghu got ready and left towards jyoti niwas. He met with sister mary and told her everything. Sister mary was happy for them . "Antara is in her room go and talk to her. Sister said. Raghu left towards her room. Raghu knocked on the door. "Come in. Antara said. Raghu opened the door and entered. He stilled at the view in front of his eyes! Antara was trying to pull her zipper up but she wasn't able to reach. Her milky skin was visible to Raghu. He gulped at the beautiful sight. "Sister mary..please aap meri help kardengi? "Ye zipper nai lag raha. Antara said. "Sister mary nai may hu Raghu. Raghu said. Antara quickly turned around and embraced her chest to prevent the dress from sliding off of her shoulders. "Aap?" Yaha? Antara asked nervously. "Jee..may kuch help kardu? Asked Raghu. Antara's eyes widened. "Nai..may..may karlungi. Antara said while gulping. "May kardeta hu. Raghu said and held her shoulders. .gently he turned her around. Antara was panting. "Bharosa hai na mujhpey? He Asked. Antara noded. He gently pulled the zipper up. His fingers brushed her milky skin in the process. A whimper escaped her mouth as sensations shot through her. Antara squeezed her chest. "All done miss kaul..ye ghabrana aur sharmana bacha kar rakhna shaadi ke din kaam aayega. Raghu said. "Matlab? Antara Asked. Raghu took her hands in his and continued. "Miss kaul..may tumsey..mera matlab hai ki mujhey tumsey..woh huwa hai. Raghu was finding it hard to confess. "Woh huwa hai..kiya huwa hai Raghu? Antara asked. Raghu took a deep breath in and out. "Woh huwa hai mujhey..may tumsey karne laga hu..He blew his breath again and said. "Miss kaul mujhey tumsey pyaar huwa!" I love you miss kaul! "May chahaney laga hu tumey! Raghu said and cupped her cheeks. Antara couldn't believe what she just heard. Her eyes welled up and the tears rolled down. "Kiya huwa tu roh kiyu rahi hai? Raghu asked worriedly. "Tu ghabra mat miss kaul. .may tumsey shaadi karunga..aur duniya ki saari khushya tumarey kadmo me laa kar rakhunga. "Tu bass han kar de miss kaul. Raghu said. Antara's heart wrenched. She was happy that someone loves her so much..but what will a blind girl give in return? Nothing! "Bolo na miss kaul? Raghu's deep voice brought her back from her thoughts. "Raghu..I'm sorry. .may aap se shaadi nai karsakti..may andhi ladki hu..aur ek andhi ladki tumey anderey ke siwa aur kiya desakti hai? Antara said painfully. Raghu left her cheeks. "I'm blind raghu..shaadi karkey may kiya karungi? "I cant look after myself how will I'll look after you? "Patni ka farz hota hai pati ka khayal rakna..khana pakana..kaprey dhona..joh may nai karsakti. Antara cried." Fir tum mujhsey kiyu shaadi karna chahatey ho? Antara asked. "Mujhey kuch nai chahiye sirf tum chahiye miss kaul. .aur rahi baath khaana aur kaprey dhoney ka toh naukar chaakar hai na..tumhey kuch bhi karney ki zarurat nai..bas tum merey saath raho...may tumsey pyaar karta hu miss kaul. .tumarey bina may jee nai paaonga. Raghu broke down. "Aap rohye mat please. .mujhey samajhney ki koshish karo raghu..may aap ke laayak nahi hu. Antara said. She was hurting as she broke his heart. "I'm sorry..if I wasn't blind then I would have happily married you but i'm blind and a burden on everyone. .I dont wanna be a burden on you raghu. Antara said. Antara lifted her hand and found his face. She touched his face for the very first time. She was crying hard. Raghu's tears rolled down as well. She caressed his cheeks.."I'll never forget you..never..because you are the one that I fell in love with. Antara cried. "Aap mera pahela pyaar ho..Raghu took her in his arms and both cried. "Miss kaul agar tum mujhey nai mili toh mera koi matlab nai..lekin may apna waada nibhaaonga..aur ek din tum dekh sakogi. Raghu said while kissing her cheeks. "Apna khayal rakhna miss kaul. .may jaha bhi rahunga na..humesha tumsey pyaar karta rahunga..martey dam tak. Antara cried holding his hand. ."you were my Angel. .Angel by my side..may apney Angel ke bina kaysey rahungi? Antara sobbed."fir shaadi karlo na mujhsey miss kaul..hum humesha saath saath rahengay. Raghu begged. "You deserve someone better and beautiful than me. Antara said. "Tumsey better aur sundar koi ladki hai hii nai miss kaul. Replied raghu. "Mujhey jaana hoga..Raghu said while kissing her hands. Raghu was dying a million death while parting with her. "Mujhey yaad karna aur merey sapno me zarur aana. Antara said. Raghu was slowly letting go of her tiny hands. ."I love you miss kaul and I'll always will. Raghu said. "I love you too and I'll always will. Replied antara. Antara wasn't letting go of his hand. Parting was painful for both of them. Both were devastated and shattered. Tears were flowing non stop. Antara grabbed his hand with both of her hands. The room was filled with their sobs and cries. "Mujhey jaana hoga miss kaul. .Raghu somehow managed to say. Antara pulled on the hanky that was on his wrist..the wrist band and the hanky came off as well as their hands left each other..Raghu let it go. Antara hugged his stuffs and cried. .glancing at her for the last time and capturing her beautiful face in his heart..Raghu left to never come back. "Raghu!!! Antara sat on her bed and cried.

Days and weeks went by. Raghu was shattered as well as Antara. One day raghu called mm. MM came to raghu's place. He gave some important documents to him and they had a little conversation. Both friends hugged and cried. "Apna khayal rakhna mm aur miss kaul ka bhi. Raghu said. Mm was speechless. "Itna pyaar koi kisisey kaysey kar sakta hai? Mm asked himself. Raghu left..to where? No one knows. The phone rang in the office of sister mary. Picking up the phone sister said " Hello. "Congratulations mam..Antara ke liye donor milgaya hai..she can come for eye transplant. The nurse from the city hospital informed sister. Sister was really happy. "Thank you God..my child will see now! Sister said. She broke the news to Antara who was sitting all lost in Raghu's thoughts and remembering their memories together. "My child! Sister said. Antara jerked and came out of her thoughts. "Jee sister! Antara said. "You are one lucky child! "You finally got a donor! Sister said excitedly. "Sach? "Abh may raghu ko dekh sakungi sister! "Ek baar may dekhney lagoo fir may khudh usey shaadi ke liye propose karungi. Antara said happily .She was seeing light at the end of the tunnel. A very happy and excited Antara got ready and headed towards the city hospital with sister mary. At the hospital Antara was taken to the surgical treatment room. Antara wrapped her palm with raghu's hanky..never letting go she was hugging it close to her heart. The surgery started. Machmach came for support. They were pacing the hallway and praying in their heart. After six hours of surgery the doctor's came out." Operation was successful. .Antara is ok..she's being transfered to another room then you guys can go ahead and meet her. Doctor said and left. Mm and sister were happy that operation was successful and Antara made it. Sometime later sister entered antara's room. Antara's eyes were covered with a bandage. "My child are you ok? Sister asked. "I'm fine sister. .aap Raghu ko bula lo na..the very first person I want to see is him..so please bula do na ussey. Antara requested. Sister looked at mm. They came outside. "May ussey kaysey laao jab woh yaha hai bhi nai..mm said. "Hum kiya karsaktey hai..abh humey ussey batana hoga ki Raghu yaha nai hai. Sister said sadly. "My child will break into pieces. Sister said while mm held his head in confusion. Sister informed Antara about Raghu's disappearance. "Ye nai hosakta sister! "Woh gaya kaha hoga? Antara said worriedly. "Get well child then we'll look for him. Doctors removed the bandage from her eyes. She held raghu's hanky in front of her eyes. Feebly she opened her eyes. The very first thing she saw was his hanky in her hand! A smile appeared on her lips. "May dekh sakti hu! She jumped out of the bed in excitement. Sister hugged her. Mm met her as well." Tum raghu ke dost ho na? Mm noded."kaha hai Raghu? "Tumey toh patah hoga.. hai na? She asked. "Mujhey kuch nai patah woh kaha hai..lekin tumarey liye ek chitti chor gaya hai. "Aaj tum jyoti niwas jaao araam karo..kal may tumko pick karney aajaonga..kuch zaruri documents deney hai joh Raghu tumarey liye chor gaya hai. Mm said. Nothing was making sense to Antara. "Kiya horaha hai ye sab? She thought. Antara went to jyoti niwas with sister as mm went on his way.

Precap: Mm takes Antara to raghu's home and gives her the documents and the letter. Antara screamed and cried as her heart wrenched while reading the letter. With tears rolling down Antara sat on Raghu's bed with a thud. Stay tuned guys..three chapters more to go. Stick around.

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