Pitch Black-A forbidden love story last part page 15 - Page 2

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Excerpt
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Longing and desire takes me over to her.With her soft beautiful hands she plays a violin.She has a face of an angel .And huge deep blue eyes that stare at me .She moves around me so quick yet so graceful ..Sometime I feel that her heavenly bright light Will blind me. I try to close my eyes But she won't let me.She whispers softly to me"Will you be my angel..Angel by my side? I see her soft beautiful hands stretched out to me. Without hesitation I forwarded my rough hands to her. Our hands touched..she took my hands as a beautiful smile appeared on her lips. I was lost in that breathtaking smile of hers. My eyes moistened for the very first time in my life. How can God be so unfair to her? Such a beautiful girl covered with darkness. "Why bhagwan? "Why? "Why cant she see like others? "Why cant she live life like others.?" This is not fair! My heart cried. "She deserves all the happiness in this world..My trance broke when she played another tune on her violin. She swayed to the music. .her fairy dress dragged behind her as she played and danced. I was totally lost in her pure beauty. "Tum bhi aao na..hum saath me dance kartey hai..humarey dosti ke naam? Her sweet voice hits my ears as I moved towards the blue eyed girl.
Guys this was a part from my upcoming chapter..hope you liked it.

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Originally posted by: sanjinimala

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"PITCH BLACK"-A FORBIDDEN LOVE STORY

Chapter 1

A well-known gangster Raghunath Naik..now a undercover cop who works for the police in various parts of Mumbai and throughout India.He was Tall..handsome. .well built..rough and tough with broad shoulders and had a layered muscles of a warrior. Dark brows with long black lashes emphasized the unusual color of his eyes..not grey or black..it was deep brown. A straight blunt nose gave balance to his full lips and square jaw. There was a harsh and rugged edge to his features that flawed his beauty and made it masculine. .something more compelling than simple aesthetics. He wore a black leather vest over white shirt and black jeans that tapered from lean hips to long legs. Not just tall..not just broad..he was a big man. Anyone could tell he was a cop. With a strap around his hip that had gun..flashlight and pager he looked dangerous. Raghu plays with life and death in everyday life. "Fear is just a word for me". Thats what he told his work partner and best friend machmach. Raghu didn't have any family ..thats why he gives most of his time to his work. He is rich guy with his own house and everything. He was hardworking. .honest..reliable..well focused and dedicated to his work and thats why the police departments were proud of him. Uneducated Gangster of Mumbai back then is now a educated well trained cop in Mumbai.

Today he was on a mission to diffuse bombs that were planted in various buildings including the city Hall. It was tough to search and diffuse the bombs when there was a concert going on. He didn't wanted to scare the people off thats why he entered the building quietly with his team. He found the bombs and diffused it. "Sir..we couldn't find the one last remaining bomb!"And we are running out of time! One of his teammates told Raghu. "Alright then escort the people out of here as soon as possible! Raghu said. The crowd started to move out of the city Hall. A middle aged lady came running to raghu. "Sir there's a girl inside. .she's in white fairy dress with other girls..they dont know whats going on here and they wont be able to come out on their own..please sir help them! The lady pleaded. "Dont worry I'm going in my self. Raghu said and ran inside the building. The building was overcrowded. People were everywhere as they tried to hurry out of the building. Raghu looked everywhere for the fairy dress girl but no luck. She wasn't in sight. Raghu smashed the the closed doors as he went by. "Where are you? He said as he stood and scanned the hall. Then he saw her. In the periphery of his vision. .she shimmered like a gold in a muddy riverbank. He blinked. ..unsure of what he saw was real..he turned his headto look again..she was still there. She was was dressed in white fairy dress that dragged around her as she moved. Her dress showcased toned arms and lithe curves. Chestnut coloured hair curled in waves down her back. The structure of her face was classical perfection. .her beauty so striking that it caught his eye from a distance. Then suddenly she disappeared in the crowd. He tracked her through the massive crowd of people. He pushed his way towards her. When she was within reaching distance. .he closed his fingers around her arm. It was like stroking a newborns cheek..her skin was so soft. The silk -covered steel of her biceps flexed beneath his tightening grip. Desire surge through his fingertips and landed straight in his groin. She stopped dead at his touch..swung to face him. From a distance she was beautiful. .up close she was Devine. His eyes drifted over her high cheekbones. .her lush lips..her wide and deep blue eyes. The innocence he saw in those eyes ...he wanted to make her part of himself and never let her go. As he gripped her arm..time hung suspended. All noise stopped. She twisted. .trying to disengage herself as his rough hands were digging in her flesh. He tightened his grip unwilling to let go. Looking at her facial expressions raghu quickly loosened his grip. She felt a caress so gentle. .so reverent and yet so sensual that it sent pleasure skimming over the surface of her skin. It washed over her entirely and set the most secret places of her body singing. "Aap chalye merey saath. His voice low and deep. .seemed to vibrate in her bones. For a moment she stood stunned. Then she reminded herself to breathe. Raghu assumed she was scared." Dekhye aap ghabraaye mat..may ek police officer hu..and i'm here to move all of you out of here to safety. "Raghu said while still holding her arms. "Follow me. Raghu said while heading towards the exit. The blue eyed girl and the rest didn't move from there. Raghu stopped and turned around to see why the hack they were not moving. Raghu scanned the blue eyed girl from top to bottom. His jaw dropped opened and eyes widened when he saw a thin white stick in her hand! She was blind! His heart wrenched. He came near her. "I'm going to scoop you up in my arms and carry you out of here. Raghu said. Blue eyed girl gulped. The rest of the girls were escorted by other officers while raghu scooped the blue eyed girl in his powerful steel arms. Her stick fell as her hands came to rest on the muscled wall of his chest..feeling it rise with his deep breath. .grappling with the feel of his heart beating fiercely under her palm. She felt his mouth close to hers. His coffee breath was a hot whisper on her cheeks..his hot scorching breath redened her flesh. She clutched his vest. If Raghu moved his head. .his lips might brush her lips..so he just looked a head. The blue eyed girl inhaled his cologne.. mixed with his salty ruggedness and manly scent..his smell and essence she will never forgot. Raghu carried her out of the building. Outside the building was a kaos! People running for their precious lives. Raghu put her down under a oak tree far from the building. She was unstable without her stick. Raghu took her hand in his. "Aap ghabraiye nai may yahi hu..jab tak aapkey dost nai miljaatey i'll stay right here with you. Raghu said. "By the way I'm Raghu..Raghunath Naik..I'm an undercover cop. He introduced himself. "I'm Antara. .Antara Kaul..may Jyoti Niwas me raheti hu. Antara said. Nice to meet you Antara. Raghu said. "Same here. Antara replied.Her voice sounded so sweet to his ears. Raghu smiled at her tiny palm covered with his. "Bhaai tu has raha hai? MM said while coming to him with Antara's friends and her caretaker. Raghu quickly composed himself and glared at him. Caretaker hugged Antara. "Tum theek ho na beta? She asked. "May theek hu sister mary. Antara replied. Sister mary thanked Raghu and his teammates for saving the girls. Raghu noded. "So I'll see you later miss kaul. Raghu said. The blue eyed girl smiled. First time someone has addressed her as miss kaul. "Jee. Antara said. Raghu noticed her beautiful smile..and he forgot to breathe. Mm reminded him to breath as Antara disappeared from there. "Jyoti Niwas! Raghu said and ran his fingers through his tosseld hair. "Terey ko..boley toh mast kuch ho rela hai kiya? Mm asked in his tapori style. "Mm tu bhi na yaar..kiya horaha hai mujhey? Raghu asked and looked away. His pager beeped. Soon the team were heading for another mission. Raghu was disturbed whole day. He couldn't take her beautiful face out of his mind. "How can God be so unfair to her? Raghu thought while driving back home. "She deserves to see theworld..enjoy life to the fullest! Raghu thought while lying down on his bed. "She's living her life in complete darkness. .which is not fair. Raghu couldn't sleep that night..he tossed and turned in bed. He needed to see her. Grabbing his jeeb keys he came out. Getting in the jeep he left towards Jyoti Niwas. He parked outside the gate. The watchmen was fast asleep at the gate. Raghu shook his head unbelievably. The sound of violin hit his ears. Raghu's eyes roamed on each balcony to find out from where the sound was coming. His eyes stopped on the second floor balcony. Antara was standing outside in her balcony. .under the beautiful open sky with twinkling stars..with her long hair blowing in the wind..she was playing a violin. The scene was mesmerizing .Raghu came out from his jeep and laid down on the bonnet. He was stalking her as she played her violin happily. The tuned was like lullaby which put him to sleep. Raghu closed his eyelids and drifted off.

So guys how was the first chapter. Please shoot your comments.
Precap: Raghu visits Antara in the Jyoti Niwas. Stay tuned to see how this love story unfolds. Cheers!

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#3300cc">woww yr..u r fantastic sanji !👏</font>

<font color="#3300cc">u introduced Raghu marvously...i loved him yr..❤️</font>

<font color="#3300cc">Aww antu can't see...😭</font>

<font color="#3300cc">this made him hurt...</font>

<font color="#3300cc">RAghu drools on her...hehe😆</font>

<font color="#3300cc">last scene was so beautiful..</font>

<font color="#3300cc">i loved first chap yr..u r so good!!</font>

<font color="#3300cc">i love u🤗</font>

<font color="#3300cc">thanks for updating..update soon..ye lo tumhare liye..😳</font>

Thanks suchi..your comments just fills me with joy! Hayee..tumney toh mujhey meetha meetha kardiya! Yum..this is soo good! Mwaah mwaah mwaah! I love you too!