Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

haha this time me first!! 😆

unres...😆

omg!..pampz yr its such an outstanding update!!!👏
story is getting denser n denser..n I am just flowing with it!😛
RAGHUUU!!!!!!...y he is so irresistible??😳..this story has made me super crazy for him!😆
he was dumb n perplexed at the moment when antu ran away from him..that moment amde me to think..is he feeling for her?😳and after reading whole update I got my answer😆
aww my sweet chilli..what a combination?..*sweet chilli*..😆chillies can't be sweet but this chilli has magic...she too loved raghu..even he couldn't deny from her innocence.😃
oh antara is in drastic state!..she didn't imagined that her encounter with him would be so shocking!😭
and then raghu made entry in Orphanage!..u described whole surrounding so perfectly!!.⭐️
he tortured her n take her away from that place!!😲
what will he do?..I am so much waiting for this to be updated..😃
I am ready to go with this story.I think after twinks SS raghubahi..its urs complete dark story..where Raghu can't be in white shade..that's what I think!😆
his every way is so unique...how will he treat her after marriage??!!😲

just one question..will raghu ever feel for her..means hate/love/lust?..I mean he will marry with her..but what after that?...😲
thanks fr updating dear🤗
loved the update..u r FANTASTIC PAMPZ!!!...take a *bow *girl!😃

Ohhh Suchi Thnax yaar tu lout ke aayi and review dedi ...wo bhi inni crispy review ...i was thinking u hv just ran away after reading the update putting a res ...hahah LOLZ😆
like u me too cant forget Twink's Raghubhai ...where he was truely a dark one ...there he was going to rape Antu ... and he was full on charged up to rape her
but here in this story i don think Raghu wd do any rape ...again i really don know ...cos when i start writting it comes up with weird stuffs ...here Raghu is dark ...as Ria said beautifully that dark is a combination off all colors ...
and Suchi dear most importantly u hv energized me a looot for writing the next part ...luv u girl ...😃🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update .
Loved it .
Thank you .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pampz it was beautiful! Chilly is cute yaar. .she told raghu how to manao Antara. I love rough and tough Raghu. The scene inside the sound proof car was giving me goosebumps. I'm wondering abh aagay kiya hoga? Will raghu use chilly's idea? Soch soch ke mari jaah rahi hu may. Everything was wonderfully written as usual. Hats off to you! Cant wait to read more please continue soon. Mwaah to you! ❤️
Edited by sanjinimala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

okkk read d update!!!!!

bt im nt able to understand raghu n his feelings
kbhi lgta h hes in love with aantara n kbhi nh.. 🤢
hes really a daring person ...orphanage m aa gy n
antara ko zabardasti le bh gya 😭 poor antara 😭 😭
really feeling sry fr her..bt what does he want???
aise harkatein krega toh kaun ladki shaadi kregi raghu se..😡
ab how vl mother react on finding antara missing 😕
n what b out dat security guard too 😲 is he dead??
though chilly likes him...i have seriouss doubts k ab
antara kaise manegi shaadi ko..ya phr he vl ,arry her foercibly???
too many questions 😆 😆
realy wishing k nxt update jldi aaye 😉
grt work pampzzz...loved dis update d most 😃
update soon n thanks fr updation 😛
tkcr... hugsss 👏

too many vital questions Pri ...hahha...
one answer am going to giv u that is yes ...ANtara wll be confused by Raghu's behaviour ...and so will YOU all my dear Yedis ...
So great Confusion is coming along with the next part ...get ready to be hell CONFUSED by Raghu's unpredictable actions and attitudes towards Antara ...haha ...LOLZZZ
thanx a lot Pri for liking the update and appreciating me so much ...luv u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Pampz it was beautiful! Chilly is cute yaar. .she told raghu how to manao Antara. I love rough and tough Raghu. The scene inside the sound proof car was giving me goosebumps. I'm wondering abh aagay kiya hoga? Will raghu use chilly's idea? Soch soch ke mari jaah rahi hu may. Everything was wonderfully written as usual. Hats off to you! Cant wait to read more please continue soon. Mwaah to you! ❤️

Thank you Sanji 😃😃 ur comment really brightens up my day ...am glad that u liked it yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
@pampz..aise kaise bhaag jati bina review diye😆..pata hai maine res krke update read kiya aur power cut ho gayi...maine bola lo hogaya kaam.😡😆..phir jab waps aayi tab review diya...😆
thanks for replying for my query..would love to see how much raghu will go for her or his target?😉
I was waiting for this kind of story...as its totally different.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
very dramatic update
i am loving this raghu
so dominate and obsessive
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

very dramatic update

i am loving this raghu
so dominate and obsessive

thnx Rima😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5:
OMG Pampz...wat an update yaar...just too good...👏...mind-blowing yaar...👍🏼...loved it to d core...❤️...🤗...n even got confused n scared...😕......🤪...🤔...😆...
i read it 2-3 days before...but cudn't comment...😔..may be it was 3-4 days ago..🤔...can't remember exactly though...🤓...🤔...
nw abt d update...😊...

Raghu cudn't understand y it affected him...wen Antu ran away from him...refusing on his face...😳...🤔...
Raghu knows dat dey cross-checked on him...🤔...i thought he will b bothered by MMs reaction atleast...🤔...

oh so cutely he bonded wid chilly...😳...n even told her dat Antus angry on him...he listened to her scolding n also advice...😃...Chilly wants deir patch up...😊...den telling him hw to manao Antu n abt d cottage no. n kissing on his cheek...Raghu instantly connected wid her...😳...Raghu told Chilly to give d Lotuses to Antu...(..is Lotus ur fav. flower...???...😃...)...
Raghu remembering all d actions-reactions wid Antara...😊...n wanted to confront her...🤔...

i was so much cherishing while reading d way Raghu entered d orphanage...concealing himself wid his black hooded jacket to blend in d shadows......i was in full drooling mode......😳...😃...only u can describe Raghu in such a detailed manner...his each n every slightest move...captured n portrayed so marvelously...😊...👏...

Antu is devastated n trying to compose herself...😔...she wants to talk to mother abt it n refuse d proposal...she also came to kno abt Raghu-Chilly's meeting n dat chilly likes Raghu...😲...

Raghu found Antu...n he reverted at d last moment wen Antu was changing...😲...🤔...👍🏼...(..Again a well described scene...)...👏...

OMG...wat r u planning re...???...i thot he has come to speak to her...par yeh toh Antu ko utha k legaya......n sound-proof gaadi mein bandh karliya...😲...Aakhir karna kya chahta hai yeh ladka...aise woh kaise usse shaadi k liye Haan bulwayega...😕...🤔...baat ko banaane aaya hai...ya bigaadne...???......🤪...

Waiting...for d upcoming story...😳...u give such intricate updates...dat totally get involved in it...😃...
...n i wasnt feeling scared in d last car scene..may b coz i hav a feeling dat he wont do wrong wid Antu der...😊...may b he'll just speak to her...in his hatke andaaz...😉...coz Antu toh usse seedhe tarike se baat karne se rahi...😕...😆...Continue dear...😳...🤗...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Pampu ji tussi kithey ho? I'm thirsty for your update. Update karo n yaar! I don't know why I get greedy for more when it comes to your updates. 😉

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