Rantara Dark SS Yeh Kyun Kiya .......Sathiya .(updated Part 16 pg 57) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Main kya bolu...😲...sab ke mindblowing n awesome reviews k baad...😕...

kuch bacha hi nahi yaar...bas ek hi word sooj raha hai is waqt...INTENSE...mera toh yahi haal hota hai...updates mein khokar...
..story se lekar characterisation tak... sab kuch mindblowing n mindboggling hai...awesome yaar...just loving it...very intriguing...👏...
THank You AAndyyy😃 thank u so much for loving this story so much ...Awww
itne predictions n anxieties ho rahi hai...ki samaj nahi aa raha...k kya likhu aur kya nahi...
BRILLIANT...just WOW...⭐️...
haha...thats nice 😆😉
Antara...naazo se pali par ab uski zindagi ulat jaayegi...😲...mujhe bhi is so-called TRUSTEE pe bilkul complete TRUST nahi ho raha hai..."kuch toh gadbad hai"... boss...kuch bahut bhaari gadbad lag rahi hai...
nahi yaar Antu nazo se toh nahi pali but yes she had a safe and sucure life in the orphanage...she studied there ...loved mother and the girls there and she too was loved by all. and yess GADBAD toh hai ...abh kya gadbad hai yeh toh suspense hai...😆
d way Raghu approached her for d 1st time...koi bhi ladki dar jaati aur aise hi reactions hote...u get d feeling of creepy obsessed stalker...aur agar pata chale ki...wohi rishta lekar aaya hai...aur aise behave kare jaise Raghu ne kiya...toh bas...disgust si feeling hi aathi hai...🤢...ab kaise Antu aage aanewaale situations ko handle karegi...yeh bataana mushkil hai...
haan yaar yeh dark complex Raghu ko handle karna mushkil hi nahi ...namumkin hai ...LOLZZZ😆

kya character hai Raghu ka...dark, harsh but something---soft too hidden...very focussed n determined...n values time n money to d core...
he is having dis undescribable feeling after coming across Antara...😳...😉...
OMG ANdy ...u r correct dear ...he is going thru some new kinda feeling after coming accross Antu ...he too is to some extent confused (wll be revealed in next chap ..i think so ...as i don know likhtelikhte kya likh jati hun...hahah)
...i don't kno hw ur planning it...but i think if d change in character is involved it wud b just fantastic to go over it...ofcourse at a very very later stage...after experiencing all d dark traits of Raghu...d transformation from being d predator to a saviour...for me Raghu is always n will forever remain a golden-hearted gangster...d inevitable sadak-chaap gunda...😳...
I need to zip my mouth right now hihihihihi😆😆😆..will not reveal ...its good to remain in suspence and cherish it ...
d way he helped d liitle girl in collecting d lotuses made me have a glimpse of it...he cud have just walked away to fulfill his task...but he stopped n helped her...😳...n like d karmic-connection he remembered Antara when he smelled d lotus...😳...😉...
Yesss...Lotus flower has so many effects on Rantara ...and Chilly is a lovely kid ...u wll love her more ...and yess Raghu sees n feels Antara like a flower...the most beautiful queen of flower LotusEmbarrassed...but does not treat her so ...😆😆😆 after all Dark Raghu is full on here in this story ...

yeh sabkuch mere dimmag ka locha hai...aap kaise isse aage badhathi hai...iska toh bas intezaar hi kar sakte hain...

Continue soon...n keep going...😃...😊...

Thank You Andy again for this lovely crispy deeply analysed wonderful Review ...loved it thoroughly and got the enthu to write the next part ...😃

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Thank You...😊...for d story...😃...n i feel there r quite a no. of readers who do love dis type n in-fact all types of stories...😳...(...m 1 of dem...😉...)...
dese r for u...👏...🤗...❤️...😳......😆...(last emo 4 my Yediness)...😃...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pampu ji update kab karogi? I'm very impatient when it comes to your stories. Update kardo na please!
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this chap is a bit boring guys ...anyway just read it and shoot ur comments...and one more thing i wanna say ...those who don lik dark stories please don go ahead ...this is a WARNING!!!!!!😆
PART 5
"There's nowhere you can be that isn't where you're meant to be..."
John Lennon
Raghu was staring at her running retrieving figure. His deep eyes emitted an unknown disturbance n frustration generating within him. He was standing with a frown on his forehead at the entrance of the orphanage Office staring at Antara's retrieving frightened figure. He didn't know why but he didn't like her crying n running away like that fearing him. The feeling made him a bit disturbed restive and frustrated. Deep in his system he felt he needed to talk to her again ...face her again. His mind was insisting him to follow her right then but his brain stopped him. He knew Antara would definitely tell everything whatever happened between them to Mother...and that might create a hindrance on his way and for that he needed to stop Antara.
His phone bipped as he started towards the main gate in a disturbed mind:...Boss ...this is Inara here. ( Inara worked in Raghu's Event Management Office )...Peter ke bareme aapko puri information kaal rat ko hi dedi thi...wo Peter aaj kuch der pehle firse ayatha office mein ...chatri bhul gayatha yehan kal wohi wapas lene ... and abhi tak aur koi nahi aya further investigation ke liye...na yehan Office mein nahi aapke ghar mein...
Hmmm...thik hai ...Raghu hung up the phone and saw little Chilly coming running towards him with a huge naughty grin on her face. She looked like a living doll in a tiny baby frock paired with cute shorts. A faint smile appeared on his disturbed face. Chilly came dangling two cute small ponytails on her head and raised her little arms towards him and ordered: Godee !!!
Raghu was left with no other option ...he bent and took her up in his arms. Raghu was amused with the feeling of holding little Chilly in his arms. Chilly proudly n rightfully sat on his arms and asked : tumaya name bolo...
Raghu ...he replied.
With a twinkle in her eyes Chilly further asked: tum aaj Anta didi se milne ayethe ???
Haan ...Raghu admitted.
Didi se shadi kayoge?? She asked rounding her eyes.
Haan ...Raghu's voice flashed determination n hardness.
Didi se dosti ho gayee??? She asked again making a curious and worried face.
Nai...Raghu shook his head looking at cute Chilly.
Kyun??? Chilly became hell worried.
Wo ...apun ne uska cake khaliya ...isliye wo naraz hoke chali gayi...Raghu replied.
Hawww ...didi ka cake kha liya ??? Ganda Ragu !!! didi rolithi ??? Chilly this time asked Raghu with an angry frowned face.
Haan ...wo ro rahi thi...!!! ...Raghu admitted again.
didi naaz rayegi toh kabhi dosti nai kayegi ...aw puppy bhi nai degi !!!...Chilly declared knowing her didi so well.
Achha??? ...toh abh apun kya karega ??? Raghu asked Chilly worriedly.
Didiko hug kayo ...aw Soyee bolo ...Chilli advised Raghu like an expert.
Aisa karunga to maan jayegi teri didi ??? Raghu asked with a doubt.
Haaan ...mei didi bhot pyayi hai ...jab bhi Chilly naughty naughty ban jati hai ...didi naaz hoti hai toh ...mei hug kakke Soyeee bol deti hun aw pomise katti hun ki fi kabhi naughty nai banungi ...toh didi haas deti hai ...fi puppy deti hai ... Chilly explained Raghu the whole process how she manages puppies from her Anta didi even when Chilly goes naughty naughty.
Hmmm...Raghu thought for a while then asked her again ...:Tune wo sari lotus dedi Antara ko??
Nai ...mei bhul gayi... chilly said.
Lotus nahi degi toh puppy kaise legi teri didi se ??? ja aabhi jake dede usse lotus ...Raghu put her down softly on the ground.
Waise tu aur teri Antara didi yehan rahti kahan hai ...Raghu asked Chilly cautiously roaming his sharp eyes through the vast compound. It was a huge 2 acre area inside the Orphanage compound with lots of tiny cottages for the girls living there...a school...a small church and a huge kitchen with a dining space ...lots of lotus ponds scattered here and there and beautiful greenaries covering the whole area surrounded by a 30 feet high boundary wall separating the Orphanage area from the rest of the village. It was being difficult n impossible for Raghu to guess or find out Antara's exact living place standing just at the Office gate which was near the main entrance of the Orphanage.
Cottage numba twenty one...mango tee ke pas ...wo...udar hai ...chilly showed Raghu the direction.
Ragu bhaiya ...Chilly gestured Raghu to bent down with her tiny fingers. Raghu sat on his knees in front of her and Chilly placed a heavy puppy the second time on his cheek ...Ummmaaa!!!!
Abh yeh kisliye ??? Raghu asked her rubbing his cheek ...
Chilly ko Ragu bhot pasand hai!!!...isliye ...Chilly announced proudly.
A smirk appeared on Raghu's face...he placed a soft feathery punch on Chilly's chubby cheek and said ...tu ja ...teri Antara didi ke pas ja ...wo ro rahi hai na ...usse jake lotus dede...
Chilly ran away leaving him ...but left him feel bizarre. For the first time in his life Raghu was having difficulty in understanding his own mind.
Raghu came out of the Orphanage ...got in his Duster and drove far away from the Orphanage and stopped in between a forest at the end of the village. The scenes of meeting Antara were coming in front of his eyes repeatedly ...Antara lowering her eyes from him...then knowing who he was how edgily she tried to escape breaking his cage in that room saying she wont marry him...how she placed her hands on his chest n tried to shove him but couldn't.
How she was sad when that Robin rejected her ...then how she asked Robin to take away that cake with him ...and how she reacted when Raghu forcefully made her eat that cake.
She was crying ...her big serene beautiful eyes were almost red n wide with fear and shock...she was looking at him with fury through her wet eyelashes...huge drops of tears were running down her cheeks as he twisted her wrist to her back and held her face in position by helding her soft silky hair tightly in his fist...she must have got hurt ...Raghu thought.
Raghu closed his eyes and his lips parted automatically remembering her physical proximity as he leaned on her face and forcefully licked n harshly caressed her soft cheek and chin with his lips in the process of cake eating. She was so soft ...so warm ...and so delicate...Raghu took a deep breath grabbing the steering tightly.
She was trembling wiggling and whimpering helplessly within his hold...and he was endlessly tasting her soft honey skin ...tasting her hot salty tears mixed with the cake...immerging into her lotus body aroma ...ignoring her pleadings n nervousness completely.
Antaraa...hh... !!!!...the name came out with Raghu's deep breath ...a dangerous crave flickered in his brain ...his entire system proclaimed that he badly needed to talk to her ...needed to see her again...just in front of his eyes.
He shot open his eyes realizing the pull that was fatally drawing him towards his target terminating each n every obstruction between... he understood he was incapable to curb down this fatal attraction towards Antara...his mere target. He panted as he was being unable to find out the reasons behind that...it never happened with him ever. His whole being made him forcefully drive back to the orphanage again...madly.
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Antara layed there on the stairs of her tiny cottage like a senseless. Her legs were not supporting her ...they felt like made of jelly. After an hour or so she got back her strength in her legs. She stood up and weakly entered her cottage. It was around 8 pm and the other three girls were not in the cottage. Nandini and Stela were busy in the kitchen with other few girls for preparing the dinner for the whole Orphanage ...and the third member of Antara's cottage was little Chilly. She was not seen anywhere till then.
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When Raghu reached the orphanage again it was already 8 pm and he knew after 6.30 pm no outsider was allowed in side the orphanage. The main gate was closed and the stout security guard who used to sleep during the day time was seen standing there awake and alert behind the iron bars of the gate. Raghu noticed another guard came and stood on the gate while the first security guard went for a round in the compound.
Raghu left the gate n drove his duster to give a round around the boundary wall of the orphanage area to find out another way in to the orphanage...and soon he found out a suitable spot. That area was full of large trees and other greeneries ... deadly dark n lonely. It was far away from the village too. He stopped there his duster and came out. He stared at the 30 feet high boundary wall narrowing his eyes and then opened his car dicky. From a heap of diffrent kind of stuffs he searched out a nylon rope with a large iron hook.
He threw the hook attached with rope high above the wall. The rope didn't hooked the wall ...it came back to him. After few times of trial he was able to hook it well on the wall. He took out a black jacket from his backpack and wore it and just got blended with the darkness. He locked his car ...kept the key in his jeans and then swiftly started to climb the wall holding the rope in his hand. Soon he reached above the wall easily. He sat on the wall hanging his legs and looked inside the Orphanage.
The whole compound was immerged in darkness except few lights blinked here and there in the cottages ...in the kitchen and the Church. The tiny cottages announced their existence in the pitch dark with the light bulbs gleaming in side the rooms. Raghu looked around in the dark from the wall n thought: abh itne sare cottages mein wo number 21 kounsa hai ???? agar uss taraf main gate hai ...toh iss taraf Antara ki cottage hogi ...jaisa Chilly ne kaha tha...Raghu mapped a portion within the compound and decided to search every cottage with in that part to find out Antara.
Suddenly his eyes stuck into his right ...some few feets away a two storied building can be seen in the dark...the roof top was almost touching the boundary wall. Raghu pulled out the hook from the wall that he dug few minutes back and took it with him towards that building. From the wall he could easily jump on the roof top of that building...it was hardly 3 feets distance. Raghu guessed it was the Orphanage school building. He hooked the rope on the wall there and left the rope hanging outside the Orphanage boundary wall.
He jumped on the rooftop with a soft thud and soon found out a spiral iron stairs that led him directly towards the ground. He got down from the roof top and started to move n within few steps he found a cottage ...he peeped through the window cautiously to find out Antara but there were other girls.
He left that cottage n moved further. He saw that hefty security guard was stomping along the narrow path connecting every cottage and other places of the orphanage with a heavy stick in his hand. He bypassed the guard easily n checked few more cottages. Keeping his cool and focus intact he continued searching cottages one after another but he couldn't find out cottage number 21. He roamed his alert sharp gaze n saw another cottage a bit far away near a big tree which was fully dark ...no light was on inside the room.
Raghu felt something inside him and he ran towards the cottage with alert muted footsteps. The window n the door was wide open of that cottage and even in that dark it could be seen that a young girl was sitting on a bed. She was sniffing n crying silently in the dark room. The posture of her body ...her long hair ...and the mild soft sound of her sob told Raghu that he had reached cottage number 21 finally.
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Antara was sitting on her tiny bed ...exhausted and drained out completely. Streams of tears were still running down her cheeks...she couldn't stop. She was wiping her cheek and chin often to erase out the feeling of his burning touch...she rubbed her right wrist ...it was aching due to his harsh grip. After a while Nandini entered their cottage n found a devastated Antara sitting on her bed crying silently in the dark. Nandini put on the light and came near Antara widening her eyes. ANtara hugged her with her life n cried out loudly. Slowly with a choking voice she told her everything whatever happened with her few hours back. Nandini was of Antara's age and she was also going to get married the next month with a guy from the same village Nibholi. She wiped Antara's tears lovingly n tried to console her: Antara hume insaan ki parakh nahi hai zyada ...par mother ne agar uss Raghu ko tere liye sahi samjhi hai ...toh kuch toh achhi baat zaroor hogi ussme. Hosakta hai jaisa ki Mother ne tujhe kaha hai ...wo ladka wakehi mein thoda different hai isliye shayad tere sath aise ajeeb se pesh aya ...
But Antara shook her head nervously n restlessly and said ...Nahi Nandini ...mujhe Mother se baat karni hogi ...abhi !!!...mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai...
Just then Chilly entered with her hands behind her back with her naughty grin on her face. Antaaa Didiii...!!! deko mai tumaye liye kya layi ...!!! Chilly exclaimed.
Antara spreaded her arms to her n gestured her to come in her arms...
Chilly ran to her ...sat on her lap and gave her those beautiful lotus flowers. Antara for a second forgot her trauma and smiled with tears in her eyes. She cuddled Chilly n kissed her cheeks and hands lovingly. She touched the lovely lotuses and inhaled its aroma closing her eyes. The pleasant beauty and aroma of the lotuses wiped her edgyness n worry instantly for a while.
Antaa didi ...Chilly ne usse bhot daata ...tum ro mat ...Chilly said making a proud face.
Antara chuckled with tears ..: tune kise data Chilly ???
Ragu ko daata...usne tumaya cake khaliya !!!...Chilly exclaimed with an angry face.
The terror n tension came back to her again...: tune Raghu ko data???? Wo tujhse milatha kya ???? tujhe kaise pata ...ke usne cake kha liya???
Ragu bhaiya bataya muje...wo tumaya cake khaliya tha ...isliye tum rolithi ...aw naaz hoke chali gayi ...Chilly explained...
Chilly narrated Antara the whole story how Raghu helped her in plucking the lotuses from the deep pond the previous day n how he reminded Chilly few hours back to give Antara the lotuses.
Antara didn't know how to react. She blinked her eyes and gulped nervously pressing Chilly firmly in her chest. She didn't know why but felt a chill in her body spreading in her nerves as if he was again very near to her.
Neither of the girls knew that a pair of deep black intense eyes was watching one of them minutely from the window.
In the mean time...a bell was heard. The bell was for notifying the girls for dinner sharp at nine. Nandini said: Antara zyada soch mat ...ja jake fresh hoja aur change kar le ...hume dinner pe bhi to jana hai ...der se pohchenge toh metron khana nahi degi...tu janti hai na !!!
Antara shook her head and mumbled: mujhe bhukh nahi hai ...tu Chilly ko leke ja...main change karke Mother se milne jaungi ...abhi ...main aur rukh nahi sakti ...!!!
Nandini took little Chilly with her for the dinner and Antara stayed back in the cottage. She left the bed and moved to the next room weakly. She closed the door and the window of that room and started changing. She didn't know that the narrow creek on the window was enough for someone to watch her changing from outside. She weakly removed her dupatta and twitched her right hand behind her back to open the zip of her dress. She couldn't do it as her right wrist ached badly. She let out a painful moan n held her bruised wrist n rubbed it.
After a while she again tried to open the zip this time with her left hand and somehow managed to glide it down...she slid her dress from her one shoulder and was about to slid it from her other shoulder too when Raghu moved his reluctant eyes away from her. He left her window and waited for her outside the cottage blending perfectly with the darkness.
After a while Antara came out of her cottage wearing a sleeveless pale yellow tiny kurti with a loose Patiala. This was one of her two night wears. She closed the door before leaving and arranged a dupatta on her. She wore her slipper and started walking through the narrow path towards Mother's cottage.
The security guard saw Antara on the way and asked: Antara betiya ...dinner ke liye nahi gayi ??? idhar kahan jarahi hai ???
ANtara: nahi Damu kaka ...mujhe aaj bhukh nahi hai ...wo Mother se kuch baat karni thi...isliye Mother ke paas jarahi hun.
Thik hai beta ...chalta hun ...tu dhyan je jana ...Damu kaka left her and stomped away.
Antara started again on her way with her head a bit bent and lost in her thoughts...her pace got interrupted as she felt someone came out from the dark and stood firmly in front of her blocking her way completely.
She raised her eyes n even in the enough darkness she didn't miss to recognize him. It was no one else but Raghu standing in front of her with hands in his pocket. He was barely visible in the dark because of his dark denim and black jacket. Antara's whole feature shuddered in fear seeing him. She couldn't believe it was him ...she shook her head and assured herself ...nahi yeh nahi hosakta ...gate toh bandh hai...yeh kaise andar ayega...wo bhi security ko tod kar...Antara didn't realize that she was mumbling her thoughts out of panick.
Apun kahin se bhi ...kaise bhi pohoch sakta hai tere pas... Samjhi !!! Raghu's typical arrogant deep calm husky voice roamed in her ear. She froze instantly widening her eyes.
Meri chughli karne jarahi thi Mother ke pas ??? Hmmm???? his mocking but dangerously calm voice shook Antara top to bottom. She inhaled a deep breath n twitched her neck...Damu Kaka still could be seen just few steps away. She shouted with her life ...DAMU KAKAaa!!!! hhh
The guard turned around hearing her and came running towards her...Antara was getting back her life with every steps Damu kaka was taking towards her. Damu reached her and gasped : Kya hua betiya???? Chillayi kyun ????
Shaken Antara opened her mouth to utter more ...but before she could utter anything else to Damu ...she saw Raghu came out from the dark n stood behind Damu and before she could blink her eyes once she saw Raghu raised his iron hand n encircled Damu Kaka's neck from behind. Damu Kaka being a tough stout man jerked vigorously to get rid of his hold...but Raghu's iron hold seemed to be deadly.
Damu couldn't do much...neither he could make much sound except some deep moaning nor he could move n reattack. Damu struggled hard but Raghu did something peculiar on his neck ...and the next second Antara found Damu's huge body was leaning senseless on Raghu.
Raghu held his body easily and layed him down on the ground and then raised his eyes to frozen Antara. Antara couldn't believe that such a browny huge body holder Damu Kaka who was most valued n trusted for the entire safety of the orphanage ...just layed on the ground senseless. Raghu did this easily so coolly and calmly...literally with least effort.
Kisi aur ko bulana hai ??? his mocking deadly calm voice was again heard...Antara forgot to breathe.
CHAL...!!!...Raghu held her hand dominantly and pulled her towards the darker area.
His touch shot electric waves in her skin n ceased her numbness. She shoved off his hand from her n screamed :...CHODO ...hhh...kya kiya tumne Kaka ke sath ...unhe kya kar diya..hh ??? she started running away like a mad. Raghu ran after her and within seconds caught her wrist and with an instant jerk he held her tight on his chest. Antara felt her back was collied with his rock hard chest as he had encirlcled her midriff with his arm ...
The next second she felt Raghu covered her mouth with his other hand and her feet left the ground. She felt dizzy and her limbs became numb as Raghu carried her away in the darker area.
After few minutes or so Antara again felt her feet touched the ground and she heard him saying in her ear: firse chillay gi to achha nahi hoga ...khalipili tu problem create kar ke mera bheja mat garam kar ...hath hata raha hun tere muh se ...chillaneka nahi...!!
She felt he removed his hand from her mouth slowly but still helding her tightly on his chest. She panted and started crying loudly ...she held his hand that was encircling her tummy and tried hard to shove it ...she started wiggling madly and shouted ...mujhe jenedo ...hhh ...chodo ...hhh...Baachhaooo...koi hai ...please...hh..mujhe jane do...!!!
CHUUPPP!!! He scolded her dangerously... Then said again ...Meri baat nahi manegi ??? Antara squirmed in his hold and whimpered ...KABHI NAI...chodo mujhe...hhh !!!
Thik hai ...
Antara dazed as he left her and tossed her body making her face him...he grabbed her dupatta n took it away from her and swiftly n easily tied her mouth and with the remaining lenth he tied up her hands behind her back in seconds. He sighed n wiped his mouth with his wristband gazing dangerously at her. The next second he bent a little and took her delicate body up on his shoulder.
He started to climb those spiral iron stairs and soon reached the roof of the school. He came near the edge of the roof. The wall was just three feets away from him. He tightly and securedly held squirming Antara on his shoulder n effortlessly jumped on the wall. He grabbed the rope and soon his feet touched the ground securedly the other side of the orphanage boundary.
He took out his key from his jeans ... opened his duster and threw her body inside the car. He too got in and locked the car from inside.
Antara was so scared ...she forgot to even cry. Her widened reddened petrified eyes only stated her mental condition.
Fixing his dangerous gaze on her Raghu started to shift towards her. Cringing on the seat she shook her head and pleaded with her eyes to stop him.
Raghu reached very near her ...his chest was almost touching her...he moved his both hands behind her n untied her hands and then untied her mouth pulling the tie knot harshly.
The moment she got free she pushed him hard placing her hands on his chest n then started trying to get out of the car madly ...she screamed her heart out ...:KOI HAI...mujhe bachao hhh...PLEASE...KOI TO AJAO...hhh...yeh mujhe yehan ZABARDASTI ...UTHAKE LAYA HAI ...hhh...
She cried calling Mother ...Chilly and Nandini ...none heard her.
She was not used to travel in any car...she was not accustomed with the parts and process of any car...it made her perplexd n petrified inside it. She didn't know how to open the car ...she tried to slid down the glass helplessly but could do nothing. She kept on banging the door and window with her fists. She shouted with all her energy but her all efforts were in vain. She panted heavily and became exhausted after a while and looked at Raghu...a chill of shiver ran down her spine making her feel numb again. He was sitting leisurely the other side of her resting his back on the window...with his one knee folded on the seat and the other leg stretched towards her...his one arm rested on his folded knee and the other held the back of the front seat. His eyes were fixed on her without a blink ...watching her each activity coolly and calmly with a hidden devious smirk on his face.
Inspite of her acute nervousness Antara became a bit surprised that he didn't try to resist her for a single second instead he seemed to cherish her activities.
Yeh car sound proof hai...Antara!!!...isliye yeh bekar ka chillana aur uchal kud karna bandh kar...!!!! Raghu said in a harsh dominating tone ...teri awaz iss car ke bahar kabhi nahi pohchegi ...aur nahi apun ki marzi ke bagair yeh car ka lock open hoga ...SAmjhi!!!
Antara blinked at him unable to believe his words...then realized the meaning of what he said ...the more she realized her situation the more she cringed on the seat...she folded her knees hugging them tightly n curled herself into a ball. Fresh tears ran down her flushed cheeks as she sobbed staring at him...
To be continued...hahahihi...
Edited by pampz - 11 years ago
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haha this time me first!! 😆
unres...😆

omg!..pampz yr its such an outstanding update!!!👏
story is getting denser n denser..n I am just flowing with it!😛
RAGHUUU!!!!!!...y he is so irresistible??😳..this story has made me super crazy for him!😆
he was dumb n perplexed at the moment when antu ran away from him..that moment amde me to think..is he feeling for her?😳and after reading whole update I got my answer😆
aww my sweet chilli..what a combination?..*sweet chilli*..😆chillies can't be sweet but this chilli has magic...she too loved raghu..even he couldn't deny from her innocence.😃
oh antara is in drastic state!..she didn't imagined that her encounter with him would be so shocking!😭
and then raghu made entry in Orphanage!..u described whole surrounding so perfectly!!.⭐️
he tortured her n take her away from that place!!😲
what will he do?..I am so much waiting for this to be updated..😃
I am ready to go with this story.I think after twinks SS raghubahi..its urs complete dark story..where Raghu can't be in white shade..that's what I think!😆
his every way is so unique...how will he treat her after marriage??!!😲

just one question..will raghu ever feel for her..means hate/love/lust?..I mean he will marry with her..but what after that?...😲
thanks fr updating dear🤗
loved the update..u r FANTASTIC PAMPZ!!!...take a *bow *girl!😃
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Pampu jii... u know i love dark love stories.. so i will continue it... whatever happens i am ready to face...😆
coming to the update... it was suoer raghulicious and full on RAGHU... RAGHU and only RAGHU...
it's gonna be superhit... just get my words dude... and this update was full of suspense... and u know i am a suspense lover as well...😆...
so for me it was a treat to read...😳
first i want to say.,.. man i love this chilly girl😆... how easily she dominates one of the most renowned gangster of mumbai... Raghunath Naik with her natural innosence and Raghu couldn't help but bend down in front of her pure divine domination... beautiful scene yaar... u are right... even raghu;s charecter is dark.. this dark has so much colorful shades...obviously... dark is the color which hides every other color within it... flared and mixed together...😳

The Fatal Attracktion was increasing so much for raghu... Antara is disturbing and invoking in his mind and affecting his inside in a new way which he never felt before... the anxiety, the restlessness provoked him to go back and stalk inside the secured area of orphanage... he wanted to meet her but he didn't know why... really confussing charecter he had become...😆... but enjoying it so much...😳
the way raghu stalked inside the orphanage with that rope... it reminded me about the ninja action movies...😉😎... but wonderfully described though... had goosebumps all the time...
and last scene... I AM DAMN SURE EVERYONE WILL DROLL ON THAT PART...😉... raghu antu koo utha kee le gaya...😆😕... But u know i was as usual cringing and scared all the time... ab yee kya kare wala hain antu ke sath...... mujhe too soch ke hii dar lag raha hain... i know kii woo kitna khatarnaak hain... and literally here in this story... woo kuch bhi kar sakta hain...🤢🤢... so i am o much scared for antara now... 🤢...just hope antu comes back to orphanage safe and secured... but madam agey kya twist dene wali hoo yee too aap hii jane...... but eagerly waiting for that...😳😉😆
and forgot to mention one scene... where antu was changing her dress raghu moved his eyes from her... even though he is a person of dark shade... it shows that whatever else... he is a genuin person... just like that touch by you...😳
bas abhi ke liye itna hiii... abb bhi tune mujh edara diya...... and eagerly waiting to be scared more and more///🤣🤪
great job...👍🏼
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
okkk read d update!!!!!
bt im nt able to understand raghu n his feelings
kbhi lgta h hes in love with aantara n kbhi nh.. 🤢
hes really a daring person ...orphanage m aa gy n
antara ko zabardasti le bh gya 😭 poor antara 😭 😭
really feeling sry fr her..bt what does he want???
aise harkatein krega toh kaun ladki shaadi kregi raghu se..😡
ab how vl mother react on finding antara missing 😕
n what b out dat security guard too 😲 is he dead??
though chilly likes him...i have seriouss doubts k ab
antara kaise manegi shaadi ko..ya phr he vl ,arry her foercibly???
too many questions 😆 😆
realy wishing k nxt update jldi aaye 😉
grt work pampzzz...loved dis update d most 😃
update soon n thanks fr updation 😛
tkcr... hugsss 👏
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

Pampu jii... u know i love dark love stories.. so i will continue it... whatever happens i am ready to face...😆

coming to the update... it was suoer raghulicious and full on RAGHU... RAGHU and only RAGHU...
it's gonna be superhit... just get my words dude... and this update was full of suspense... and u know i am a suspense lover as well...😆...
so for me it was a treat to read...😳
first i want to say.,.. man i love this chilly girl😆... how easily she dominates one of the most renowned gangster of mumbai... Raghunath Naik with her natural innosence and Raghu couldn't help but bend down in front of her pure divine domination... beautiful scene yaar... u are right... even raghu;s charecter is dark.. this dark has so much colorful shades...obviously... dark is the color which hides every other color within it... flared and mixed together...😳

The Fatal Attracktion was increasing so much for raghu... Antara is disturbing and invoking in his mind and affecting his inside in a new way which he never felt before... the anxiety, the restlessness provoked him to go back and stalk inside the secured area of orphanage... he wanted to meet her but he didn't know why... really confussing charecter he had become...😆... but enjoying it so much...😳
the way raghu stalked inside the orphanage with that rope... it reminded me about the ninja action movies...😉😎... but wonderfully described though... had goosebumps all the time...
and last scene... I AM DAMN SURE EVERYONE WILL DROLL ON THAT PART...😉... raghu antu koo utha kee le gaya...😆😕... But u know i was as usual cringing and scared all the time... ab yee kya kare wala hain antu ke sath...... mujhe too soch ke hii dar lag raha hain... i know kii woo kitna khatarnaak hain... and literally here in this story... woo kuch bhi kar sakta hain...🤢🤢... so i am o much scared for antara now... 🤢...just hope antu comes back to orphanage safe and secured... but madam agey kya twist dene wali hoo yee too aap hii jane...... but eagerly waiting for that...😳😉😆
and forgot to mention one scene... where antu was changing her dress raghu moved his eyes from her... even though he is a person of dark shade... it shows that whatever else... he is a genuin person... just like that touch by you...😳
bas abhi ke liye itna hiii... abb bhi tune mujh edara diya...... and eagerly waiting to be scared more and more///🤣🤪
great job...👍🏼

again it is only you who reviewd the update first ...haha ...thanx yaar ... and am gald that u liked this boring one ...and even got scared ...hahah ...
all the other reades ...res marke bhag gaye hain ...LOLZZZ
i wll write this story only for you yaar even if all other yedis ran away ...chal koi nahi ...
tthank u and love for ur awesome support yaar ...it brings my enthu back in me ... wll start again writing the next part ... i really don know where i am heading to...but what ever it is you r there to read this crap and review so fantastically ...my biggest support 😃
luv u yedi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

again it is only you who reviewd the update first ...haha ...thanx yaar ... and am gald that u liked this boring one ...and even got scared ...hahah ...
all the other reades ...res marke bhag gaye hain ...LOLZZZ
i wll write this story only for you yaar even if all other yedis ran away ...chal koi nahi ...
tthank u and love for ur awesome support yaar ...it brings my enthu back in me ... wll start again writing the next part ... i really don know where i am heading to...but what ever it is you r there to read this crap and review so fantastically ...my biggest support 😃
luv u yedi

oye madam itni tareef mat karo.. 😆.. mujhe sharam ati hain...😳😉
bass yaar ek baat dimag mein ayya... kahin raghu nee chilly kii baat seriously too nahin le li...ki antu koo hug do aur manaoo... par antu koo hug dene ke liye kidnapping karne ki kya zarurat thi??🤣🤣🤣
sorry for my crap thought...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

LOLZZZ ...mereko pata nahi Raghu ne Chilly ki baat seriously leli ya nahi ...haha ...sochne wali baat hai ...par kya sach mein Raghu bolega sorry Antara ko wobhi hug karke ??? aisa hua toh antu toh sar chakra ke giregi...LOLZZZ
but ek baat toh hai Chilly and Raghu mein connection ban gayi ...Chilly ki baat Raghu ignore nahi kar sakta ...even he shared a piece of his mind with little Chilly😆
and ur next question Raghu ne Antu ki kidnapping kiya kyun ?? hmmm shayad Antara ki zyada uchal kud usse pasand nahi araha tha ...isiliye usike dupatta se muh hath bandh ke lekar gaya bahar ...taki Antu jitna bhi chillay koi prob nahi ...koi nahi ayega interrupt karneko ...

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