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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

Another great epic love story is about to start n i want to book a seat so that i cn enjoy it to my core...i know this too will be as good as other two...all da best for it...will be waiting for it to start


Aww thank you sweetheart. This is again a romantic story with rantara's nok jhok..their falling in love..their romance and so on. Stay tuned darling.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjinimala


Aww thank you sweetheart. This is again a romantic story with rantara's nok jhok..their falling in love..their romance and so on. Stay tuned darling.


Oh i cnt tell u hw much i like ur stories its like m addicted to them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary


Oh i cnt tell u hw much i like ur stories its like m addicted to them...


I'm glad to know and I promise to entertain my lovely readers like you . Mwaah to you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really a different one Sanji ...continue dear ... am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wohoo!!!! new FF by sanjinimala ji....u r too good dear....concept is very interesting!!.😛.till now we saw a business tycoon raghu now we will see his other face😳...plot is very nice.😃..it is totally different from other stories...😊
waiting eagerly for this..i know u will rock again by amazing twists!😃
best wishes fr ur story😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hai to ise main anti ko pahele pyaar hoga..nice story..antu kar theek hai but raghu farmer nahi lagta
but really nice plot..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhamakedhar start tha Sanju. Raghu saare zimmedaari utaa raha hai. Ghar ke kaam, baahar ke khaama, chaacha, chaachi, brother, sister baap re baap. Antara naazuk se pali huwi doctor ki beti. Antara ko love at first sight hogaya. Wah kya baat hai. Raghu apne zimmedaari badana nahi chaahta isliye pyaar ko apnaane se darr raha hai. Raghu tum sabko sambhaalthe ho, tumhe sambhaalnewala tho koi hona chaahiye na. Antara aarahi hai vo sambhaalegi tumko, tumhaara saath degi har kadam par chaahe khushi ho ya gam.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vry concept sanjini..
so different n interesting one,
waitingg fr frst part .
update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to my story "TERI BAHON ME MUJHEY KHO JAANEY DEY".
Hope you'll enjoy this one as well and support me with your feedbacks. Thanks. Chapter one updated please enjoy.
Chapter 1
Raghu had to come home early today due to his mothers sickness. His dad was also bedridden and most of the time he's in bed. His chacha chaachi and their two children veer and Nandani lives with raghu because chacha's eldest son and daughter in law took over chacha's business and kicked them out of the house. They had no place to go and veer /nandani were in college so Raghu took them in and gave them food water and shelter. Raghu was struggling to provide for all of them. Raghu does his vegetable farming ..rice farming and so on. Whatever money he gets after selling the vegetables he spends on the family and on his parents medication. He was a tough guy and well built. People respect him for his kind and generous heart. He was always ready to help people in need. "Maa chal aapko doctor ke paas le chaltey hai. Raghu said as he entered the house. "Woh veer ko bolkey Rickshaw magwaya hai shayad bhahar intazaar kar raha hai. Raghu said. "Betah may bhi chalu kiya saath mey? Chaachi asked. "Nai chaachi aap ghar ka khayal rakhna may bas gaya ki wapas. Replied Raghu. Raghu left towards Dr Kauls clinic with his maa. "Betah tu kab tak mujhey aur saara ghar ko sambhalega..shaadi karle beta..bahu aajayegi toh saara ghar woh sambhalegi aur tujhey bhi. Maa said. "Yaar tu fir se shuru mat hojaa maa..yaha ghar chalana mushkil hai ..pet bhar khaa nai patey may biwi ko kiya khilaau?"ghaas? Mereko ye shaadi ka laddo waddo nai khana maa! Raghu said. His mothers eyes moistened. "Dekh maa tu abh ye rohna dhona band kar yaar..mereko bhi rohna aajata hai. Raghu said. "Pagal! Maa said and caressed his head. "Jodiya toh upar se banta hai beta aur tere liye bhi koi ban chuki hai ..terey khaabo ki raani. Maa said In her heart while caressing his head lovingly. Raghu smiled at his maa and thought. " merey ko patah hai andar hi andar khichri paka rahi hogee. They finally arrived at Dr Kaul's clinic. Raghu helped his maa to the clinic. Dr Kaul greeted them and took them in right away. He examined Raghu's mother thoroughly. "Dr saab meri maa theek toh hai na? Raghu asked. "Raghu tumari maa ki BP aur sugar level bahut high hai issliye tumey issey yaha har week lana parega check up ke liye. Dr said. "Jee doctor saab. "Ok then fir next week miltay hai aur han raghu ye medicines pick up karna mat bhoolyega. Raghu took the prescription and helped her maa to walk out of the clinic. His mother tripped over something and was about to fall when four arms ..two on each side grasped her hands. Raghu looked up to see who the kind person was. When he saw her he couldn't take his eyes off of her. On the other side Antara thought she saw the hottest guy ever! Antara gulped. Instantly she felt a connection. Antara missed a beat. He was pinup sexy..lean and taut. He was tanned bronze and antara felt like she'd been given VIP pass to the hottest show ever! "Tu doctor saab ki beti hai na? Maa asked breaking her trance. "Ji maa ji...mera naam Antara hai. Antara said. "Bada pyaara naam hai beta..waysey shukriya mujhey girney se bachaney ke liye. Maa said. "Ji..koi baat nai. Antara replied. "Ye mera beta hai Raghu. Maa said. Raghu looked at her again and antara got lost in his deep dark eyes. Antara blinked..she was confused and dry mouthed right now. Their gaze were rooted on each other's face. Streaked with sweat and a light coating of dust he looked like a local labourer in his T-shirt and jeans. "May Raghu. Raghu said stretching his hand out for a hand shake. Antara was all lost in scanning his well toned body. He stood six inches taller than her. His thick dark hair was close cropped and matched the dark stubble sprinkled along his jaw. Wicked cheekbones made him look dangerous. A prominent blade of a nose and full lips added more to his appeal. He had an arresting face. Strong. Handsome with a killer instinct. Antara felt a knot in her belly. "Miss? Raghu said. His deep sultry voice brought her back ." Miss Antara kaul. Antara said and shook his hand. Something happened as their hands touched. A shiver ran down her chilling her spine. Even Raghu felt a strong connection but he shrugged it off. Maa was watching them very closely. "I like this guy! Antara thought. "Am I falling for him?. .I'm falling for him! "I dont know how..why but I'm falling for you. Antara's heart cried within and thuded badly. She reluctantly let his hand go when Dr kaul called her inside. "Ji papa abhi aai! Antara said. "Mujhey jaana hoga maa ji..aap se milkey mujhey khushi huwi. Antara said. "Khush rahe beta. Maa said. Antara smiled and glancing at Raghu she left. "Kitni pyaari bacchi hai. Maa said. "Nai raghu? She asked. "Ha hogee mereko kiya? "Dekh maa tu firsey shuru mat hojana. Raghu said looking away. Maa smiled as if she knew someone was about to enter his life. Raghu bought the medicines and catching a taxi they headed towards their home . Leaving his maa at home raghu took his tractor and left for the farm. Her beautiful face was haunting him making it hard for him to focus on his work. "Raghu beta chor ye sab aur kaam pe lag jaa..terey naseeb me ye sab khubsurat ladkiya nai likhi. "Dimaag ko line pe laa aur kaam pe dhyaan de. Raghu said to himself. Today raghu sent truck loads of products to the market. He made good money today. Maa was very happy. "Ussey ladki se milna humarey liye bahut shubh saabit huwa. Maa said. "Oye meri filmy maa!" Meri kamaai se uss ladki ka kiya kaam? "Ye merey mahnat ki kamaai hai maa. On the other side at Dr kauls residence the family sat together to eat. "Papa woh joh aaj maa beta clinic aaya thaa do you know them? Antara asked her papa. "Kaun woh raghu? Antara noded in yes. "Han I know him from quite a long time now..." he brings his mom and dad to the clinic. .he seems a decent guy. Dr Kaul said. "Kiyu kiya huwa antara. .tumari baath huwi kiya unn logo se? Papa asked. "Jee papa. Antara replied. "Our daughter looks happy with a glow on her face and a lit up face Dr saab. "What's going on antara? Geeta asked. Antara tried to hide her expressions. "Ku..kuch nai momma. That night antara couldn't sleep. Raghu had captivated her in so many ways. Just one meeting has changed her life. "His my prince charming. ..merey sapno ke raaj kumar! "Jaysa mayney khaabo me dekha thaa Raghu bilkul waysa hi hai. Antara thought while hugging her pillow. "Mujhey kiya patah thaa ki tumsey pahli nazar me hii pyaar hojaayega. Antara whispered. "Patah nai abh hum kab milengey? Antara thought. "May tumey kaysey batah paaongi ki mujhey tumsey pyaar huwa hai. Antara continued. Antara didn't sleep that whole night. She was just tossing and turning in bed. Next morning antara woke up with dark circles around her eyes. "Oh God Antara! "You look terrible! Momma said. "You didn't sleep well last night did you? Geeta asked. "No momma neend hi nai aai mujhey. Antara replied. "I'm glad its a sunday today warna terey college ke saarey students dar ke maarey chup jaatey ye kah ke ki college me bhoot agaaya! Geeta teased her daughter. "Momma aap bhi na! Antara pouted. Antara had some shopping to do today so she headed out. On the other side Raghu was in town to bargain with his buyers. Raghu was unloading his truck full of vegetables when someone collided with his hard chest and both hit the ground. The vegetables fell on them and in the process of pushing and shoving raghu brushed her cheek with his hot lips. Antara who was clutching his shirt and squeezing her eyes shut opened it when she felt his lips on her cheek. "Tum? Both said together. They have an eyelock as antara lay underneath his hard frame. Their heavy hot breaths caressed each other's face and neck. Soon they were surrounded by bypassers. Antara blushed badly. Raghu got up and helped her up." Terey ko din me dikhaai nai deta kiya?" Dr saab se bolkey ek chashma banwa le. Raghu said wiping his clothes. "Zaroor banwa dungi ..lekin merey liye nai terey liye! Antara said. The people giggled. "Arey oye! "Yaha koi woh waali filam nai chal rahi joh ankhen parh parh kar dekh raha hai..chal nikal yaha sey sab ke sab! Raghu charged at them. "Tu bhi jaah..raat ko soi nai kiya joh din me saleep waaking karti phirti hai. Raghu said to antara. Her eyes widened. "Saleep walking? She asked. "Arey woh neend me chalna. Raghu said scratching his head."lagta hai garbad boldiya mayney. Raghu thought. Antara giggled. Raghu couldn't stop admiring her while she giggled. "Raghu betah sambhal jah isski hasi jaan lewa hai. Raghu quickly composed himself. "Oye daant dikhana bandh kar nai toh log tere ko pagal khaney ki patient sochengey samjhi? Raghu said. "Saleep waaking nai sleep walking! Antara giggled again. "Dekh tu abh mastarni banna bandh kar aur jaah yaha sey! "Garmi mey aur garmi mat dilasamjhi? Raghu said. Antara smiled and left. Sitting inside her car she drooled over him while he unloaded the truck. She touched her cheek where he unintentionally kissed her. "Kiyu pyaar karney lagi hun tumsey itna? "Kaun ho tum mera? She took her phone out and clicked some of his pictures. Bringing the phone to her chest she blushed. When Raghu left then antara headed home. She had a wide grin on her lips. Coming in her room she threw all her shopping bags on her bed and collapsed with a deep sigh. She felt something inside her bra. Sliding her fingers in her bra she pulled out a button. "Ye kaha sey aayaa? Then she remembered her cute encounter with raghu. "Ye toh usska button hai. She said while imprisoning it in her palm. In Raghu's house raghu felt something in his shirt pocket. He slide his hand in his pocket and pulled out a piece of jewelry. His eyes widened when he saw a beautiful earring in his hand! "Sa..la ye kidhar sey tapka? Then he remembered the encounter with miss kaul. He smiled. Nandani who was bringing his clean clothes in his room caught him smiling for the very first time! "Bhaaiya aap has rahe ho? Nandani asked startling Raghu. He quickly composed himself. "Nai..may kiyu hasu?" May kabhi nai hasta..mereko hasi nai aati..mm..m..Raghu was still stammering when nandani came running outside. "Badi maa badey papa! "Kamaal hogaya bhaaiya muski maar raha thaa..mayney abhi abhi dekha woh batasi dikha kar has raha thaa! Nandani said in one breath. "Chutki..tu ruk abhi! Raghu chased her around. In the process of running he almost bumped into his mother. "Maa ye chutki na aaj chasma lagana bhool gayee issliye sab ulta sidha dikhta hai. Raghu said while scratching his head." Tu mujhey dekh. Maa ordered. "Meri pyaari maa tu abh woh hawaldaar bankey mere ko shak ki nazar sey mat dekh. Raghu said almost begging. Maa didn't say anything. "Abh tu barf ki maafik kiyu jam gayee?" May bol raha hu mereko hasi nai aati..may nai has raha thaa. Raghu tried very hard to convince his mom that he wasn't laughing. "Kaun hai woh joh merey bacchey ke chayrey par muskaan laaya?" Kaun hai woh joh merey bacchey ko hasna sikha diya? She asked caressing his head lovingly. "Meri acchi maa tu senti mat ho jaao yaar.."may woh ..aaj market me may ussey..woh hai na aapki favorite. .woh mere ko mili. Raghu said and looked away." Kaun mili tu kiski baath kar raha hai re? Maa asked. "Woh..miss kaul. Raghu said. "Maa mujhey bahut zaruri kaam yaad agaya may chalu?" May..may chalta hu. Raghu stammered and escaped from there. Maa had a biggest smile on her face ever. "Ek hi mulakaat me itna bada badlao! "I'm polished! Nandani giggled. "Abh tujhey kiya huwa re? Maa asked ." I'm pleased badi maa not I'm polished! "Han han sab patah hai mujhey! Maa said and left. Raghu was really tired that day but he had to cook clean and wash. Nandani and veer were busy studying. Maa took her meds and was sleeping. Papa as usual in bed. Chacha chachi were in their room worried sick about their eldest son. Only person who was busy doing everything was raghu. On the other side at kauls residence the servants were serving dinner to the family. "Momma ye koi khana hai? "Papa mujhey nai khana ye! Antara made a face at her food.Dr Kaul ordered the cooks to make something else for antara. "Momma I'm going to my room when the food is ready send it to my room. Antara ordered and left. "You have spoiled her Dr saab. Geeta said.
Edited by sanjinimala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
OMG first update and soo much happened
This story has touched my heart already
Raghu and his mothers connection awww loving that
Raghu smiled for the first time ever omg
pls cont asap and update teri chahat mei as well pllz

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