Rantara SS ~Another Chance...To Unite~ DISCONTINUED Note Pg 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys I am here with the first chapter of this SS, Don't fall asleep half way through
Happy reading!😊
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Kashmir 7am Srinagar.

A young beautiful girl woke up as the sun rays hit her beautiful face. She woke up stretching lazily and smiled looking at her guitar.

It was her big day today, today her concert was held at the biggest public place in Srinagar.

"Antara" someone called from downstairs. "ayi mom" Antara said and got out of bed.

Freshening update she went out of her room and ran down he big wooden stair case. "ajja breakfast karle nai to collage ke liye late hojayege" Mrs kaul said serving Antara breakfast.

Mr kaul came to the table and sat down, Antara shut up seeing him there. Mrs kaul served her husband while he read the news paper. Antara was playing around with her food "wo papa ajj mera concert hai app ayege" Antara asked nervously "Geeta ise keh do ajj larke wale dekhne a rahe hai to ajj kahi bhi bhaar na jaye" mr kaul said and went away "par papa..." Antara couldn't complete her sentence.

Antara's dad did not like her music interest at all, he always wanted her to be a doctor but Antara always wanted to be a singer, she was not scared of her dad but did get nervous infront of him sometimes.

Her dad wanted her to get married to some random boy called Anshuman and she was not ready for this yet as she always wanted a love marriage with the man of her dreams whom she was still looking for.

Antara sighed and got up to go, "Antara khana to kha le" her mom called but Antara was long as it was her big day and she did not want to miss out on anything, this concert may actually change her life and she was ready to face anything.

...

A handsome young boy walked into a cafe with his friends, "kya yaar itni sardi hai yah ape to mei to Mumbai mei he sahi hu" said the boy looking around the place. This boy was non other than raghu.

Raghu got to know that a bomb blast was about to happen in a concert happening in the cafe he was in, but he had to behave like a normal ordinary person. Raghu was the owner of naik basti and owned many other places.

Raghu was here on a mission to save people from the bomb blast. Since raghu became an adult he had weird blurry flashbacks but his mother always told him not worry as its only dreams/nightmares but raghu knew that was no it.

"raghu yaha aao" a girl called from the back gesturing him to come to the other side, the girl was Priya Raghus guide for the time being.

Raghu walked upto her "chalo tickets mil gai hai" priya said walking to the gate. Giving the tickets in raghu and priya walked into the huge field which was decorated beautifully and a huge stage was set up in the middle.

As they walked in Raghu felt something different, like someone close to his hear was here close to him again, he felt unusually happy with that feeling. Priya elbowed him bringing him back from his train of thoughts "may abhi ati hu kuch friends se mil kar" priya left leaving raghu alone while he looked around the place and people with worried eyes as he could he what will happen if he didn't find the bomb in the right time.

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Antara reached the cafe and was running late as the concert was about to start in ten minutes.

Antara was running at full pace aimlessly, suddenly she bumped into a hard chest and closed her eyes waiting to fall. Few moments passed noting happened, Antara slowly opened her eyes only to see two pairs of baby brown eyes staring at her in concern, she got lost in them and didn't realize the position.

Raghu was moving around the place trying to locate the bomb when suddenly he saw a girl running in full pace aimlessly, she came and bumped right into him, she was about to touch the ground but he caught her in time, his hands went around her waist supporting her while she clutched his shirt tightly.

He was lost looking at her face, he didn't even see her open her eyes , both were staring at each other, suddenly both had a weird blurry flashback where they were in the same position but different place.

Antara realized what position they were in so she got on her own feet "wo..i m sorry mei late ho rahi thi to isleiye bhaag rahi thi btw i'm Antara Kaul the lead singer" Antara smiled and forwarded her hand. Raghu gave a million dollar smile and introduced himself "mei Raghunath naik" both were lost smiling at each other. "ANTARA" someone called breaking their eye lock "abhi ayi" Antara shouted, her voice was like music to his ears. "sorry mujhe jana hai and thanks" saying that she ran off leaving raghu running his hands through his hair.

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The concert was starting in 5 minutes and raghu was still not able to locate the bomb anywhere. He had asked all his men to look and find it at any cost but none of them were able to find out.

"abbey ye s**a bomb kidar rakha hai is Bandar ne" raghu said scratching his head in confusion. Him and his men and looked in every nook and corner but didn't find the bomb.

...

The concert was going to start and raghu had no other choice but to announce the news of a bomb being located here, he didn't even know what time it was set to.

Raghu went upto the stage and took the mike from the DJ "sab log suno, yah ape ek bomb plant hua hai or hume koi khabaar nai hai kis time oe vo phat jaye to iseliye hum app se request karte hai ke is jagah ko exit kar deje" raghu spoke, as soon as he finished people had started running out of the while place, in no time the while place was empty and the police had arrived.

They were thanking raghu for making this announcement and saving everyone's life in time.

...

At a distance Antara's group walked in and started looking around. Raghu saw them and went upto them "yaha apke liye bole to ladies log ke liye safe nai hai app please yaha se jaye" raghu said in his usual tone "par hume Antara ko apne sath leke jaana hai pata nahi kaha hai vo" one of her friends spoke in concern and looked around. Even raghu was worried now and started looking around.

A man came running to them and out of breath he said "Antara baby make up room mei lock hogai hai or us room mei bomb hai jo 1min me explode ho jayega" the man ran off from there still huffing.

Suddenly raghu felt the urge to go and save her from this danger, he felt like she needed him right now, without wasting another second he ran towards the make up rooms.

...

Inside Antara was crying looking at the bomb under the make up table. "raghu..." she said, realizing what she just said, she got confused, she felt like he was the only one who could save her from this, she felt like she knew him from a very long time but wasn't able to make out anything.

Only tens seconds were remaining and she was still banging the door continuously making her delicate hands bleed like hell.

...

Raghu was nearly there now, before he could get there the bomb exploded, leaving him in utter shock "oh my god ye kya hogaya" raghu said placing his hand on his head.

Soon the police surrounded the place and the fire brigade arrived at the scene.

Raghu felt his eyes moistened, he couldn't leave her in there on her own, he had to save her no matter what. He again was having those blurry flashbacks but couldn't make out anything again.

Without wasting more time raghu broke the police barricades and ran towards the burnt building.

...

Inside Antara was lying lifelessly under a table breathing slowly, her clothes were torn and had a big burn on her arm , her eyes were wet with tears.

When there were only 5 seconds left, Antara went and hid under the table, soon the bomb exploded, Antara was harmed badly.

...

Raghu got inside with so much difficulty but managed to reach her, he was devastated at the sight infront of him, Antara lay lifelessly, breathing every slowly, she was injured all over.

He quickly ran to her lifeless body "Antara tu theek hai, Antara... ankhe khol na yaar" raghu said on the urge of crying. Antara only twitched in her unconscious state.

He breathing was no normal, her slow breaths were slowly leaving her mouth leaving her half dead, raghu had concern written all over his face.

Her slow breathing stopped and her face fell to the other side. "ANTARAAA" raghu shouted at the top of his voice. He couldn't let her die no ways.

He knew what he had to do as he was trained in this type of stuff, he lowered his mouth onto hers giving her CPR, he left her mouth and suddenly she coughed and started breathing again, she regained her conscious, she was aware that raghu was there with her but everything seemed echoy and blurry.

The doctors arrived and took her away along with raghu, on the way outside rantara held hands tightly not leaving them even for a second.

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Antara was taken to a private hospital in the far end of Srinagar and was now being treated, even though she was not conscious she was thinking about how raghu saved her. In her mind she thought "kaun hai vo mera" and another flashback back where someone was standing next to her said "Sab kuch!" unwillingly antaras whole feature jolted, confusing the doctors. The thing she kept saying was "Raghu..." very slowly she lost her conscious.

The doctors started her treatment, bandaging all her wounds, they let her rest bi giving her a sleep injection.

...

Raghu was pacing restlessly outside the ward for the past 2 hours waiting for the doctors to come out.

"itni der ku kar rahe hai yaar, miss call kaise hai" raghu said still pacing but all of a sudden stopped "miss call?? Mene miss call ku kaha" raghu said in confusion

Flashbacks came flooding again, a girl was lying on the floor with blood all over her but her face was blurred, a man came and shouted "MISS CALL" but the girl died.

Raghus chain of thoughts broke when the doctors came outside discussing something about Antara, raghu ran upto them "kya hua? Kayse hai vo? Serious injuries to nai hai? Abbey doctor bol na yaar apun ko tension ho raha hai" raghu said restlessly "Mr naik vo abhi bilkul theek hai hai or koi serious imjury nai hai please calm down" the doctor said reassuring him "mei use mil sakta hu" raghu asked ragerly "yes zaroor par vo so rahi hai" the doctor said and went away while raghu ran into the ward where Antara was.

...

Inside the ward Antara was lying lifelessly on the bed, but still looked like an angel, automatically a smile appeared on raghus face seeing her sleeping peacefully.

Raghu slowly sat next to her and took her delicate hand into his rough hand and gently placed a butterfly kiss on it, as butterflies started moving in their stomach. "kya re tune to meri jaan he leyle thi" raghu said giving a crooked painful smile. "ku lagata hai ke mei tujhe bhoot phele se janta hu, ku tu mere liye itni important hai" raghu thought and tucked her locks behind her ear and placed a soft kiss of her forehead.

Antara slowly woke up from her sleep, and the first person she saw was her angel the person who had saved her life Raghu! She gave a small but breath taking smile "thank you" she said barely audible. Raghu smiled at her concern.

They both felt different, something was there between them that they could not define in words, it was different.

Suddenly Antara remembered what her dad had said in the morning about they boy coming to see her, NO she thought, she was not ready to get married to a complete stranger no ways!. She wanted to be a singer and to get that she would do anything even leave her own family.

At that time raghu was noticing how her expressions changed, he was worried, "oye miss call lya hua" raghu said in concern "miss call?? Wo kon hai" Antara said in confusion "wo bole to tera maan miss Antara kaul hai to fir miss call, Mumbai mei saab log asya he karte hai" raghu said smiling at her but he didn't even know why he wanted to call her miss call, Antara nodded and smiled.

"raghu agar mei tumse ek favour mango to meri help karoge" Antara said holding his hand because he was her only hope "apun jaan bhi dede ha tu bas bol ke dekh, agar khaege to le bhi le ga" raghu said suddenly with so much love in his eyes that gave Antara Goosebumps.

"mujhe apney sath Mumbai ke chalo please" Antara said suddenly leaing raghu confused but somehow deep down in his heart he felt really happy "par miss call teri family ka kya" raghu said.

Antara told him everything about how her father wanted her to marry some random guy and become a doctor but she wanted to be a singer, hearing her problems raghu felt really bad for her "chal theek hai mei tujhe apney sath mumbai le jaoga or tera pura dehaan rakuga" raghu said happily and suddenly Antara hugged him tightly and kissed his cheek. Raghu got electric shock waves going through him at the time, he too responded to her hug so she doesn't feel bad.

Hope you enjoyed!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wonderful update hina 😊...
raghu n antaras frst meet..
n nw dey r movibg to mumbai 😉...
n both r Feeling sum connection.. grt work .
waiting fr more...
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely yet interesting update honey
Rantara's meeting was wonderful..
raghu saved her...that scene was written very nicely..
both r trying to find out wht's happening with them..
its good that she is fine..bt ready to escape with raghu...
waiting fr next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

wonderful start

please continue

Thank you
will do soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

lovely yet interesting update honey

Rantara's meeting was wonderful..
raghu saved her...that scene was written very nicely..
both r trying to find out wht's happening with them..
its good that she is fine..bt ready to escape with raghu...
waiting fr next part

Thank you so much suchi ji
yes both are trying to find out whats happening to them
yes all ready to run away
will come soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
dhamakedr strt...👏
loved it...😊
antu nd raghu meet and felt something in between them. aww😳
antu get hurt by bomb.. noo..😭
aww raghu taking care of antu... he is ready to give away his life fir her///😳
antu going to mumbai with raghu.. hayla😉
cont soon... awsome chapter of thriller and romance😊
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

dhamakedr strt...👏

loved it...😊
antu nd raghu meet and felt something in between them. aww😳
antu get hurt by bomb.. noo..😭
aww raghu taking care of antu... he is ready to give away his life fir her///😳
antu going to mumbai with raghu.. hayla😉
cont soon... awsome chapter of thriller and romance😊

thnks RI darling
ep they felt it already
dnt worry she will be fine
ye cute na
I used that line from the show lol
yes she is
will cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ankusanu

wonderful update hina 😊...
raghu n antaras frst meet..
n nw dey r movibg to mumbai 😉...
n both r Feeling sum connection.. grt work .
waiting fr more...

thnks priyu
yep they did
yes they r moving to Mumbai
cuz there is a connection
will give some more soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This Was Perfect...
The Reincarnation Everything...
Blurred Vision..
Hopefully THey will remember everything soon...
Too Good...
Kiss on the first meeting itself..Wahh...
Aur yeh blast bhi nah...
Hai...Perfect,...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover

This Was Perfect...

The Reincarnation Everything...
Blurred Vision..
Hopefully THey will remember everything soon...
Too Good...
Kiss on the first meeting itself..Wahh...
Aur yeh blast bhi nah...
Hai...Perfect,...
Update soon

shukria 😳
yes hopefully they will remember everything soon
ikr that's just too good of me
I know but that was a link to the story as well
thnks
will do😳

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