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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on ur new thread
nd antara has been kidnapped
hope raghu saves her on tym
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ria ji...mera update kahan hai? 😆
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Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Ria ji...mera update kahan hai? 😆

mere Pc mein hain... aur khatam karne ka wait kar raha hain...🤣
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Warna panchu ne to rona start kar diya mein bhi kar dogy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey don't make PANCHU cry...
sab smiling hi acche lagte hai...😊...
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Chapter 56

Jagga caught antara's unconscious feature. "Pakri gayo s**i!!" Jagga said grinning nastily. He handed ir men over unconscious antara to his men and said "Iss chokri ko le ja mai ke pass... apun abhi ata hain ek kaam nipta ke..." they nodded and went away. Jagga tiptoed inside the room and saw raghu sleeping without any sense. Jagga smiled nastily. "Akhribaar ke liye chain ki nind so lo raghubhai.. kyun jab tumhara sweet sweet dream tutega tab tumhari duniya idhar ki udhar ho gayi hogi.." jagga said greeting his teeth. He reached towards his clothes which were scattered on the floor. soon jagga grabbed raghu's jeans and took out his gun. He grinned in victory and got out from the room.

In a little cottage in jungle surrounded by guards and securities, Daya Mai and an elderly lady were talking. "Dekho daya mai.. aap ke kahene par hum paise dene ko razi ho gaye... aur woo bhi chokri ko bina dekhe..." the lady said. "Arey Kalavati ji... Humne kabhi aap ko thaga hain... aur iss baar to aisi larki ki aap dekh te hi rahe jayengey..." DM said. "Par mai... maine too suna tha ki woo larki raghunath ki biwi hain... aap ke chahite ko agar pata chalega kii aap ne uske biwi koo dhandewali o ko hatho bech diya too usska too dil toot jayega..." kalavati said with a nasty laugh. DM smirked, "Uska intezaam to maine pahele hi kar diya hain kalavati.. dhoka diya hain usne mujhe...saza too ussey milna hi tha..." his eyes hardened and gleamed with evil intentions. At that moment some of the men entered with unconscious antara. "lo aa gaye woo log... khud hi dekh lo kalavati, meri bat sach hain ki nahin..." Dm said as they lay her down on the bed. Kalavati touched antara's chin and gauzed her from top to bottom with her narrow eyes. slowly her eyes widened. She had seen so much girls in her life but not as beautiful as her! Face still glowing with the purity and innocence. Her brothel would shine high if the girl would be there. but she didn't showed her amusement to DM. she twitched her face and said, "hmmm... hain too chikni gori... par sakal dekh ke too lagti hain ek dum kachi hain...ekdum sidhi si bholi bhali... thora ghisna parega!!" kalavati said. "hmmm pata hain... ek baat yaad rakhna... larki kuch jyada hi himmatwali aur ziddi hain... iske sakal pe mat jana... issey sidhe karne mein aap ka kuch jyada hi mehnat karni paregi..." DM said. "Bilkul aap ke Raghubath ke jaisa kyun? Zid aur akar ismein bhi hain... hmmm.. achi baat hain.. ziddi larkion ko sidhi karne mein apna hi maza hain." Kalavati said. Antara suddenly winced a bit and tossed her face at side impatiently. Dm and Kalavati got worried. Antara's lips and eyelids trembled a bit. "Larki ko hosh aa rahi hain.." Kalavati said. "Jaldi... injection do issey..." DM said. One man quickly came and caught her hand. "rrr.. raghu...!!" a feeble moan came out of antara's lips. "JALDI!!" DM was hell worried. Another man came with a syringe and pushed in antara's vain antara winced in pain and trembled a bit. Soon her words faded again and she lose her senses. Both DM and kalavati breathed in relief. "Thik hain Kalavati... maine issey high doze ka injection de diya haain... Jaldi se issey iss gaon se bahar le jaon... JALDI!!!" DM said. "eee chokro... larki koo gari mein uthao.." kalavati ordered her men. They moved out wwith antara and DM continued to look at her sleeping face. "Daya mai se bhrine ka kya anjaam hota hain yee tujhe aaj bahut achi tarah se pata chl jayega antara kaul." she said in mind, "chalo chiriya ko too pinjre mein bandh katr diya abs her ki bari hain... phir bhi ek akhri mauka main ussey doongi... akhir mera sabse wafadar hain woo... par sirf ek hi mauka doongi!!..." DM thought evilly. She left the cottage along with her men to execute the next step of her plan.

Raghu yawned and opened his eyes. His head was still heavy due to the after effects of alcohol. He rubbed his forehead to get over the dizziness and sat on the bed. It took a huge moment for him to realize his state. He looked here and there and was a bit startled as antara was not there. The memory of last night slowly flashed into his mind and e grinned widely scratching his head. Her smell, her touch, her sweet beautiful lips, her tenderness against him was still attached to his each and every fiber. "Oye misscall!!" he said loudly. Strange no one answered him back. "MIsscall?!!" he again called her with a bit confusion but still no sound. "Gayi kahan yee larki... sayad ajji aur baki o ke sath hogi... waisey bhi Sharma gayi hogi kaal raat ke baad apun ke sammne ane se..." he grinned widely and jumped up from bed grabbing his shirts. He moved to the bathroom door, "Apun se bhag ke kidhar jayegi misscall?! Apun ke passs hi too wapas anna pareg..." he said and moved inside the bathroom. He saw antara's wet clothes on the bathroom hanging from the bars. Those were same lehenga and choli which she wore last night. He smiled and hold those clothes sensing their aroma. Still her exotic smell was attatched to that clothes, the smell in which she shank last night. Her innocent submission to his possessive demands always made him content. He always approached her with the unending intense thirst and she was always ready to give away her everything to quench that. She never complained if his harsh mad caress hurt her. He again sighed and said, "kahan chali gayi misscall?! Subha subha tera chehera bhi naii dekhne diya... iski saza too tujhe milkar rahegi..." he smirked thinking about how he would get his sweet revenge from her. getting freshen up and removing the traces of alcohol from him he got out wearing his clothes. He pushed the door and came outside. It was almost 10 am and all were awake. Raghu saw manjari's brother who was very busy cause the bidayi would start in a min. "eee pappu.. tunee misscall ko dekha hain kya?!!" raghu asked him. "misscall?!!" pappu was so confused. "arey apun ka matlab woo antara.." he said. "kaun antara bhabi? Nahin too?!! Maine too subha se unhe nahin dekha sayad pappa jaan te hain.. unhi se puchiye raghu bhaiya mujhe bahut kaam hain!" pappu said and rushed on the other side. "abeyy eee.. pappu..." Raghu called him but he didn't listened. "arey yee too batate jaa ki kaaka hain kidhar?!!" he said with a sigh and moved to find manjari's father. At last he got him. "arey raghu tum yahan?!!" manjari's father asked. "Arey haan kakka... woo tumne antara ko kahin dekha hain?!" he asked. "Antara?!!! nahin too.. sayadd upar wale kamre mein manjaro ke sath hogi... sari aurate wohi hain.." He said. "Fir ajji ke pass jaa ke baith gayi... pata hain issey ki ajji ke samne apun ki nahin chalti... chalo... ab pura din ajji ussey apne sath chipki rakheegi" he said in irritation and moved towards the room where all of the ladies were preparing for manjari's bidayi. As raghu walked inside ajji saw him. He moved towards him and said, "kyun yere, nasha utra ki nahin?!!" she asked rolling her eyes. "EEE ajji tum bhi naa... apun ne khud se nahin piya.. woo kakka ne pila diya..." raghu said scratching his head. "Haan haan sab samajhti hoon..." Ajji said. Raghu searched for antara in the crowd of ladies but she was nowhere to be seen. All were giggling and laughing happily with manjari and also a bit sad as it was her bidayi. But antara was not in them. "ee kisse dhoond raha hain?!!" ajji saw his face and asked. Raghu was suddenly getting worried and asked "ajji tunee antara ko kahin dekha hain?!". ajji was a bit confused, "antara?!! nahin too... woo tere sath nahin hain?!" ajji said. Raghu suddenly felt his heart thudded loudly. Antara was not there!! Not just that no one saw him from morning and he didn't even find her slepping wrapped inside his arms peacefully as usual in every morning?!! What did that mean?!! His breath chocked all of a sudden. Ajji saw the fear and worry in his eyes. "ee yere kya huya tujhe?!! achanak se chehera kaise such gaya?!!" ajji asked. "ajji... woo...antara... kahin nahin hain, nahin ghar mein kahin hain aur nahi tere idhar, aaj subha se nahin dekha apun ne ussey.. sayad mere se pahele uth gayi..." he said in worried voice .Even ajji get worried. "ajib si baat hain... maine bhi nahin dekha ussey subh se... kahin bhi hoo... mujhse too milne zaroor ati.. ya fir tere sath hoti... ruk main baki o se puchti hoon.." ajji said and asked the girls present there one by one. Everyone said that they didn't saw antara. Raghu was getting frustrated. He was getting bad vibes that something had happened on his back which he didn't know. But how could something happened so soon?! He remembered about madan and shetty.. Could it be?!!... A cold wave rushed down his spines. NO!!! Never!! His hands balled into feast. If those two good for nothing even dared to touch her, he would strangle them into thousand pieces and feed their flesh to dogs. "Chintu ek kaam kar... ghar mein ramu kaka ko phone kar ke dekh kahin udhar too nahin gayi kissi wajah se..." Ajji said. "Ajji woo apun ke ilawa kahin jati hi nahin.. woo akeli ghar kaise jayegi? Aura pun ne uska mobile bhi dekha idhar pari huyi hain... bina phone ke kidhar jayegi?" raghu asked with rising frustration in her voice. "fir bhi ek baar puch le..." ajji said. raghu called on the landline no of ajji's house almost in a vague wish that she could be there. But to his disappointment, ramu kakka told him that antara was not there. That was enough for raghu. He understood that clearly that something wrong had happened to her. He quickly called pakiya and chotu. "Bhai... shetty aur madan too kaal se dikhayi hi nahin diye... kaal unk ghar jal gaya.. uske baad un logon ka kuch atta pata nahin... ruko bhai abhi dekhte hain.." pakiya said. "arey itne der tak kar kya rahe the.. ghora bech ke so rahe the kya?!!!" listening to raghu's frustrated face and scream everyone present at the room looked at her. "chintu.. chintu shant ho jaa..." ajji said. Raghu kicked his leg and rushed outside. "arey bari ayi kya huya raghu bhaiya ko?!!" manjari asked in all startled voice. "arey teri antara didi.. kahin nahin mil rahi hain..." ajji said worriedly. "Kya?!!!" manjari jumped up from thee bed. "Arey tu baith idhar... hum sab hain naa... teri bidayi hain..." ajji said. "too?!! Antara didi lapata hain aur aap kjahe rahe hain ki main chup chap baithi rahoon... kabhi nahin..." wrapping her bridal saree around her waist she also rushed out. Ajji was a bit startled and smiled towards her. really antara had something in her. even in that small time she became so close to manjari that she also went to search for her leaving her rasam. "jayesh kaka... nelam... jaldi se pappa aur chacha ko khabar karo... antara didi la pata hain..." ajji heard manjari's voice from outside and she also went behind her. Soon the news spread all around the house and the cheerful environment changed into fear. all of them started to search for everywhere leaving the celebrations.

Raghu was rushing back to the ground floor towards the house. He remembered something all of a sudden. He didn't know if it had any connection with antara but she remembered that last night when he was talking with antara in the balcony he heard some movement in the bush nearby. Due to his intoxicated mind, he didn't give much concentration on that time but at that moment everything was making sense. He was moving towards the place when suddenly something caught into his feet. He looked back and ssaw something shiny on the ground. his eyes widened as he picked the thing. It was none other than but one of antara's anklets. His breath almost stopped. If her anklet was there then where was she?! Raghu moved inside the bush and saw some traces of faded footprints which assured about his doubt. Someone was really there last night. Shit!! Why didn't he went to checkout?! He noticed an old collapsible gate at the behind of bush. He went near the gate. The old lock was broken on the ground clearly indicating that someone had entered through the gate. Raghu also saw some faded foot marks going out. Pushing the gate he came out and suddenly noticed antara's another anklet on the ground. those things clearly made him understand that someone had taken away antara forcefully. Most probably in the morning when everyone was sleeping and he was also in deep sleep due to alcohol. He knew she was an early riser. And who had such dares rather than that Shetty and Madan!! His hand balled into feast and eyes hardened in dangerous way. The dangerous lion who was sleeping for long suddenly woke up and was in mode to destroy the world. If those two letches had taken away antara then it was the end of them!!! He breathed heavily in danger and punched on the ground spreading some dust arround. Suddenly raghu heard a sound!! He knew the sound very well! Police van siren!! He heard a chaos from the front area of the house.

Antara felt like she was getting drowned in the deep black ocean. There was no light anywhere.. the darkness, only darkness. Where was she?!! She felt a pull dragging her down in the never ending darkness. She tried to get away from the pull but she couldn't. "RAGHU!!!!" she screamed out of her breath and wiggled madly in her unconscious state. kalavati and the man seating with her, get worried. "abey haasmukh, yee daya mai ne too kaha tha ki karwi dawayi di hain... jaldi nind nahin khulegi.. par yee too hosh mein aa rahi hain.." Kalavati sid worriedly. "aap bhi kya ho bibijaan.. uss daya mai ke baton pe bharosa kar liya..." hasmukh said. "Raghu!!!... raghu... raghu..." antara continued to take only a single word. "arey kuch karo hasmukh... larki jaag jayegi.." kalavati said worriedly. Hasmukh was about to brought out some chloroform again but at that moment antara popped out her eyes and jerked her head up. She was shocked when she found herself in the back seat of a car and in between some strange people. "main kahan hoon?!!..." she asked in frustration. "dekh shant ho jaa... apun samjahta hain..." kalavati said. "aap kaun hoo?!!!... Raghu kahan hain?!! aap kahan le jaa rahe hoo mujhe?!!" antara asked madly. "Arey apni baat to sun..." kalavati said. "mujhe kissi ki bhi baat nahin sun ni...mujhe raghu ke pass jana hain... Raghu!!!" she screamed peeping out from the window of car. Kalavati gasped and quickly dragged her inside. "ee larki, pagla gayi hain kya?!! Koi dekh leta too... ab chuo chap baith idhar aur apna mooh bandh rakh.. samjhi!!!" kalavati said in loud voice. "nahin... mujh nahin jana aap logo ke sath... aap log mujhe kahan le jaa rahe hoo?!!..." antara asked in fear. "arey swarg mein le jaa raha hoon... aisi jaagah le jaa rahi hoon naa...aish karegi aish!!..." kalavati said with a nasty grin. "matlaab?!! Kahena kya chahte hain aap?!!" antara asked in loud voice. "arey tu wahan jayegi naa too sab samajh jayegi... arey wahan sirf paisa hain aur paisa... tere liye too line lag jayegi udhar... aakhir aaisi chikni maal kahan milega... kalavati kaa adda chor ke..." she said as she roamed her finger on her face. Antara shoved away her face in disgust and looked to her angrily. She was not a dumb girl that she didn't get that what that lady was talking about. "nahin jana hain humein aap ke wahan... nahin karungi main woo saab... mujhe raghu ke pass jana hain.. jane dijiye humein..." antara tried to open the door of car but kalavati caught her hand. "Sach kahe rahi thi daya mai.. bari thit hain larki..." kalavati said in irritation. "Daya Mai!!" antara was shocked. "haaan 2 lakh ke karwe note thamaye hain maine unke hathon aur tujhe kharida hain... aise thori hi na jane de sakte!!" kalavati said. Everything cleared up in antara's mind. So it was daya mai's plan. Her face hardened. "eee itna mooh mat bana!! Aur tujhe problem kya hain haan... Waisey bhi sahar ke sare chikne aur paisewale mard udhar ate hain!!! woo log tere pati se kam handsome nahin hain!! mauj karegi tu udhar!!"kalavati said with nasty grin. Antara's whole feature burned as she said those words. She just looked at that nasty lady with fiery eyes and without saying a word she lifted her hand and slapped hard on kalavati;s face. Kalavati was startled at first. "eiii larki!!!" hasmukh groaned from side and took out a gun pointing it towards antara. "Jyada uchal kud ki naa too yahin ke yahin sare ke sare goli tere andar thus doonga..." hasmukh said with eyes full of anger. "Chalaon goli!! Main nahin darti tum logon se... maar na hain too maro mujhe... maar dalo!!!" antara said with hard voice looking straight in hasmukh's eyes. her determined words really shook hasmukh. "Hasmukh!! Mat maar issey... isey kaise thikane lagana hain yee main jaanti hoon... abtak ke liye hath pao aur mooh bandh ke rakh iska..." kalavati said from side. Hasmukh tied her hands and legs forcefully. Antara wiggled and tried ti get herself free but she failed. The car moved further in road. Antara cried silently hiding her face from those worthy peoples!! Her fear at last came out true and the storm again approached to separate them.

Raghu was startled as he found a whole group of police force standing at the premises of their house and inspector madhavan was asking some questions to manjari's father. As soon as he saw raghu, he came running towards him. "raghunath naik you are under arrest!!" he said in a hard voice. Raghu was all startled. "eee kyaa?!!!" he couldn't get anything. "jyada anjaan mat banoo raghu!! shetty aur madan ke khoon ke zurm mein tumhe giraftar kiya jata hain..." inspector madhvan said.

Raghu(startled): abey dhakkan... apun ne khoon kiya aurr woo bhi uss takla aurr girgit ka?!! Yee teraa dimag kharap ho gaya hain kya?!!

Madhvan: Ab koi fayda nahin raghu... ab tumhe koi nahin bacha sakta... shetty aur madan ki laas mili hain jungle se.. unke ek admi ne tumje apne akhon se dekha hain goli maarte huye... Ye ussey yahan lao..

Imspector madhvan looked behind and called for someone. A man came there. Raghu identified him. Chagan!!! Shetty's man.

Madhvan: chagan kya yahin woo admit ha? (madhavan asked indicating towards raghu).

Chagan: haan yahin... yahin they... maine apne akhon se dekha.. woo raghubhai hi thee...

Raghu: eee lalluraam... kyun kache umar mein pakkka wala marne ka plan bana raha hain.. chal beta ghar jaa...

Chagan was shaking badly in front of raghu's fiery eyes.

Madhavan: raghu bahut ho gaya chalo humare sath...

Raghu: ee dekh bhai... apun sach kahe raha hain... iss baar apun ne nahin mara uss takle ko.. yaar khalipilli dimag mat khaa... meri biwi ghum ho gayi hain...dhundne jana hain...

Madhavan: Ab bahut ho gaya raghu bandh karo.. ye natak... agar tum ne nahin mara too humein spot par tumhari gun kyun milli?!

Raghu: ee yeda ban ge la hain kya?!! Apn ki gun apun ke pass hain.. idhar dekh...

Raghu was about to pick out the gun and he was startled when he didn't find his gun on his jeans.

Madhvan let out a gun and said "kahin tum issey too nahin dhoond rhe hoo?!!"

Raghu was in shock when he found his gun on madhvan's hand. At that moment they heard a sound of jeep. their eyes went towards the gate. They were startled as they saw a jeep moving in and they were shocked when Daya Mai came out of the jeep with a worried face. Raghu was looking at mai's worried face for a while and suddenly something clicked in his mind. He smirked secretly and looked away from her. He wasn't even feeling like looking towards that bitch's face. DM rushed and held raghu's face worriedly.

DM : Raghunath!! Raghunath!! Kya ho gaya ye sab... aaj hi puna se main wapas ayi aur ate hi yee sab...

Raghu didn't even look at her face. His whole feature was burning in disgust and anger. DM moved towards madhavan

DM: inspector.. ye kya ho raha hain?! Aap ko pata hain ki aap kissey arrest karne jaa rahe hain?

Madhvan: maaf kijiye mrs naik!! par iss baar aap kuch nahin kar sakte.. commissioner sahab ne khud mujhe ye case file karne ke liye kahan hain...

DM: main nahin maanti... Main nahin le janee doongi apne raghunath ko...

She looked towards raghu.

DM: raghunath... raghunath!! Tu fikar mat kar main sab thik kar doongi haan...

Raghu (in slow voice): ANTARA KAHAN HAIN?

DM(startled): Raghnath... tujhe kya...

Raghu looked towards her. His hard gaze, the fire spitting from his eyes almost shook her.

Raghu: Antara ko kaha chupaya hain tune Mai?!! Dekh sach sach bata... aur apna yee natak bandh kar...

DM looked here and there and dragged raghu at a corner

DM (in low voice): Dekh raghunath meri baat sun...

Raghu: mai dekh... 10 saal se tune pala hain iss liye abhi chup hoon... warna agar koi meri antara ko hath lagayein naa too apun uska woo hath kaat dalta hain...

The determination, the spitting fire in his eyes again shook DM. she didn't even think that he could react like that in front of her. Her very own killing machine was standing against her today.

DM(in hard voice): raghunath!! Bhool jaa uss larki koo... akhir kya hain usme?!! Uske jaisi larki tujhe hazaro milegi... Wapas aa ja mere pass raghunath,,, bhool jaa ussey.. bhool jaa uss do kauri ki larki ko...

Raghu's hand balled into feast. He was felling like strangling her into pieces for saying such words to antara. He somehow hold himself.

Raghu: Mai!! Ab too apun se koi bhi ummed mat rakhna... Jissey tu do kauri ki larki samajhti hain naa mai woo meri zindagi hain!! sabkuch hain woo meri... Aur joo ussey chot pauchayega ussey too apun kahin ka nahin chorega... chahein woo koi bhi hoo... tub hi kyun naa hoo mai!!!

DM: Raghunath!!!!... bhool mat kiss sey baat kar raha hain... teri daya mai se... teera yee joo sari garmi ain naa woo meri wajah se hain.. daya mai ke liye... akhri mauka de rahi hoom tujhe raghunath... abhi mere sath wapas chal... warna jaa police ke giraft main... Yaad rakh raghunath tujhe police ke hathon se sirf main bacha sakti hoon.. sirf main... soch le raghunath.. akhri mauka hain..

Raghu smirked looking at DM. "abey mai!! Tujeh kya lagta hain.. yeee s**e ayengey aur apun ko utha ke le jaynegey... tu sayad bhool rahi hain ki main kaun hoon... aur haan mai... antara ko tu duniya ke kissi bhi kone mein chupa le... apun ussey dhoond ke nikalega...aur fir tu taiyar rahena mai... apun tere hi pass ayega.. antara ki har ek chot ka hisab tujh se lene..."

His words shook daya mai from top to bottom. She knew him really well and if he determined on something, he would get that by hook or by crook.

Inspector madhvan moved towards them and grabbed raghu's hand. "Challo!!..." he ordered. Raghu chuckled, "maaf karna inspector iss baar nahin jaa sakta apun tere sath... very sorry!!" he said and suddenly kicked on the ground. The sand which was beneath his feet spread on madhvan and DM's eyes. Raghu rushed out of the crowd. All the police present there rushed to catch him. Some of them reached to him but raghu just knocked them on ground within a min. he rushed towards the wall like a cheetaa. Police started to fire bullets pointing him. He moved in zigzag motion so that the bullets couldn't catch him. In front of their eyes he moved up the wall and jumped to the other side escaping safe and sound. All the police just continued to look at each other with dumb eyes while DM and madhavan were busy in cleaning their eye sight.

PS: sorry guyss for so late and coming up with such crap... now i am sure everyone is gonna hit me with jutaas...🤢

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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MOST THRILLING UPDATE EVER! 👏



Ria...Kya dhamakedaar tha yeh...omg...I cant still feel goosebumps on my body...😲

I think this was best...perfect in every sense...👏👏

Loved it! the way Raghu remembered about his passionate night with Antara😳

It never clicked into my mind that Raghu would be framed in charges regarding murder of shetty and madan.

Nice move baby!👏


So, finally Raghu got to know that DM (🤬) is the mastermind of this atrocious crime.

my worst fears came true when Dm sold Antara to Kalavati 😡

I don't know how I felt when I read it ...but certainly it would be the worst feeling if someone has to go through these situations especially being a girl.

Now I'm curious to know about what will happen next 😉

Please be gentle to me and try n update as soon as you can..😆😆😆

love ya..mwah 🤗

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Update karo na ria! Hum kab se intazaar kar rahe hai!
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Riyu yeh kya yar
Aisa update parh key halaat tight hogaye 😆
DM aise nikleygi yeh to meine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha 😡
Kamini kahi ki I just hate her 😡 😡
Poor Antara but I myst say uska confidence I love it 😉
DM such a 😡
Pata nahi ab Raghu kya kareyga
Uski zindagi ko usse doorkarnewala bhagwan ko pyare hojayegy 😆
Bus Antara ko kuch nah hoon warna Raghu to aag laga deyga duniya ko 😭
Do continuee soon this time
I cant wait to read next update 😉
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally read the chapter
Hayeee RI kamal kar dita yaar
Rantara hayee ur story is making them even more blissful
I have no words for this story
last part omg who was that and what happened to antu? will Raghu save her???
pls cont asap dying to read

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