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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ifians


nahin yaar... iss thread pe too main pakka story khatam karungi... aur waisey bhi ab story speed pakar rahi hain...aur climax bhi jyada door nahin...😆
aur mujhe tera sukkon ka reply chahiye... bhooli nahin main😉😆


Arey dont worry I remember that but ria this is cheating ek ji promise tumne pura kiya hai??
Hamari deal bhool gaye??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Arey dont worry I remember that but ria this is cheating ek ji promise tumne pura kiya hai??
Hamari deal bhool gaye??

maine kahan cheating ki... shadi bhi dikah diya... romance bhi dikha diya... baccha too last mein ayega... abhi too nahin laa sakti yaar... ab aur kya deal hain...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ifians


maine kahan cheating ki... shadi bhi dikah diya... romance bhi dikha diya... baccha too last mein ayega... abhi too nahin laa sakti yaar... ab aur kya deal hain...😭


Hehehe arey bacho wali hi 😆 😆
I know abhi nahi la sakty but after bache ek ya do update deyna then happily ever after 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Hehehe arey bacho wali hi 😆 😆
I know abhi nahi la sakty but after bache ek ya do update deyna then happily ever after 😃


nahin yaar bacha last mein... 😆 and ending... bache ke baad aur nahin drag kar sakti...🤣

aur waisey bhi mujhe tera sukkon aur paroshan ke barein mein bhi sochna hain...😆

nikki agar tujhe kabhi time mile to kya tu mera ek req rakhegi?

actually maine ek film dekhi thi kuch din paahele... just thought ki woo cconcept rantara pe bahut accha rahega... but as you know i am hell busy... kya tu uss concept pe ek rantara story likh sakti hain? if you like the idea?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ifians



nahin yaar bacha last mein...😆and ending... bache ke baad aur nahin drag kar sakti...🤣

aur waisey bhi mujhe tera sukkon aur paroshan ke barein mein bhi sochna hain...😆

nikki agar tujhe kabhi time mile to kya tu mera ek req rakhegi?

actually maine ek film dekhi thi kuch din paahele... just thought ki woo cconcept rantara pe bahut accha rahega... but as you know i am hell busy... kya tu uss concept pe ek rantara story likh sakti hain? if you like the idea?


Yes sure tell me ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Riyu,
third thread bhi ban gaya !! Wow !!
Congratulations...And celebrations...!!
Update bhi mast thi.. But I didn't understand the ending...😕The curtain thingy and the collapsing part..
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
AWesome update 👏
rantara moments 😳
so intense nd romantic 😳
but dm 😡 wht is she planing nw 😕 scary
antu kidnapped 😲 rantara seperated
raghu ko pata chalega toh dm is gone 😆
plsss update soon.
Thnx for pm
1nce again congrats fr 3rd thread 😃 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
mindblowing update ria...👏...
n very intense too...☺️...

agree wid all d replies......nw d dark phase begins...😔

DM will pay 4 her deeds...😡

ahhh..RaNtara separation...😭...kaise sahenge...💔
but its ok...as all wil b fine n d end...😊

i guessd her move wen she shot dead shetty n madan...
n nw calld commissionr...to complete her plan...🤬
koi baat nahi woh dayan bhi apne anjaam tak pahung jayegi...🐷
Antara ke Raghu se abhi tak saamna nahi hua uska...🤪

keep writing...👍🏼
just luv ur updates...❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39


congratulations Sweetheart! 👏👏
On opening the third thread
and
on becoming IF-Stunnerz 🥳




It gives me immense joy to see you progress 😊

well today what I want to say is that GAG is something which I 'm gonna cherish throughout my lifetime.whenever I feel low, one update of GAG and it does wonders to my brain.
I love this story Ria through the bottom of my heart ❤️.I don't think the original #DDEJ could had been any better than this.

The whole gist of the story is unbridled love of Raghu and Antara which you have penned down very passionately.And your every update keeps on oozing that love.

Chapter no.55 was among one of them.Breathtakingly beautiful...loved the tranquil atmosphere which you created.It was so serene.

Do I've to tell , how super talented you are???...I guess not!
So finally you got the Twist ...huh?...oh! baby I'm totally loving it...😳
Trust me...I'm ready for any damn twist because I know its you who is penning down...

Big round of applause from my side to you for your never ending dedication towards Rantara.👏
you deserve it girl! Cheers!!!

btw do update very very very soon.
A big fan of yours is waiting for chapter no.56 ☺️
love ya...mwah 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
sorry fr late reply..
veeryyy beautiful update ria...
DM aur uske ghatiya plans
omg! she got kidnapped...
waiting fr next
tfpm..

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