dark SS 'U Belong 2 me Mrs.Naik!' 2st chapter updated pg.8

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bokul

@bokul

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

congrats for your new ss

hope this will have a happy end

make it dark and complex

but make it a long story please

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: liana2304
I am exited .
Loved concept
Thxs for the PM

Thanx dear 😊

N no prob!

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rima4ever
congrats for your new ss
hope this will have a happy end
make it dark and complex
but make it a long story please

Thanx dear 😊

I'll try 2 make it as dark n complex as possible.

N idk hw long d story would b it depends...

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing yar do continue soon 😃

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Niki,

Loved the prologue,

But there's one weird thing,

my FF Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya , has the same ideology - Marrying Raghu just for revenge.

Kya Karein ? I guess we are quite similar that's why this happened 😊

But , I just hope that the future tracks dont match..

In my FF, Antu's reason for her hatred has a long story behind it involving her childhood.
I just hope that nothing matches..

Now coming to your story,

It was very interesting.

Make this SS very dark and add bits of thrill. By thrill I don't mean, ghosts and zombies 😆

But if you want to add ghosts and zombies , its up to you.

Love ya !

-Prerna

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gargi21

@gargi21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nikki darling ...🤗

Aaja jhappi pale...

U know for how long i was wishing ki koi rantara par Iss type ka concept le kar likhe...

Wooow yaar u granted my wish...

Super awesome idea...

Do continue soon...

Cant wait for d first chapter...But this time sachi wala jaldi update karna... :)

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Shivika Agarwal

@shivika838

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Oh God , it sounds really interesting and mysterious 😃

Waiting 4 it eagerly , can't believe Raghu wants 2 take revenge frm his miscall

Edited by shivika838 - 11 years ago

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kantared1
Seems interesting. Continue soon.

ThanQ 😊

N yup i'll cont soon 😃

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Amazing yar do continue soon 😃

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">Thanks 😃</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066">I'll cont asap</font>😊

Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron
Niki,
Loved the prologue,
But there's one weird thing,
my FF Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya , has the same ideology - Marrying Raghu just for revenge.
Kya Karein ? I guess we are quite similar that's why this happened 😊
But , I just hope that the future tracks dont match..
In my FF, Antu's reason for her hatred has a long story behind it involving her childhood.
I just hope that nothing matches..

Now coming to your story,
It was very interesting.
Make this SS very dark and add bits of thrill. By thrill I don't mean, ghosts and zombies 😆
But if you want to add ghosts and zombies , its up to you.
Love ya !
-Prerna