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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gargi21

Nikki darling ...🤗

Aaja jhappi pale...
U know for how long i was wishing ki koi rantara par Iss type ka concept le kar likhe...
Wooow yaar u granted my wish...

Super awesome idea...
Do continue soon...
Cant wait for d first chapter...But this time sachi wala jaldi update karna... :)



Gargi tumhe bhi jadoo ki jhappi 🤗🤗🤗
ThanQ dear 😃
Sabhar kar yaar i'll update it ASAP😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: gargi21

Nikki darling ...🤗

Aaja jhappi pale...
U know for how long i was wishing ki koi rantara par Iss type ka concept le kar likhe...
Wooow yaar u granted my wish...

Super awesome idea...
Do continue soon...
Cant wait for d first chapter...But this time sachi wala jaldi update karna... :)



Gargi tujhe bhi jadoo ki jhappi 🤗
Thanx yaar😊
Thoda sabhar kar i'll update it asap😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivika838

Oh God , it sounds really interesting and mysterious 😃

Waiting 4 it eagerly , can't believe Raghu wants 2 take revenge frm his miscall


Glad u lykd d concept
Thanx dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"U belong 2 me Mrs.Naik!"

Chapter 1

She sat on d bed in her room which was beautifully decorated wid flowers, mostly petals of red roses, wearing an elegant bridal ghagra-choli which luked evn more beautiful on her. Her curves, her figure lukd heavenly n she luked lyk a beautiful goddess. She ws sitted wid her legs folded n her hands on her knees, wid d heavy dupatta on her forehead! Obviously it ws her 1st night wid her beloved husband whom he loved unconditionally n 2nite they will bcum 1 in ech n evry way. She ws blushing hard n vry nervous, any1 would b nervous in a situation lyk this.
Antara- wats taking him so long? Wher is he? He mst b here by now!
Soon she heard d door open, it ws raghu she saw him thru d translucent part of d duppatta. He ws wearing a red n black sherwani which made him luk vry handsome n hott. Antara ws not vry scared. She had no idea wats gonna happen now, wats gonna Raghu say? Wat will they talk abt? Wat is he thinking abt? Moreover wats he gonna do?

Raghu came n sat near her n slowly lifted hr duppatta. His eyes 1st fell on d sindoor in her maang n then on d mangalsutr. Antara jst closed her eyes n felt his touch. Raghu slowly removed hr duppatta n said
Raghu- chal utt n change kar le.
Antara- wat?
Raghu- remove this stupid ghagra choli n pack ur stuff v r leaving this place now!
Antara ws blank, she hd no idea wat was going on. She didnt expect anything lyk this. Wher was he taking hr?
Antara- Raghu r v going 4 our honeymoon? She asked shyly.
Raghu- No. V r leaving this place. I'll tell u latr bt 4 now stop asking qstns n start packing.
Antara soon changed into a red anarkali bt didnt remuv d mangalsutr, d red bangles wich a newly married girl wears n then her sindoor wich she treasured as she was eagerly waiting 4 it frm a long tym.

They both wer now ready. Raghu carried d bags out n Antara prepared sum snacks 4 them. They both came out of d house n he locked it. Raghu then started his jeep bt wher is She??? Antara ws no wher 2 b seen. Raghu started searching bt wher did she go? He ws now vry worried n shouted her name as loud as possible bt she was no wher 2 b seen. Then it struck his mind.
Raghu- tu bhi na.. she mst b at her mom's place. Saying goodbye, crying, taking blessings... Yeah she mst take blessings frm hr mom coz she's gonna need them.. badly!

Raghu entered her house Antara was abt 2 leave whn she saw Raghu. He came near Mrs.kaul n touched hr feet. Mrs.Kaul kept her hand on his head n gave him hr blessings.
Mrs.Kaul- Raghu beta aaj hi toh tum dono ki shaadi hui hai aur aaj hi tum hume chodd ke jaa rahe ho? Todhe din toh ruk sakte the na..
Raghu- Maa aapko toh pata hai ki DM ki maut ke baad basti ki poori zimmedari mujpe hai aur unke sabhi dandhe mujhe dekhne padte hai. Aur mujhe yeh sab nahi pasand toh maine yeh basti sabhi bastiwalo ke naam kar di hai aur yeh saab piche chodd ke Goa mein ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahta hu...
Mrs.Naik was stunned by hearing his words. She felt so proud of her son-in-law. She soon hugged both of them.
Mrs.Naik- tum bohot aache ho Raghu, Bhagwan hamesha tumhe tumhare kaam mein safalta de. Im proud of u beta!
Antara jst kept admiring him n praising god 4 such an amazing hubby.
Raghu- toh challe?
Antara- haa.. chalte hai.
Mrs.Kaul- waise Raghu mujhe tumpe barosa hai paar maa hone ke naate puchna pada... tum kaam kya karoge?
Raghu- Maa aap mujse bejhijak kuch bhi pooch sakti hai, mera ek friend Goa mein bohot bada builder hai aur usne mera kaam dekh ke mujhe aapna partner bananeka faisla liya hai. Aur humare rehne ka intezaam bhi kar liya hai.
Mrs.Kaul- thats really gud beta. Now u 2 mst get going. Hope u hav a safe journey n call me whn u reach ther.
They hugged Mrs.Kaul n left.

In d Airplane
Antara- Raghu i love u! Ur d best thing dats evr happnd 2 me. Now we'll b living as husband n wife in our own home dat 2 in Goa. Raghu i promise i'll put in my 100% 2 b a gud wife n hopefully a gud mother 1 day.
Saying this she blushed n luked at Raghu bt Raghu had his headphones on n enjoying d music bt B4 Antara started talking he didnt hav those.
Antara-Y did he do that? Mayb it's my mistake.
The whole journey Antara tried 2 speak 2 Raghu bt he didn't evn utter a word n kept ignoring her. Antara ws hurt bt she ws blaming herslf as she thot dat Raghu ws d ideal hubby n can nevr do anything wrong.

They soon reached d airport. They then took a cab 2 their home. Raghu's house ws huge wid a garden infront. Inside there wer several rooms n also had a swimming pool. Antara ws again impressed wid Raghu.
Antara- Wow Raghu it's amazing! Kaam pe lagne se pehle hi itna bada ghar.. not bad ha..

Raghu jst gav hr an angry glare n went inside d house. Antara ws yet again hurt. Howevr She picked her bag n walked in. She kept her bag on d sofa n started looking around. D house ws preety clean as if cleaned b4 they arrived n there wer necessary things lyk water, food, veges, soaps etc. Antara went near Raghu n asked him
Antara- Raghu...woh.
Raghu didnt evn luk at her. Now she couldnt take it anymore n said
Antara- Raghu baat kya hai? Bata nahi sakte?
Raghu- kya? Kya hua? Problm kya hai teri? N dont evr dare 2 talk 2 me did this tone. Im ur husband nt ur servant. Talk 2 wid respect lyk an indian woman does. N if u raise ur voice evr again then...
Widout completing his sentence he marched 2wards their bedroom. Antara stood ther, she could say nothing. She felt lyk crying bt again stopped herself.
Antara- wats wrong in this? He's nt asking mch frm u. Tu bhi na chotti chotti baate mann se laga leti hai. Raghu is tired coz of d journey u mst undrstand him.
Antara went inside her bedroom 2 say sorry 2 Raghu bt again had a surprise...
Her bedroom was beautifully decorated wid flowers n candles. N wid soft romantic music n d bed was decorated wid rose petals wich wer arranged 2 make a big heart in d centre. This completely changed her mood. She undrstood dat Raghu mst hav planned all this. He ws in d washroom she ran bck n got her bag n removed a transparent white nighty frm it. She soon wore it, left hr hair open, did a slight makeup wid a beautiful red lipstick wich made her luk evn more hot. She them took out a bottle of perfume n sprayed on. She didnt take off her mangalsutr, bangles n hr sindoor. Now she ws ready n lukd stunning. D nighty made her luk evn more sexy n her hair left untidily would make Raghu go crazy. She sat on d bed bt felt a bit odd.
Antara- arree yaar woh 1st night wali feeling hi nahi aah rahi hai. It ws better wid d bridal dress on bt dis nighty is nt helping..Idea!
She ran bck n got her duppatta which she wore during her marriage ceremony. She covered her head wid it n sat in d same position wich she sat b4. Soon she heard d door. Antara's heart ws beating so fast dat evn Raghu could hear it. Raghu came out n saw her. He ws wearing a transparent white shirt n black pants. Luking at her he got a smile on his face wich ws absent from a long tym. She came up 2 her sat facing her n slowly removed her duppatta. Antara saw his face n again blushed.
Raghu- hmm... not bad Mrs.Naik.. not bad! Luking hot as hell.
Antara again blushed. Raghu hugged her n then carressed her cheeks n planted a soft kiss on her cheeks then he sat holding her hands n said
Raghu- 1st nyt k liye badi tayar hoke beti ho, so lets start..
toh chalo gaana gao.
Antara- wat??
Raghu- sunna nahi? Ganna gao
Antara- parr.. gaana? Kyu? Kiss liye?
Raghu(loudly)- shut up! Do as i say, im ur legal husband n u mst do as i say. Now sing 4 me..
Antara ws shattered, she nevr evn imagined dat Raghu would say sumthing lyk this..
Raghu- GAANA GAO
He said this putting stress on ech word.
Antara ws scared n started singing bt while stammering..
Antara- saa...saans.. mein..mein te..teri.. saans milli
Raghu- yeh kya boring sa gaana sunna rahi ho? Aur woh bhi haklake. I kno u sing mch bettr than this now sing a hot bollywood song.. an item number would n bettr! Haa.. sing baby doll! Aur thode thumke bhi laga lena...
Antara's eyes soon became moist n tears started rolling down her cheeks..
Antara- shut up Raghu! Wats wrong wid u? Im ur wife not sum $%(#
Raghu ws hell angry now he caught her hand n twisted it n then grabbed her hair n pulled it. Antara started crying evn loudr.
Raghu- chupp.. ek dum chupp mein hu tera pati parmeshwar n u hav 2 obey me.
Raghu left her hair n caught both her hands behind her back. She couldnt evn move frm thst place now. He carressed her cheeks n then her lips wich wer irresistable. Antara knew wat was cuming she tried 2 escape bt his grip ws vry strong. Then smashed his lips on hers, he kissed her forcefully wid passion n a lot of anger. He kissed her till he felt satisfied, he didn't evn stop whn blood started cuming out of hr lips. Antara ws trying hr best 2 stop him bt all hr efforts went in vain. Aftr he ws satisfied he threw hr on d bed n came on top of her. She pushed him wid all her strength n ran towards d door bt it ws locked n did not open.
Raghu- tujhe kya laga main tujhe itni aasani se jaane duga? Don't evn think of running away frm me. Ur stuck wid me 4evr.
Saying this he grabbed her shoulders n hugged her tight then he started giving her wet kisses all ovr her neck n clevage Antara ws crying n trying 2 stop him. She nevr thot dat her 1st nyt wid Raghu would b lyk this. All her dreams wer shattered. Her heart broken. He then slid her sleeve down n kissed her shoulder n then again threw her on d bed...


2 b continued!!!


Chap 1 done!!!
Sorry 4 dis crap! I kno its horrible. I've tried sumthing lyk this 4 d 1st tym. Plz tell me hw it is n if u by chance lyk it plz hit d lyk button!
Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Res..:)
Unres...


Wooowww super awesome update...😛
So raghu is taking revenge...
Having a lot of sympathy towards antara...
She loves him to core... I hope raghu too loves her but his revenge is taking place of it...
But i luv such kind of stories...
N u wrote it very well...

I would luv to see some more intensity... I guess u got wat i mean...😆


Update soon... :)
Cant wait to read next part... :)

Edited by gargi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Wow..
Niki its to lovely
raghu to antra se pyaar nahi karta antra ka pata nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
woww i jst loved dat ... its so different 😊 though i knw raghu is being mean n
rude to antara 😡 fr which i knw dere vl be a valid reason fr sure..
at dis point my sympathy n love fr antara...😭 hope she makes raghu fall gr her soon with her true love 😳
fr u fr d lovely update.. nw eagerly waiting fr nxt part..update sooon
tkcr nikki 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
This was just fabulous! Uff cant wait to read more. Please continue fast! And ha thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wow nikki awesome...

now story is really complicated...please update soon

thnks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Niki I just loved it
Such a unique story
But why Raghu is acting like a psycho husband 😆
I hope uska dimag e santolan theek hai 😆
Continue soon dear

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