dark SS 'U Belong 2 me Mrs.Naik!' 2st chapter updated pg.8

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys! I was free n this idea jst popped up in my mind. So i'll giv it a go. This SS will b a dark 1. Mayb a short 1 can't say. I jst hope u guys lyk it if not plz tell me. I appreciate ppl who pick out my mistakes n help me 2 improve myself..

So here's d prologue:

Jst 5 days! On d 5th day i gonna marry her n then i'll take my revenge. Yes, she has to pays 4 what she n hr fathr did 2 me. Bcoz of them i hd 2 bcom DM's slave. They ruined my childhood, my lyf! I'll make her lyf hell no evn worse than hell! She'll then b my legal wife n i will hav my full rights on hr, i can do watevr i want n she can nevr deny me. She thinks dat i love hr bt there's no place 4 love in my heart. Mere dil mein aag lagi hai! Pyaar ki nahi Badle ki aag! Ur lyf's soon gonna change get ready Antara.

I still can't beliv im gonna marry him. In jst 5 days he'll b my husband. Meri maang mein uska sindoor aur galle mein uske naam ka mangalsutr. I'll b living wid him in his house. It's a dream cum true! I love him more than anything in this world. He is my jaan! My Raghu.

Chapter 1- pg.4

Chapter 2- pg.8

plz leave ur commnts n hit d lyk button.😃

Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

congrats for ur new SS niki..🥳

woww..its very nice concept!!😛

title is osm "u belong 2 me Mrs.NAik"😈...full villan wali feeling a rhi hai mujhe😆

raghu is in state "mere badle ki aag"😈🤣

n antu.." main tulsi tere aangan ki.."😳🤣

waiting for update..prologue is superb!!!!!!!👏

i think there must be such kinds of stories...

plz continue it soon...😊

Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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Ifz

@Niyaz_Lover

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

WOW...Amazing concept..Love it..

I feel so sorry for Antu..she loves hi so much but Raghu...

But Raghu CANNOT be thatt bad..

watch when he meets her...

He will change..

Antara will bring a hange in him...

Continue soon...

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
congrats for ur new SS niki..🥳
woww..its very nice concept!!😛

title is osm "u belong 2 me Mrs.NAik"😈...full villan wali feeling a rhi hai mujhe😆
raghu is in state "mere badle ki aag"😈🤣
n antu.." main tulsi tere aangan ki.."😳🤣
waiting for update..prologue is superb!!!!!!!👏
i think there must be such kinds of stories...
plz continue it soon...😊

ThanQ Suchi 😳

raghu is in state "mere badle ki aag"😈🤣

n antu.." main tulsi tere aangan ki.."😳🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wowww dear nikki 😊 grt ss...loved d prologue ... 😉
raghu marrying antara jst fr d sake of revenge ohh
god ..bt still seems interesting.. update sooon dear
all d beat fr dat 👏

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover
WOW...Amazing concept..Love it..
I feel so sorry for Antu..she loves hi so much but Raghu...
But Raghu CANNOT be thatt bad..
watch when he meets her...
He will change..
Antara will bring a hange in him...
Continue soon...

Thanx dear 😊

Yup, i'll update it soon

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu
wowww dear nikki 😊 grt ss...loved d prologue ... 😉
raghu marrying antara jst fr d sake of revenge ohh
god ..bt still seems interesting.. update sooon dear
all d beat fr dat 👏

Thanks a lot😊

I'll update it ASAP 😃