(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 80

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Posted: 11 years ago
So lovely niki..
Riya pm me plot soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
tussi toh chah gaye nikku ji
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update niki 👏
so its antu's bday nd raghu got to knw
going temple
waiting to c hw raghu celebrates her bday
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note..
First i say sorry from my teem..its be same problame fo thet last night we cant updated episode..
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Epi 54 (cont):
RaNtara in d same room...😊...den d convo...😕...hasi-mazak se mahol thoda tension n sadwaala ban gaya...😔...😭...😒...
den Raghu consoling her...😳...😊...n deir closeness...😳...(...e1 my breath hitched along wid Antara...😆...😃...)...
he narrating d importance of her...😳...😊...awww d way he said those lines...😳...typically Raghu's tapori language...👍🏼...(...ria...kya likhthi ho aap ...yaar...👏...)...
dey were getting close but Raghu controlled...😊...den sleeping comfortably in each others hold...😊...😳...😃...

...just mindblowing...Yedi ria behna...🤗...
(sorry yediyon...😔...jaise time milta hai padkar comment kar dungi...really really sorry for posting randomly like dis n causing inconvenience...😔...😭...)...

Keep it up all Yedi Writers...👍🏼...👏...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Epi 55:
Antu woke first n admiring Raghu...😳...Raghu gets irritated by d ring...😊...Antu ka B'day aaya...🥳...
...yeh Raghu ne Antu ko kis halat mein dekh liya...😳...☺️...😉...
...y is he confused on seeing Antu dressed well...???...he knows its her b'day na...🤔...
...Raghu doesn't like Varun Dhawan...😆...😉...
...n d nok-jhok continues...😃...😉...😆...
...d temple visit...😃...(...i can see some scenes from d update edit montage banner coming...(...its only a guess..)...)...
...Raghu planning something 4 his Ms. Kaul's b'day...😃...👍🏼...

Thanks nikki 4 d wonderful update...🤗...❤️...👏....(...ria k thumbu ko thoda aaraam toh mila...😊...)...n all d best to all d yedis who r busy wid exams...👍🏼...😊...

hush...atlast done wid commenting on d epis...phewww...😊...

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Posted: 11 years ago
no problem
update when u can
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Episode 56

Raghu and Antara rang the bell of the temple as they walked in...They stood in front of shivji and closed there eyes...

Raghu talking to shivji: Shivji...Yeh kya hai?..Mujhey kuch samaj hi nahi ah raha..kya karu main iss Yedi ki birthday kay liaya?..Plz kuch madat kar doo..

Antara talking to Shivji: Shivji..Kya meh Raghu ko bata du meray Birthday kay baray main?..Nahi nahi...kyu baao?..Kon hai wo mera?..Lykin mujhey batana chaiya...Shivji..Kya karu main?...

As they both opened there eyes they looked at each other and gave an akward smile..They prayed and made their way out of the Mandir...Antara set off in front of Raghu...Just in time Raghu grabbed her wrist and brought her back...

Raghu: kaha jah rahiy hai?...

Antara: House boat..Aur kaha?...

Raghu: NAHI!!...Mere ko goomna hai...

Antara: Goomna?..Raghu tum koi chotay bachay nahi ho ki gomnay jao gay..Chalo ghar mujhey bohat kaam hai...

Raghu: Apun kahi nahi jai gah...Mujhey Purah Shrinagar dekhna hai..iss ka maza lehna hai..Aur wo bhi teray saath...

Antara was a bit startled by his sudden enthusiasm.

Raghu: Wo kya kehtah hai...Ha tu wo meri guide ban ja...Aur Shringar ki sab khoobsurat jagay dikha dey...

Antara: Acha to tumhey saara Shrinagar dekhna hai?..she said with a crooked smile...

Raghu: Ha dekh nah hain...

Antara: Theek hai dikha doon gi..lykin Ek shart par...

Raghu: Kaisay Shart?..Konsi?.. Ab yee shart bich mein kidhar se aa gaya?

Antara: Kyun dr lag raha hain..

Raghu: Dar..bilkul naii.. pun kissi shart wart se naii darta... tu bata too sahi apun yun chutki baja ke sab kar dega..

They were still at the premises of temple. The temple was situated at a top, at a corner of snow covered gulmarg's ground. The huge pirpanjal hills situated at the horizon and fully white by the snow, was glowing in morning sunlight. The whole gulmarg ground looked beautiful. Antara indicated towards a corner of the snow ground where some people were playing on the snow, doing ice skating, snow balls throwing etc.

Antara showed some peoples who were skiing on the snow.

Antara: Agar tum un log kay tara barf skating kar saktay ho..Phir main tumhari guide banu giy..Warna bhool jao...

Raghu: Bas?..itna hi..yeh meray bayein haath ka khel hai..Chal

Raghu came at the corner of snow ground with skiing accessories . Antara stood at a side giggling seeing Raghu in those heavy jackets and accessories.

Raghu stood on his slides and Started skating..He slid down...He smiled as he freely slid...As the speed began to rise..he became conscious...

Raghu: HEY!! BRAKES KAHA HAI?...

He slide down..as he tried to stop he fell...As he hit the ground he realised he did not hit the snow..Then what did he hit?..He slowly opened his eyes and Saw Antara..Her eyes were tightly shut..and she was holding on to His collar...

Raghu: Shrinagar ki sab sey khoobsurat cheez to mera samnay hai...

As soon as Antara heard Raghu's voice she slowly opened her eyes...She looked deep into the baby brown eyes on top of her's...After a long moment their trance was broken by their cheerful giggle.

written by ifza

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Posted: 11 years ago
short n sweet update ifzu..😛
ye kya shiviji ko hi confuse krne mein lag gaye dono...😆
raghu ki demand...pr antara ki shart..hehe..loved it😆
thanks fr updating!

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