Part 6 on pg 16 !! FF : Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya..

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gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Superb story dear...

Im loving d concept...wat a dhamakedar prologue n so cute flashback ...

Prerna u r surely goin to kill us with d suspense ...

God why d hell is she planning to kill him...!!??

Dis is seriously a very different one...

Update soon... :)

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Hey guys !! Im back with this update of mine...

PART 3:

"Antara , jaldi aao nashtey ke liye. Mujhe meeting ke liye jaana hain aur main tumhaare saath nashta kare bina nahi jaoonga"said Raghu at the dining table . "Raghu tum khao. Main baad mein khaoongi"said Antara. "Please Antara, tum jaanti ho na ki main tumhaare bina khana nahi khaata"said Raghu. "Accha Baba. I'll come"said Antara getting a cup of tea with her. "Ab jaldi beth jao..Tumhe pata hain ki aaj meri ek bahut important meeting hain"said Raghu. "Haan pata hain, uss baat hi ka toh main advantage loongi"said Antara whispering. "Kyaa..?"said Raghu. "Main keh rahi thi ki issi baat ka tumhe advantage lena hain. Do well and all the very best to you jaan"said Antara. "Tumhaara saath mere liye bahut important hain. When I know that you are with me , I am ready to face any problem. As long as you are with me ,I will live"said Raghu. Antara for a minute was mesmerized by his words. She was having mixed feelings inside her heart. She was confused. She had started to feel bad that she was trying to kill somebody who loved her so much. But what could she do ! She controlled her feelings and said. "Chai peelo.."said Antara softly.. "Haan, how can I miss my cup of tea prepared by my lovely wife?"said Raghu. Saying this he drank the tea and stood up. "Ok bye, I need to go..."said Raghu. "Jee aap jao. Main kitchen main jaa rahi hoon"said Antara. Raghu took a few steps forward but then suddenly lost his balance.. He smelt some chemical through a napkin kept on his nose forcefully. He instantly collapsed to which Antara started smiling. "Ab jao apne meeting main"she said. She used a simple technique to make Raghu unconscious..Chlorofoam !! She knew how important the meeting was for Raghu and hence made sure he didnt go..! To make the incident look like she wasn't involved in it she called the doctor and Mr.Naik . Mr.Naik came home on hearing the news. "Antara beta ? Kya hua tha ?"said Mr.Naik worryingly. "Papa , main kitchen main thi . Suddenly m-mujhe Raghu ki aawaz aayi aur dekha ki woh unconscious hain. I i-immediately called the doctor and then you"said Antara crying ."Sambhaal apne aapko beta. Woh theek ho jayega."said Mr.Naik. "Aapko toh apne aapko sambhaalna padega. You gotta be careful Mr.Naik. Coz your gonna die along with my husband"thought Antara. The doctor checked Raghu and finally stated "Mujhe lagta hain ki koi chor ghar mein ghus aaya tha. Isliye inhe chlorofoam diya tha."said the doctor. Then the police investigated the case and found that some money from the locker was missing. "Mr.Naik, aap ek well-known businessman hain..Par mujhe samajh mein nahi aata ki aapke ghar ke bahaar security hone ke baawajood , chor kaise ghus aaya?"asked the police officer.
PRECAP:

Raghu gaining consciousness and asking for Antara while she is crying her heart out in her room ...

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Nikkisha Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Im number 1
Preru 🤗
Antara making tea, I thought tea mein kuch hoga but Antu ne to bollywood movies se inspire ho key chlorofoam use kiya Raghu ko behoosh karne key liye.
Antara is very smart she immediately call Mr Naik takey us pe koi shaq nah kare
Arey aghr behossh ki karna tha to she djould have winked at Raghu woh wahi behoosh hojata full lattoo jo hai Antu pe 😆 😉
But she is having feelings for Raghu but why Killing him yar
Nice precap, I wonder why Antu is crying
Continueee sooon

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Im number 1
Preru 🤗
Antara making tea, I thought tea mein kuch hoga but Antu ne to bollywood movies se inspire ho key chlorofoam use kiya Raghu ko behoosh karne key liye.
Antara is very smart she immediately call Mr Naik takey us pe koi shaq nah kare
Arey aghr behossh ki karna tha to she djould have winked at Raghu woh wahi behoosh hojata full lattoo jo hai Antu pe 😆 😉
But she is having feelings for Raghu but why Killing him yar
Nice precap, I wonder why Antu is crying
Continueee sooon

Nikki,

I wanted all the readers to think that tea mein kuch tha. I love fooling people 😆

Antara toh badle ki aag mein bahut intelligent ho gayi hain, She is playing very intelligently..

Aage kya hota hain.. Woh hum dekhte hain 😉😉

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WaliKiDulhan

@WaliKiDulhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

I was expecting a long update 😕

But chalo koi nhii 😉

Haww..i also thought k chai me kch hoga but it seems like Antara is a Bollywood freak 😆

Raghu unconscious 😭
But why is Antara doing all this ??
please unfold this secret soon 😕

Precap: why is she crying? 😲

I'm glad she's falling for Raghu 😳

Continue soon and please give a long update 😆

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Nikki,
I wanted all the readers to think that tea mein kuch tha. I love fooling people😆
Antara toh badle ki aag mein bahut intelligent ho gayi hain, She is playing very intelligently..
Aage kya hota hain.. Woh hum dekhte hain😉😉

Yeaahhh right in the end pata chala key chai mein kuchi bhi kaala nahi tha pura rumal hi kaala tha 🤣

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Yeaahhh right in the end pata chala key chai mein kuchi bhi kaala nahi tha pura rumal hi kaala tha 🤣

Rumaal kala tha..🤣 too good 😆

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: hareem27
I was expecting a long update 😕

But chalo koi nhii 😉

Haww..i also thought k chai me kch hoga but it seems like Antara is a Bollywood freak 😆

Raghu unconscious 😭
But why is Antara doing all this ??
please unfold this secret soon 😕

Precap: why is she crying? 😲

I'm glad she's falling for Raghu 😳

Continue soon and please give a long update 😆

Antu hamaari bollywood freak to hai hi !! I wanted to confuse the audience by bringing up the tea..😆 The secret will be unfolded soon..

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priyanka

@ankusanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

omgg 😲 seriously antara kya kr rh h..
she stopped raghu fr attending an important
meeting n choroform oh God what is she upto !!!!
nw what will happen n hw raghu vl react in nxt chapter..
want to knw all so; plz update soon 😊
dis ws nice chapter ...
update soonn thankss

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ankusanu
omgg 😲 seriously antara kya kr rh h..
she stopped raghu fr attending an important
meeting n choroform oh God what is she upto !!!!
nw what will happen n hw raghu vl react in nxt chapter..
want to knw all so; plz update soon 😊
dis ws nice chapter ...
update soonn thankss

Thanks !!! Antu kya kar rahi hain, yeh toh jaldi patah chal jayega..

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