Part 6 on pg 16 !! FF : Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya..

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

udi baba😲...katil patni ki bhumika mein hamari antara😈..aur shikar hai raghu!!😲.aila..totally mysterious FF n yet exciting prologue..😛

plzz update soon...😃

aakhir is nafrat ka raaz kya hai?..kya hai..?kya hai..?🤣

aur sabsi badi confusion title is "aakhir pyaar ho gaya"...😆waah wah!!..kya story hai👏

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abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
udi baba😲...katil patni ki bhumika mein hamari antara😈..aur shikar hai raghu!!😲.aila..totally mysterious FF n yet exciting prologue..😛
plzz update soon...😃
aakhir is nafrat ka raaz kya hai?..kya hai..?kya hai..?🤣

aur sabsi badi confusion title is "aakhir pyaar ho gaya"...😆waah wah!!..kya story hai👏
tfpm

suchi,

you made me laugh with this comment...

ill update soon..

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Shivika Agarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hmmm , a mysterious FF , am reading such type of FF 4 d first time , awesome starting waiting 4 next , plz pm me if possible😊

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow amazing prolouge yaar

so interesting and loved it...'

cont asap..😳

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow!

Really interesting concept Prena!

I can't wait to read more!

Do continue soon!

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Nikkisha Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Preru 🤗

New story key liye congo 🥳

First of all, I really liked ur story's name

Aakhir Pyar Hogaya 😳😳

Awww Raghu loves her so much 😳😳

Yeaahhh they are already married

Waitt 😲😲😲

What the hell, Antu wants to kill Raghu

Why, No, I mean preru 😭

Well I must say this is going to be interesting yar

Mein ro ya haso karo mein kya karo 😆😆

Damn I seriously cant wait for this chapter's update

Shocking story, yet rocking 😆

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abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Preru 🤗
New story key liye congo 🥳
First of all, I really liked ur story's name
Aakhir Pyar Hogaya 😳😳
Awww Raghu loves her so much 😳😳
Yeaahhh they are already married
Waitt 😲😲😲
What the hell, Antu wants to kill Raghu
Why, No, I mean preru 😭
Well I must say this is going to be interesting yar
Mein ro ya haso karo mein kya karo 😆😆
Damn I seriously cant wait for this chapter's update
Shocking story, yet rocking 😆

Nikki,

Ab Mystery toh aisa hi hoga na !!! Antu wants to kill Raghu due to her past.. Its a long story...

Title se hi story ka future ka hint milta hain 😉

I'll update soon..😊

Thanks..

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ifians
wow amazing prolouge yaar
so interesting and loved it...'
cont asap..😳

Thanks Ria !!

Really appreciate it.. 😊

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

PART 2 :

FLASHBACK (Twenty years ago)

Antara was quietly sitting next to Raghu making her painting . Raghu was making the painting of a flower while Antara was painting mountains,rivers,trees etc. "Raghu, tumhaari painting khatam ho gayi"asked the five year old Antara. "Haan,tumhaari ho gayi?"asked Raghu who too was five years old. "Haan , meri ho gayi. Tum apni dikhao!"said Antara. "Nahi, pehle tum dikhao"said Raghu. "Theek hain .. Yeh Dekho."said Antara handing over her sheet to Raghu."Arre Waah ! Yeh tumne itni sundar painting banayi hain"said Raghu. "Aur tum apni dikhao"said Antara. Raghu handed over his painting to Antara to which Antara exclaimed "Arre !! Yeh toh itni beautiful painting hain. Mujhse bhi acchi"said Antara ."Nahi Antara , tumne mujhse acchi banayi hain"said Raghu. "Nahi tumne"said Antara . And the two kept fighting over who made the better painting."Accha Raghu, main ek baat poochon?Jab hum bade ho jayenge , toh tab bhi hum best friends rahenge?"asked Antara ."Haan !! Hum to hamesha saath rahenge"said Raghu innocently. "Hamesha? "asked Antara. "Haan , hamesha ! Hum toh ek hi ghar mein rahenge"said Raghu. "Ek hi ghar mein hum kaise reh sakte hai Raghu?"asked Antara. "Arre, mere mummy papa bhi ek hi ghar mein rehte hain na !"said Raghu innocently. "Haan, hum mummy papa ki tarah ek hi ghar mein rahenge. Aur hum bahut masti karenge . Roz painting karenge, cartoon dekhenge, playground mein khelne jayenge.!!"said Antara. "Haan , bahut mazaa ayega"said Raghu.

FLASHBACK ENDS,

A lone tear escaped Antara's eyes. She had never imagined that she would want to kill Raghu, her best friend and now her husband. She has now been transformed into a cruel and witty girl who acted like she was in love with Raghu but in reality , just wanted to seek revenge from him. Destiny had been cruel to Antara. She has been wanting to seek revenge from Raghu , ever since she had turned ten years old. It was very sad that a young ten year old girl had to get into the world of manipulations, hatred, revenge and cruel plans instead of living her childhood with pure innocence.

PRECAP: "Antara , main office ke liye nikal raha hoon. Its a very important day. I have a meeting with a client and I can't be late"said Raghu. "Haan , par yeh chai toh pee ke jao"said Raghu. Raghu drank the tea too which his sight got blurred..:D

Kaise tha? Hopefully you liked it..

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

res😆

unres...

aww soo cute flashback of rantara...innocent kids...😳

bt at present...its far away from that..antara has changed..as her cildhood was full of hatred,revenge..!.😲.what happened in her childhood n y she wants to kill her? waiting for more..thanks for updating!😃

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