Part 6 on pg 16 !! FF : Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So another FF has come... This one is a complete MYSTERY based one.. Its not that simple and is way too complex. Warning pehle hi de rahi hoon 😆. The prologue itself will be confusing.

PROLOGUE :
"Antara, Antara, Antara !! Aaj main bahut khush hoon. Aaj haamari company ne ko ek bahut accha client mila hain."said Raghu hugging Antara from behind. "Hmm.. Isliye tum mere paas aa rahe ho . Warna toh mujhe janaab ne dekhna hi nahi hain"said Antara. "Oh please Antara. I don't think ki mujhe yeh batane ki zaroorat hain ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon. Irrespective of what situation I am in, I will always love you. Tum meri jaan ho Antara"said Raghu. "Maalum hain mujhe. Main toh bas tumhe tease kar rahi thi"said Antara. "Meri taang kheechne ki keemat tumhe chukaane padegi.."said Raghu smirking. "Accha? Kya chahiye tumhe?"asked Antara. "Ek kiss..."said Raghu winking. "Haaye raam !! Kitne badmaash ho gaye ho tum !"said Antara. "Excuse me !! Haq banta hai mera !! Tumhaara pati hoon main."said Raghu. "Raghu ,tum mere sirf pati nahi ho. Mere bachpan se best friend rahe ho.. Aur bachpan se main tumhe pyaar karti hoon. Aur jaha tak kiss ki baat hain. Woh maine tumhe bahut baar kiya hain. But you know what, I'll do it again"said Antara . Saying this she planted a soft kiss on Raghu's cheek making Raghu smile. "I love you Antara.."said Raghu. "I love you too Raghu. Tum jaake abhi so jao. Kal subah jaldi uthna hain na..."said Antara. "Jee madam. Jaise aapka hukum. Tum bhi aa jao jaldi.."said Raghu. "Haan bas mein paanch minute mein aati hoon"said Antara. After five minutes Antara went to her and Raghu's bedroom with something in her hand.. She saw Raghu sleeping peacefully and saw the knife in her hand. She raised the knife and was about to insert it in Raghu but then stopped herself from doing so. "Stop Antara . Control. You can't kill him now. You have to kill him later.. Usko completely barbaad karke you can kill him. Mr.Raghunath Naik , I hate you !! You have no idea on how much I hate you. One more thing, be prepared to get the worst out of life"Antara thought..

Ok. so I know you must be pretty confused .. Antara wants to kill Raghu and all... There's a big story behind that which will be soon disclosed. All I can say is that this FF is not at all similar to the show..
INDEX:
part 1 : pg 1
Part 2: pg 3
Part 3 pg 5
PART 4: pg 7
Part 5 : pg 9



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PurpleSunset thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG...
Are you trying to kill us with such a mysterious story???😆
Wow!...what a prologue!...i'm simply awestruck 👏👏👏
its mindblowing dear...👏
why Antara wants to kill Raghu????... reveal it soon 😃😃
pls update soon as I can't wait after reading the prologue😆
happy writing😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

OMG...

Are you trying to kill us with such a mysterious story???😆
Wow!...what a prologue!...i'm simply awestruck 👏👏👏
its mindblowing dear...👏
why Antara wants to kill Raghu????... reveal it soon 😃😃
pls update soon as I can't wait after reading the prologue😆
happy writing😳

Hey !! Thank you so much... I will update this asap..
Yeah..I know its mysterious. I myself am shocked with the concept of this story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a very unique and different concept prerna
i hope u give a happy ending to this
i am curious to know why she wants to kill him
is he really guilty and at fault ?
by any chance r u inspired by the show ISHQ KILLS ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what???????
m hell confused right now
why does she wanna kill him?
now please don't kill me and update this asap!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg whats dat
antara with knife 😲
n wants to kill raghu..oh God nw dats
sumthing different.. woww grt 👏
i m sure u gonna rock wid d stry
update soon dear..n thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

a very unique and different concept prerna

i hope u give a happy ending to this
i am curious to know why she wants to kill him
is he really guilty and at fault ?
by any chance r u inspired by the show ISHQ KILLS ?

Hey RIma ? No I don't watch that show 😆 But this is something else . Its about Antara's hidden past..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice prologue 😛
it was lovely at start 😃
rantara r married
But thn antu with knife
y does she wants to kill him 😕
do continue asap 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

what???????

m hell confused right now
why does she wanna kill him?
now please don't kill me and update this asap!!!

Yes Hina , I'll update it 😆. Why she wants to kill him is related to Antara's past..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

omggg whats dat
antara with knife 😲
n wants to kill raghu..oh God nw dats
sumthing different.. woww grt 👏
i m sure u gonna rock wid d stry
update soon dear..n thanks

Hey , thanks..
I know the story is confusing but thats the theme..:D

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