Part 6 on pg 16 !! FF : Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya..

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

How are you so hilarious ? You manage to make me laugh everytime.. Antara apni pati ke khoon ki pyaasi 🤣. Thodi der ruk ja, hamara Raghu uska dil chura lega 😉

aww thats good always keep smiling...😃

phir ye song bhi gayega jab use pta cahlega ki antu wants to kill him.."o meri jaana le leke..meri jaan..."kitna try karegi..main nhi marne wala...🤣..i am waiting for that day..when antu too fall in love with him "truly"❤️😳

Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Antara is quite smart, I must say!

Awesome update! Continue soon and thanks for the pm! (:

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I am HELL FRUSTRATED.. I wrote this update two time but each time I am about to post it I accidentally press the backspace button and all my data gets lost. I HATE THIS !! IM SO ANGRY.

Hopefully I am sucessfull this time

FLASHBACK:
She was stunned. Her mom just slapped her instead of believing her . "Ma , mujhe stomach pain ka naatak karna pada tha. I wanted you to escape from Naik uncle as he wants to kill you. I overheard him on the phone."said a ten year oldAntara crying. "Antara, tumhe pata hain na ki tum kiske baare mein baat kar rahi ho?He's your favorite Naik uncle.He's your best friend Raghu's father."said Ashok. "Papa mujhe pata hain. Even I loved him alot na. Main jhoot kyun bolungi?"said Antara. "Tumhaari wajah se we had to follow you by running behind you like a crazy person into this isolated dark parking lot'said Geeta.. "Mumma , I had to run away from the restaurant or you would never leave. Please trust me. Naik uncle told someone on the phone that he is going to kill you both and take me to Mumbai. He said that he will take me along because he loves me a lot and treats me like his daughter ,but he will kill you both"cried Antara. Geeta gave Antara a tight slap. "Badtameez"Geeta said. "Khabardar agar Antara ko haath lagaya toh!"said Hirish Naik. "Naik uncle"Antara gasped. "What the hell do you mean?"said Ashok . He pointed his gun towards Ashok. "Antara beta tu jaa yaha se."said Geeta . "Nahi mumma main aapko chod ke nahi jaoongi"said Antara. Before any more conversation occurred Hirish shot both Geeta and Ashok leaving them dead. "Antara beta tu yaha se chal. Hume koi dekhna nahi chahiye. Tu apne mumma papa ki phikar mat kar. Main Hoon na. Aaj se main , tum aur Raghu ek hi ghar mein rahenge.Bahut mazaa karenge. Mumbai mein hamaara bahut bada ghar hoga'said Hirish. Antara was disgusted. She knew that she was a kid but she wasn't that kiddish that she would choose over greed than her parents. She also knew that Hirish was a well-known respected businessman . If she told the truth , no one would believe her. "God , give me the strength to kill this man.. I better wait now. I better wait for seeking fruitful revenge"Antara thought having tears in her eyes.."Chal beta , hum ghar se Raghu ko pick karke airport ke liye nikalte hain"said Hirish. Hirish loved Antara alot. He had been with her ever since she was born. But she now hated him. She too love him once upon a time and she loved spending time with Raghu too. But now, its all over !! She had to go with Hirish because she knew that there was no way he was going to leave her.

AT THE AIRPORT :

"How dare you?"said Raghu giving a tight slap to Antara. Antara was shocked that her very own best friend didn't believe her. "Mere papa pe itna ghatiya blame kaise daala tumne"said a ten year old Raghu angrily. Antara understood that even Raghu was not going to believe her. "Im sorry. Main mazaak kar rahi thi"said Antara. "What the hell ! Yeh kaisa mazaak hain. You dragged me to the corner where no one could see us to tell me this"said Raghu. "Sorry bola na maine."said Antara. "Accha theek hain. I forgive you. You know why? Coz your my best friend"said Raghu giving Antara a tight hug. Antara hugged him back with tears in her eyes and her heart full of hatred..

PRESENT:
Antara was crying her heart in her room while Raghu comes back to consciousness. He goes to her room and sees her cring"Kya hua Antara?"he asked worryingly. He cups her face and automatically starts crying . He can't see he crying like this.. "Mere yeh chlorofoam waale incident se pareshaan ho gayi thi na.. Dekjh Antara, hamaari family kaaphi rich hain na ,isliye aise incidents hote rahenge. Chor logo ka toh yeh ghar feast hain"said Raghu . Antara who tried to come back to her senses hugged him . "Tumhaare saath jo hua, woh mere hi wajah se toh tha idiot !"thought Antara

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HoneyLemon28

@HoneyLemon28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

yay! Me 1st!!!

Awsum update dear
Antara has such a daravna past.
Her Uncle whom she loved so mch Killed her parents thats really heart breaking
N evn Raghu didnt beliv her
Poor Antara suffered a lot paar aab Revenge ki baari hai!
Bt wat will happn aftr she falls in luv wid Raghu? Uske baad bhi woh badla legi?? Will Raghu 4giv hr???
Ohh plz Prerna continue jaldi jaldi
N i kno wat it feels whn ur update gets deleted... It also happnd 2 me 2day!

Anyways Love u yaar
-Niki ❤️

Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

thats called a dhansoo update...

so thats the reason of antara;s hatred.. raghu's dad killed antara's parents and kept her with them.

and now antu was taking revenge on her...

still so many mysteries to be revealed..

why raghu's dad killed them but not antara... there muct be a reason behind that...

waiting for next update

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

omg so this was the reason

but raghu is really innocent

antara is so illogical and immature

i did not understand why the uncle killed her parents

excellent awesome update

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

omggg what ws dat raghus father killed
antaras mom n dad 😡 poor antara she had nobody
by her side 😭 nt even raghu her bff 😔 hmmm
bt y Mr. Naik did dat? anyways a nixe update prerna 👏
update sooln vl be waiting n thanks
tkcr

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: rima4ever
omg so this was the reason
but raghu is really innocent
antara is so illogical and immature
i did not understand why the uncle killed her parents
excellent awesome update

Thanks Rima,

Raghu is innocent.

How did u find Antara illogical? Elaborate.. 😆

Why her uncle killed her parents will be revealed

-Prerna

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gargi21

@gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

awesome update prerna...

wat a past poor antara has...

feeling really sad for her..

but she should not take revenge from raghu.. he didn't do anything just refused to believe it..

😒 bechara raghu...

but am i right in thinking dat antara is actually feeling bad for spoiling raghu's meeting???

she is realising her mistake???is she developing feelings for raghu??😛

update soon...😊

Edited by gargi21 - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

so thats the reason behind antara's hatred towards raghu n his family!!😲

its so sad yr.😭.his parents killed her parents in front of her eyes😡..n takes her with him!😲!..what 's the reason behind this murder?...he has done this deliberately or he was compeled?

ab aisa koi karega to koi bhi revenge lega hi...😈

its .very interesting story dear.😛.

precap is nice n emotional

tfpm n continue soon😊