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Posted: 11 years ago
Antara ne store room mein aag lagaane ki plan banaayi aur kajal phas gayi jammed door ke wajah se. Usse bachaane ke chakkar mein Antara ko aag lagaayi aur ICU mein hai. Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5:
Mystery continues...who's helping Antu...???...🤔...
lol...it may sound silly...but i remmberd green chutney ( pudhina ) wen i read green saari...i think it came in a flow..aftr reading samosa...😆...
ab yeh kaajal di kaun hai..???......😕...

OMG...END toh thrilling ...RaNtara in ICU...
...Waiting for the next parts...superb update...👏...


congo prerna...on turning Goldie...👏...😃...
Edited by RaNtara4vr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Part 5:

Mystery continues...who's helping Antu...???...🤔...
lol...it may sound silly...but i remmberd green chutney ( pudhina ) wen i read green saari...i think it came in a flow..aftr reading samosa...😆...
ab yeh kaajal di kaun hai..???......😕...

OMG...END toh thrilling ...RaNtara in ICU...
...Waiting for the next parts...superb update...👏...


congo prerna...on turning Goldie...👏...😃...

Pudhina...!!!LOL !!! Lagta samosa aur saree ka double effect ho gaya hain tujhpe..
Thanks ...alot !!
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey all,
Updating this after a long time.. I have Kyunki tumhiho and Tere ishq main huyi awaari also..Its so difficult to manage multiple ffs at a time.. Hats off to the writers who have been doing it coz I am not able to do it !! So here I am with this update... I plan to update kyunki tumhi ho tomorrow and tere Ishq main huyi awaari dayafter.. till then enjoy this...
PART 6 :
"Antara theek toh hain na...?"Kaajal said.. "I have a feeling that she will recover. Alot of smoke has gone into her due to which she fell unconscious.. The smoke was poisonous and she is on a ventillator now.. But her husband , Mr.Raghunath is really critical.. His entire right arm has been burnt along with some of his body parts.. We can't assure you about his stability"said the doctor.. Just then a man dressed in a businesss suit entered.. "Kaise hain mera beta aur meri bahu..??"said Mr.Naik.. "They are unconscious...Aap ke bete ke baare mein kuch kaha ni jaa sakta"said the doctor.. "Listen doctor, meri bahu aur bete ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.. I'll give you a blank cheque , fill in whatever amount you want.. But save them"said Mr.Naik. Kajal glared at Mr.Naik.. She seemed disgusted and had eyes full of hatred which went unnoticed by Mr.Naik.. "Tum kaun ho??"Mr. Naik asked her.. "Jee woh main Antara ki dost hoon. I had come to meet her when I found about her being admitted"said Kaajal.. "Tumhaara naam kya hain beta?"Mr.Naik asked. "Piya .."said Kaajal.. "Piya beta, all we can do is pray for your friend and my son.."Mr.Naik said.. "All I can do is pray for your torturous death"mumbled Kaajal.. "Kuch kaha tumne?"he asked.. "Maine kaha that I agree.. Our prayers will save them"said Kaajal...
After a few hours:
The doctors came out.. "Mr.Naik, we managed to save Antara.. She has regained consciousness. We are still working on Raghu and we hope to save him too"said the doctor.. "Doctor? Can I meet my friend?"asked Kaajal.. "Yeah sure, but I think even Mr.Naik would want to meet her?"asked the doctor.. "Its ok.. Antara ko abh iski zaroorat hogi.. Go Piya beta.. I'll meet her after you..."he said.. Kaajal went inside her room.. She instantly started crying.. "Kaha tha na tujhe pagli ki tu waha se bhaag ja.. Phir bhi tune meri jaan bachayi aur khud ko ... (cries) .. Tujhe pata hain meri jaan nikal gayi thi.. Tujhe kuch ho jaata toh.. Main kya karti...?? Hum dono ne decide kiya tha na ki hum Naik khandaan ko saath mein barbaad karenge"cried Kaajal.. "Woh chodo , Kaajal di, mujhe sirf itna yaad hain ki mujhe bahut ghutan ho rahi thi and I think I fell unconscious.. But after that what had happened. How am I still alive?"Antara asked feebly.. "Raghu ne tujhe bachaya.."Kaajal said.. "Kya?? Kahan hain Raghu??"asked Antara. "He's in the ICU.. Uspe ek burnt rack gir gaya.. His hand has been completely burnt and he has fallen unconscious.."said Kaajal.. "WHAT ??????"screamed Antara. She felt her eyes moistening.. "Antara, tu roh rahi hain.. You should be happy that he saved your life and he is suffering.. You wanted him to suffer along with Mr.Naik na...?Emotions mein mat doob Antara.. Tujhe badla lena hain.. You are supposed to give them both so much of pain before they die.. You are supposed to act like slow poison.."said Kaajal.. "He bl**dy well saved my life risking his.. How can I do this to him??"Antara asked.. "Antara , you dare say that... This is just the beginning..."Kaajal said.. Moments of their past flashed before Antara... Their childhood together, their laughs.. FLASHBACK : "Antara mujhe yeh nahi khelna .. Yeh sirf girls khelti hain.Main toh boy hoon na..."said Raghu.. "Raghu please. Your my best friend na.."said a seven year old Antara. "Theek hain Antara .. Tere liye kuch bhi.. I'll play with this Barbie also"said Raghu ..
PRESENT : Antara smiled remembering their cute bond.. "Sach kaha Raghu.. Mere liye kuch bhi..."Antara said.. "Antara kaha kho gayi. I've got a feeling that you are falling for Raghu which will create a very big problem for us both"said Kaajal. "Di, mujhe nahi pata mujhe kya ho raha hain.. I just need to see Raghu.."said Antara. She took out the needle from her vein which was connected to the bottle which gave her glucose.. "Antara yeh kya kar rahi hain??"Kaajal asked.. Antara just ignored her and ran out of the room.. The nurse saw her and exclaimed. "Aap kahi jaa nahi sakti !! Aapko aaram ki zaroorat hain..."... Antara then peeped in through the window and saw Raghu kying unconscious.. She felt tears streaming through her eyes.. She wasn't supposed to feel bad as this is what she had wanted but her heart ached...!!
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres...
really heart touching update...😭
Raghu is on ICU but antara recovered..
she was feeling bad though she wanted to harm him...
now it's just the starting of turnover..
loved this..
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

res

unres...
really heart touching update...😭
Raghu is on ICU but antara recovered..
she was feeling bad though she wanted to harm him...
now it's just the starting of turnover..
loved this..

You are absolutely correct !!!
Its just the starting of a turnover ...😊
Thank you so much ..
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago

kuch to hua hai..kuch ho gaya hai...😉

yes.!!..antu feeling..kuch kuch for raghu😳..but haan her sis is just like a crab..she want her to be like her!...😡

raghu's condition is critical..but sadda hero hai...hero ko to theek hona hi hai...😎

thanks fr updating preru ji!🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
Really heart touching update Loved it
Pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Prerna This update was ultra fabulous ...loved it so so much ...Antra tried hard to hate Raghu but whn he was actually injured n unconscious she couldnt take it ...streams of tears ran down her cheeks ..making her feel pain for him ...she cant deny she loves him with her entire being ...she didnt know this or still didnt realise this ...she wd die if anything happens to raghu ...
wonderful update Prenra ...👏👏👏 intensely written n described ...
waiting for the next part ...don delay this time too long ...please ..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update preru
But really feeling very bad for Raghu he is still in ICU
Raghu ki aise hallat dekh kar Antara pigal rehe hai hope usse jald sab samaj ajaye 😕
Continuee soon 🤗

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