Part 6 on pg 16 !! FF : Aakhir Pyaar ho gaya.. - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

all the best for ur exams dear...😃

will wait for ur update :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Np preru ji hum apke update ka wait kareygy 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Suchi,
I'll give you a clue abt the precap !! The cage protecting the small organ, has a member with good thinking..😉
Acchi tarah kyun rakha hua hain aur uske parents ko kyun maara, all a mystery.
BTW , PANCHU aur meri khabrilaal kaha hain?😕

ohkay...i got it little bit..😉.but don't want to think more..meri excitement khatam na hojaye...hehehe.😆..i am enjoying ur story!😳

thanks...😊

sorry fr that dear..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
no problem prerna..
take ur time...
all d best fr ur exam dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
what a mindboggling story Prerna ...i am loving it so much .. ...i just found this stpory suddenly and started reading ...and oMG in every update there was a shock ...wonderfully written ...i love dark suspense thriller ...and uparse this is also a love story ...wow wow wow ... splendid
awesome . i read the all updates all in one go today 😃
cont soon and pm me please ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

NOTE:

Hey guys,
Sorry I haven't been updating.
Woh kya hain na yeh exams mujhe chain se jeene nahi dete 😆
But im gonna update this Saturday .
Saturday Saturday !! Kardi rehndi hain Kudi Saturday Saturday !!
Stay tuned for big twists...
Im gonna make my comeback sooonnn...!!!
-Prerna
PS. Love u all for ur support 😊

All the best for ur exams Prerna. We all wait for Saturday
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
i will wait for saturday
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
good luck with ur exams
same pinch here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All the best for your exams! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 5

The police case was filed and the investigation was on.. But the case was not solvable.. Who would want to destroy Raghunath Naiks life?? He was so generous and didn't have any dushmani with anyone...Antara was very clever, taking advantage of Raghu's love she took big risks in playing the game.. If only it would have been someone else, Raghu would have doubted that person.. He just had blind faith on Antara...
Now Antara was back with a new master plan..."Haan, aaj shaam chaar baje.. Do not be late... Main nahi chahti ki tu koi bhi galti kare..Be careful..I'll meet you outside Naik Enterprises .. You will easily get entry as you will enter with me and I am Raghu's wife.. I'll tell the security that you are my friend.. Uske baad , you burn the damn building completely from the storage room. I'll tell you where it is.. I will be in Raghu's cabin giving him some home-made snacks. Before the fire gets explosive, get out of there. Be sure to come in a Burkha... Covering each and every part of your skin, except for your eyes..."said Antara. "Tu chinta mat kar main kar loongi"said the girl on the other line...She immediately cut the phone and was ready to execute her plan..She quickly made samosas and packed it for Raghu... She put on a green saree with light make up looking elegant..Travelling in her car ,she reached the gate of Naik Enterprises where she found a girl standing in a Burkha.. The security guard was standing in front of both of the girls.. "Kya Antara, kabse wait kar rahi hoon. Tu hain ki aati hi nahi. Plan ke hisaab se tu apne patidev ko snacks-vacks dene ke baad mere saath shopping aayegi..Par tu hain ki abhi se hi itna late kar diya...Tere bhi kya ajeeb demands hain..Patidev ko ghar ke garam garam samose khilaane hain"giggled the Burkha girl.. The security guard was listening to the conversation. When Antara approached towards the gate the guard said "Salaam Madam" and saluted her. Afterall she was the wife of the owner of the company... She smiled and went with her friend with no one doubting her..On entering the company ,Antara whispered in her ear "Sambhal ke.. Once you leave the room text me saying that you left.."said Antara... The girl nodded secretly went to the store room where no one was present...On the other hand Antara went into Raghu's cabin .."Hello Mr.Handsome"she said with a smile. "Arre tum.."he said happily.. "Tumhare liye garma-garam samose layi hoon."she said smilingly. "Kyaa baat hain.. Meri itni seva"he said with a smirk. "Jiska pati itna cute ho.. uski seva kaun nahi karega "she said. "Bas deliver karne aayi thi ... Ab meri delivery ka task khatam aur main ghar jaati hoon"she said. "Kya Antara.. Mat jao na.."said Raghu. "Oh hello, yeh tumhaara office hain.. Tumhe yaha apni biwi ke saath romance nahi balki kaam karna. Main jaati hoon warna patah chale tum aaj koi kaam hi na karo"she said laughing. "Hmm.. Abhi ke liye jaane de raha hoon .Par ghar aakar nahi chodunga"he said winking... Antara smiled but inside she was hell worried.. Why didn't she receive any text yet...Why???? Suddenly both Antara and Raghu smelt smoke.. "Itna dhua kyun hain idhar..?"Antara asked.. "Patah nahi.. Main bahar jaake dekhta hoon.."said Raghu.. Antara knew her task was done.. But she hadn't received any text yet. "Yeh ladki ne mujhe abhi tak text kyun nahi kiya?"thought Antara. Within no time the store room was set on fire and it had started to spread throughout the building. Antara wanted to just check once whether the girl had gotten out of the store room or not..She quickly escaped from the crowd who was screaming due to the fire and headed towards the storeroom only to find the door jammed. She looked through the window to find a girl stuck in the fire.. "Kajal di !!"Antara gasped.. Antara immediately took a plant vase kept nearby and tried breaking the window.. After various attempts she finally succeeded. "Antara, tu jaa yaha se .. Tujhe kuch nahi hona chahiye"said Kajal.. "Nahi di.. Main aapko nahi chodke jaa sakti.."said Antara. Without even thinking once , she jumped into the room lit by fire through the window.. "Antara , tu paagal ho gayi hain... Jaa yaha se"said Kajal. "Chup Chaap mere saath aao..."said Antara. "Darwaaza jam kaise ho gaya"said a panicked Antara. "Patah nahi.. Par tujhe yaha nahi aana chahiye tha. You broke the window , I could have come myself.."said Kajal. "Abhi timewaste mat karo. Aap jao"said Antara.. "Main jaati hoon par pehle tu jaa."said Kajal. :Di, aapka yaha se bhaagna mere se zyaada important hain.. Main yaha rahoongi toh koi nahi mujhe doubt karega.. Par aapko log doubt kar sakte hain. If not for my sake, at least for our goal's sake .. GO !!!!! PLEASE GO!"Antara said. "Immediately come out after me"said Kaajal. She had a very tough time crossing the fire but eventually went out with Antara's help and jumped out of the window... "Antara , bahar aa..."she said... Antara tried her best to come out .. The moment she would move the fire flame would get more violent.. "Di , main aati hoon . AAP JAO !! NO ONE SHOULD SEE YOU !! ESCAPE THROUGH THE MIDDLE OF THE CROWD"said Antara.. "Main nahi jaa sakti tujhe chodke"said Kajal. "Jao !! Papa aur mumma ke liye ... Jao "said Antara. Kaajal was heart-broken but left for her mumma and papa's sake taking a promise from Antara that Antara would come out safely.. Antara on the other hand was still stuck.. She wasn't able to move. She got trapped in her own plan.. The smoke was suffocating her. She wasn't able to breath... Soon she collapsed on the ground...
On the other hand the entire building was evacuated and the fire-brigade had been called... Raghu was outside thinking that Antara had also left the building but to his surprise he didn't find her anywhere. He went to the security guard and asked her "Antara kaha hain?". "Sahab , woh bahar abhi tak nahi aayi"said the security. "Kyaa??"said a shocked Raghu. Without thinking he entered the building again .."Sahab rukh jayiye. Andar mat jayiye"the security shouted. Raghu entered the burning building and searched madly for Antara. He then happened to see a broken window..He went near it and saw Antara lying on the floor with a part of her clothes on fire..."ANNNTTAARRRAAA"he shouted.. He jumped through the window and entered the room. He took of her saari as it was half-burned.. He had inhaled enough of the poisonous smoke making him suffocate but he managed to carry Antara.. The fire fighters soon came and they jumped inside the room . Raghu quickly handed Antara to them so they could take her safely. Before he could move out , a part of the burnt rack fell on his arm,injuring him badly...

Precap : Rantara in ICU...

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