**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 83

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 24

Raghu was hell confused after hearing Antu's harshful words aur uparse Antu ki diary ne Raghu ki vaat lagaadi.

Tht was funny when Raghu said saale angrez chalegaye aur angrezi chod gaye. Ajji ko shaq hogaya hain ki Raghu Antu ko ghoor raha tha

Rhea toh badi badmaash nikli aur pyaari bhi. She wanted to talk to Antu abt her bua & uncle's death. I loved the bonding btw Antu & Rhea

Raghu saw his name written in Antu's diary & he thought something else

Raghu phirse Antu ko imagine karnelaga aur Antu toh Raghu ko itne paas aagayi. Haayee ye sach nahi hosakta kya

Raghu ko jaldi yaad dilaado ki Antu ke dil main kya hain aur usse itne nafrat kyu karti hain

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 25

Finally Antu ne apna saara dard Rhea se share kiya. Thank God Rhea is so understanding. She understood Antu's situation & was there to console Antu. Rhea was shocked to hear tht Raghu is the reason behind Antu's parents death.

Antu diary doondnelagi aur vo nahi mila. Then she realized tht diary might have fell in naik sadan aur vo uss daayan ke ghar jaane ki risk liya

Raghu mia Antu ke khaabon ko khogaye the aur neend unse door bhaag rahi thi. Tabi he saw his angel walking in naik sadan

I loved the encounter between Raghu & Antu. Antu toh Raghu se darti hi nahi. Pin chubaadiya Raghu ko aur Raghu ka ouch😆😆😆

Par Raghu bhi kam nahi hain pakad liya Antu ko aur Antu madam jangli billi bankar Raghu ko haathon ko nochliya. Kya yaar Antu itni violent kyu hojaati ho Raghu par. Raghu kiss karnewaala tha Antu ko?😉😉😉 Par ye jhansi ki rani toh😆😆😆

Ye manohar kaka chain se sonahi sakte kya aur upar se kaajal di dukaan ko bhi utaadiya

Antu ghabraagayi par Raghu haina usse chup karaane keliye😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ifians

IMP NOTE:

guys... for some few days i am having a very much insecure feeling which i really need to share with you all...

i think i am lacking confidence to cont this FF... because i have such a huge guts feeling that people are not liking the concept of this story and not at all interested about it... don't get it in wrong way... i don't have any intentions to hurt anyone... i am just asking what i feel... i know this is not the easy going story like always i used to write... it has some dark story type feeling upto some extent.. also the story is going through such depressing and painful phase currently which people may not take easily, such depressing monotonous things are hard to bear or read, that i know... but the thing is that i can't avoid this sad and depressing phase as it is already a pre-planned story and i can't change the fact right now.. cause the whole construction would be broken down if i made changes to plot... but surely this story won't be sad and depressing always... that i can promise you... but for future.. i have to take the story through this sad phase... i really can't ignore it...

but i think people are not in ease with the dark and sad phase of this story right now... cause i am getting such a little response now a days(though i pmed lot of people everyday even day to everyone)... i don't mind at all... i don't think of myself of that much height that i will get heaps of massages everyday for something like this.. i know my capabilities... i know i am not at all such a good praiseworthy professional writer... i am even happy with little response i get or i don't even mind criticism at all... but the thing which i was saying is also true... some people don't give replys.. its okay with me... cause i know they might be busy... they will give it later... some people reserved the posts... but even after passing a full week i don't see the particulate reserved post is being unresed... please don't get me wrong again.. i am not at all angry with anyone or trying to hurt anyones feeling... all people have their own life their busy schedule... but even after such a long time of one weeks, two weeks when i doesn't get replys it really makes me think that people re loosing interest of my story as i am making a crap out of the concept... i am messing up everything and making it so much depressing that its creating pressure in peoples mind and tey are not able to bear such crap things, ... so the result is.. people loosing interest in the story.

I know that i am not at all a professional writer and concept of this story is so much twisting. to carry forward this kinds of themes u need to have experience and professional minds which i doesn't have at all... so i am afraid that my decision is wrong to take such a challenging concept and dare to post that

please don't mind my words... i am saying it again that i am not intended to hurt anyone,, it was just my insecurities which i really needed to share with people... cause such thoughts are lacking my confidence.. i am not at all able to write further for such thoughts which are roaming my mind now a days... and i think when readers are not at all interested in this story then why should i continue it further.. better i discontinue this one... cause if i cont.. the story has to go through some sad phase (which will surely end.. its not like that it will keep going and going), but how can i cont when people are lacking interest on it... i am so much depressed thinking about this for some days...

i am just here to ask u a little question... that what should i do?!!... should i continue the story... is people are interested to read further?!!... if people feels that it is not at all interesting them please let me know... cause then it would be easier for me to decide...

Now its up to you that should i cont it or leave it...

and lastly again i am sorry from the bottom of my heart if i am hurting anyone with my thoughts. u all are like my second family and i love u all... i don't mind anything form u guys... criticism, small praise.. i accept everything with my heart... but seeing the reserved post for days after days and not getting any response and also the less no of reviews it really makes me feel that its not at all suitable story to cont further... its just my thought... i am again saying sorry if i hurt anyone... i am not intended to do that... but please let me know the clear cut honest answers of all

Now the fate of the story depends upon you people and ur decision...

Originally posted by: Ajju15s

Oye hoye kya dhamakedar update thi riu..hayee may marjava...😳
1st part was emotional..finally antu ne apney dil ka haal kisiko bataya...rhea kitni understanding hai..i LV this girl yaar..

ha ha thx😆.. sometimes it happens naa.. we think of our siblings as little but actually sometimes they really behave mature to our surprise..😳
Cornel uncle ne blast ke baare mein evidence doondne ki bahot try ki thi bt us kajal ki dukaan ne kitni chalaki se saare evidence khatam kar diye yaar..😡
Meney socha nahi tha woh itni dangerous hogi...😲

woo too hain dangerous yaar... issi liye to antu koo yee kadam uthana para... everyone is asking that why antu was not telling raghu truth.. zara socho agar iss waqt raghu ko sachaayi pata chali kya woo believe kar payega... ussey antu kee liye just feeling ati hain.. par woo feeling utni bhi strong nahin hain joo uss key DM ke liye devotion koo overcome kar sake.. and aalso antara knew very well kii agar DM ko bhanak bhi pari us key motive kii too sabkuch grbar hoo jayega aur woo bachekhuche sabut bhi mita degi.. iss liye she didn't wanna reveal the trusth for now.. cause DM is very very dangerous..
Antu apni diary bag mein na dekhkar kar ho gayi pareshan..aur usney diary wapas lane ke liye dayan ke kile mein jaane ka plan banaya..oyee hoyee..jhansi ki rani..😆

😆Jhansi ki rani...
Achha huaa guards log talli ho gaye..

Guards logo ko pata hain.. why fear when raghubhai is here😉.,.,chalo talli hoo ke soo jate hain.😆
Antu ne kitna smartly raghu ki balkany mein entry maari..
Yahan mr.raghu antu ki yaad mein khoye hue the aur yahan antu uske saamney khud hi chal kar aagayi..antu raghu ko ghoor rahi hai ki woh jaag raha hai ki nahi yeh dekh ke raghu ko kuch kuch honey laga..oye hoye..😉

Khayalo see bahar aa kar koi insaan jab tumhare saamne aa jayein tab kuch kuch too hoga hii..😆
Raghu ne apni lyf mein itni cute chorni dekhi ni hogi isliye woh khusi ke maare kuch bol hi ni paaya..hehe.

LOL😆
Raghu ko apney piche dekh ke hi antu ke hosh urr gaye..aur phir shuru huaa mera 3ps...hayee..😳
Isse romantic kusti aaj tak ni dekhi...

romantic kusti!! 🤣
you literally blew my mind, i could imagine the whole scene in front of me tooo cute Yaa..Raghu's way of speaking made my heart skip a beat..may marjava...nd u described Antara so welll...👏
Antu ko dekh ke raghu ko pata nahi kya kya karney ka dil kar raha tha...
Mr.raghu control ni kar paa rahe the aur kiss karney jaa rahe tey...bt ruk gaye...i wish kar liya hota...bt baad mein antu use chorti nahi.. 🤣

Ohh god... tum log bhi naa bas KISS kee piche pare huye hoo...🤣
Antu ne apni pin raghu ke haath mein chubha dii..😡ouch...
raghu to Loveria mein pagal ho gaya hai..usko antu ka anger aur irritation bhi beautiful Laney laga hai...
Yeh kyaa antu ne apne nails se raghu ke haatho ko nauch liya..😲mr.raghu ko aaya gussa..thn haaye mera 3ps..scene ..ufff ...what an intensity yaar..😉

They are firecrackers after all⭐️. intensity kaa dukan🤣
Kyaa yaar yeh kaka,more or less aur kajal ki dukaan ko abhi entry maarna tha..😡

woo to humesha galat time pe hi entry lete hain yaar
Ab aagey kya hoga..am so eager to kw..
Thanks for pm dear..u r making me restless now with ur each n evry mindblowing updates ...jaldi update karna.
Lovely banner dear..
Haila meine to puri os likh daali...
Thanks for updating riu...hugs dear 🤗...lv yaa..😊

Originally posted by: pampz

Huh ...!!!!! i should hv learnt few more new wonderful adjectives to praise u properly and justifiably for this update !!!! BUT alas i couldnt find better words or adjectives ...

yaar bas kar.. tere reply parna suru karte hi mujhe blushing ati hain..😆

so straight am coming on the update and am describing how devastatingly am affected by your update!!! ...the first half was excruciating and wonderful as usual ...and the last half just taken away my breaths...taking me in a different kind of lala land giving me full on wild hot sensations overall...only you can can create this Riyu my darling !!!! ...

Arey thamba yaar vampu.. control... maine ais ky alikh diya jii tujpe aisa effect hoo gaya?!!😆

But thank you darling.. ur coments really made my day...😳

i loved againg and fallen hard again in love with Raghunath by his wild yet childish and fatally charming actions with ANtara ...hahah i loved how Raghu enjoyed each and every second of captivating Antara in his iron hold ...feeling her enormously ignoring her every denial every mad wiggle and outrage.

Oye hoye yaar pampu. I just love this thing so much.. the way u described raghu.. even in this small reply...marjawan yaar.. yee talent sirf tujhmein hain yaar aur kissi mein hain..👏

Bravo Ria ...u hv again blown my mind so furiously that its hard now to find it out again from this universe...i don know i wd love u hug u you or complain u for doing THIS to me ...i think am loving u more n more n more for this my dear Riyu

Arey jaldi see jake apni mid ko wapas dhund kee laa.. bina mind kee bahut problem hoo jati hain yaar😆

sorry am getting late in reviewing evereytime ...as u know what am going thru ...u can understand how excrutiating the feeling is ...and top of it bearing all of yours silent anger for not updating my parts ...am so sorry for all of these things ...i hope u bear me a bit more ...till then bye and love u with all my being .

Arey koi baat nahin yaar.. we understand..🤗