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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

aadhi pagal to main banner dekhke hi hogai..aur aadhi teri update read karke hogai...yr tu kya cheez hai?..kya khati hai tu?...update was exxttrraaa mindblowling!!!!!...first meeting was sooo good i can't express in words how much i loved this update!!!...

and taht bondhlu!!...what a name?..antu was so bored...n raghu interrupts in her matter...that was amazing!!..bt the last scene threatened.

very very very nice update..this is for u..enjoy!!!..*hugs*

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

reading the last two updates in one go ... sorry for my late comment ...

dear Riya ...again it was a mindboggling update ... i just gt mesmerised and hipnotised by this update ...wonderful splendid👏👏👏👏👏

first meeting of Rantara is soo sooo different ...never ever seen or read this kinda story yaar ... bravo ...u r super talented and the best writer of this forum ...not only forum yaar ...if u publish ur stories u r gonna be praised and admired by half of the world at least ...u hv this capability yaar ...

u wrote it with such a pace and lucid manner...each n everything came in front of my eyes live ...when evr i read ur stories ...i get to watch Rantara ... double dhamaka ...😃⭐️

and i loved this... loved this ...loooved this update so sooo sooo much ... Raghu was so eager to know her name and the way he asked her name ...Haiii Riya tune mujhe mar hi dala ...it was perfect raghulicious way ...i just felt Raghu could do exactly the same thing as u described in ur story...awesome awesome awesome ...

the way bomb blust happened ...the timing ...the scenario ...the events and the situation is more than perfect ... Ria u r awesome ...

i love u dear ... God bless u and keep on writing always ...😃

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Ria,
This was just amazing!!
Yay! Rantara met!!
He is so keen on knowing her name!!so cute
RAGHU!! I love his knowing english lines!!!
Update soon!

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

one more thing i loved ur looong update ...aisehi long updates mereko chahiye ...i odn want short updates ...plzzz plzzz plzzz yaar ...maaan meri baat ...hamesha long updates deti reh aur kuch cut mat karna yaar ...😃

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: pampz
one more thing i loved ur looong update ...aisehi long updates mereko chahiye ...i odn want short updates ...plzzz plzzz plzzz yaar ...maaan meri baat ...hamesha long updates deti reh aur kuch cut mat karna yaar ...😃

meri vampu aaa gayi...

vampu lagta hain mujhse kabhi short update hoga hi nahi... jab bhi main update karne baith ti hoon... long ho jata hain...🤣

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

I'm so sorry once again...

Gosh! I missed two updates of this story.

Loved Antara's Pov...

truly defining her state .

Antara tried to escape but got hurt and again she was saved by Raghu who loves her unconditionally.

loved Rantara's first meeting...something different from the usual ones..

totally mindblowing one

loved the way Raghu asked for her name.😳

and finally bomb blast happened...omg...you nailed this one 👏👏👏

can't wait to read more.

i'm definitely loving it baby.

do update soon sweetheart..

your updates are worth waiting for.

love ya 😳

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Afy10

@Afy10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Awesome update
antu went to meet d guy 😕 he was so boring bhondu 😆
Aliya Amir r really funny nd good friends 😆
Rantara met 😳 antu saved raghu frm falling 😆
raghu mesmerized by her beauty nd forgot his anger 😃
pratim nd antu went out tht pritam 😡 said bad abt antu
raghu got angry 😛 poor antu was almost sleepy bcoz of tht pratim 😆
Loved d way raghu asked her name nd rantara moments 😳
but d part bomb was for mr.mansukhani 😕 nd poor antu loses her family 😭
unknowingly raghu kept it 😭 ab kya hoga
Dm 😡
continue soon.
Thnx for pm 😊

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: niki28
U write such fab chapters, which r really a treat 2 read bt yeah saddha hua end mein A/N kyu dalti hai? Dat ur update is nt gud? Aur jutte chappal ki batte kyu karti hai? Itne pasand hai kya???

Cuming bck 2 d update it ws amazing! Rantara 1st meet! ^_^ Yippee...
U wrote sumthing diffrnt! Loved it!!!
Not Raghu bt Antu saved him frm falling.. 😆
Aliya n Amir r really crazy n d bestest BFFs.
N thank God woh bhondu ka kissa khatam ho gaya! -_-'
1st Rantara convrsatn ws awsum! ^_^ Antu splashed water on his face...
N bechara Raghu ws still mesmrised by her beauty.
D end ws sad... D blast :'(
Overall lovely update ^_^
Continue ASAP
N Thanx 4 d pm

oww thx so much dr... lots of love for this review...

really it means a lot...😳

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sanjinimala
Very nicely written. Loved it. I hope antara's parents are alive! Loved the rantara conversation. Please continue soon

if you read prev chapters.. i allready mentioned that antu's parents are not allive.. they all died in the blast..

thx for reply

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: ankusanu
so here cums another wow update 👏
seriously i cnt tell hw much i njyed d update..
so bondlu came to see raghus antara 😆
tell him shez too good fr u 😡 ...n i jst loved
hw rantara met fr frst time ❤️ kitna cute tha 😳
raghu bh na seedha ja k bol diya antu ko k dnt marry dat person 🤣 tooo good... hayee raghu is so restless to meet n
kbw bout antara more by staying dere in kashmir 😳 so cute..
bt last part ws ]:^(] 😭... poor antara lost her family...
i knw dat dis rantara meeting will lead antara to
believe raghu killed her family by plantibg d bomb 😔
awwwa nw waiting fr nxt part..update soon...
ps...hw beautifully u hv eritten dis 👏

aww thx😳
yup antu is too good for bhondlu..😆... there is only one man in the world who could match upto our princess... Raghunath Naik... right?😉

yup.. raghu is allready gone case after seeing our kashmir ki kali... mumbai ki mawali was all gone😆... now lets see what happens between kashmir ki kali and mumbai ki mawali..

yes antara's familly is dead.. you are right this will lead to antu's misunderstand regurding the bombblast... yes raghu was the one who kept the bomb but he didn't know anything about that bomb..

but if two people are destined to become one they will become anyhow... how much obstacles and huge wall are between them.. they meet at the end..😉

and thx again for the lovely review🤗