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Posted: 11 years ago
love ur story so much :)
Edited by amfi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amfi123

love ur story so much :)

Thank you amfi !! When will you update ur stories... Waiting for Ehsaas ,love after marriage and destiny ..
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
No words for this
fantastic
pls cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Im uploading this one after ages . So sorry. !!
PART 6:

RECAP : Antara and Raghu's conversation in the Bus.. (Rantara moments) , Antara having a nightmare about Satya approaching her ).

PART 6 :
It was 4:30am and Antara had woken up to take her Sargi.. It was a custom of Karvachauth for the girl to get up early in the morning and have her sargi She took out a box of packed food from her bag and started having her food...Raghu slowly woke up"Miss Kaul , tu poori raat nahi soyi hain .. main phirse keh raha hoon,vrat rakhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain"said Raghu rubbing his eyes.. "Arre , tum kyun uthe? Tum soh jao. Mujhe apni sargi lene hi hogi.. Chinta mat karo.. Mujhe kuch nahi hoga...Mujhe vrat karna hai..Apni khushi ke liye yeh vrat karna hain..Vaise bhi , shaadi ke baad bhi toh mujhe yeh vrat karna hain.. Issi bahane meri practice ho jayegi"said Antara smiling.."Tu dheet hain.. Maanegi nahi."said Raghu... "Main waapas so raha hoon. Tu raat ke saade chaar baje apni sargi kha.. Patah nahi aise riwaaj kyun hain?? Bechaari ladkiyon ko bhooka aur pyaasa rakhte hain, aur subah sade chaar baje khana khilaya karte hain.. Ajeeb kisam ke riwaaj hain ye"Raghu murmured to himself and dosed off to sleep on his seat.. Antara too dozed off after sleeping... They both then got up around 9:30 am... They were gonna reach Kashmir in another 3 hours..."Gaadi pandrah minute rookegi.. Jisko kuch khaana ho , woh jao aur jaldi waapas aao"said the driver. "Raghu, tum jao aur kuch apne khaane ke liye lekar aao. Mujhe chalne ki shakti nahi hain.. Im already tired..Tum please kuch khao.."said Antara...Raghu nodded.. He knew if he would say that he wasn't hungry Antara would pounce on him.. He then went down the bus and returned within 5 minutes.. "Itni jaldi aa gaye?? Kya khaya??"Antara asked.. "Arre Miss Kaul, apun ne samosa ,jalebi aur kehwa piya.."said Raghu.. "Paanch minute mein tumne ye sab kaise khaa liya"asked a confused Antara.. "Tere Kashmir ke log bahut fast hain.. Aur upar se bheed bhi nahi thi..Aur tujhe toh patah hain na ki apun khaane ka kitna bada shaukeen hain.. Bahut fast "said Raghu.. "Hmmm.. theek hain... Jyaada saphai dene ki zaroorat nahi hain"said Antara..
Time passed by and they had almost reached Kashmir.. "Raghu , hum pahuchne waale haina ab. Aur tumhe patah hain na ki hamara maksat kya hain yaha aane ka.. Hum saath saath un goondon ko sazaa dilvayenge.. Aur tume bekasoor saabit karenge"said Antara. "Main toh kitna sweet hoon.. Mujhe toh koi adalaat saza nahi suna sakti.. Apun ka chod.. Apun ko teri fikar hain..Tu raat ko bhi nahi soyi apne inn daravne sapno ke kaaran..
Aur upar se aaj vrat rakha hain maharani ne..!!"said Raghu taunting her back.. "Raghu, bas karo.. Main apna vrat nahi todne waali. Aur tumne apna samosa, jalebi khaaya naa!! Toh tum chup raho.."said Antara.. Raghu didn't reply.. He was angry with her decision of keeping her fast.. He knew she would become weak..
They had now reached Kashmir and they went to a small apartment in which a house was rented by Antara's name. Antara had planned all of it while she was in Mumbai... She wanted to be perfect in this plan of hers as if she wasn't Raghu would be jailed.. "Andar chalo..."said Antara.. "Tu andar jaa.. Apun ko bahut bhook lagi hain.. Apun 10 minute mein aa jayega.. Kuch bhi chahiye hoga toh call karna"said Raghu.. Antara smiled and nodded.. Raghu then went to the market .. He wanted to get something for Antara.. He just had ten minutes with him and he had to get something fast.. He then saw a pair of red bangles which he instantly liked.. He immediately purchased them and went back to the apartment..He then entered the house which was a simple one roomed house..It had one bathroom and a small kitchen.. "Tumne toh sab plan karke rakha huya tha.. Isliye bus mein baar baar bol rahi thi ki , tension mat lo, main sab sambhaloongi"said Raghu. "Jab Antara Naik hain toh tension kiss baat ka??"said Antara smiling.. "Kya Kaha??? Antara Naik"Raghu said eagerly.. "Woh woh.. mera matlab tha...ummm"said Antara. Raghu playfully approached her and scooped her in his arms.. "Antara Naik na?? Abhi toh shaadi bhi nahi huyi"Raghu said smiling.. He then spun her round and round making her laugh.. "Bas bas..!! Maine already tumse apne mann mein shaadi kar li hain"Antara said giggling.. "Mann mein shaadi?? Aa jaa , abhi tere khyaal ko hakeekat mein badal tha hoon.. Aur uske baad tujhe accha khaasa mota bhi bana doonga"said Raghu winking.. "Tum paagal ho gaye ho"said Antara blushing.. He just ruffled his hair smiling.. It was 7 pm now and Antara had now grown pretty weak.. "Chaand ka patah nahi .. Tu please kuch khaa le.."Raghu pleaded.. "Nahi raghu.. main nahi khaoongi.."said Antara. "Offo !! Bas kar Antara... Teri tabiyat bilkool theek nahi hain.."said Raghu.. "Raghu, mera bahut sir darad ho raha hain..."Antara said almost crying .. Raghu then made Antara lie on his lap and he massaged her head.. He tried his best to make her feel better.. But she was still feeling sick.. She had been lying on his lap since such a long time in a helpless state.He tried healing her with his love.. Then an idea clicked him... "Tujhe patah hain. Sunny Leone ka ek naya gaana hain.. Pink Lips.. Kya mast item hain yaar!"said Raghu.. Antara immediartely got up from his lap... "Kya kaha tumne?"she asked with a frown.. "W-woh kal bahut sunny hoga shaayad.. "said Raghu.. "Nahi nahi.. Mujhe ullu mat banao.. Tumne kuch aur kaha tha.."said Antara.. "Nahi Antara.. maine toh kaha tha ki .ki.."said Raghu.. "Hatla kyun rahe ho?? Mujhse bore ho gaye na tum?? Shaadi se pehle hi bore ho gaye ki tumhe Sunny Leone chahiye..."said Antara fuming with anger.. "Nahi Antara...aisa kuch nahi hain.."said Raghu.. She gave him a huge 15 minute lecture about how men shouldn't be attracted to other women with Raghu dying to laugh from inside.. "Aur upar se mera vrat hain aaj.. 9 baje chaand aane waala tha...Par ..."said Antara only to get a shock.. "Arre baap re 9 baj gaye.. Itni jaldi.. Yeh 2 ghante kab guzar gaye.. Tumhaari baaton mein main aaj chaand ko miss kar deti "said Antara leaving Raghu with a smirk.. Little did she know that Raghu just said all of it to distract her.. She then took the channi and went to the balcony with Raghu.. She took the channi and looked at the moon then at Raghu. By doing this she took a vow, that she would always serve to be Raghu's wife and would always stand by him.. With the completion of her vrat, she prayed for Raghu's long life..She then touched his feet to which Raghu started laughing.. "Sukhi raho putri.. Tumhe kya vardaan chahiye?"Raghu said laughing..Antara hit his arm smiling.. He then fed her some sweets and made her drink water .. He then gave her the bangles which he brought for her.."Arrre.. Yeh kab laaye tum?"asked Antara. "Jab main khaana khaane gaya tha na tab.."said Raghu. "Toh tumne khaana nahi khaaya?"asked Antara. "Tu nahi khaati toh kaise khaata? Maine bhi tere saath vrat rakha hain..."Raghu said smiling.. Antara now had tears in her eyes.. "Bewakoof ho tum... Kya zaroorat thi bhooka rehne ke liye??"Antara said.. She then got a thaali of food for both of them.. Both of them then fed each other and were happy about the completion of Antara's first karwachauth..

How was this?? Dia, hopefully I wrote it well according to ur expectation... Actually im having a headache now but then I thought of writing this .. Coz I havent done it from such a long time..So sorry if its not that good..
-Prerna
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the pm perna
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg i am so touched
this update brought tears to my eyes
u wrote it so perfectly just as i had imagined
your version is better than my imagination
i cannot thank u enough for this
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Posted: 10 years ago
continue when u can dear
no pressure at all
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was beautiful Prerna. Raghu ne bhi kuch nahi khaaya. Usne bhi Antara ke saath karwachauth ka vrat rakha

Raghu bought red bangles fr Antara. Just to distract her from her pain he took the name of Sunny Leon. Lol Raghu 15 minutes lecture sunni padi tumhe

Antara was speechless when she got to knw tht Raghu ne bhi karwachauth ka vrat rakha hain.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear 😳
loved Rantara's first Karwachauth 😃
sunny leone part was very funny 😆
continue asap :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

omg i am so touched

this update brought tears to my eyes
u wrote it so perfectly just as i had imagined
your version is better than my imagination
i cannot thank u enough for this

Dia,
im sooo happy that i liked it...
I really wanted to live up to your expectations..
Thank you !! :D
-Prerna

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