Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147 - Page 57

Originally posted by: Afy10

Amazing update 👏
loved rantara convo 😆
raghu jealous
compress 😆 raghu is worried now as momma is coming
poor antu kya bolegi momma se her dialogues mumbai' gangster
nonviolence english patience 😆 bichara raghu
shopping 😛
antu went to receive her momma
waiting to read more do continue soon
thnxx for pm 😊

Originally posted by: richurachna

wow Raghu jeoleous...lovely convo between rantara...so now Raghu worried...awsome update

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

RIA...RIA...RIA...😛😛😛

What are you upto?????

your updates are totally driving me insane now...🤪

Seriously girl ...HATS OFF TO YOU ! 👏

This update was beautifully written😳

WOW...it felt so good that they got to spend their first rainy night together ☺️

Both of them were feeling their pure love...its such a bliss!😳

loved the balcony scene where she was wiping her wet hair and he was admiring her beauty 😳

For me the best part was jealousy...haha...that phone call totally freaked him out 🤣

Ria...I loooved these lines of Raghu,as they were filled full of intensity...😳😳😳

"tere ko mazak lagta hain ye sab?! Tujhe pata hain ki apun ko kaisa lagta hain ye sab sun ne mein... fir bhi?! Agar tere life mein koi aur hain to apun ke sath aisa khel kyun rahi hain?! haan bata...?!!"

It just revealed that he is scared of loosing her. ...poor him ...its not his fault...as he never got love...and when he finally got what he deserved...he is hell scared

Ouch!...hehe...now English literature Sasu maa is coming to take interview of our Topori ,notorious gangster of Mumbai...😆

Now its gonna be EPIC! 🥳

It was awesome Ria...

I can't thank you enough for giving such an amazing and wonderful update...👏

so I thought of sending you a gift...😆😆😆

Even this ice cream candy too read your update...now see her condition...oopppsss...😆

Omg...Precap is making me worry...but I know ...you'd put some mindblowing twist in that...making english literature sasu maa to accept Raghu as he is...😎

you are an exceptionally amazing writer as well as human being 👏

now give me a hug...🤗

and start penning down another brilliant update 😆

do update soon Ria 😳😳😳

and I love you...

Mwah...mwah...mwah 😳

Originally posted by: pampz

mind blowig ria ... its beyond ay words ...loved it

i logged in on;y to check u ...and found 2 updates ..readt it in one go ...amazing

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Lo saasuma aa rahi hai raghu...

Antara why you teasing our sweet raghu...but I like jealous raghu...or bhi zyada cute lagata hai...now raghu or antara ki Mulaqato pe break lag jayega kuch time k liye...but superb updet ria...and precap...ab antu ki mom ko kya hua...mumbai me kho gayi kya...????

Please continue soon...

Main chupkay se uss ki aankho pe haath rakh k puchoon batao kaun...???

Wo muskura ke dheeme se keh day " Meri Zindagi "...😳

Originally posted by: honeybees22

hayee Raghu was jealous I loved it

he got in from her room to the balcony wow

his intro to his mil wow antu kya soch hai hats off

Ri this was totally amazing yaar

precap ab kya hua

pls cont asap