Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147 - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update 👏
loved rantara convo 😆
raghu jealous
compress 😆 raghu is worried now as momma is coming
poor antu kya bolegi momma se her dialogues mumbai' gangster
nonviolence english patience 😆 bichara raghu
shopping 😛
antu went to receive her momma
waiting to read more do continue soon
thnxx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow Raghu jeoleous...lovely convo between rantara...so now Raghu worried...awsome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
RIA...RIA...RIA...😛😛😛
What are you upto?????
your updates are totally driving me insane now...🤪


Seriously girl ...HATS OFF TO YOU ! 👏
This update was beautifully written😳
WOW...it felt so good that they got to spend their first rainy night together ☺️

Both of them were feeling their pure love...its such a bliss!😳
loved the balcony scene where she was wiping her wet hair and he was admiring her beauty 😳

For me the best part was jealousy...haha...that phone call totally freaked him out 🤣
Ria...I loooved these lines of Raghu,as they were filled full of intensity...😳😳😳

"tere ko mazak lagta hain ye sab?! Tujhe pata hain ki apun ko kaisa lagta hain ye sab sun ne mein... fir bhi?! Agar tere life mein koi aur hain to apun ke sath aisa khel kyun rahi hain?! haan bata...?!!"

It just revealed that he is scared of loosing her. ...poor him ...its not his fault...as he never got love...and when he finally got what he deserved...he is hell scared

Ouch!...hehe...now English literature Sasu maa is coming to take interview of our Topori ,notorious gangster of Mumbai...😆

Now its gonna be EPIC! 🥳
It was awesome Ria...
I can't thank you enough for giving such an amazing and wonderful update...👏
so I thought of sending you a gift...😆😆😆

Even this ice cream candy too read your update...now see her condition...oopppsss...😆

Omg...Precap is making me worry...but I know ...you'd put some mindblowing twist in that...making english literature sasu maa to accept Raghu as he is...😎

you are an exceptionally amazing writer as well as human being 👏
now give me a hug...🤗
and start penning down another brilliant update 😆

do update soon Ria 😳😳😳

and I love you...

Mwah...mwah...mwah 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
mind blowig ria ... its beyond ay words ...loved it
i logged in on;y to check u ...and found 2 updates ..readt it in one go ...amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lo saasuma aa rahi hai raghu...
Antara why you teasing our sweet raghu...but I like jealous raghu...or bhi zyada cute lagata hai...now raghu or antara ki Mulaqato pe break lag jayega kuch time k liye...but superb updet ria...and precap...ab antu ki mom ko kya hua...mumbai me kho gayi kya...????
Please continue soon...

Main chupkay se uss ki aankho pe haath rakh k puchoon batao kaun...???
Wo muskura ke dheeme se keh day " Meri Zindagi "...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unred @ 74
Ria meri jaaan pad le :))
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

Raghu got jealous! 😳


Hayee why do u call your updates crap...so cute and adorable!

hehe thanks...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Eksss best part fr me ws d last line...😆

Antu asking raghu fr Shopping 😳 😳
Omggg raghu toh gya ab antu ki mom aa
Rh hai 😉 kya krega poor soul... n
I jsr loved jealous raghu.. 😆 watt lag gy..
Awww raghu ki balcony entry
Bh band ho gy...ab kya hame
Romance nh milega 🤢 😭 kya??
Precap is scary...kho gy kya geeta aunty
Hope nt n raghu kuch kamal kare
N plz romantic update plzz 😆
Thanks fr update...n tkcr
👏 👏 👏 Shabashh

thank you priyu...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Omg riyuuu Kya hai tu 😲 😲
Kyun mere Raghu ko tang karty hai tu 😆 😆
I loved the jealousy part 😃
Ohh to Geeta jii is coming But will she accepts Raghu??
The way Antu described her nature its making me scared 😕
Awesome awesome update
Continuee soon 🤗

lolz main to wohi kar rahi hoon jo tumne kahan... update de rahi hoon😆
awiee thanks..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks...😳

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