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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22


just consider any of them 4 as us


Awww so sweet 😆 😃 hum saath chaar hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

I hope riyuu you dont look like her
Look at her eyes 🤣

ell we cant guess
yeah ri gets dark circles writing romance for us
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Awww so sweet 😆 😃 hum saath chaar hai 😆

hum chaar chaar hai jamano ke sathi hum chaar chaar hai lol
BFFs
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When is the update?
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Okay! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

@officer I know

gud nite yediss ayazu rantara dreams and RI my update should be here tomorrow first thing samjhi?
gud nite gang
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 41

Antara opened her warm hazels welcoming the new day. she smiled widely and yanked on the bed to let out her laziness. The perfect moment under the rainy sky of last night flashed in her mind. he always managed to reach her, she didn't know how. She still remembered after their prolonged kiss under the shower how she hid her flushed face in his chest, the place where she destined to be. Antara's trance broke when her phone rang. "hello mummy!!" antara asked in cheerful voice. "congrats antara for winning the competition. Sorry couldn't call last night as I was too busy." Saroj said cheerfully from other side. "thank you mummy!!" antara said smiling. "hey did didi called you?!" saroj said. "momma?!! No not yet." Antara said. "actually she called me yesterday. She told me that she was coming to meet you in Mumbai. She didn't know that I am in ahmedabad now. So I told her to call you." saroj said. "what?!! Momma is coming here?!" antara's eyes gleamed in sheer joy. "yes!! She is coming..." saroj said. "okk mummy bye. I have to call momma now." Antara said and cut the phone. She immeadiately called geeta. She was so joyful after listening to the news. geeta informed her that she was coming tomorrow and would be living with her for two days. Antara jumped down from bed and rushed towards the washroom excited like a little girl. She was feeling like jumping over the crowds as she was meeting her momma after so long.

As raghu opened his eyes he grinned widely. He could still felt the sensation of her warm tender touch. Yesterday night was literally magical for both of them. antara at last committed on her own that she loved him. she shared her each and every feelings to him, her pain, her sorrow her happiness. The walls between were total smashed long ago and the remaining sands got washed last night. The water had become still and deep, just like there feeling and commitment towards each other. He grinned widely and looked towards the balcony door of antara's room. She must be awake by then. he wandered when she would come outside. At that moment the door got opened as if like granting his wish. She came out in the balcony wearing a lovely white pink salwar and wiping her wet hairs with a towel. She might had taken a bath. Water droplets were still running down her neck which he could detect even from that distance. He smirked as she remembered her magnificent face in last night drenched all over in water and how she licked and kissed away all the droplets from her face. she looked at her wide grin which looked stunning in her face as always. But she not at all noticed him as she was busy in talking in phone. Raghu tried to draw his attentions but failed. She was all busy in talking. "abey s**a itna dant dikha ke kiss sey baat kar rahi hain... ee misscall idhar dekh na..." raghu blabbered. But she went insidewithout giving any attention to him. "abeey isne too dekha hi naiii... Ye kis sey baat kar rahi hain?!" curiosity stuck him badly. He quickly got up from bed and rushed to get fresh.

"yeah momma!! Just tell me the name of the train. I will reach at the station to pick you up." Antara said holding the phone twitching her neck as her hands were busy in making the lumps of floors. "hmmm... my girl sounds like a matured woman. she was ready to pick her momma from station all alone. sounds great!!" geeta teased from other sides. "come one momma!! You know I am living here for quite long and now I know the roads of Mumbai really well." Antara said. "ahhan!!.." geeta teased. "momma!!..." antara said in childish tone.

Raghu peeped inside the room slightly pushing the balcony door. She was not in the room. She opened the door wide and came inside the room. "ab yee yeri kidhar hain... ho kya gaya hain issey subha se. mere ko dekha bhi naii tab... aur ab kamre mein bhi naii hain..." he thought. She heard sound of giggles from downstairs. He peeped and found antara near the kitchen slab busy with the floors and still talking with someone in mobile. That wide grin was still intact to her face. her hairs were curled and balled into a clip. The scene looked so warm and beautiful. he never saw her so excited before. With a huge naughty grin he slowly came downstairs without making a noise and started to approach towards her.

"okkk I am leaving now. I have so much work in hand. Bye." Atara cut the phone and got involved into making lumps. At that moment a hand circled her waist startling her. she became frozen as she felt his hot breath near her neck. She snapped back her wide eyes at side to meet raghu's mischievous smirk. "tum yahan?!!" she asked in bit confused voice. "hmmm..." he said giving a light kiss on her shoulder causing her to flush slightly. "par tum andar... kaise ayein?!!" she was still in confusion. "apun ki too woo rasta fix hain... tera balcony wala darwaja..." he said increasing his smirk. "tumhe sidhe raste se ane mein kya takleef hoti hain?!" she asked in slight irritation. "woo kya hain na ki... tere pass ane ke liye apun ko humesha tera-mera rasta pakar na parta hain... iss liye adat ho chulki hain.." he giggled slightly. "very funny!!" she rolled her eyes and concentrated on her work. Raghu was still holding her waist in his arms. He lifted his one hand and opened the clip from her hair causing her long ravishing hair to fall down on her back. he snuggled through her hairs and her feature stiffened in his hold. "raghu..tum.." her word hitched as his fingers brushed her delicate nape removing the thick hairs from her back and placing that to other side. antara breathed heavily and her nails dug on the lump of floor due to the sensation caused by his touch. "raghu abhi nahii please.." she said pleading. "kyun?!!" he said in slow husky voice keeping his lips near to her ear. She composed herself with a deep breath and said, "dekho mujhe abhi bahut kaam hain... abhi ke liye tum please mujhe akela chor do.." she said. "eee...!!" She flipped her feature forcefully in his hold causing her to face him. her wide eyes met him as her hands bumped on his chest. his hands circled her waist as usual. "subha se dekh raha hoon... tu apun ki taraf dekh hi nahi rahi hain... kuch der pahele balcony mein chilla chilla ke gala faar diya par tu too phone mein busy thi... kiss sey aise dant dikha ke batein kar rahi thi haan?!" he asked. she was about to tell the truth but stopped as she saw his jealous eyes. suddenly her mode got into mischief. "aab dekho raghu... ussdin chuhe ke wajah se tumne mujhe bahut daraya... Aaj meri wari hain.,." antara thought with a smirk. "haan...achha to lage ga hi... akhir main jiss sey baat kar rahi thi woo meri life me sab se special hain..." she said with an warm smile. his face hardened a bit, "arey wohich to puch raha hoon tu kis sey baat kar rahi thi?!!" raaghu asked impatiently. "ussi sey jiss sey main iss duniya mein saab se jyada pyar karti hoon!!" she said with a hidden smirk. she saw how jealousy burned his whole feature and his hands got tightened around her waist tighter that she almost winced. "ouch!! Raghu..." she whimpered. "antara kaun tha woo?!!" his voice was cold and dangerous. "kaha naa... koi bahut khass insaan tha... aur tum kyun jaan na chahte ho..." she frowned. He lose again and with a jerk he lift her delicate feature from the ground crushing her waist into his tight unbreakable hold. She met his furious burning gaze. "tere ko mazak lagta hain ye sab?! Tujhe pata hain ki apun ko kaisa lagta hain ye sab sun ne mein... fir bhi?! Agar tere life mein koi aur hain to apun ke sath aisa khel kyun rahi hain?! haan bata...?!!" he asked. "raghu choro mujhe..." she said struggling in his hold literally standing in air. "naaah... pahele bata phone mein kaun tha?!" he asked in even more hard tone. "toh tum nahi choroge?!!" she frowned. "nahhii... pahele bata..." He asked stubbornly tightening his hold. A slight smile appeared on her face and suddenly her threw all the dried floor in her hand over his face. he squeezed his eyes shut and his grip loosened. Antara got free from his hold and laughed heavily looking at his all white floor covered face. "eee misscall kya tha yeee?!!" he said rubbing his eyes in irritation. "idhar aao..." antara touched his face to clear his eyes but raghu shoved her hands stubbornly. Antara sighed and said, "stupid!! Main apni momma se baat kar rahi thi!!!" she said giggling. "hayeee..." he was all startled. "haan!! Abto samajh mein aa gaya ki main itna khus kyun hoon?! Ya fir yakeen nahi ho to phone kholke apni caller list dikhaoon?!" she asked with frown. Raghu became silent for a while. antara touched his jaw with her hand and removed the tress of floors from raghu's eyes. at last he could look properly and he looked a bit guilty. "misscall woo.." he said slowly. "pahele mooh dho ke aao... bhoot jaisa sakal ban haya hain tumhara.." she said giggling. Raghu moved near the bashine and cleared his face with water. Antara stood there silently admiring his wet face. when he rubbed his face with the towel and moved his gaze to her, she was again back in her work. "misscall woo..." he moved towards her and came near him keeping his guilty face to her. "hmmm..." she said without looking at him. "woo apun,,,,sorry!!" he said slowly. Antara looked at him silently. "aisa kaam karte hi kyun ho jissey sorry bolna pare.." she asked quietly. Raghu didn't say anything. "tum larko ka yahin problem hain pata hain..." she said. "kitni baar bhi bataon tassali nahin hota... raghu kaal raat to maine sab kuch kahe diyaa tha... ab mere andar kuch bhi chupa huya nahin hain... job hi hain sab kuch to tumhare samne lake rakh diya hain maine..." she said intently looking towards his eyes. "mere pass job hi hain sabkuch to tumhe de chuki hoon...fir bhi tumhe lagta hain ki mere life mein koi aur hain?!" she asked with a slight sad voice. "eee... sun!" raghu caught her shoulder with his both hands and made her look to him. he caught his ear with his one hand with a really cute expression in his face. "sorry yaar... tere ko to pata hain... dimag sanak jata hain apun ka... Woo kya karein tere ko khone ka dar apun ko satata raheta hain..." he said with a really helpless voice. she smiled and cupped his face. "to apne dil se iss darko nikal doo... main yahin hoon... aur tumhe chorke kahin nahin jane wali hoon...chahein kuch bhi ho jayein!" she said with a warm smile in her face. his eyes became pleasant. They looked towards each other with a silent warm smile for a while. "chalo chalo... Ab tum jaon yahan se..." antara pushed him towards the door. "arey... ee misscall!! Kya hain haan... aaj too Sunday hain!!...collage bhi nahi hain... too itna kya kama par gaya tera?!" he asked in slightly irritated voice. "collage nahi hain iska matlab ye too nahin ki main pura din baithi rahoon... mujhe ghar ki safayi karni hain.. mummy ne mujhpe ghar ki zimmidari chorke gayi hain... aur main unhe sikayad ka muaka nahi de sakti..." she said. "arey tum aurat logo ka bhi ye ek problem hain... kaam naa bhi hoo too kaam dhoond leta hain... ho sake too parosi ke ghar pee ja kar bhi kaam kar doo..." he said in irritation. "kya?!!" she was hell confused. "kuch naii... Par apun idhar se nahin hilega... socha tha aaj teri chutti hain to pura din tere sath rahene kaa... par tu too jaise.." he said in irritation. "dekho raghu ab tumhari ye manmani thori kam karo haan.." she said in a bit ordering voice, "ab tum aise jab chaein mere kamre mein ghus nahi sakte samjhe?!" she said with an ordering voice. "kyun?.. ab tu rokegi mere ko?!!" he stood there stubbornly leaning on the balcony door. "nahin main nahin... Meri momma!!!" she said with a naughty giggle. "hayeee?!!" he asked in confusion. "haaan... kaal aa rahi hain woo yahan Kashmir se... aur do din yahin rahengey." She informed. "to ab teri maa aa rahi hain too apun ko kya?! Mere ko teri maa se kya kaam?!! Apun to bas tujhse milne ayengey!.." he said scratching his head in confusion. "raghu woo meri momma hain..." she said. "haan too?!" he raised his eyebrows. "too har waqt main unke sath hi rahungi naa... Aur woo mere kamre mein hi rahengey mere sath..." she said. "kya??!!" at last the bell rung in his brain. "haan obviously!! Kashmir mein too hum ek hi kamre mein rahete the... aur raat ko eksath sote bhi thee.. too yahan bhi waisa hi hoga naa?!!" she said, "aur agar woo tumhe balcony door se mere kamre mein ghuste huye dkhengey too woo kya sochengey?!!" she asked. "dekh misscall ye galat baat hain... ye teri maa bich mein kahan se tapak pari yaar?" he asked in slight irritation. "hello mr!! woo meri momma hain... tameez se baat karo." She rolled her eyes. "arey yaar apun ko teri ma se koi problem nahi hain... par woo agar tee se 24 ghnate chipke rae ye zaroori thori hi na hain... yaar unhe woo uncle aunty ke kamrein mein shift kar de na..." he asked. "raghu main kaise kar sakti hoon... agar momma mere sath rahena chahein to main obviously unhe naa nahi kahe sakti..." she said. "dhet tere ki!!" raghu banged his hand on the door in slight irritation. "aur pata hain sab se bari problem kya hain... maine pahele soccha hi nahin... Par abb yaad ayya... main tumhe momma se kaise milaoon..." she said worriedly. "kayeko?!! Isme kya problem hain?!!" apun khud chalke aa jayega aur tu mere ko apni maa se mila dena... sidhi baat..." he said making a face. "haan aur jab momma puchengey ki antu ye kaun hain too main kya kahungi... Yahin ki... momma, ye raghu hain... Mumbai ka sab se khatarnaak gunda jis ke sath main apni poori life spend karna chahti hoon..." antara said making a face. "ee misscall dekh ab kuch jyada hi ho raha hain... arey itna sab bata ne ki kya zarurat hain yaar?!" he said in irritation. "aur nahi too kya?! Raghu tumhe momma se milna too parega hi... maine aajtak unke permission ke wagar kuch nahi kiya...too aaj itni bari baat main unhe kaise naa bataoon...unhe jaan ne ka poora hak hain ki mere life mein koi hain ki nahin..." she said. "aisa kya?!!..." he scratched his head. "haan!!" she nodded. "chal thik hain..." he floded his collars, "bata teri ma ko kya pasand hain aur kya na pasand hain..." he asked. "momma ko?!" she asked making a face. "haan... bole too teri momma ko woo kya... woo haan... woo compress (impress) karna parega naa... too unki pasand na pasand too pata hona chahiye..." he said. "woo compress naii impress hota hain..." she said striking her head. "arey haan haan... apun ko pata hain.. tere ko joo pucha uska jawab de.." he asked. "too ye baat sab se pahele jaan lo... retirement se pahele momma schoolteacher thi aur woo bhi English ki... English literature unki favorite subject hain... aaur unhe aise insaan bilkul bhi pasand nahin jo toota phoota galat english bole..." she said silently. "kyaaa???!!!" raghi almost jumped. "haan, mujhe aur ishan ko too bachpan mein bahut dande pare hain jab bhi hum logo ne galat English kahan... unhe galat English bolne wale log tolerate hi nahi hote..." she said sheepishly. "chal thik hain... ek na mile too dusre se adjust kar lengey... Baki ka bata..." he said. "baki kaa... aur bhi sun na hain?" she asked. "arey haan yaar chal ab bata bh dey,.. kyun khali pilli time waste karta hain..." he asked. "acha too suno... Momma Gandhi ji ke bahut bare admirer hain... specialy unke non vilence ki,... Momma khud bhi non violence ko support karti hain... aur ye maar na pitna... gundagardi karna... in sab violence se unhe sakt nafrat hain..." she said. "dekh misscall..." he almost stammered. "ab aur bhi hain too bata de.." he asked in irritation. "haan aur unhe aise admi bilkul pasand nahin jo baat baat pe gussa ho..." she added again. "ttt... tu mazak kar rahi hain na... arey s**a ye kidhar phasa diya mere ko..." he said scratching his head in more confusion. "afsoos ki ye mazak nahin hain... agar tumhe yakeen nahin hota naa too tum mummy se phone kar ke puch lo. Unhe sab pata hain..." she said. "to ab kya karein?!!" he asked sheepishly. "to kya?!! Jo karna hain mujhe hi karna parega... issi liye kahe rahi hoon.. jab tak main momma se puri baat na kar loon... tab tak tum please yahan mat ayya karo.." she said. "arey yeri... apun tere ma se nahin milega too tere baat kar ne se kya hoga?!... " he asked. "mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha hain... paheli baar momma se baat karne mein mujhe dar lag raha hain..." she said in worried face. "arey yaar... tu tension mat le... apun samhal lega sab... dekhna yunnn chutki baja ke sab thik kar doonga..." he said snapping his fingers. "bas bas... bahut hi gaya... ab jaon tum yahan se... aur mujhe sochne doo..." she pushed him outside the door. "arey tu..." he protested. "raghu please... mujhe sachmein thpra waqt chahiye... akele mein..." she pleaded. He made a face and shoved his collar in irritation. He came down on the road. "raghu!!..." she called from behind. "kya hain..." he asked in irritation. "wooo..." She flushed a bit... "mujhe shopping mein hana tha... momma ki kuch cheezein kharidni thi... tumhare pass time ho too..." she asked rubbing the wood of the door with her nails. Her slightly embarrassed face was lowered to the ground. a cute smile spread on raghu's face. "kab jana hain?!!" he asked. "wooo saam ko...tumhe koi problem to nahin hain naa." She asked. "phone kar dena... aa jaunga tujhe lene..." he said with a smile and moved towards naik sadan. Antara smiled back to him.

Precap: "god momma!! Where are you!!" antara almost cried looking at the crowd in station. She was hell worried for momma.

ps:chalo heres my another crap. jo hain jaisa hain... kaam chala lo... sorry extremely busy now a days...😕

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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghu got jealous! 😳

Hayee why do u call your updates crap...so cute and adorable!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eksss best part fr me ws d last line...😆
Antu asking raghu fr Shopping 😳 😳
Omggg raghu toh gya ab antu ki mom aa
Rh hai 😉 kya krega poor soul... n
I jsr loved jealous raghu.. 😆 watt lag gy..
Awww raghu ki balcony entry
Bh band ho gy...ab kya hame
Romance nh milega 🤢 😭 kya??
Precap is scary...kho gy kya geeta aunty
Hope nt n raghu kuch kamal kare
N plz romantic update plzz 😆
Thanks fr update...n tkcr
👏 👏 👏 Shabashh
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg riyuuu Kya hai tu 😲 😲
Kyun mere Raghu ko tang karty hai tu 😆 😆
I loved the jealousy part 😃
Ohh to Geeta jii is coming But will she accepts Raghu??
The way Antu described her nature its making me scared 😕
Awesome awesome update
Continuee soon 🤗
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