Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

am not well still whn i went thru Rantara Train romance ...😳😳😳😳😳😳haila the intensity the passion hit very hard ... haila kya intense romance dikhaya hai Ria tune ... am totally fida on ur intense romance scenes ... aisa lagta hai ki yeh kabhi khatam hi na ho ...i loooved it Ria ...

tera pichle update ka hangover abhi tak utra nahi ...ke tune yeh update karke mereko firse drunken bana di ...yes nowadays am totally drunk and highly addicted in ur stories...

am stopping now cant type my entire feelings as not feeling good due to ill health...😕

luv u ria ...tera precap mereko dangerous vampu bana dia ...!!!!!😆😆😆😆

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

behena...what an update yr..🤗👏

dil garden garden ho gaya ekdum...😳😆

rantara talk in the basti was so funny...OMG...ladki niche khadi hai.. Misunderstanding...hahaha🤣🤣

the train romance..wow...no words for that...what an intense n passionate romance☺️...raghu public mein hai...yeda yeh bhi bhool gaya😆...m still blushing after reading that☺️☺️

precap was mindblowing n i found it funny too😆...we get a rantara hug all thanks to those big rats🤣☺️

uff...behena..update soon..i can't wait for the next part😆

lots of hugs n kisses to u for this awesome update🤗🤗

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Rachna

@richurachna

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

ria...MU hindi version 😆

awesome...rantara mischief side...love to c

Raghu will be Raghu e followed her in train also...

train romance.. 😳

precap remind me garge scene...
😳

lovely 👏

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nbw16

@nbw16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

That was very lovey-dovey update...
How romantic...!!
My heart was beating fast re reading Raghu being so close to Antara. ... And she was unable to resist.. On top of that the whole thing was happening in train khullam khulla..

The misunderstanding wala part was so cute and its give warm feelings.. Raghu was content there... ufff

Ria Tumne toh hume ek sweet sa jhatka hi de diya... Your fab detailed description of that scene made me to blush like hell...

Precap padhke I am in a zombie state now... Lolz..
waiting for ur next update..

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

ria!!! kamal kr dia yr tune????👏..loved the update a lot!!!!😃

antu ke behaviour se raghu heart to balle balle krne laga!!!

no more fight bertween both!...😃

rantara doing romance in train....☺️

antu was in urge of embarrassment..😳oh god!! antu ne almost raghu ko green signal de hi diya hai..😉

waiting for next part..😛

thanks fr pm..

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

OMG Ria...
Kya mast update de dala 😉
it was a mindblowing update 👏 👏
44O VOLT KA JATKA laga diya 😆 😆
Brilliantly written from top to bottom 👏

Aur kya kahu tumhari tareef mein aaj 😳
The total atmosphere between them was changed and their conversation was so cute.❤️

Hehe...I loved it when Raghu came behind Antara for buying his local train ticket.😆
I couldn't stop laughing when I read about the true meaning of 'MISUNDERSTANDING' 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG...OMG...RIA...Even if I try, my appreciation wont be enough for this flawless update 👏

Well that train Jerk along with Kiss was a surprise element for me.😳
It was a beautiful and intense moment for me.😳
I literally got stunned by way he bumped into her😳

It was beautiful, Amazing and beyond perfection.😃
I Loved it...I Loved it...and I Loved it Ria.❤️ 🤗

Precap is something like a bonus gift for me.😉
pls do update soon as I can't concentrate on anything 😆

Sending you warm wishes with loads of love..hugs and kisses.
Love ya...mwah🤗