Ishq Bulaava: A Rantara Love Story - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sanjuu 🥱 !! Teri first story..!!
I just loved it 👏 👏
**applause** 👏
You're an amazing writer 😊
And of course do continue soon Warna I won't stop bugging you :P
And the title is lovable..I love the song and so I love your story too ❤️
And next part jaldi update krna ;) btw I loved that naughty Raghu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So finally u r here..
Welcome sanjana..!!
Being the newbie ur first post is bang on...👏
Its a sweet concept and would be awesome ahead also...
Great start and u do need to continue... I am waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome Sanjana...!!!
The story seems very promising...and I loved the concept too..
Its a wonderful start 😊
do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very cute Sanjana! Good Start!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much for the lovely comments guys!! I was really nervous about this post but your comments reduced my nervousness a lot. i hope you enjoy reading!😊

Chapter 2

Raghu was still waiting for antara to reply...his fingers were crossed and he was feeling very nervous.
"Han okay...main aapko ghuma dungi par main guide nai hun..!" antara replied jokingly.
"Han mujhe maloom hai..woh kya hai ki woh...hume skiing nai aati..toh hum soch rahe the ki agar aap hum sikha dete toh.."Raghu said nervously.
"han sure..why not!" Antara said cheerfully.
Raghu was absolutely elated to hear that...he couldn't believe his ears.
"Oh thank you so much! waise mera naam Raghu hai aur yeh mera dost Machmach.." Raghu introduced."hi raghu...hi machmach! mera naam antara hai aur yeh meri friend Rukhsana!" Antara replied.
meanwhile raghu was lost in antara...he couldn't take his eyes off her...he was totally mesmerized by her beauty..."Waise Raghu tum log kahan ke rehne waale ho?" Antara enquired.
raghu broke out of his trance.."kaun...? oh main...hum log mumbai ke rehne waale hain!" Raghu said smiling.
"really?? Mumbai..main toh ek mahine baad wahi jaane wali hun..mere internship ke liye..!!" antara said happily.
Raghu was on cloud nine after hearing this...he was so happy that she was going to live in the same city as him..
"Acha ab hum chalein..skiing karte hain!" Rukhsana said loudly interrupting Raghu's thought process.
"Han chaliye na..!" Machmach replied a bit over excitedly.He wouldn't let go of even one chance of talking to Rukhsana.
The four of them started walking together talking about what they are doing currently.
raghu was telling antara about how he manages his father's business...and machmach was telling Rukhsana about the car showroom he owned in Mumbai.

Raghu was so busy talking to antara that he didn't even realise when machmach and Rukhsana went another way...suddenly Antara turned to see that Machmach and Rukhsana were gone..."Raghu!! Machmach aur Rukhsana yahan nai hai...pata nai woh kahan chale gaye...chalo unhe dhundhte hain..!" Antara said worriedly.
"Arey don't worry..they are here somewhere...chalo..lets look for them!" Raghu said.
Raghu was just loving Antara's company..most of the time he was only staring at her...
Suddenly Raghu tripped and fell on the snow taking Antara down with him...they remained there lost in each other's eyes for a long time...Raghu was just looking at her...she was flawless...even Antara was lost in him..she had never felt so safe in anybody's company before..suddenly they heard someone clearing their throat very loudly...almost purposely..antara broke out of her trance...but Raghu..he was still lost.."Raghu!! utho!" antara said blushing.
"Oh i am so sorry!" Raghu said feeling ashamed.
"no problem!" antara said getting up"tumhe lagi toh nahi na?" she said.
"Nahi nahi tumhe?" he asked.
"nahi ab chalo skiing karte hain" she replied smiling.

they had lots of fun skiing...Raghu wished that the day never ended so that he could see Antara...jee bhar ke.
"Chalo...Raghu we had a lot of fun..thank you so much for giving us company!" Antara said flashing her million dollar smile.
Raghu's heart skipped a beat seeing her smile."Arey...we should thank you..for your awesome company..we really enjoyed today!" Raghu said a bit softly...he didn't want antara to leave so soon...
"ummm! Antara? " raghu said when antara turned to leave.
"han bolo!" she said
"Can i have your number..? we would love to go out with you guys again.." Raghu said...he was literally shaking with nervousness.
"Yaa sure...!" she said and took out a small paper from her bag and wrote her number...beneath it she wrote her name Antara Kaul...she gave him the paper blushed and left with Rukhsana.
Miss Kaul...Raghu thought to himself...he was so happy that he could talk to antara any time he wanted to now...he smiled and ruffled his hair.


LATER THAT EVENING...
"Han bomb kahan rakhna hai?...Thik hai...aapka kaam ho jaega...chinta mat kijiye...woh raghunath naik yahan se zinda waapas nai jaega.."


so guys who do you think wants Raghu killed? BTW... I know this update is a little boring..but i am a little worried about my exams...will write better next time..but please continue reading..! Thank you!😊

Edited by sanjanasanyal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res :D

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aww... the kashmir track.. them falling in the snow.. 😊
and raghu being mesmerized by antara

Miss kaul 😉
your ending is scaring me! nothing should happen to raghu!
but for a second update, that's awesome! 👏
well done! 😃
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow this is sooo beautiful
Raghu machmach and antara and rukku 2 jodis wow
pls cont asap and PM me pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww its lovely yr..😳
they liked eachothers company😳...rantara moments were so so so sweet....mm and ruku..kato ilu ilu shuru ho gaya hoga😆
omg!! precap😲..who want to kill him...kahin satya or DM to nhi hai na?
all the best fr exam.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey sanjana congo for the story and welcome to the forum 😉
Well it was such a cute update 😳😳
Naughty raghu flirting Antara
Continue soon
Pm me next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the lovely comments! And don't worry guys evil never wins...so nothing is going to happen to our Raghu. Hope you like the update! enjoy reading! 😊

Chapter 3


"Mai..maine kahan na aap chinta mat kijiye main iss raghu ko zinda nahin chodne waala...aapne mujhe paal poskar itna bada kiya...aur Raghu ne jo aapke saath kiya tha uska badla main lekar rahunga..! kisi bhi haalat mein main use maar dalunga yeh mera waada hai aapse! mai ab main phone rakhta hun" Aman said who was Daya mai's adopted son...he was in Kashmir just to kill Raghu for what he had done to his mother...but little did he know that mai was using him...! He could even die for his mai.
"Han Aman..thik hai beta lekin mujhe uss Raghu ko zinda nahin dekhna..bas!" she said and hung up.

MEANWHILE...
"Arey bhai tujhe aaj sona hai yaa nahi...yaa fir tu abhi bhi antara ke khyalo mein dooba hua hai?" machmach asked.
"Abey chup kar machmach! tu kya bol raha hai bey tera muh dekh tamatar ki tarah lal hai jab se tuh Rukhsana se mila hai!!" Raghu said making fun of machmach.
"Arey bhai chal chod...main sone jaa raha hun...Good night..tu bhi so jaa!" Machmach said.
"Han good night main bhi so jata hun!" Raghu said stretching..he was tired.

AT MIDNIGHT...

somebody knocked at the door of their hotel room...
Raghu opened the door...
"Ji aap Raghunath Naik hai right?" the man asked...Raghu didn't know him..
"ji han magar aap hai kaun...main aapko nai jaanta!" Raghu replied..he was very annoyed at the sight of this unknown man who was questioning him in the middle of the night.
"tu mujhe bhool gaya bhai...main Aman tere bachpan ka dost!" he replied with a smile.
"Arey Aman tu...? main toh tujhe pehchaan hi nai paya!" Raghu said excitedly.
he hugged Aman tightly...he couldn't control his excitement on seeing him...suddenly raghu felt a searing pain in his stomach..he broke the hug and noticed that Aman had stabbed him.."Aman..??" he said his voice cracking.
"Bhool gaya Raghunath...? meri mai ko jail bhijwaya tha na tune khoon ke ilzam mein...le liya maine tujhse badla!" at this Aman started laughing loudly..like a maniac.
Raghu fell down on the floor...he couldn't tolerate the pain anymore..

Raghu woke up from his dream and sat upright...he was sweating like anything...he couldn't believe what he had seen in his dream...he started getting flashbacks of the day he had seen Daya mai killing his little sister..he never wanted to remember it...tears welled up in his eyes...He cried a lot in the darkness and silence of the night...😭

THE NEXT MORNING...
Raghu woke up late...his eyes were still puffy due to last night...machmach became worried seeing him like that..."Bhai tu thik toh hai na yaar..?" he said full of concern
"Han machmach...main thik hun...thoda zyada so liya na...isiliye mood kharab hai!" he replied forcing a smile
"Oh bhai tera mood thik karne ke liye ek achi khabar hai...guess what?? Antara ka phone aaya tha kal ek rock concert hai jahan woh gaane waali hai aur usne hum dono ko invite kiya hai...!!" Machmach said excitedly..."di na khush khabri??" he asked


Suddenly someone knocked on the door of their room and said.."Room service! may i come in sir?"
"Yes please come in!"raghu said
Raghu's face brightened..he forgot everything about last night's dream he couldn't believe that Antara had invited them..."sachi?? tune toh subah subah mujhe itni achi news suna di...muh meetha kara yaar!!" he said..he was so happy..he couldn't stop smiling.
"Arey ruk jaa bhai aur bhi hai...uska ghar Dal lake ke paas hai toh woh bol rahi thi ki kyun na aaj hum charo boating kare?" Machmach said he was so eager to see Rukhsana.
"Han zaroor tu mera muh kyun tak raha hai...jaldi se ready ho jaa aur nikalte hain yaahan se"...he said.
The hotel attendant did all the work and said "thank you sir!" and was about to leave when Raghu stopped him and gave him a tip. he said thank you and left.

OUTSIDE THE HOTEL ROOM...
"Han mai...maine abhi suna...main unke kamre mein gaya tha...woh log Dal lake jaa rahe hain...main unka picha karun kya?"Aman asked
"Usne tujhe pehchana toh nai na..??" Daya mai asked
"nai mai...main use yaad nai...!" he assured her.
"acha beta aaj tu uska peecha kar aur pata kar ki woh kahan jaata hai kisse milta hai..sabkuch! Aur mujhe khabar dete rehna..acha ab main rakhti hun..aur sun apna khyal rakhna!!" she hung up.

Aman left smiling but little did he know that Raghu had overheard his conversation with Daya mai..
He immediately called Antara and told her that today they would meet at the Mughal Gardens and not Dal lake...Raghu was worried about antara...he didn't want her to get into trouble because of him!! He told Machmach everything..."kya bol raha hai bhai?? Daya mai tujhe maarna chahti hai?" he said astonished.
"Han machmach lekin tu chinta mat kar woh log humara kuch nai bigad paenge...aur woh kya mujhse badla lenge..paanch saal pehle jo mai ne meri behen ke saath kiya tha uske liye badla toh main unse lunga...tu bas dekhta jaa!!" he said.


umm..So guys..i hope you liked it! i modified the actual story a little..hope you like it though. and as usual i hope i didn't bore you! keep reading my story. Thank you!😊


Edited by sanjanasanyal - 11 years ago

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