Ishq Bulaava: A Rantara Love Story - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its lovely
reely it s ishq bulava
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with another crappy update. I was busy due to my exams...they are still going on but I thought of updating my story. I must warn you though...this update is not so good. But I promise to give you a better update once my exams are over. Till then bear with the torture

Chapter 5

"Han Raghu bolo.."Antara said

"Woh ...woh ...Miss Kaul...Main kya bol raha tha.."Raghu tried to tell her what he felt..but after trying for a long time he decided to propose her once they went to Mumbai.."Woh tu apne internship ke liye Mumbai aa rahi hai na..?" He said finally giving up.

"Han main aa rai hun..! kyun?" Antara replied

"Woh kyun na tu aur rukhsana Mumbai chalne ke baad humare ghar mein rahe..?"He blurted out...he was still holding antara's hand but he didn't seem to realize that.

"Han zaroor...but can you convince my parents?" Antara replied with a smile...she couldn't believe that Raghu had asked her to stay with them.

"Yaa sure I will convince them...you don't have to worry about that" Raghu replied grinning.

"Acha thik hai...toh hum aaj lautne ke time pe mamma papa se baat kar lenge...okay?" She said

"Okay!!"Raghu replied enthusiastically.

"Acha ab Raghu ji aap kripa karke mera hath chodenge..??" She said..she was really enjoying his company.

"Oh han sorry..!" he said leaving her hand and smiled.

Antara smiled back...Raghu was mesmerized seeing her smile..he could just stare at her throughout the whole day..."Raghu?? Raghu?? Kahan kho gaye??" Antara asked snapping her fingers in front of his eyes.

"Woh kuch nai..chal machmach aur Rukhsana ko dhoondhte hain.." He said

"Han chalo!" she smiled...Antara hadn't smiled so much in years...she couldn't believe that she found such a good friend who always made her smile.

When Raghu found machmach and Rukhsana...he ran straight upto him and asked Rukhsana to excuse them for a moment...Rukhsana left...and Machmach glared at his bhai.

"Machmach...tu vishwas nai karega main tere liye kya khabar laya hun...!!" He said softly..making sure that the girls couldn't hear him..."maine antara se bola ki kyun na who aur rukhsana humare ghar mein rahe after going to Mumbai and she said yes!!!!" he said flashing his perfect set of teeth.

"Kya baat kar raha hai bhai!!!!!!!!" Machmach screamed.

"Arey arey kya baat hai..?hume bhi toh pata chale.." Antara said

Arey yaar yeh machmach bhi na kya karta hai ab pata nai kya jawab dega miss kaul ko...raghu thought to himself.

"Arey woh kuch nai Antara bhai mujhe bol raha tha ki woh...woh ek naya game khel raha hai wahan pe woh level 50 par pahunch gaya.." He said idiotically.

Hay bhagwan...iss machmach ko toh bahane bhi banana nai aate...kya karun main iska...? Raghu thought to himself.

"Oh acha!" Antara replied..she knew that it was something related to her and rukhsana's staying at Raghu's house..she was enjoying herself...but little did she know that she had started liking Raghu...

"Acha Miss Kaul ab hum chalte hain tere mamma papa se bhi toh baat karni hai...!"Raghu said..changing the topic.

The four of them reach Dr.Kaul's house..."Chalo...ghar aa gaya!" Antara said

"Han tu aur Rukhsana jaa hum aate hain..!" Raghu said nervously.

"Acha thik hai jaldi aana! Chal Rukhsana!" and the bothof them left.

Antara stopped Rukhsana on the way and both of them hid behind the pillar to see what they were doing...Raghu was feeling very nervous as this would be his first impression on her parents and he wanted everything to be perfect..he was constantly running his hand through his hair making sure that they were in place...Machmach was sweating...both of them gave each other a meaningful look...meanwhile antara and Rukhsana were rolling on the floor with laughter...they were having so much fun..seeing them nevous..Raghu and machmach started walking and Antara and Rukhsana ran inside.

"Mamma...yeh humare friends Raghu aur Machmach hai...hum inse Gulmarg mein mile the...yeh dono Mumbai ke rehne waale hain!" Antara said while introducing them to her mother.

"Hello beta! Aane mein koi takleef toh nai hui na tum dono ko?" She asked smiling.

"Hello aunty...nice to meet you aur aane mein koi takleef nai hui!" Raghu said..he was a lot less nervous now.

"Tum log baitho main antara ke papa ko bulaati hun.." her mother said and walked away..Raghu started to feel uneasy..he was very nervous...he looked at Machmach beside him...he was shaking..he hadn't opened his mouth even once yet..and it didn't seem like he was going to...

"Hello boys!!" Dr.Kaul said cheerfully..."How are you?"

Raghu extended his arm towards him and stood up straight saying"I am absolutely fine sir! What about you?"

"No no pehle toh no sir!! Call me uncle..and I am fine please take your seat.." He said with a smile

Machmach shook his arm and introduced himself..

"Uncle hum yahan aapse kuch poochne aaye the!" raghu said building up courage...Dr.Kaul seemed like a nice man...he wouldn't throw him out of the house at least.

"Han bolo!" He said

"Uncle jab Antara aur Rukhsana Mumbai jaengi toh kya woh humare ghar pe ruk sakti hain...kyunki aaj kal toh mumbai mein rehne ki jagah milna bhi bahut mushkil hai..." he said..

"Tumhare ghar mein kaun kaun hai?" He enquired.

"Main mom aur dad...!" he replied nervously...Bappa ! please bacha lena...kahin yeh mana na karde..Raghu thought to himself.

"okay sure! Par kya main tumhare mom dad se ek baar baat kar sakta hun?" He said smiling

OMG!!! DID HE SAY YES??? YES!! HE DID! Raghu couldn't believe what he just heard.

"Han zaroor uncle yeh raha unka number!" he said giving him his phone.

Dr.Kaul went inside and talked to his parents for five minutes...he came back with a smile on his face" Han who donor eh sakte hain..par unka dhyan rakhna!!" Dr. kaul said cheerfully.

"Han uncle bilkul rakhunga..!" Raghu said excitedly and turned towards antara She smiled and Raghu winked...her cheeks turned a rosy red.

"tum dono dinner kha ke hi jaana!" Antara's mother said with a smile

At the dinner table...

Dr. Kaul's phone rang..

"hello ?kya ..? Bomb blast?oh god...nai nai hum log kahin bahar nai jaenge..thank you hume batane ke liye!" and he hung up

"kya hua papa?" Antara asked

"Beta Dal lake ke paas bomb blast hua hai...hum sab ko ghar se bahar nikalne ko mana kiya hai!" he looked worried.

"Beta tum dono aaj yahin ruk jao humare ghar mein...khatra dur ho jaye toh chale jaana!" Antara's mother told Raghu and Machmach.."Rukhsana tub hi yahin ruk jaa!"

"Par aunty..." Raghu was interrupted by Antara"Par war kuch nai Raghu tum dono kahin nai jaane waale!!" she warned.

"Acha thik hai!" raghu said...he knew he couldn't argue with her at this moment.

Suddenly Machmach asked Dr.kaul.."Uncle jagah kaunsi batayi aapne?"

"Dal lake!" he replied

Machmach and Raghu looked at each other...they knew the culprit..."saala aman!!" Raghu thought to himself.

After the dinner...

Everybody had gone to sleep...except for Raghu..he just couldn't sleep...so he decided to walk in the corridor...suddenly while walking he looked downstairs and saw Antara going towards the kitchen...he rushed downstairs seeing her.

"Arey Miss Kaul tu itni raat ko kitchen mein kya kar rai hai...?" He asked...he was happy to see her there...

"Woh kuch nai aise hi mujhe chocolates khane ka mann hua toh main aa gayi! Tumhe chahiye?" She offered.

"Han de na mujhe chocolates bahut pasand hai..!" Raghu said...

Antara took out two packs of chocolates and handed one to Raghu with a smile. Both of them ate the chocolate...and they were talking about their childhood..Antara had chocolate all over her face..Raghu was only staring at her...she looked so cute...just like a child..Raghu raised his arm and removed the chocolate smudge fom her cheek...Antara just looked at him...and they were lost in each other...both of them felt lucky to be living this beautiful moment with each other..suddenly Antara came to her senses..."Raghu ab chalo tum jake so jao bahut raat ho chuli hai" she said shyly.

"Han...bas jaa hi raha hun!" Raghu replied...he didn't want to take his eyes off her...

"Good night!!" Antara said cheerfully

"Han good night Miss Kaul!" Raghu replied...he didn't want her to go so soon..

Antara left...Raghu ruffled his hair and smiled.."What a night!!" he said with a smile.

Precap for chapter 6

"Raghu jaldi chalo...mere concert ka wakt ho raha hai! Main late ho jaungi!" Antara said

"Han bas aaya miss Kaul!"Raghu replied...he couldn't wait to see his miss Kaul perform.

The doorbell rang..

"Raghu thoda dekho na!" Antara said

"Han ek minute!" He said and opened the door...he was stunned..

"AMAN??" He said.

Okay finally my crappy update is over...still hope you liked it though...!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
wow such a lovly update dnt call it crap
precp omg aman
pls cont asap ans good luck with ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow such a lovly update dnt call it crap

precp omg aman
pls cont asap ans good luck with ur exams



Thank you! i am glad you liked it..and yes..Aman !! a lot of twists and turns are yet to come...
Stay tuned!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww! superb update..👏
her parents agreed fr their staying in raghu's house...awesome!😉
uff ye aman!..he is so annoying😡.
loved ur update sanjana😃...specially the chocolate scene...😳
n precap..omg!!! ye yahan kaiise?😲
tfpm
n all the best fr exams..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Iw was Amazing update.. 👍🏼
precap is.. 😲
plz continue soon...nd thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
hai sanjana its to lovely so emotional an lovely an chocolate sence was so lovely an ua aman is antra s frinde
wow antra raghu ke gar rahe wow so lovely more romince
yaar can i coll u sunju pleesh i love yore update so mach
relly wight fo mumbai treck
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
it ws really gd update..
finally antu goin to mumbai at raghus place
n blast at dal lake..ufff kamina aman
precap m bh h..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Don't call it crap ok... It was a really good update!!

I loved it!

Waiting for the next one and all the best for your exams! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Lovely update please don't call it crap
I loved it precap looks 😕
Please update soon
Thanks for the pm

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