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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update.. Excellent fight sequence u did a very awesome job
I am always eager to read your updates
Dm finally has got locked up now quickly get aman and siddiqui cought quickly
I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

icecream tere liye

aww pampire ji... thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wwowww ria👏 👏
i never thought that i will like so much this action packed sequence.😆 😆
u nailed it very well..👏
rantara moments were awesome...😆
everything is unfolding slowly slowly.😉 😉
thnku so much for PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

ufff meri yedi! why did u say chappal phekungi?? itna mast likha hai tune! YES YES YES! pakri gayi kamini! YES YES YES!!!


i knew...kab goli chali..mujhe pata tha uspar hi padi hogi! uff YES YES YES! KAMINI CAME DOWN! 🥳
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I AM SO HAPPY! YESS YAYYY!

ab please some romance! 😳😳😳 🤣

arey thanku ishu my yeri...🤗.. main rantara ko uss dayan ke hatho marne doo??😡 never..😎
fir romance...itna sara romancee milta hain fir bhi tera pet nahi bharta...😛lol..

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

ria!!! how dare u to say that u don't know hw to wirte action sequence😡 it was superb dear!👏😆

i just loved the part when thye both hugged eachother..she confessed her feelings😳...nd both were ready to die in eachothers arm at that moment my eyes become full of tears😭..bt DM shot down and they r saved..super happy moment!😃
ab bs sidiqui n aman ka khel khatam krna baki hai..😈
phir rantara ki shaadi...
tfpm😊


ps..RIA RANTARA KI SHAADI MEIN INVITE NHI KAROGI HUM SABKO?😉😆

oww thanku suchi meri yeri..🤗
don't be gussa... 😉... i am really so clueless about those dhisum dhisum thing
DM koka to aisa hona hi tha...😆
ab tujhe shadi bhi chhiye?🤢... kitnadrag karoon yaar??🤣 ab to chor de mujhe😆

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Ria , i loved this update. ANTARA CONFESSED !!! IM SO HAPPY !!!!


thnk u... MUAHHH...

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wah ria dil khush kar diya...

Kya dishum dishum ki h raghu ne...
Hamara permanent hero..
Loved d verbal spat btwn raghu n dm..
I ws scared as hell jb dm was pointing
D gun thinking who vl save dem..
Awww rantara kitna pyar krte h n
Wanted to die together if cnt live
Lively dear..hugsss
Thanks n update soon
Btwn fight sequence acha toh
Likha tha dear..ur gd at dat too


ya raghu is our permanent hero..😎
thx a lot priyu..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nbw16

Ria... Super fighting sequence

I was so enjoying the way u imagined the whole scene... 👏
I was dancing like a kid... That devil lady... I so wanted that big ego of her should shatter in pieces...
Raghu...The ultimate one... Go to hell DM and let our Rantara live in peace.
I swear i wanted to strangle her with my own hands... hehe
Thank u the for PM and for this mindblowing update... ⭐️

thx a lot neha...
yup... DM go to hell... dil ki bharas nikal li puri...😡
love u MUAHHH,,,🤗

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Yedi ria 🤗
I loved the update so much
Kya action sequence tha I thought I was seeing that scene 😉
As a writer you did a splendid job
Bechari dm ki tie tie fish hogaye 😆 😆
Ab jaldi se aman or siddiqui ko pakrwa dey
And cute cute romantic updates dnd mein banty hai 😉
Update soon
Thankxx for pm 🤗

i love u too yeri..🤗[
ha ha... lagta hain main pass ho gayi... yaar tujhe pata nahin meri kya halat thi... soch hi nahi pa rahi thi ki kya likhoon...
yaar tu aur ishu romance romance karti ja rahi hain... aur suchi ko ab wedding chahiye..🤣
but love u all MUAHHH..

Originally posted by: nazi786

Wonderful update.. Excellent fight sequence u did a very awesome job
I am always eager to read your updates
Dm finally has got locked up now quickly get aman and siddiqui cought quickly
I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
Thanks for the pm

THX A LOT... aman and siddiqi will also be in their place soon..😆

thx rima

Originally posted by: Smaggy

wwowww ria👏 👏

i never thought that i will like so much this action packed sequence.😆 😆
u nailed it very well..👏
rantara moments were awesome...😆
everything is unfolding slowly slowly.😉 😉
thnku so much for PM.

aww thank u megha😳

Originally posted by: Archu2013

Nice update :-) u've portrayed the action seq. nicely...fight scene acha tha:-)liked the way antu expressed her love n zoya's entry with colonel n miltarymen..they saved rantara.bt rantara stil nt safe dm ko toh pakad liya par abhi siddiqui aur aman baki hein:-P apna mission complte karne ki koshish toh woh log zarror karenge.hope they too got arrestd soon

thx...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

yeh tere liye hai Ria ...jaldi se melt hone se pahle kha le...😆😆😆...i can guess how tremendously exhausted u r after writing down such super brilliant update ... u r the one n only THRILLER ACTION ROMANCE queen ...the TRIO queen ...of this forum!!!
hattts off to you for giving us such a marvellous superduper thrilling update ...the comedy that u inserted when Raghu said Bappa ne supari diya hai ise bachaneka ...i was like rolling and jumping hard ...that was so intense ...
for few secnds i thought Raghu was gonna be injured by the bullet of DM but sigh ...u saved me .. by saving Raghu ...😆😳
thank u dear for this awesome wholesome update ... ...waise mera shopping chalu hai tere gifts eksath sare bhejungi ...ghabra mat ...altu faltu nahi achha wala gft bhejungi 😃 u deserve the best gifts for this beyond wonderful story😃


seriously yaar... mere saar khujate khujate baal kam ho gaye sayad...🤢... yaar jab bhi action seq ata hain mera dimag ka halwa ban jata hain ye sichke ki main kya likhoon...... actually i am a totally non violence follower...🤣
yaar thx for the icecream... aww i love you re...😳
trio queen... lol... itne title mere se nahi samhale jate...🤣
yaar main raghu ko kaise kuch karne de sakta hoon... mujhe pata hain raghu ko kuch huya too sare forum girls ke heart attack aa jayengey...🥺🤣
love you MUAHHH...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IT WAS JUST AWEESSSOOOMEEE RIA...I LOVED IT...what a thriller update...OMG
Kya mast dialogue tha yeh..."tere ko uss siddiqui ne supari di hain issey maar ne ki na... to mere ko bappa ne supari di hain isseey bacha ne ki... aur sun daya naik... iske taraf ane wale har hath ko apun kaat dega.. chahein woo tera hath hi kyun na hoo..."
FULL ACTION PACKED...you left me stunned...you left me speechless AGAIN...hats off ria...👏
Meri taraf se tumhare liye...only for this update...love ya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

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IT WAS JUST AWEESSSOOOMEEE RIA...I LOVED IT...what a thriller update...OMG
Kya mast dialogue tha yeh..."tere ko uss siddiqui ne supari di hain issey maar ne ki na... to mere ko bappa ne supari di hain isseey bacha ne ki... aur sun daya naik... iske taraf ane wale har hath ko apun kaat dega.. chahein woo tera hath hi kyun na hoo..."
FULL ACTION PACKED...you left me stunned...you left me speechless AGAIN...hats off ria...👏
Meri taraf se tumhare liye...only for this update...love ya

aww choo chweett... thax purple dr...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh so finally dm is caught red handed
nd antara confessed dat she loves him
lets see ab aman aur siddique ka kya hota hai
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 64

"ouch!!..." antara winced a bit as the lady doctor touched the bump on her feet. "eee madam aap tang thik karne aayi hain ya taang torne?!!" raghu who was standing near the wall crossing his hands said with loud voice. all of them were in a protected room of army head quarter. Antara was seating on the bed with zoya at her side. isan and zara were outside and a lady doctor was checking antara's ankle. "raghu...!!" antara rolled her eyes and indicated to keep him quite. "sir aap pareshan mat hoiye... madam jald thik ho jayengey... maine bandage kar diya hain.." the lady doc said and bandaged antara's feet. "arey thik se patti kar na... udhar thik se nahi huya..." he said indicating to her feet. "uff this guy.." antara said out of her breath in slight irritation. "but nodoubt he cares for you a lot!! You know, you are very lucky to have him in your life.." zoya said in slow voice with a gentle smile. antara nodded with a slight pleasant smile. doctor finished her work and said, "okk madam... your ankle will be fine by day after tomorrow and please try to avoid putting pressure on your leg for tomorrow at least.." doctor said. "thank u doctor.." antara nodded. The doctor got out of the room. Zoya also went with her. Raghu came at seat beside antara. "yaar tu bhi naa... kaha thaa chup chap bathne ka... fir jeep se niche kyun utri?!" he said in loud voice. "tum fir suru ho gaye!!" she said in a bit irritation. "arey yaar... tere pair mein firse chot aa gayi..." he said with a bit sad voice and lowered his gaze. His gaze caught her bandaged ankle. He slightly touched her bandage and caressed that. "arey kya kar rahe ho.. choro mera ankle.." she said in a bit ashamed voice. "arey tu chup rahe naa thori der ke liye..." he said still caressing her ankle. His eyes were fixed on her bandages and were a bit sad. She smiled and caught his hand to console her. "raghu main thik hoon... sach mujhe darad nahi ho raha hain,.. main jald hi thik ho jaungi.." antara said in assuring tone. She cupped his face and made him look to her. his eyes were really sad and low. She smiled and blinked to him saying that she was alright. He at last smiled back to him. he caught her hand which was placed on her chick and kissed deeply on her palm. She closed her eyes feeling the calm beautiful feeling spreading in her heart. She opened her eyes after some moment and look back to his face. at that moment the small cut on his chin got into her notice. Her eyes became worried. "raghu tumhe chot kaise lagi?!!" she asked. "arey kuch nahi hain.. choti si kharoch haain.." he tried to avoid that but antara already noticed the other cut on his left arm and the dried blood around that. "god!! Kitni gaheri chot hain..." she gasped and touched the wound on her arm. "arey yaar tu itni dar kyun jati hain... uss gundey se larte waqt chaku lag gaya... kuch naii huya yaar.. kuch dino mein sukh jayega.." raghu said trying to assure her. Antara looked at the wound with sad eyes and slowly her eyes became a bit moistened. "miscall... Arey yaar!! Fir teri nail mein ched ho gaya... ee idhar dekh... Mere ko dekh ke lag raha hain ki kuch huya hain?!" he said and touched her chicks to brush her tears away. "dekh ab roneka naii... abtoo sab thik ho gaya... Aur naii yaar... bas... miscall chup.." he tried to console her. she lifted her wet lids to his face. "maine pahele hi kaha tha ki mat laro unsee.. kabhi meri baat naii maante ho..." she said with a bit upset voice. "antara!!..." he said slowly. "kaha na kuch naii huya... tu apun ki baat bhool gayi... mere ko ye chota sa kharoch se kuch farak naii parne wala par tere asoob se parte hain..." he said in sad voice. she lowered her gaze and shoved her tears. "miscall... ab se tu kabhi naii royegi samjhi na..." he said in quite ordering voice. "acha baba thik hain... tumhari ye baat bhi maan leti hoon... nahi royungi main.." she said in a very adorable voice and smiled. Looking at her usual smile, raghu's worry lessened and he smiled back at her too. "acha dekho too yahan room mein kahin first aid box hain kya... tunhare ghaon pein dawai laga deti hoon... acha lagega..." she said. "arey naii yaar... bahut jalta hain... kaha na ye do din mein thik ho jayega..." he tried to avoid. "raghu tum medicine la rahe ho ya main khud jaoon?!" antara rolled her eyes. "arey naii... jata hain na apun..." he said looking at her posture. He knew that if he wouldn't listen, yeri would surely try to stand up on her own feet. So he went and searched for a bit. After some searching, he easily got a medicine box and brought that to her. antara let out the medicine and touched his chin and started to apply medicine. Raghu felt shiver allover his feature as his fingers touched his chin. Her fingers were caressing on the corner of his lips which was making goose bump on his feature. Her wide hazels were so close to him. He felt his feelings arising. His gaze became intense as his index finger unknowingly touched his lips and caressed gently while applying medicine. His desires were arising again. as she was done with his jaw's wound, she concentrated on his arm. Antara tried to remove the sleeve of his jacket but that wound was a quite inside. The sleve didn't reach upto that. "ruk..." raghu said and and slowly removed his jacket sitting in front of him in his black vest. Antara couldn't afford the slow gasp when she noticed his well built biceps on his arm. The deep scratch was just at the mid of upper part of arms. Raghu hide his smirk, looking at her uneasiness. "kya huya miscall... dawayi naii lagani?!" he said in a bit teasing tone. Antara closed her eyes with a deep breath to compose herself. And finally she started to apply medicine on his arm. Raghu felt how her hands were shaking slightly at first. But soon she drifted into her work. But it was going bad for raghu. Her tender fingers were moving on his biceps and giving him current in his nerves. She didn't notice that how his eyes were looking to her bended face with an intense look. As she finished her work and about to move further, his other hand hold her shoulder keeping her close to her. raghu bend a bit and placed a gentle kiss on antara's top. The kiss was so gentle and soothing. Antara closed her eyes and smiled. He snuggled a bit through her silky hairs and whispered. "antara tu mere ko fir se wo baat batayegi..." he said. "kaun si baat?!!" she said still keeping her gaze low. "wohich jot u udhar kahe rahi thi... mai pe goli chalne se pahele..." he said with a bit chuckle. She understood that what he wanted to listen from her. Her face became a slight red again. "mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hain..." she said in shy voice. "acha aisa kya?!!" he gently cupped her face and looked in her eyes lovingly. "to apun fir se banduk ke samne khara ho jayein kya?! Fir to tu bolegi na?!!" he said looking straight in her eyes. "she gasped in fear and put her finger on his lips to shut him up. "nahin aisa kabhi mat kahena... Pata hain mere dil ki dharkane ruk jati hain jab tum aisi baat karte ho..." She said in worried voice. "to phir bata de na..." he demanded. "woo main...nahin bata sakti..." her face was all red and she lowered her gaze. "antara!!..." he frowned a bit, "kyun baar baar zabardasti karte ho,... kahan naa naii bata sakti.." she said in low voice. raghu looked at her face for a while with firm gaze and suddenly left her face. antara became startled. God, did she made him upset by her words. Raghu stood up from bed and was about to leave when he heard antara's voice. "raghu!!..." she said. He stopped there for a while without looking back to her. "sorry!!.." she said in grief. He didn't look back and forwarded his feet towards the door. Antara's heart ached as she saw him going far. " raghu!!... ruko..." she said. He almost reached near the door. She just couldn't c him going away. She took a deep breath gathering her all courage. "okkk... I LOVE YOU!!... ab khus?!!" she said loudly. His feet stopped near the door. Antara looked at his feature worriedly. Why wasn't he saying anything. Suddenly he held the door and banged that close. She became a bit startled. Raghu locked the door from inside and looked back to her with a wide irresistible smirk. looking at her face antara understood that he was faking his anger all the way. to tum mazak kar rahe the?!!" he said with a miffed voice. "kya karoon... tu sidhe sidhe koi bhi baat naii maanti... to apun ko yehich tera rasta lena parta hain.." he said with mischievous voice. "you are such a despo..." she said in a same miffed voice. He frowned and slowly approached to her. She sensed something fishy in his expression. What's coocking in his mine? Raghu came and leaned on her, keeping his both hands at both side of her feature, caging her in between his arms. His eyes were dangerously intense. Antara gulped finding him so near. "tune abhi dekha hi kya hain ki apun kya kar sakta hain miscall." His voice was deep and attrackting which generally rise her heartbeat. "tumne... darwaja kyun bandh kiya?!..." she said in a bit low voice. "taki koi disturb na kare... Aur waisey bhi... tere ko puri raat yehich mere sath bitana hain..." his smirk increased. "kya?!!!" she breathed heavily as her heart thudded in his words. "woo dusre room mein jagah nahi thi aur wo nachari apni momma ke bina naii so pati hain... to zoya bhabi ne kahan wooo udharhich bacho ke sath so jayegi... to akhir mein bacha tu aur main... aur tere ko iss halat mein apun akela to naii chorega... ye to tu jaanti hain na?!!" he said closing their distent a bit more. Antara lowered her gaze. Her heart was racing like mad. She and raghu all alone in a room... she didn't know but the thought was making her nerves impulse heavily. "puri raat apun ke jaise ek gunde ke sath ek kamre mein... Rahe payegi?!!" he chuckled. She gulped again. "dar lag raha hain antara?!!" his voice was becoming irresistible with time. Suddenly he saw a mild smile spreading on her face. she lifted her face and looked at his eyes straightly with such a deep look. Then she slowly nodded her head answering in clear no. "mujhe tumse dar nahi lagta.." she said in low but confident voice. Her word really gave him so much please that his lips parted into a smile. "kyun?!!" he asked playfully. Her eyes gleamed in something. "kyunki main jaanti hoon, tum mere sath kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakte..." she said looking straightly in his eyes. The trust and belief oozed from her eyes while saying those words made him dumbfounded for a while. He was amused that she could have so much deep trust to a goon like him. "itna bharosa hain mere pe?!!" he asked with a wide grin. "tum soch bhi nahi sakte...sayad main apne aap pein bhi utna bharosa nahin karti hoon jitney tumpe karti hoon!" her eyes express the faith. Her each and everything made him startled, surprised. He slowly slide his hand on her back and brought her closer to his chest. she kept her temple on his strong chest and closed her eyes with a gentle smile. he buried his face on her shoulder and became still for a while. Both of them became silent for a while and listened to each other's heartbeat. "tere iss bharose ko kabhi nahi torega apun... pakka promise..." raghu said in loving voice. "I know..." antara said from his chest, increasing her smile. raghu slowly shifted his position and made her lie on the bed being careful about her hurt leg. Their eyes never left each other anytime. A pleasant gleam was in both of their gaze. He put her head on the pillow and leaned so close to her. Her smile was so mesmerizing from close view. Her warm innocent hazel oozing with the love and trust for him, inviting him to drown in that. He slowly leaned closer and joined his lips with her in a light pleasant kiss. At last they became one. No one was there in between them. both of them closed their eyes feeling the bliss of that moment. Raghu slowly parted his lips gently and lie on her back side. he placed his hand around her feature and she felt his gentle kisses on her nape. It was so soothing. Antara closed her eyes feeling the bliss and raghu cuddled her lightly in his arms giving her comfort. Soon they both dozed into their peaceful sleep after so long, feeling each other so close.

While zoya came out of antara's room she decided to go to bed as she was hell tired. She saw ishan and zara were engaged in pillow fights. "ishan, zara... now it's enough... please get ready for bed. I am hell tired." Zoya said. "okk momma.."... " okkk aunty" both zara and ishan said in unison. Zoya was about to go to washroom to get fresh when a junior officer came there and called her. "sorry madam for disturbing you, but general wanted to meet you." he said. "ohh okk..." zoya said. "aunty can we come... we are feeling weird in all alone in the room." Ishan said. zoya thought for a while. "okk..." zoya agreed. They followed the officer and came in a dark room while some of the officers were seating around a pc. A man with short height and round face was seating near the pc and pulling his hairs. "what kind of specialist you are?! You can't even break a password?!!" the general said. "I am trying but it's too complicated. The security software is so tight for the system. I can't do it before tomorrow..." the man said. "we don't have time idiot!!..." general became frustrated. "Hey that's aman uncle's pc..." zara said looking towards the computer. "ohh madam you are here..." general said looking towards zoya. "sorry to bother you madam... but it's urgent. I was wondering if somehow you know thw password of aman's pc?! Our expert is trying hard but it's a very tough security system. And we need to open that immediately.." general said. "sorry but I don't know..." zoya said. "ohh okk... sorry to disturb you madam.." general said. "what happened sir, you looked worried." Zoya asked. "I am madam.. we have to find sidiqui's hideout before tomorrow's blast. With antara's and you peoples help we located the position of blast but still, we assume that the triggering control is still in siddiqui's hand. If we couldn't get that, we couldn't deactivate the bombs." General said. "ohh noo!!.." zoya said worriedly. "we searched each and every corner of siddiqui mansion. We got so many secret information, we also got the sercret basement and tunnel where antara was lost. We got huge numbers of arms and ammunitions, but no clue regarding to their hiding place. We reached at the end of tunnel. It ended at a remote place outside of shrinagar. And after that, we don't know where they have gone." General said. all of them became worried. "now this pc is our only hope. We are just wondering if we can get any info from that. But we can't even brake the password." He said. "excuse me sir!! But can I try once?!! I think I know the password." The little voice said from zoya's side. every pair of eyes on the room moved towards little zara.

ps: only one or two chapters to finish the story. thx for the appreaciation from you all.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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