'beauty n a beat' updated ch.6 pg 21 *do read* - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover

That was An Awesome Update..But 1 Sakayat..You update after sooo long...I want the next update FAST..ASAP..Anyway Loved This Upate...Ragini And Raghu Are Siblings..Antara Jel. Of Raghu...Aww..Cuties



Thanks dear 😊
Sorrie..😃 next tym i'll continue FAST.. ASAP!
Glad u lyked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

<font color="#ff00ff">Oh teri ...new twist of d stry 😉</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Raghu n ragini r brother sister n dat</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">To twins antara toh gayi😆 as she</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Is thinking dat she os ragus gf..omggg</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Now what ??😲 Hopefully she gets to</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Knw dat soon ...n love dere knok </font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Jhok so cute 😳 antu ws searchibg fr </font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Him bt when he came she started </font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Fighting⭐️...shes crazyy; </font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Nice update dear 👏 👏 </font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Update asap..n thanks </font>



Thanks a lott 😊

Glad dat u lyked it 😃

Yeah Antu is a bit crazy 😆

I'll try 2 update ASAP 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 6
It ws their 1 day in class. Evry1 came in n sat next 2 their friends Antu, ruku n rasika wer sitting nxt 2 ech othr wheras raghu, mm n their friends wer sitting togethr bt raghini ws nowher 2 b seen. The lecturer entered, she was a pleasant luking woman in hr early 30s n vry well mannerd. She kpt her books on d table n startd her class
Lecturer- mrning class, im Ms. Arpita. I'll b teaching u guys music 4 d nxt 3 yrs. Now i want ur introduction bt not in d boring old style in wich u stand tell ur name n sit bt in my style.
Rasika- how???
Ms. Arpita- 1 by 1 you guys hav 2 cum up here tell ur name n sing a song which u lyk. If ur bad at singing wich i hope ur not u can play any instument of ur choice. In this way tum logon ka intro bhi ho jayega aur tumhare talents bhi dhik jayenge. So who will start?
Antara stood up went up 2 d platform, took d mike n ws abt 2 start whn Raghini came running n a boy ws wid hr which antu couldn't recognise.
Ms.A- oh.. pehle hi din late anyways go take ur seat!
Raghini went n sat nxt 2 Raghu. The othr boy was also from raghu's grup so he sat near them.
Ms.A- now u can start.
Antara- hello, my name is Antara Kaul, im frm basically frm Kashmir bt now live in Mumbai. Im vry passionate abt Music n luv singing. N here goes my fav song...

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah...

Antara's singing ws mesmerising, the whole class was impressed by her voice n hr charm. Evn Ms.Arpita appreciated hr singing. Next it ws Ruku's turn.

Ruku- Hi evry1, im Ruksana, im frm Mumbai love reading, painting n all sorts of games n yeah music is my lyf n i can't survive widout it. N here's my intro song...

Ishq fikar da chadde palla
Mauj karda ho ke jhalla jeeve..
Isq mein dil na
Hoyea fakeeri
Maange sab ki
Khatir sukayya, jeeve..

Gira deeware..
Laga lalkare..
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage...yeah...

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..

No sooner did Ruku finish her song Rasika ran up 2 d platform, took d mike frm Ruku's hands n spoke-
hey guys, im Rasika n i kno im hot but also vry smart
(Antu, ruku- ya ya vry smart!) N i luv 2 sing, dance, travel n my fav is doing make up.. (Evry1 started giggling) n here's my song..

Gulabi ankhein jo meri dekhi,
Diwana har dil hogaya,
Sambhalo khud ko, zara becharo,
Ki jeena mushkil ho gya!!!

Mujhsi kahi, koi nahi,
Jo sab k khabo me hai, i'm d one!
Duniya mere, piche chale,
Mai sabse age hu, I'm numbr one!...

1 by 1 evry1 went up 2 d platform gav their intro n sang now oly Raghu n his grup wer remaining.

Raghini got up went infront n spoke-
Hi Im Raghini, i've been studing in US for the last few yrs but im basically frm Mumbai. I hav a lot of hobbies but singing is nt my hobby bt my lifeline. N my fav song..

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi jo
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

Throughout the whole song Raghini was jst staring at Raghu as if singing 4 him n our Antu ws staring at both of them. Next went MM

MM- hi evry1 im Machinder bt u'll can call me Machmach. I dnt hav many hobbies bt enjoy hanging out wid my friends. Im nt vry gud at singing bt still i'll giv it a go.

Kudiyon ka nasha pyare nasha sab se nasheela hai
Jise dekhoon yahaan woh husn ki baarish me geela hai

Ishak ke naam pe karte sabhi ab raas leela hai
Main karoon toh saala character dheela hai
Ho! Main karoon toh saala character dheela hai.

Mm- Oh yeah.. n my phone numbr is...
Ms.A- bas bas jitna gaaya utna kaafi hai aab jao..

Aftr Mm the guy who came wid Raghini went up n said-
Hello, im Prem Kashyap. I've been living in US for d last 5 yrs. I love indian classical music n folk. Bt addicted 2 bollywood songs. N here's my new fav

Iklauta mera dil tha
Bhola-bhala simple tha
Tujhse main takraya
Sarphira ho gaya
Mujhse pyaar laga jo
Tujhe laga bhai-chara
Armaan to jaaga
Main magar so gaya

Banke museebat
Peeche padi hai
Yeh comedy hai
Yaa tragedy hai
Naa hona tha kyun ho gaya
Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya...

Now only 1 person ws remaining n that's Raghu. Antara ws eager 2 kno which song he ws abt 2 sing.
Raghini- Raghu, chaliye aab sirf aap bache hai.
Raghu- jata hu na
Raghini- waise konsa gana gayenge?
Raghu- yeh gaana waana mujhe nahi aata.. mein baas woh guitar uthaunga n u kno d rest.
Raghini- nahi nahi nahi! I kno ur d best guitar player of the world bt u also hav d most beautiful voice. Aapke paas woh aavaz hai jiss ke liye saare ladke taraste hai. Plz Raghu plz sing a song.
Raghu- konsa???
Raghini- my favourite...
Raghu- no no never!
Raghini- plzz Raghu 4 me, maine aaj tak aapse kuch nahi maanga par aaj maang rahi hu. Plz Raghu sing my fav song..
Raghu- tera yeh drama bandh kar jaa raha hu.
Antara saw Raghini pleeding Raghu 2 sing. Raghu went infront, picked up d guitar (Raghini folded her arms n made an angry face) Raghu smiled, adjusted d mike on d stand n said-
Im Raghu, Raghunath Naik! Im from Amchi Mumbai! N dis song is 4 u my drama queen...

(Thami thami si saansein thami thami jeene lagi hain tumse jo mill gayi)
Asar yeh kaisa teri chahat ka hai mujhpe ho gaya zaara zaara mere dil ka ab tujh main hi kho gaya
Meharbaan lavo rab barsa hai jab se tu hai mil gaya
Tujh ko pa ke aisa laage ke khood se hoon mil gaya
Ke rang jo lagyo... re ke rang jo lagyo re
Ke rang jo lagyo re lagyo ke rang jo lagyo re
Lagyo re lagyo
Ke rang jo lagyo re rang jo lagyo re
Ke thaaro rang.

Raghu's song was d best. Raghini ws d happiest person in d whole class. Jumping n clapping lyk a kid. Evn Ms.Arpita ws impressed by his voice n his talents. The whole class was talking abt Raghu's song n ther ws a big noise aftr this.

Ms- ok class, keep quiet now i'll declare whoz song ws d best.
As soon as Ms.Arpita said this ther ws pin drop silence.
Ms.- wow! This is a gr8 way 2 keep you'll quiet.
Ruku- miss bataiye na kisska song best tha?
Ms.- ok it's a tie between
Evry 1 was luking at hr as if she was declaring their final yr results
Ms- between Antara n Raghu
Evry1 started clapping n cheering 4 them. Antara was vry happy wheras Raghu seemed unaffected.
Ms- ok aab prize ki baari u 2 hav 2 create by recording dmsound u hear in ur evryday lyf. Jst record d sound u lyk n arrange d recordings 2 create a masterpiece. I kno u 2 can do this effortlessly. U 2 hav 15 days, that's more than a week so aaram se kaam karo, work as a team. U 2 r d best singers n d most talented, put in ur 100% n complete ur work on tym.

As soon as she finished d bell rang, all d students started moving out bt 2 students were frozen at their places, they were raghu n Antara. They had 2 work wid ech othr!
Raghu- Godd.. pehli class aisi hoti hai kya? This can't gt any worse!
Antara- bagwanji aapko koi aur nahi milla, har baar yehi kyu?

Antara told ruku n rasika 2 leave as she wanted 2 discuss d assignment wid Raghu. On d othr hand Raghu was carelessly moving out wid his friends when antara caught his hand. Raghu signelled his friend 2 leave now they both wer alone in d whole class.

Raghu- kya hai?
Antara- r u deaf ya teachr ne joh bola samajh mein nahi aaya?
Raghu- tu seedhe seedhe baat nahi kar sakti kya?
Antara- then lemme clear 1 thing, i hav no interest in doing dis assignmnt wid u.
Raghu- same here!
Antara- huh?!..
Raghu- aur ek baat sunn mein yeh assignment akele hi kar lunga, i dnt need u
Antara- seriously r u deaf? Ms.Arpita chose both of us 2 do this 2gethr as a team not u individually.
Raghu- ha par mujhe pagalo ke saath assignment karne mein koi interest nahi hai. Aur woh tumhari Ms.Arpita yeh koi prize hai kya? Aise toh koi punishment bhi nahi deta! N d worst thing is dat v hav 2 do it 4 free, koi marks bhi nahi dega.
Antara- ur ryt bt pagal kisko bola???
Raghu- samajdar ko ishara kafi hai!
Antara- huh?!?! Par karna toh hoga na, so meet me 2moro outside d lib at 10.
Raghu- nope, im busy!
Antara- kya karne mein? Toh hum start kab karege?
Raghu- whn i feel lyk doing this i'll call u, giv me ur numb!
Antara- umm.. numbr..
Raghu- oye, tuj mein koi intrst nahi hai aur kabhi hoga bhi nahi, yeh assignment nahi hota toh kabhi puchta bhi nahi! Dena hai toh do warna i'll do d assignment myseld... bye
Antara- no no wait i'll giv..



A/N- ho gaya mera boring sa update, likha toh bohot din pehle tha bt 4got 2 post it, now i was free so post kar diya. The songs which i've added r incomplete sorry 4 dat. N if ur disappointed then kaan pakad leti hu!




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Posted: 11 years ago
haashh!!!..u updated it..i was thinking that i will ask u when r u updating ur story😊..and don't call it boring😡😆..its outstanding yr..!!👏
i really like the way students introduced themselves..its so different😛.n atlast rantara have to work for an assignment together that is more interesting!!!...both are so smart koi kam nhi hai😆...ek ser to dusra savaser..assignment ka to pta nhi..pr ladte ladte kahin clg ki bulding hi na hila dein!🤣thanks for updating..n update soon🤗...ab to number bhi le liya hai raghu ne...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
well .
It was interesting and very nice update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow student intro awesome

rantra together

awesome work
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww dat ws a cute update nikki 😉
I really loved ur choice of songs fr everyone ❤️
So apt fr each character 😊
N ueah nw our rantara got to
Do an assignment together ws d best thing
Dat ws needed to bring dem close 😳
Bt seriously kitna ladte h dono 😆...
Hope love blossoms soon ...keep updating
😃 n tkcr dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic musical update Niki🤗
Nice song selection😊
Rantara were awesome and they have to work together now😛
Machmach🤣
Cute sister Raghini, superb Bhai-Behen jodi 😃
Update soon😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#993399">haashh!!!..u updated it..i was thinking that i will ask u when r u updating ur story😊..and don't call it boring😡😆..its outstanding yr..!!👏</font>

<font color="#993399">i really like the way students introduced themselves..its so different😛.n atlast rantara have to work for an assignment together that is more interesting!!!...both are so smart koi kam nhi hai😆...ek ser to dusra savaser..assignment ka to pta nhi..pr ladte ladte kahin clg ki bulding hi na hila dein!🤣thanks for updating..n update soon🤗...ab to number bhi le liya hai raghu ne...😉</font>



Thanx Suchi 😊
Woh sab kaam karenge par lede bagair nahi! 😃
I'll try 2 update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: liana2304

well .

It was interesting and very nice update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM



Thanx a lot 😊
No prob dear 😃

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