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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wow though it ws short bt still i loved d

Update ..😊... finally raghu is back...
He ws always dere fr her n with her..so cute..
😳...what an idea sirji...as dey r d
New tenant in d same house as is antara...❤️
N last kitchen part was..hayeee ...raghu n antara
Sooo closee... ❤️ ❤️ plzzz do update asap..
Vl be waiting fr nxt part..thanks purple..
Hugss


thanx priyu...
would try and update soon...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

purple!!!!!...i will surely kill u😈..firstly u updated so late..secondly it was short..thirdly what a cliffhanger yr????😲..aisa kyun kiya?..kyun? kyun? kyun?...sorry just kidding..😆..i was eagerly waiting for ur update..😃

its short bt very sweet update..😳.raghu ne to kamaal hi kr diya he is actually a very nice gunda 😎raghu n his gang planned well to meet them n raghu is so caring...specially for antu😳...he not only helped her bt also help Sabreena .😛...aww kitchen scene was so sweet+emotional..bt tumne "to be continued.."type krke chhod diya😆...nw plzz update soon can't wait to read more..😊.rantara are together again.thank u so much for updating luv u...🤗


Suchi...you can surely kill me...I'm all yours 😆
btw thanx you so much for your appreciation...😳
it means alot to me..
love ya..😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nazi786

Finally u update it was an Amazing update
Short but amazing. Antara can't get raghu out of her mind
Finally he has reached her can't wait for more scene of them
Thanks for updating thanks for the pm


Thanx alot Nazi...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

hey purply my darling... sorry for the late review.. i am in trip so can't have time to come online :

but just got a little time and came online... lol... was hell tired but your update made me energetic as well... ⭐️
and coming to update...
so, this is the start of antara's battle between mind and heart... ye too hona hi tha😕..but it will be interesting to read😉
omg what is this? raghu na apni puri battalian le kar sabreena ke ghar hi aa gayi..😲😆
and sabreena also went... abtoo raghu ki chandi hi chandi.,..
and the last part what to say about that... that was magical... their closeness... the emotions between them... all are wpnderful.. how she was watching her wound and how he consoled her...
awsome...👏👏👏
love yaa... muahhh...😳
wanna get detail review.. but sorry so busy...😕
hugee...😳


Awww...
thats so sweet of you Ria...
it means alot 😳
love you tooo 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

again it was a beautiful update Purpli ...i loved it and i was madly wanting more to read ...aisa laga ki shuru hote hi khatam ho gaya ...u know this was a really very very short update but i must say that it was very much captivating ...i literally stoped my breath whn only three boys entered Sabina's house and not Raghu ...and i was waiting for the meeting of Rantara ...

it was very sweet calming and soothing ...without saying much to each other only in few days Rantara's hearts came close this much ...Raghu didnt hesitated once to encircle her waist within his arms and pull towards him ...that moment was lovely ...thn Antara ka gussa ...Awww i loved it so much ...how sweet was that ...i can understand how fluttered Raghu wd hv felt...
plzzz cont soon ...waiting madly to read more ...😃
luv u dear


OMG!
thank you so much pampu.😳
would try and update soon.
love ya 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: liana2304

Aww

Interesting update .
Thxs for the PM
Continue ...


thanx alot dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Iris_blue



Hi Purple!
Let me introduce myself...My name is Iris 😳 and I'm a big fan of your story 'JUNOON'
Well this is my first post and I'm posting it in your thread...now You might be able to understand that How crazy I'm for 'JUNOON'.
#DDEJ has always been closer to my heart and your story made it more special.
Thank you for that 😊

Now silent readers ain't silent anymore.😆
So Do update your story ASAP.

With Love❤️,
Iris 😳



omg!!!!
its overwhelming!!!
thank you so much and welcome to my thread...😳
keep showering your love and support 😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
JUNOON~

Hello to all my lovely yedis 🤗...I know I'm late and I'm sorry about it.😕
So, here I'm with Part 13 and guess what?...Its gonna be crappiest update ever😆😆 because of vacation hangover 😲😲...Please do read and throw your lovely stilettos 😆😆😆





PART~13


Antara gasped by his sudden act and became motionless.Fresh tears sprang when she saw his bandaged chest.He saw where she was looking and started rubbing her back to calm her down..."Shhh..chup ho ja...kuch nahi hua hai...sab theek hai"...he spoke indirectly so that she doesn't feel awkward about the moment when she was gazing towards his wounded chest.He cupped her face and made her look into his eyes.Her heart thudded more voilently when she felt his intensity.Her parted lips were creating a havoc inside Raghu.She closed her eyes and he leaned more into her closing the gap between them.

A breath escaped his mouth making Antara's hair ruffle near her face.She squeezed her eyes while her hands tenderly clutched to his collar making him get drowned into her beauty.He was not able to resist himself from admiring those beautiful parted lips. Before he could lean in more and capture them...
'Antara'...

Rukhsana called from outside the kitchen breaking their trance. Raghu's grip loosened a bit making Antara set herself free.She blushed and lowered her eyes...and started running outside...
When she was about to reach the door...Raghu held her wrist, resisting her to to move any further.Her chest started heaving more when his hand slid onto her waist making her back bump into his chest.She closed her eyes to feel the new and unknown sensations which were emerging out.He pulled her hair to one side and rested his chin on her shoulder,making her more nervous and weak with whatever was erupting inside her...

"Apun se bina baat kiye hi... kaha chal di..ha! "...he spoke in a deep husky voice near her ear. Antara on the other end had mixed emotions.She was very much happy to see him but at the same time she was hell angry too...as he was there in the same city for so many days yet made no contact to her. That anger started overpowering her senses..she elbowed him and came out of his grip. Ouch!...managed to escape from his mouth and frowned looking at her.

She turned and gave an angry glare towards him while clutching his collar..."Kyun???...itne din dur the...tabh tumhe koi baat nahi karni thi jo aaj yaad aaya...ha!... pata hai kitna dar gayi thi main jab tumhari koi khabar nahi mili "...Her voice choked while saying that and Tears welled up in her eyes...Raghu froze on hearing that.She shook him and spoke again..."tumhe koi farak padhta hai ya nahi ha!...mazaa aata hai na dusre ko tang karne mein?...karo ab jitna tang karna hai...kyuki ab na main tumhare bare mein sochugi aur na hi tumse koi baat karogi"...with fresh tears escaping her eyes she ran from there to her room and locked it behind so that no one can know how vulnerable she was at the moment.She cried her heart out while Raghu was stunned the way she let out all her frustration revealing the true feelings which she kept hidden within her heart.

He was still perplexed with her words and behaviour...But he understood that somewhere in her heart she too had feelings for him just like he had for her.He became frustrated and ran fingers through his hairs.He came out and sat with the others who were busy in gossips.He knew that it wasn't the right time to talk to her as things could go worse. Hours passed by...from morning to afternoon and afternoon to evening but she never came out of the room...only relief was that Rukhsana kept on checking her.
As the evening arrived Antara started getting dressed along with Rukhsana and Avastika as they had to go to travelling funfair for which they had planned on the previous day itself.Antara was in no mood to go but still didn't wanted to stay back.She knew if she was left alone at the house then he would try and meet her.She shrugged off all her thoughts and came near a full length mirror to adjust her veil.She looked dazzling in her electric blue anarkali with pinkish glossy lips.she left her hair loose just to cover her deep cut revealing her bare back.

When three of them were about to walk out of the main door of the house..."Kaha ke liye sawari nikli hai???"...Raghu spoke from behind in a teasing tone but inside he got worried as danger was still there outside.Antara knew that this comment of his was meant for her and she started fuming more after hearing that. "Rukku...Avastika...agar tum dono ko bahar jane se dar lag raha hai toh tum log yehi rukh jao lekin main mela dekhne jarur jaogi"...she said and walked out of the house.Rukhsana and Avastika looked towards each other and they too walked out.Raghu hands balled into fist and banged a nearby wall and stared towards the door through which she passed.

The funfair was extravagant in every sense...even though it was chaotic..but full of life...smiles...and ear deafning screams. This funfair too had thrill rides,side stalls,pirate ship,top spin,roller coaster,scary house etc etc. Antara mood got lightened and small smile appeared on her face...her hazel eyes widened while watching glowing lights and people enjoying with their loved ones. Rukhsana and Avastika were excited to go on one of the thrill rides while Antara excused herself by saying that she didn't like that particular ride.

Till the time they finished their ride,she thought of sauntering through as it became difficult to stand still at one particular place. As the darkness started to engulf the place more crowded it became.Antara stopped by near a corner where puppet show was being organised which looked ostentatious in every way.She completely lost the pace of time and got involved in enjoying the puppet show. It was there when someone pushed her from behind.she lost her equilibrium and her bag fell down from her hands.She somehow controlled herself and bended down to pick up her bag.While doing that her hair which she had left open came on front from one side revealing her bare back.When she got up she gasped and her eyes widened in shock when someone trailed his fingers on her bare back... She cringed and all the forlorn memories clouded her brain.

Memories of horrific past started haunting her.She squeezed her eyes as tears threatened to escape.She didn't wanted to be weak and This time she had made herself strong enough surpassing the previous mortification.With an instant reflex she turned back but all she could see was large amount of crowd busy in enjoying the funfair.

Even though she was trembling inside due to fear but somehow she pulled herself up and ran away from that place.

***

'Bhai...woh kahi bhi mil nahi rahi hai.' MM spoke in a concerned tone to Raghu. Raghu's one frustrated look was sufficient enough for MM to understand that his Bhai wasn't pleased with his statement.Before moving to other direction in search of her, he ordered his men to continue searching for her until they don't find her or they don't get lost themselves.

***

The horrible klaxon sound and banging through the doors made her sweat like anything.She ended up being here in a creepy dark room after running away from the crowd.Dimly lit lantern swinging on its own was the only source of light in that dark room.Antara was trying hard to escape from this place until she stumbled upon large rectangular wooden box.she winced and started rubbing her foot to ease away all the pain.

Suddenly her attention got diverted when the box creaked open.Her widened in shock and she clasped her mouth with hands which threatened to scream as she noticed crawling spiders along with a skeleton hand emerging out through that rectangular box.There and then reality hit making her understand that it wasn't a simple box...it was a bloody coffin!

***

She started becoming breathless with all that running and her cheeks were fully drenched with tears which were escaping profusely through her eyes. She managed to escape that place and the last thing she heard was haunting ghostly sounds and creepy witch laugh!


She didn't know where she was heading while thinking about how she ended in that haunted house.Before she could run anymore some one caught her wrist and made her swing all around, later bumping into a hard rock chest.she squeezed her eyes in fear while placing her palms on hard chest unknowingly.


Grip around her tightened making her breath hitch.she shot open her eyes in a reflex and found a pair brown eyes staring at her in a hard way.She gulped down in fear,knowing what was following.

"Aaee...yedi hai kya tu?...har baar kaha gayab ho jati hai..ha?"..he shook her while saying that..."JAAN nikal gayi thi meri jab pata chala ki tu apne dosto ke sath nahi hai...saala!...yeda bana ke rakh diya hai tune mujhe."

He had been searching for her madly...silently praying to bappa to keep her safe...He got more and more frustrated as the time passed by...after running for long, he reached an isolated place most probably back yard of funfair.

Before turning back to start searching for her in some other direction...he heard of sound of bangles and footsteps approaching him.He moved forward in that direction to know who was it, his heart started beating frantically when saw her running towards him.

She looked hell scared with eyes full of tears and running aimlessly.Before she could run past him.He grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him.

***

She could see he was sweating and panting badly like her.The worry and concern which erupted through his eyes and voice made her sob like anything.

He became frustrated on seeing her cry like that.It literally made his heart ache."Aaee...chup!...ye rona dhona band kar...varna main tujhe yahi chod kar chala jaoga.."he spoke in angry tone. On hearing his words, Antara got scared.she clutched his shirt more tightly..bringing herself more closer to him.Seeing such a reaction made him chuckle a bit.He gently wiped her tears and cupped her face...leaning closer,he placed a soft kiss on her forehead.


***

Their trance got broken when Raghu's phone beeped to life,making them aware of the sorroundings.It was MM on the phone and Raghu told him about the location of their wereabouts.

While talking on Phone Raghu took the whole view of the sorroundings.Even though the place was near funfair area but still It felt quiet strange out there.Darkness had engulfed the whole area and no lives were found there apart from two of them.

Raghu sensed some danger when he heard numerous footsteps approaching their way.


He looked around in search of a hideout.He saw a tent and dragged Antara along with him behind the tent.When Antara tried to protest, he encircled his arm around her waist and pulled more towards him.She wiggled in his arms for some seconds till she heard some men talking.

"Kya re Pappu...tune toh kaha tha ki ek sunder si aapsra yaha dikhi thi tujhe...abh kaha gayi woh...ha?...kahi humare aane se pehle hi to nahi gayab ho gayi..." one of men said to the other one."Arre nahi Rakka...main sach bol raha hu...kya mast item thi woh...tujhe kya batao...kafi time se picha kar raha tha uska...kya naam tha uska...ummm..an...ant...antara...haa yehi naam le rahi thi uski dost log"...papu told with sheer frustration visible on his face.

Raghu's hand balled into fists on hearing the whole conversation while Antara clutched his shirt more tightly while stiffening in fear.

Anger coursed through Raghu's veins and he wanted to bash them black and blue on hearing her name through their filthy mouths but presence of fear stricken Antara made him stop as he didn't want her to leave unprotected.He thought of dealing with them later on when Antara was securily protected.

Those men searched for some moments and left the place.This time Raghu didn't want to scold her so he just got out of the embrace to check if the way was clear for them to leave.

"ka...kaha ja rahe ho?..mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai...please mat jao...wo...woh log gunde hai...agar unhone tumhe chot pahuchayi toh...."Antara uttered these words in a broken voice...in a reflex action when he tried to step away from her.

Suddenly the atmosphere changed when he heard those words.

"Itni fikar hai meri?..Gunda toh main bhi hu phir mujhse itni hamdardi kyu?...yeh hamdardi hai ya kuch aur...ha?? "he asked her with a crooked smile.

Antara blushed hard and it felt like she was gonna have heart attack.


She didn't know what it all meant; why her heartbeats raced frantically everytime he touched her;why she would produce fluttering butterflies in the pit of her little stomach everytime he gazed at her.She really didn't know why upon seeing him smile at her in that charming crooked way of his,her heart would explode with a previously unknown contented sense of joy.she didn't know what was happening to her...she didn't know what any of it meant but one thing she knew..she didn't mind any of it...she really didn't mind at all.


"wo...woh...main...woh..."Antara started uttering all non sense until Raghu made her silent and numb with the following question.

Raghu spoke with utmost intensity "Sshh...chup!...janta hu..muh mein tere dahi jam gayi ab...lekin aaj tere se ek swaal jarur puchuga jiske jwaab teri aankho mein to dikhta hai lekin tere muh se sun ne ke liye tarsta hoon...us jwaab ka intezaar mujhe meri aakhri saans tak rahega"...He pulled her in one go and her back hit his hard rock chest.he encircled her along the waist and made his chin rest on her shoulder.

He could see her chest heaving up and down while her cheeks turned crimson red with closed eyes.After taking a deep long breath,he leaned more and gave a soft peck on her cheeks.His lips lingered over there more than it was intended to be...softly brushing her ear lobe with his intoxicating lips..He asked her in a husky and intense voice "kya...mujh jaise gunde se pyar kar paayegi puri zindagi ke liye?"



P.S:- Now stop glaring at me......this is all I could think of in short span of time 😆


AUTHOR'S NOTES

Why is it everytime that a women or a girl has to suffer?...why can't she travel or roam around freely?...Doesn't she have any right to enjoy her life?

Unlike Antara Not everyone is bestowed with a person like "Raghu".

Does that mean she has to ensure her security from the time of fertilization inside her mother's womb till the day she takes her last breath?

Do share your views!


Sending loads of love and wishes your way...😳

Purple ☺️

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for my reply😆
unres..
wahh wahh purple ji taliyaan...yoyo19
akhir aap ne u[pdate de hi diya main to wait karte karte thak gayi...
Raghu went to do kissi wisi with antu...
but ruku rani ne peak time mein kar diya disturb..
Antu bhagne gayi raghu ne picche se khicha...

Antu ko ayya gussa aur usne collar pakar ke raghu ko shakee kar kar ke aur apne baton se total mikshake bana dala usne kahan woo raghu see baat nahin karega..Raghu bechara upset ho gaya
Antu went to funfair../... leaving our bechara ragu behind...
yuckiii... someone tried to misbehave with our princess antu... uski too...
antu dari dari si bhagti huyi si pauch gayi haubnted house Jahan mr skeleton ne ussey kahan hello...bechariu antu dar gayi aur fir bhag gayi..
arey yee kya haunted house se sidha hero ke bahon mein not bad antu..
mast chal raha tha yeda aur yedi ka romance... fir aa gaya romance mein kabab ke haddio...

owww... antu is so worried for raghu... aww so sweet..

and last part omg... ye kya... direct propose kar diya.. oye balle bale.. oye shava shava... dil too bhangra karne laga

and lastly... wonderful update..loved it...

PS: Each and every woman have their authority to live their live independently... without any security or anticipation.. just a normal life... but this socitey!!... what to say... couldn't even give us the permission to live an independent life to woman.. a woman and a mother too... the society who always considered woman as a thing... not a human...
i think no one knows the answer why???
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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