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Posted: 11 years ago
@Rantara...Thank you so much for liking it...
U gotta wait dear..
I don't know when I'll update..haven't written anything.
Need some time dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 7 on its way...
I want to thank everyone for their overwhelming support
I want to thank my silent readers too..
Would be updating soon..stay tuned 😊
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Hey guys i'm back with next update.


PART 7


Before sitting inside his black Safari,Raghu turned back and stared towards Shetty.Unknown fury consumed him from inside and he tasted the flames of his own anger on his tongue.He didn't understand what was happening to him but rage inside him made it clear that no one was gonna survive if something bad happened to her.It made him look more arrogant and deadly.Raghu made 2-3 strides back towards Shetty...jumped up...swirled and gave a dangerous mid air kick on his face,making him loose his motion and vomit out blood.With the gush of blood coming out from Shetty's mouth made him collapse flat on the road.Everybody looked shocked at the horrific scene which happened seconds ago in front of them.Machmach understood there was something else brewing in his Bhai's mind.Raghu wiped his mouth with his wrist band and said to Shetty's Collapsed body...Filhaal Tere liye itna Kafi hai...Lekin tujhe choduga nahi agar usse...??..he stopped in the midway suppressing his anger.

He looked at Machmach and said.."Nikalne se pehle sab kuch sambhal lena "...and moved towards his car.But Machmach called from behind and asked him..Lekin Bhai Aap usse dhoondoge kaha?...Raghu turned his head towards him but didn't speak..

Their conversation was interupted by third person named as Chungchup...a 25 year old Ladakhi boy who was their Area guide.He was hesitant at first but finally broke his silence and spoke..Bhaiji..ladki jis traf bhagi hai vo jungle ke bich o bich jata hai...vaha jaldi pahuchne ke liye sirf ek hi shortcut rasta hai jo yaha se thodi duri par hai...aur hum gaadhi jungle ke andhar aadhe raaste tak le ja payege..sayad ladki hume vahi kahi mil jaye..On hearing that Rukhsana cried and spoke Mein bhi sath chalugi Antara ko dhoondne, pata nahi kiss haal mein hogi...

Machmach replied in an instant..Nahii..tum vaha nahi ja sakti..Kahi tum musibat mein padh gayi to...uss ladki ka bachna muskil ho jayega..waqt ki nazakat ko samjo..with that Rukhsana gulped some air and nodded.

Raghu looked at Rukhsana and said..mein usse sahi salamat lekar aaoga,yeh mera vada hai tumse..Rukhsana got a bit relieved on hearing that.

Raghu got inside the car followed by Chungchup and some of his men in other car.He tightened his grip on the steering and reversed the car with a violent sound...and sped away.While driving at a mad speed,random thoughts came to his mind with fear stricken image of Antara always in the background.He wasn't able take his mind off at her from the first time he saw her.Even though he had seen numerous beautiful girls drooling on him but none of them catched his eye..and this girl had created havoc in his heart with just one look.He was frustrated knowing her life was in danger.He ran fingers thru his hair and increased the speed...

On the other hand Machmach called for Ambulance..to check for any casualties in the stranded bus..In the meantime Shetty's goon took collapsed body of shetty and ran away..Machmach told Rukhsana that they were taking her along till Antara is found.He also told her, there was a possibility that Shetty's goons might attack her as she too came into their view.

Pakiya went inside the bus,took their luggage and placed it in their car.He gestured Rukhsana to get inside the car along with Avastika and Avinash.He sat on the front seat while Machmach got behind the wheels.Machmach gave first aid kit to Avastika so that she could do the dressing of minor injuries of Rukhsana and Avinash..Machmach started the ignition..drove away to undisclosed location followed by group of his men in the car behind them. Raghu was driving insanely,following the direction of Chungchup to reach the middle of the forest..He gritted his teeth as the sorrounding view was completely blocked by the dense fog..Even high beam lights didn't help much..Finally they reached the dead end of the road in the middle of the forest..Nothing was clearly visible there but then out of no where he saw a silhoutte blurring away out of his vision. Immediately he got down from his car...he tried to figure out who was it, suddenly his jaw tightened and he groaned in anger...and started running towards the same direction..He ran more faster this time as fury consumed him more..

When he reached the place,he saw no one there making his anger flare up more...It was silent over there so he didn't make any move..Each fibre of his was alert..every sense was working at a faster frequency..his fierce eyes didn't leave anything un-noticed.. Suddenly he saw some movement behind the bushes..he started moving closer to it when he heard some sobs and sound of anklets...In the next second everywhere was dead silence with no movement..no sobs..no sound of anklet..

He frantically started running towards that direction and finally he saw her for the second time making him gasp..she was running towards his direction...she looked hell terrified,tired,pale...her eyes swollen due to continous crying...but what a beauty she was..she looked beyond beautiful in her new attire..Her beautiful,soft curvaceous body was giving birth to new desires in Raghu's heart..she had lifted her lehnga up with both hands while running as it was troubling her..she was looking behind while running as if those men were chasing her fast enough..

While looking behind she bumped into his hard chest and passed out.She swirled from her left to right and was about to fall when Raghu's left arm encircled her waist.She looked so divine and beautiful in her slanting stance wid her left arm hanging..her lustrous hair was left open and had a side jhoomer hanging near her left temple...she looked pale...her lips were slightly parted and had turned white.Her skin was pearly white and soft...her skin had some fresh scratches around her arms and waist due to thorny bush..Her blouse was loosly fitting her making half of bare bossoms visible to him...making him gawk. Her dupatta was there so he thought it might have fallen somewhere while running.He jerked her a little but she didn't move.Finally with a sigh he put his right arm beneath her knees and scooped her up but still she made no movement.He lifted her upper body close to his face and near her ear he whispered her name 'Antara' for the first time...Suddenly she fluttered her wet eyes open...met his soft gaze and fell unconscious again...

He was totally drowned in her beauty when he heard some approaching footsteps.His whole body stiffened after he sensed the upcoming threat.His hold tightened on Antara protectively who was still unconscious in his arms.He scanned the whole sorroundings till he found a hideout ,he was looking for.He rushed towards that direction and finally made Antara lie behind the bushes.He had no option that time as his car was not visible to him,he couldn't run blindly taking Antara in his arms and He didn't that how many goons were after her.As the mercury was dipping,he could see goose bumps on Antara's bare skin which made him take out his jacket and cover her with it.As the approching foot steps got more louder,he hid himself behind a nearby tree keeping an eye on Antara.Raghu's men hadn't reached the spot while chungchup got lost in other direction.Shetty's goon's saw Antara's red veil stuck to thorny bush and said Ladki yehi kahi hogi...and finally decided to split in three directions..

Raghu saw one goon approaching towards the Bush,before he could come more nearer to Antara...Raghu ran towards him and gave him one hard punch on his face.The goon lost his equilibrium for some seconds and then reverted back.While trying to hit back Raghu..he got one deadly, sickening kick between the legs making him fall due to pain...Before Raghu could turn back,other goon came from behind and tried to strangulate him with his arm..Raghu tried to break free by pulling that arm around his neck.. In meantime it had started to drizzle in the forest,the droplets fell on Antara's face and she squeezed her eyes at first...finally opening them in the next second.Her eyes widened in shock when she saw one of the goons who was following her standing in front of her with a sly smirk.The goon was none other than Venkat who was Shetty's Right hand.He was a notorious gangster who was charged in many cases of Rape,molestation and murders..He had a soft corner and lustful eyes towards beautiful girls..Antara's beautiful body had driven him insane...he wanted to have her physically at any cost...that had set him in and made him follow her..

Antara was shocked to see Venkat in front of her,she pulled her upper body up while he leaned towards her and said 'Hello Janeman' and his lustful eyes scanned her top to bottom.Before he could lean more ,she dragged herself back...She tried to get up but failed.when She saw Venkat walking towards her,she pulled herself all together and got up with a force..She was scared,new tears welled up in her eyes.She was breathing heavily while her hands clutched her lehnga..Her voice came out shakily..k..k..kaun ho tum?..a..a..aur kya chahte ho?..He didn't reply anything but just brushed his lips with thumb.Antara understood his intentions and frantically looked here and there in search of a path to escape..When she found one and was about to run that way,he caught her from behind..making loud scream escape her mouth... When Raghu heard her scream,he became more furious...he stomped the feet of the goon very hard and then kicked elbow in his stomach...making him loose his grip..When Raghu finally faced the goon,he punched him hard on his nose...making him bleed...and then he turned and ran towards the place where he had kept Antara..

When Raghu reached that place he saw venkat hugging Antara from the back.Antara's hands were tied from behind and mouth was sealed with a cloth piece..the jacket with which he covered her was no where to be found..She wiggled in his arms vigorously...She was crying harder with his every touch n her body..His one hand was on her bare tummy while other hand was n the neckline running obliquely towards her breast.. When Raghu saw that His whole corpse bursted into flames and his eyes became darker..He Yelled at Venkat...Usse chod de Varna zinda nahi bachega tu.. Venkat who got startled at first, gave an evil smirk towards him and said..Raghu bhai..tum yaha..is jungle mein kya kar rahe ho..???...khair chodo..rahi baat iski toh yeh mera Shikaar hai...aur agar tumhe bhi chahiye toh meri pyas bhujte hi tum isse le lena...arre aisi aish vali cheezo mein dushmani nahi honi chahiye balki Nashe mein dhoob jana chahiye..with that he was about to slid his hand beneath her blouse to touch her breast when a gunshot was heard..

His disgusting act had forced Raghu to take out his gun tucked in his jeans...deadly rage was burning him when venkat was about to touch her softness...it made him pull the trigger and the bullet shot directly into the middle of Venkat's forehead...he fell down on the ground near her feet..Raghu looked towards Antara,whose eyes were dropping and was about to fall but before her body touched the ground,Raghu took her his strong arms and later untied her wrists and opened her mouth..His dark eyes grew softer when he felt her near him so close.With one look towards Venkat he said 'Kaha tha na Hath mat lagana varna mar daluga...tune galti ki aur tuje uski saza mili'.With that He scooped up Antara and turned,there he saw his men waiting for him with the other two goons of shetty almost beaten to death..

He rushed towards his car,opened the door and made Antara sit on the front seat.He tied her seat belt and suddenly he remebered something..He opened the back door of the car and took out a thing from his bag with which he covered Antara's revealing bare body.He closed the door and got behind the wheels,hitting the accelerator hard.Chungchup and his other men followed behind him in the other car.His worried eyes glanced numerous times towards Antara while driving the car..Within minutes the landscape got changed... past Rohtang pass and entering into Chandra river valley in the Lahaul region that lies in rain shadow..The greenery on the southern side of the mountain pass disappeared and mountain slopes on the Leeward side became brown and arid..However the mountain peaks were still covered in snow and shining brightly in the setting sun...

He didn't understand why her tear stricken face was squeezing his heart out.This curiosity led him to more frustration.He banged his fist on steering then ran his fingers through hair..Suddenly his phone vibrated,he took out his phone from his jeans and spoke "hello"...it was Machmach from the other side...Machmach said 'hello bhai...woh...ladki mili ki nahi???...Raghu answered 'haa milli'

Machmach:thek toh hai na??? woh kya hai na uski dost ne mera yaha bheja kharab kar rakha hai...

Raghu:while looking at her again spoke in a worried tone...pata nahi kaisi hai..kafi der se behosh padi hui hai..!!!

Machmach:Thek hai tu usse jaldi se le aa phir dekhte hai ki aage kya karna hai...and gives him the address of their present location...

with that Raghu increased more speed and drove away faster towards a beautiful village named as 'Jispa' in Lahaul and Spiti district...As this Village was somewhat isolated place,so Machmach had booked a cottage house for all them till further decision was made..as of Now with the killing of venkat, things had gone far beyond worse..and they needed a hideout...

The narrow Bhaga valley opening up with the river gently flowing over wide riverbed announced to Raghu that he had reached in the beautiful village of Jispa along with Antara..

As it had turned dark outside so he couldn't see anything,the only thing he could hear was Antara's uneven breathing still in unconscious state...Machmach was waiting for them in the midway...finally taking them to the house cottage...Once Raghu was out from the car,he ran towards Antara's side..took her in his arms and rushed inside..

Rukhsana screamed after seeing Antara in that condition and started sobbing...Machmach had already arranged for doctor and she was waiting for them before they arrived...Raghu placed Antara softly on bed and went n stood outside the room as doctor started to examine her...After a while Doctor came out & told them that Antara was fine physically...but mentally in a shocked state...she told them to give her time and she will come around...

Raghu was restless after knowing her condition and Machmach didn't miss his restlessness towards a stranger girl but still he didn't ask him anything...Machmach ordered his men to guard the cottage during the night time as they needed to be alert in case they were attacked..Avinash was sedated due to drugs because of his injuries...Avastika and Rukhsana took care of Antara...Pakiya ,chotu & Machmach started planning out further while Raghu, he kept thinking about Antara and the night went on...

NO PRECAP

guys pls don't kill me now for this crappy update

reviews and criticisms welcomed😊

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@purple..tum kya aaj do updates dene wali ho?šŸ˜†
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

<font color="#3300cc">@purple..tum kya aaj do updates dene wali ho?šŸ˜†</font>


aree nahi yaar,wanted to update on a new page šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset


aree nahi yaar,wanted to update on a new page šŸ˜†

okay..mujhe laga ki double treat milegi aaj🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

okay..mujhe laga ki double treat milegi aaj🤣



aree single badi mushkil se likha jata hai mere se..double kaha se likhugi šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...ok i've updated pls go thru n lemme know
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 😊
unres

lovely update
thanks for the pm and continue soon 😊
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg his was like beyond beautiful
I loved the update soo much I just cant tell u
purple ur an osam writer
everything was happening in front of me
no precap? ok but cant wait for more
dnt u dare call it it crap its osam
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
purple what a action packed update...
wow...
this was not crap this was a thumbs up...
i love it...
amazing...
shetty's bashed...
antara running badly...
raghu saving her and killing venkant...
you described it so perfect...
cant tell u...
i loved it...
bravo...
thanx for the pm...
update soon and pm me...

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