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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow yaar osam update

flasbacks wow

pls cont asap


Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 8

The next morning, everyone was downstairs practicing for the sangeet. The choreographer had just arrived and was putting everyone in pairs. "Hume ek group dance karna hain, jisme hume couples ki zuroorat hain. Tum dono," she said, pointing at Piya & Ranveer, "phele couple ok?" "Yeah," they said. Riya & Arjun were paired up and Antara was paired with Raghu.

I was thinking about the weird flashback from yesterday when I heard my name being called with Raghu's. I put this to the back of my mind and concentrated on the fact that I had to practice my dance. Why was I hesitating so much to go up to him? No, don't be scared just go. I took a deep breath and walked towards him.

It took us a few hours to learn the dance, but the one thing that I noticed was that she was an amazing dancer. She caught the steps immediately and then there was me. It took me such a long time to get one step right. We finally took a break and even then Antara didn't stop dancing. She had to practice her solo performance for the sangeet. She was so graceful, her every move, so perfect. I saw Piya walk up to her and tell her something. After that, they both started dancing. Looks like they were going to dance together tomorrow night.

After the break, we started rehearsing for the group dance again. I had never been so close to anyone as I was to him today. It felt so different... Suddenly, my foot trip and I closed my eyes ready to fall to the ground, when I felt a strong hand around my waist. I didn't fall. I opened my eyes to find his eyes looking straight into mine. I felt as if nothing would ever happen to me as long as he was there.

I noticed that she was about to fall and I caught her. Her eyes were closed and when she opened them, they captivated me once again. It felt right to hold her. My train of thoughts was interrupted when the choreographer spoke. "Aap dono ki jodi kitni pyaari lagti hain." I quickly helped her to stand up straight and let go of her. Antara was looking down at the ground when Aunty called her into the kitchen. She quickly went to the kitchen.

What was happening in my life? Why did his touch feel so right? Kaun hain woh mera? I thought. Main toh usse janti bhi nahi par phir bhi aisa lagta hain ki main us ke bare mein sab kuch jaanti hoon. Aisa kyun ho ra hain? "Mujhe uss ke choone se itna farak kyun par raha hain?" I asked my self.

"Bhai, kya hua, aap itne pareshaan kyun lag re ho?" Riya asked. "Woh Miss. Kaul..." I said. "Kaun?" she asked. "Miss. Kaul," I replied. "Miss. Kaul?" I realized that I had been speaking out loud the entire time. How was I going to explain this to Riya? "Woh, I meant Antara." I said. "Oh, par aap uske baare mein kyun soch re ho?" she said. "Pata nahi," I said. "Bhai aap bhi na... Kahin aap ko Antara pasand to nahi aa gayi? Aap sochiye main zaara aati hoon," she said and walked away. Main Miss. Kaul ko pasand karta hoon? Nahi... Par woh sab se alag hain. My thoughts were interrupted by someone's voice. "Raghu," I turned to see Arjun. "Aaj to tum bach gaye, par agar agli baar mujhe tum apni behen ke itne paas dikhe na, toh phir tumari kher nahi," he said.

It was dinnertime when I next saw her. We were having an early dinner because everyone was so tired from dancing. I looked at her but than remembered what Arjun said. But he wasn't even here. He had gone home, I realized after doing a quick scan of the room. I looked up at her again but she didn't look back at me.

I didn't know if I should say anything to him or not. I mean, I was so confused about the way that I was feeling and I didn't want to make things any worse.

I was noticing that there was something wrong between the two of them. There was a weird feeling between the two of them. Well, this time, since I was Raghu's mom, I would make him understand and make sure that everything goes perfectly fine.

After dinner, I went to Raghu's room. "Raghu," I said. "Ji mom, kuch hua kya?" he asked. "Nahi, kuch nahi hua. Woh main chati hoon ki tum meri dawai leke aao. woh main saath mein doosra bottle leke aana bhol gayi thi. Kya tum le aao ge?" I asked. "Par mom, mujhe to yahan ka kuch bhi nahi pata hain," he replied. "Koi baat nahi, tum Antara ko apne saath le jao," I said. "Antara?" he said and then agreed. "Ok Mom." He got up and went to Antara's room. Yes, I thought, in dono ko akele kuch waqt mile ga ab.

There was a knock on the door. Piya was in the bathroom so I got up and opened the door and found Raghu standing there. "Tum?" I asked. "Woh mom chati hain ki tum mere saath chalo. Unki dawai khatam ho gayi hain aur mujhe yahan ka kuch pata nahi hain toh unhone ne kaha ki main tume apne saath le ke jaon," he said. I hesitated. Should I go? It was almost 8, it wasn't that late. We would be back in 15 minutes. "Ok, chalo," I said and grabbed my shawl and phone.

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked so much than your update is too short😛
great work👍🏼

update ASAP plze
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Capucine

I liked so much than your update is too short😛

great work👍🏼

update ASAP plze


I know that this one is short but i have to finish my last assignment of the year so i didn't have a lot of time. the next update will be longer for sure
and thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amfi123

loved it continue soon


will definitely update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very lovely update
rantara will dance together woww!
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Very lovely update
rantara will dance together woww!
Thanks


thank you 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyy lovely update dear thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Heyy lovely update dear thanks for pm 😊



glad you liked it
& no problem 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked d update a lot...!!! Thanks :)

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