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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
DHAMAKEDAAR CONCEPT!!!
Ur concepts r unique.
Dis update ws awesome nd up kept me on d edge till d end.
Can't wait to know wht happened wid Antara.
Jaldi jaldi se update de do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
thanks a lot kajal..
m glad u liked the concept...
thank u very much... :) :)
will updt soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Wow it's very interesting nd i loved it!
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Originally posted by: nargesahmadi

Wow it's very interesting nd i loved it!

thanks pal...
heyy u too like dean??...
cool..
why don't u join supernatural forum??
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Originally posted by: gargi21

Wen will u update...????

hey gargi...
dear i'll update tomorrow...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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(Part 2)

heyy guys..here is the second part of the os..i hope u'll like it.
do read it and leave ur comments.. Happy Reading.. :)

Antara's dialogues: Pink color
Raghu's dialogues: Blue color
Other's dialogues: Green colour
Raghu's Thoughts: Indigo color

when raghu came out from the hospital he made a call to his sub-ordinate and ordered him for some task...

- - - - - - - - RaNtara on the way to home (1:00 AM)- - - - - - - - - - - -

Raghu was driving silently...it will take like an hour us to reach...if you want you can sleep...
she nodded and leaned back on her seat..
Raghu made her seat comfortable...n now She was sleeping peacefully...
it was late night..and pretty cold too.. his jeep was open...
if he will drive slow..it will take too long to reach...and if he drives fast..then it feels too cold..he wa about to take his jacket from back seat..when he looked at her..
she was shivering and was lying on the seat all cuddled..hugging the seat...

he slow down his jeep and picked his jacket and covered her..she hugged herself more...he gave it a support of seatbelt so that it won't fall...
he started driving fast..as he was no more tensed about antara...he himself was shivering..but he wanted to reach home as soon as possible...

when they reached home it was 2:00 AM...his home was quite far from the society...
he patted on her shoulder to wake her up...!! she slowly opened her eyes...we have reached...
okay.. she looked at the jacket and smiled.. thank you..
he din't say anything..but just asked her to wait at gate..he parked his jeep and came back..

he opened the door and came inside..Antara followed him..
it was a big and very beautiful house..
"it's such a big house...just two of us live here?? "
hmmm.. he looked at her..and said..
it's very late now..you can go inside..and pointed towards a room..you can sleep there..
is that my room??
yeah!!
okay.. thanks..
she was about to leave when he called her.. "Antara"
she turned..ji??
if you don't remember anything..why did u believe me..and you were ready to come with me..that too in my home..
he paused for a second..ain't you scared of me??

she din't said anything..but just nodded in no...
why??
because you don't look stranger to me...i thought to leave for once...but my heart said that i can trust you...
she entered in the room leaving him behind surprised...

he too came in his room..he really needed a hot shower this time..After 15 minutes..he came out...
he was lying on his bed and reading some novel..today he wasn't sleepy at all...
after a few minutes he heard a knock on his door..

he opened it..it was Antara.. ('course.. :P)
what happened Antara...u okay?...
sorry to disturb u...were u sleeping..
no..tell me,..
ji...m hungry..can i hv something to eat...
hmmm... u go to ur room..i'll bring food for u...
no..its okay..i'll come with u...
its okay antara..u're not well...u plz take rest..
he went to the kitchen...
she too followed him..all silent...
he took some food from the fridge..and reheated it...
he turned and... "jeeezzz"
m sorry...no it's okay..what r doing here...
he came to dinning table..u can sit here..
u're not hungry???...no not much...he sat there...
did i disturb u??... no...
let me know when u're done..i'll keep all this..
no..please..i'll do it..u plz go n sleep...
Raghu got up... would u like to hv some coffee??...
no.. thank you...
u sure.??. yeah
okk..
he made himself a coffee...and joined Antara at table..
after a few minutes..
Mr. Naik..can i ask you something...
hmmm...
Are you my husband...??...
he chocked off his coffee...
m sorry..!!...you okay..??
who told u this..?
wo sister told me in hospital...
n i saw my name on those papers..
but if you are,..then why m not able to recall ur face or this house..

Antara..u're not well right now..Doctor has given strict instructions to not to stress your brain...
and if u do so u might get more sick...

but u din't...he cut her in between...ANtara please..ur health is more important than everything...
u said u trust me..right..? she nodded..so please listen to me..stop thinking about all this..and if u're done..please go to sleep..tomorrow u've to go to doc again..

she finished her food and helped him to clean table...she went to her room and wished him good night..
he sat in the hall only...recalling some moments...

""FLASHBACK""One year and half before"""

Raghu came to Mumbai for an important case..after a few days of continuous work he was very tired so he thought to visit beach for sometime..
it was 8 PM..
he was lying on the cold sand far from the crowd...he was just looking at the people and was missing some one who could be there in his life too...
he was looking at the stars..when he heard some one's laugh...he smiled hearing that voice and turned towards the direction the sound came from...
then he saw a girl running on the sand and few kids were after her...they were trying to catch her...

she was wearing a white suit...she was looking like an angel...he couldn't see her face properly..so he got up and started walking towards her direction...he saw her and forgot everything..
when he came back to his trances..she was no where..
he ran in the same direction...and there he saw her after a few minutes..purchasing some t-shirts for her friends..
he kept staring at her...Suddenly a girl came there and called her.. "Antara"..she turned...coming..just 2 minutes...
Antara...he said softly...beautiful name... he followed her...but she saw him following her and she was lost in the crowd now..soon he lost the track...
he came back to some groups and asked about her..but he couldn't find any clue..
he was restless... but why?? he thought..


After 3-4 months he saw her again in a shopping mall of Mumbai...he had told to himself to forget about that day..but when he saw her again..he couldn't stop himself...he ran after her..
"ANTARA...!!! " "Antara wait..!!..."
her friend: do u know someone here..
no..
then who is calling u..
they turned... he stopped and smiled at her...
do u know him..??
no...oh! god.. let's go...
she started walking again..he ran after her...but they entered in lift... "ANtara please stop.."
he looked for her on every floor ...but he missed it again... he was very disappointed after this...

he saw her twice...she might be living in mumbai only..
i can find her if i'll live here too..he thought..after a few months he shifted to Mumbai for permanent..

""FLASHBACK END""

he dozed off on the couch thinking all this..
it was 7 AM in morning..when his phone rang...he picked the call..it was from the police station...
hello sir..we have found that witness of xyz case...
good..where is he...
he will be here by 9 AM..
okay..i'll be there.. he hang up the call...
he rubbed his eyes..he couldn't sleep last night properly..
but he had to go to police station..so he can't sleep now..
he thought of something and got up at a sudden..
is she awake or not...
he knocked her door...
ANtara...??
Antara, u awake??
she din't open the door so he got tensed... he opened the door and came in,,,
he saw her sleeping peacefully on the bed...
he din't want to disturb her...
so he came out and got ready..he wrote a note and pasted it on her door from inside...

he made himself breakfast and left for the police station...

""
Antara woke up at 10...she came out rubbing her eyes..and din't see the note on door...she found mansion all empty..Raghu was no where..she got scared
and came back in her room...
she closed the door and saw a note on it..

Good Morning..
I came to your room in morning..but you were sleeping..I had some work so i had to leave for office in hurry...
you don't need to be scared.. i'll be back by 1 PM..
you be ready by that time.. we have to go to hospital for your check up..
and u must be hungry..your breakfast is on dinning table..

Bye..take care..
-Raghu..

she smiled looking at the letter...she read it 10 times and kept reading again n again..
she got freshen up and came for breakfast..she was still reading the letter...
she roamed here and there..it was a beautiful house...a big garden...there were so many flowers..she loved it...
she came back..she wanted to explore this house more..as she started to consider it as hers..but she was scared..so she came back to her room...


""""
At 1 PM sharp..

she heard the door bell..she came out..but din't open the door..it rang again,,,
she asked who is it..
Antara..it's me..... she smiled hearing his voice... she checked her self and opened the door slowly...
Hi...
he smiled..and came inside...
she looked at him with so much surprise.. he was wearing uniform and he was looking so hot in that...
he removed his cap and kept it on the table..and brushed his hair with his hand...he was looking tired..but still so fresh..or refreshing...she kept looking at him...
he went to the kitchen and took some water from fridge... he gulped it..and some water drops fell on his chin..
he wiped them with his hand...ANtara kept staring his each n every movement...
you look really good in this uniform..
he immediately looked at her... she turned...he smiled a little...
you had your breakfast??...he asked..
yeah!! thanks for that...
he looked at her.. "why ain't u ready.."?
ji.. I am ready...
will u go out like this...look at your clothes..
i have only this suit...
oh! I am sorry..i forgot.....he thought for a minute and said.. "you wait for a minute.."
she nodded..
he went into his room and opened a cupboard...

there were so many dresses...suits and saree...he himself bought all this...
whenever he liked anything in market...he bought it for a girl...a girl whom he wanted to bring in his house forever...whom he wanted to share his room..his cupboard..his everything..
a girl who made his life when she turned and looked back at him in the mall..and broke all his dreams at sudden when she entered in that lift...
n today she is here..but he has never expected her to be in this condition...his heart was crying looking at her...

he came back to his conscious hearing a knock on the door..he called her... "ANtara..."
ji...?please come inside...
ji main.. (me??)
hmmm..come here...
she came inside...wowww it's so beautiful..she said softly..
what? your room..it's rly beautiful..
thanks.. please come here..and select which dress u want to wear...
whose clothes are these??
yours...
mine..??
yes..!!but i don't remem...he cut her in between,,
i know..that's why u forgot to take them..but now i have told u..so u can pick whichever u like..
thanks.
stop saying that...she looked at him with confused expressions..that thanks..stop saying that...
ohkay..she nodded...and smiled...
she picked a simple white suit and his heart skipped a beat...he remembered that day when he saw her first time in white colour..
she came out of his room and he sat on his bed...and then he leaned back on it...

after a few minutes...
Mr. Naik..I am ready...
he heard her voice and a breeze touched his face...he came out..and saw her..she was looking so pretty...his heart was beating very fast...he was controlling himself somehow..
but it was being very difficult for him..
he just wanted to hold her in his arms and wanted to tell her..yes!! you belong to me and i belong to u...i dunno about all rituals but yeah!! u're my wife..i considered u that from day one i saw you...and i love u a lot...
Mr. Naik...??.
hmmm?? he came back from his trance...
you won't change ur clothes..
no..i might need to go back police station...
oh!
shall we..
yeah!!


- - - - - - - - - - -On The Way to Hospital.. - - - - - - -

ANtara was about to say something when Raghu got a call from his office...
yes..!!
Sir, we have got to know about the passengers of that train..
hmmm..
sir there were total 5 passengers of this name..
2 of them din't board the train...
have you got the address or any other information..
no sir..but we are checking their transactions informations..so we can find something..
okay..do find all information and get back to me..
sir..one more thing.. we have found some luggage in train..one of the bags was found in one of the coach common with these girls...
okay good.. have u got it in office..
sir it will reach by this evening...
okay..inform me whenever u get it..i'll be there..i want to get all info asap...
okay sir..
and he hang up the call.. he was looking little satisfied by now..
you okay..
yeah!! m good..

" - - " - - " - - " - -
do we always do our work by ourself...
hmm?? i mean it's such a big house..only we two live there..
don't we have any maid...
no!! there is one uncle who comes for dusting and cleaning...
he is on leave for a few days..
and food..?
that i...she cut him in between..
i might be used to cook it..right??
hmmm.. she smiled thinking of that she used to cook for him...
he was mum...
what is your favt dish?
he was about to say something..when his phone rang again...
he was talking al the way..and ANtara was silent..she was getting angry...they reached hospital and Raghu met the doctor..
today check up din't take much time..
doctor gave him a prescription and told him about her diets and other things..
hows she now..
don't worry..she will be fine soon...
will she be able to get her memory back..
we will try our best Mr. Naik..but she really needs to take care of herself...make sure she doesn't get any shock or something which hurt her..
she might recall all bad incidents that happened to her...
i'll take care doc.. thanks..
he smiled and came out...

""" - - " - - " - - " - -
he came out with her and asked her to wait for a few minutes... she din't reply but stood their silently..
he got his jeep from parking..
and asked her to sit..she sat there silently..
after 2 minutes.. u wait in the jeep..
i'll bring ur medicines..
he came back after a few minutes...
take these...i'll explain the prescription later..ok..
""" - - " - - " - - " - -
u wanna eat something..?
she din't reply..
Antara?... she stayed mum..he smiled..
are u angry with me..??
why would i..??
bcz m noticing..u're not talking to me...
i am just trying not to disturb u..
what??
as soon as i start talking ur phone rings..so its better i keep quite..
it was an imp call...
oh! so ur call is imp for u..bt not me..
u're imp..that's why m with u..but not in office..
she looked at him..and he thought what he said...
she lowered her eyes hearing this... i mean..he looked at her..she was blushing ...
iff Raghu!!! u shouldn't hv said this..

" - - " - - " - -
he stopped his jeep in front of a restaurant and asked her to come out..
they both had their lunch..
he gave her medicines and asked her if she wanna go back home..
she nodded in no... he smiled...
okk..we will go for some shopping..
he dropped her near a shop..he gave her his wallet and asked her to buy whatever she needs...she was about to go inside...
Antara...he called...
hmm...
u don't need to be afraid...when u're done..just come outside...i'll be waiting for u here only....she nodded..and went inside the shop...she purchased some stuffs for her..
and came out after a few minutes..
Meanwhile Raghu purchased some chocolates for her..as he promised to her..
they looked at each other and smiled...

they both came back to home..
she hurriedly kept all her stuffs in hall and entered in kitchen..she poured some cold water in glass and came out side..when he came inside..she gave it to him..
thanks..
stop saying that..
what? .thank you...stop saying that.
and they both laughed...

- - - -- - - -- - - -- - - -
she took all her stuffs to her room and unpacked it..and kept it in a cupboard..
she din't ask raghu to take her clothes from his cupboard..least she knew but she wanted to take them from his room only...he gave her chocolates and she was very happy...

she was in her room only..and Raghu was sitting in his room..he was waiting for the call..but it's already been 7 PM..
finally his phone rang..
he picked the call...why it took u so long dammit..
sir we got it now only...okay i'll be there,..
he came out..and called Antara... she came..ji..?
ANtara i have some work..i need to go...i'll be back soon..
ji...?? it's too late now..
don't worry.. it's safe here..
i'll try to be back asap.. okay...
just lock the door from inside and don't come out from ur room...
if u need anything or have any problem..
call me on this number.. there it is landline phone.. n he gave her mobile number...she nodded...
he came out..take care...he said..and started his jeep..
she locked everything and came back to her room...and sat on her bed..hugging herself... she din't switch off the lights...

""it's been two hours..she was lying on her bed like that only...
she was feeling hungry again...she composed herself..and came out.. "no one is there Antara..u're safe here..he told u na...
n don't worry it's a police officer house..who will dare to come here.."

she was talking to herself...she came to kitchen and got some food for her..she din't dare to sit in hall..
she came back to her room and after finishing her food..she came back in kitchen to keep her plate...
she was coming back when she looked at his room..she din't want to do something..but she couldn't help..she entered in his room..
she sat on his bed...and looked at his pic kept on the table...she smiled looking at him..and said.. "i know u're my husband"

she was in his room for an hour...it was 10 PM...
n then she saw some light outside the house..
she got up from the bed...who it could be...??
is he back..??
no he went in jeep..it's a car...
she looked thought the window n got scared when it stopped but no body came out of it...
...what should i do...suddenly two people came out of the car...
she got really scared...both of the guys were approaching towards home..n then she heard the doorbell and she saw the car was going back now..

she couldn't dare to open the door...she was breathing hard... suddenly she heard the knob click..she got scared...
she couldn't looked above.. Raghu entered in house...
he looked at her..ssitting on the couch and hugging herself...
"why din't u open the door Antara?..are u all right..."
hearing his voice she looked above..and saw him..she ran and hugged him immediately...
he din't understand anything..he stood numb..
she was shivering badly..and he felt her tears flowing on his shirt... he pulled her from the hug...
what happened?
i thought..it's some one else...i...i got scared...
why did u come so late..and she hugged him again...
ssshhh!!! he hugged her too...he felt like if he has got everything in this moment... he patted on her head and tried to calm her down..
it's me only...she was still crying....u went in jeep then how did u come back in car......she was crying a lot..which wasn't good for her health...
there was some problem in jeep..so one of my colleague dropped me here...
why din't u tell me u'll be late..u said u'll back soon...what if it was some one else..what if something happened to me...she said still hugging him..
Ssshhh!! m here jaan..m here only...nothing will happen to u..
she opened her eyes hearing jaan from him... he too took a back and realised what he said...
she pulled herself out from the hug..she felt awkward...
m sorry...
he went in to the kitchen and gulped some water..and entered in his room...
he had a shower and changed...he was feeling embarrassed for what he said...
he came out..to his surprise she was already waiting for him...
you made it?
hmmm...
why??why???
i mean u're not well...
i wasn't even that sick...he sat there...
she served the food...and he was lost in this moment..
he had never thought of this moment to be true..he was loving her serving food for him...
he kept staring at her..and she noticed that...she felt goosebumps with his gaze...
they both finished their dinner..and raghu praised her food...although he cook better than her...but this was the most beautiful evening he had...
he gave her medicines and they wished each other good night and went to their respective rooms...


this was a huge update for me...thanks for reading it guys..i hope u liked it..please leave ur comments/sugg/questions...
and please hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-akki

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Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Fantastic update.!
Loving dis story.!
Its so interesting.! So many quesions to be answered..
Well written..!
Thnkd for d PM.. 😊
plz update as soon as u can..!
Edited by shivam4387 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic . You are super writer . I loved it too much . Waiting next update
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Originally posted by: liana2304

Fantastic . You are super writer . I loved it too much . Waiting next update

thanks a lot dear... =]
thanks for liking my work.. :)
luvd ur comments... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivam4387

Fantastic update.!
Loving dis story.!
Its so interesting.! So many quesions to be answered..
Well written..!
Thnkd for d PM.. 😊
plz update as soon as u can..!

thanks Shivam..
thx for the lovely comments..
really appreciated..!!

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