Rantara SS JAAN thread 2(updated part 39 pg129) - Page 17

Hats Off Pampz..!!
I m out of words to describe how beautifully u wrote this update... Totally awesome... I was blushing during the first half of the story... Read that part more than 3 times..!
And other is gripping...surprising..wanting to know what will happen next...
praises to u buddy... u did it as always..! tujhe kisiki nazar na lage... fabulous writing yarr...
Chocolates from me...

and yeah... do continue...asap... waiting impatiently...!!

Awesome update pampz

i just loved it pampz..

Originally posted by: ifians

lol pampu tune mujhe officially counceller bana diya...🤣

what a beautiful update yaar.. with so much different shades..

first it was so romantic and passionate...

and then the slowly dream was coming to an end...

the way you described antara's reaction after remembering the truth was so good..i loved that she left raghu for her fathers shake but she didn't demolish her love for raghu.. she can never do that!!

but the bang on thing was raghu... u are always expert in describing raghu...👏

the way he looked at her face when antara peeped from 2nd floor, when he came to know about antara's leaving, his restlessness, his beahavior, his madness, sorrow verything was described briliantly... and lastly the lion arises to seach for his lioness.. thats what raghu is... superb..

aur ye satya bich mein kaha se aa gaya..

aur ye kya?😡tu fir se depressing mode mein aa gayi,... ab sun pampu... ab jharu aur danda ahi sidhe ak 47 leke tere ghar mein ayungi... tu likhegi nahi toh... samjh lena main kya kar sakti hoon😡

waiting for ur next update...😛

Hey I m with you in this... !! 😛

Originally posted by: nbw16

Hey I m with you in this... !! 😛

Yeah ... kab chalna hai bolo..

abhi ruko... main check kar rahi hoon kaun si compaby ki sab se best hain for dono hamla jarengey pampu ke ghar main..😡

Originally posted by: ifians

lol pampu tune mujhe officially counceller bana diya...🤣

what a beautiful update yaar.. with so much different shades..

first it was so romantic and passionate...

and then the slowly dream was coming to an end...

the way you described antara's reaction after remembering the truth was so good..i loved that she left raghu for her fathers shake but she didn't demolish her love for raghu.. she can never do that!!

but the bang on thing was raghu... u are always expert in describing raghu...👏

the way he looked at her face when antara peeped from 2nd floor, when he came to know about antara's leaving, his restlessness, his beahavior, his madness, sorrow verything was described briliantly... and lastly the lion arises to seach for his lioness.. thats what raghu is... superb..

aur ye satya bich mein kaha se aa gaya..

aur ye kya?😡 tu fir se depressing mode mein aa gayi,... ab sun pampu... ab jharu aur danda ahi sidhe ak 47 leke tere ghar mein ayungi... tu likhegi nahi toh... samjh lena main kya kar sakti hoon😡

waiting for ur next update...😛

Originally posted by: pampz

i wll hav to admit that ur danda jharu n newly added AK47 wala counselling merepe kaam karta hai ...😆 ...yaar am trying hard to cope up with the sorrow of Rantara death but bar bar fail horahi hun ...but yess tera counselling mein to jadu hai ...bilkul jhatak se sidha khadi kar deti hai ...LOLLZZ😆

and thank u dear for loving the update ...it really means a lot to me ...aur haan tune pucha beech mein Satya kahanse aa gaya ...to mera answer ...wo kameena kuttta ko %%%^^^^&&## .[.plzz don mind i feel better nowadays after bashing him n cvs 😉] Raghu uska aur bhi bura haal bana dega ...

Originally posted by: nbw16

Hats Off Pampz..!!
I m out of words to describe how beautifully u wrote this update... Totally awesome... I was blushing during the first half of the story... Read that part more than 3 times..!
And other is gripping...surprising..wanting to know what will happen next...
praises to u buddy... u did it as always..! tujhe kisiki nazar na lage... fabulous writing yarr...
Chocolates from me...

and yeah... do continue...asap... waiting impatiently...!!