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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Kaun hai woh mera ---- Sab Kuch :)

waahhh super part 1

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

reading part 1 i felt raghu n antu knw eachother

but part 2 is like antu dnt knw raghu...

im confused...

niki updt soon

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: SweetiePie25
hey nikki,,
sorry for the delay in commenting..
awesome Os.. pls write more.. waiting..

Thank you smita 😊
I am glad you loved it 🤗

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Nichuss
Kaun hai woh mera ---- Sab Kuch :)

waahhh super part 1

Thank you Nichuu 🤗

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Nichuss
reading part 1 i felt raghu n antu knw eachother

but part 2 is like antu dnt knw raghu...

im confused...

niki updt soon

Dont worry will update soon 😉

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Part 3

New Characters:

Daya (Raghu's Mom)
Vikram (Raghu's Dad)
Satya (Raghu's Brother)
Aunty (Servant but considered family member)
Machmach (Raghu's Friend)

Today is a happy day for Naik Family. Today the younger son of their family and 'Sabka Ladla' is coming from London after completing his M.B.A studies. Since morning whole house is celebrating. Suddenly a servant come and tell Daya(Raghu's mom) Choti memsaheb, Raghu baba aa gaye. Daya is preparing some Kheer in the kitchen which is one of the favorite dish of Raghu. She said aa gaye? bahar hai? chalo chalo. !!

She came out of the kitchen, the servant call out & the family members come. Daya ran towards the door, where one boy standing with a smiley face, Raghu tu itna bada ho gaya, mujhe to vishwas nahi ho raha, wo chota sa baccha jo hamesha mere saath mera pallu pakad kar gumta tha wo itna bada ho gaya. Daya use andhar to ane do said Vikram who is Raghu's dad. Daya said aao Raghu.
Raghu came, bend and touch his mother's feet and father's feet in obeisance. Raghu's aunty came and said Raghu aa gaye beta, Daya kya ho gaya tumhe, usse bethny to do, kuch khane do, itna lamba safar karke aya hai. Haan kya loge beta? Nahi mom, kuch nahi actually mei soch raha tha ki mein ja kar fresh ho jata hoon aur. . . He faces interruption, as his father said haan tum jakar fresh ho lo, and ready ho jao. Raghu asked, kyun? kaha jana hai? Vikram said, mere saath hamare office.

Daya and all are surprised. She said abhi to aaya hai thodi dair rest to kar lene dijiye. Rest karne key liye poori zindagi hai aur ab kam nahi karega to kab karega isiliye to mei usse London bheja tha tum jao Raghu, I want to see you just after 15 minutes, it's my order.
Raghu go away with a pale face because he want to go a music concert which is happening today. Aunty said, Vikram ye sab karne ki kya zarorat thy, aj wo aya hai mujhe iss bare mei koi bat nahi karni. Daya, Satya kaha hai? Aj subha se mei ek baar bhi use dekha nahi. Haan mujhe bhi nahi pata wo kaha hai? After sometime Raghu came and sit for breakfast. Vikram said kya baat hai? tum itna pareshaan kyun ho? Dad wo mei aj apke saath office nahi ja sakta. Kya?kya kaha tumne? Haan dad aaj thoda kam hai, kya mei jaan sakta hoon ki kya hai tumhara wo kaam jiske liye tum mujhe mana kar rahe ho? Aj ek music concert hai waha.

Shut up Raghu, tum pagal ho gaye ho, mera beta 'Naik Industries' ka honewala M.D ek ghatiya music concert sunne jayega? Dad mujhe singer banna hei, M.D nahi! What rubbish, tum kya bol rahe ho, tum singer banoge? Haan dad aapko pata hai mei sapno mei bhi ek dhun sunta hoon. Tumhe psychiatrist ki zaroorat hai Raghu tum kahi nahi ja rahe ho mera saath office chalo.

In that moment Satya come and said mein jaunga aapke saath office.
Vikram is very happy he said Satya aa gaye mera beta dekho Raghu kuch sikho is se beta to isse kehte hai jo baap ke saath kandha melakar chalne ki himmat rakhta hai usse nahi jo apne zimmedari se bhagta hei. Satya see Raghu and said, Are Raghu kab aya tu? Sorry yaar thoda kam se gaya tha, I understand. Vikram said chalo beta dair ho rehe hai mei bahar tumhara intezar kar raha hoon aur Raghu tum jao tumhara 'Very Important ' music concert mei enjoy! Vikram left the room Satya said Music Concert? tu waha woh Bandrawala concert mein to nahi ja raha hai? So cheap Raghu apne status to mat bhulo kya yaar. . .

He left, then Daya and Aunty come near to him and said jao beta un dono ki baat ka bura mat mano aur aapna dil chota mat karo mujhe pata hai mom mein kabhi accha beta nahi ban sakta. Raghu kamre mei jao mei coffee bejh rehe hoon. Raghu left.

On the Other hand,

Antara's book keeper's job was from morning 10:a.m to evening 5.00 p.m shift. After her first day she get off the library, standing under a tree and searching for Tina. This is a cloudy day, so Antara is in tension beacause she had forgot to brought umbrella. Antara get angry, she said to herself Tina bhi nah mein yaha akeli khadi hu, kaha hai yaar abhi barish shuru ho jayegi, aur aj mei puri bheeg jaungi. Suddenly she found Tina is coming, she is very excited and panting. Antara said kya howa? kaha se aa rehe hai tu? Coffee shop nahi gayi thi? Main yaha kab se khadi hoon tu ab aa rehe hai tere liye mujhe dadi se dant khani padegi, Tina , Antara rukh mujhe saans to lene de mein ek kam ke liye gayi thi aur tere liye tha wo kam, aur to mujhe suna rehi hai? Kya kam tha? Ek good news deni hai tujhe, pata hei na kal 'Kashmir Concert' shuru ho rehe hai? Obviously pata hai to? Mein uski ticket lene gayi thi kyun ki tujhe to music bahot pasand hai par tujhe to pata hai nah yeh concert saal mei ek bari hota hei, isliye bahot crowd tha so der ho gayi. Tina, tu mere liye sorry yaar par. . .? is mei par kya hai? tu aur dadi mere liye kitna kuch karti hai aur mei tere liye itna nehi kar sakti tu to meri best friend hai tu phirse emotional mat ban ja ab chal mujhe irritate mat kar. Theek hai, chaal.

Naik Family is in very tension due to Raghu's decision. He is not in the house, Daya & aunty is talking in the drawing room, Daya said Raghu abhi tak nahi aya , unka ane ka waqt ho gaya kya hoga subah to itni badi argument ho gaya un dono ke beech ab phir se kuch ho na jaye. Wahi to mein soch rahi hoon, dekh mujhe nahi lagta ki aaj mei kuch sambhal paungi. Mujhe bohat dar lag raha hei, Raghu ki iss decision se mei, Raghu ki kya galti hai? wo ab bada ho gaya, uska bhi to kuch armaan ho sakta hai, Vikram jo kar raha hai wo galat hai.

In that moment, Vikram and Satya come. Vikram said, Raghu aya? nahi. Suddenly they noticed that Raghu is entering, Vikram feels irritated and said ho gaya tumhara music concert, ab to tum office aa sakte ho? Jee dad, mein kal se office aunga. But no one noticed Satya. He was upset and angry with Raghu . Raghu come straight his room, suddenly his phone ring; It is from his best friend Machmach who lived in Kashmir. Raghu is very happy that his friend call him. Raghu said Are yaar, kaisa hai tu? Mein to theek hu, tu kaisa hai yaad hai mujhe? mei to soch raha tha ki London mei naya dost banne to hum sabko bhul gaye. Tu same hai chod tujhe ek interesting baat batata hoon tujhe Kashmir ana hai kya? kyun?
kyun ki kal yaha ek bohat bada concert hai jo yaha saal mei ek baar hota hai aur is bahane kuch din yaha guzar sakta hai aur teri outing bhi ho jayegi. Kya kehta hai? Haan yeh to very good news hai, to tu aa raha hai? Obviously theek hai mein kal station aa jaunga tujhe lene ke liye lakin ek problem hei tere dad. Pata hai yaar dad kab meri baat sunty hai is baar bhi nahi sunegy tane marenge, but mein sambhal lunga ok good night. Good night. Raghu is very happy, he came to the balcony, looking in the sky, there is the beautiful moon, he said, Kashmir I'm coming, be ready.
The moon smiled.

To be continued

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Wow...raghu to reach kashmir

intresting

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Very nice update nikki...now rantara will meet in concert!lovely...this time raghu ki mom theek hain to dad khadus..hahaha...
Thanks fr pm

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Nichuss
Wow...raghu to reach kashmir

intresting

Thank you Nichuu 🤗

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
Very nice update nikki...now rantara will meet in concert!lovely...this time raghu ki mom theek hain to dad khadus..hahaha...
Thanks fr pm

Hahaha thanks suchi 🤗

U know nah ek villain hona zaroori hai 😆 To add some spice 😆

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