FF: Meri Zindagi Hai Woh

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, I just thought to write a new OS, i hope you will liked it.</font>


Characters: Raghu and Antara. Others will be introduced soon.

The train on the station is ready to depart, at that moment
a handsome young boy coming towards the train running. The train starts moving
and the boy is running really fast so he won't miss that train. A young girl was standing on the train to
capture some pictures, when he saw that boy running towards the train she
quickly gave her hand and quickly he hold her hand and jump in that
compartment. The girl said tum pagal hogaye ho kya. ? Yeh kya kar rehe thy apne
apko DDLJ ki kajol samjhaty ho kya jo shahrukh tumhara hath pakreygy or tum
kheech leyga. The young boy replied, sorry and thanks. Ek time pe sorry or
thanks bare kamal ho ho, acha jane doon. By the way my name is rukhsana or
tumhara naam. ? the young boy hi my name is raghunath.


Rukhsana and raghu were sitting at the same compartment when
rukhsana told raghu to come with them and enjoy with her friends. One friend of
rukhsana asked raghu, ap kaha ja rehe hai. Raghu replied, Srinagar. The girl oh
wow hum bhi wahi ja rehe hai, actually hamare ek friend ki shadi hai is liye
hum sab ja rehe hai. By the way, tum bohat handsome ho lakin yeh kya ajeb or
purane kapre pehen rakhe hai, aisa lag raha hai key seedhe jail se arehe ho.
Everybody laughed. When raghu said, sahi pehchana mein seedha jail se hi araha
ho. Every one was shocked and looking towards each other in shocked. Everyone sat
quiet and didn't talk to raghu.


Rukhsana was playing guitar, when raghu complemented
rukhsana tum bohat acha baja leyty. Rukhsana said, thank you raghu. Lagta hai
tumhe bhi music ka bohat shoq hai tumhe guitar bajana aata hai kya, nai aata to
nai han lakin mein Mouth Organ thora bohat baja leyta ho. Rukhsana wow zara koi
ache se dhun to sunao. Raghu played a very beautiful tune, everyone was amazed
to see that. Playing the same tune which he used to play every day only for
Her. Raghu closed his eyes and continued playing the same tune, when he was
seeing a glimpses of a beautiful girl infront of his eyes.


He was continuously playing that tune suddenly he stoped and
tear started to fell from his eyes. Rukhsana asked, kya howa raghu itne ache
dhun baja rehe thy ruk kyun gaye. Raghu replied kuch nahi who kisi ki yaad
agaye. Rukhsana asked, kis ki. ? Hai ek larki bohat khoobsurat bohat bhooli ek
dum bache jaise uski hasi, mein yeh dhun hamesha uske liye bajata hoon.
Rukhsana, lagta hai bohat pyar karte ho use? Han bohat bohat pyar karta ho.
Rukhsana, to phir tum inn kapro mei, or jail se kyun arehe ho.?


Kyun key mein ek bohat bara criminal hoon, kisi key pyar,
kisi key bharose ko meine tora ho. Bohat nafrat karty hai who mujhse,
uski ankhon mein kabhi meine apne liye beshumar pyar dekha tha, lakin ab uski
ankhon mein mere liye nafrat hai bohat nafrat or ek darr hai. Rukhsana asked, kis ki ankhon mein, or kon
hai who. ?


Raghu replied, MERI ZINDAGI HAIN WOH


He started his story.

IHope you guys will like it, Tell me if you want me to continue this OS.


Part 1: Page 1

Part 2: Page 7

Part 3: Page 11

Part 4 Page 14

Part 5: Page 17

Part 6: Page 21

Part 7: Page 28

Part 8: Page 33

Part 9: Page 36







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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls continue dear loved d concept 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woah!!!! Antara ki shaadi h..
raghu ko pata chala to jail tod ke aa gaya...right???

osm starting..so cont soon..

btw badi frank ladkiya hai yaar ye to...lolz..

luvd this line..

When raghu said, sahi pehchana mein seedha jail se hi araha ho. Every one was shocked and looking towards each other in shocked. Everyone sat quiet and didn't talk to raghu.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res karna muje pasand nai but for this time forgive me will be back jaldi
nikki wow, you have done a wonderful job yaar, masttt👏👏
Edited by Suku_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar that awesome. so rukku baby going for antara marriage. uff Raghu going to meet her. wow lovely. I love the concept
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start...
Continue soon and pm me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well written nikki... good..
continue and send me pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you ! Please continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww ! nikki dear its so nice and lovely😳...thanks for pm..😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start.. Woahhh looks like they are going to Antara's wedding and he's going to see her.. Omg i hope she doesn't still hate him.. Very nice concept.. Continue soon :)

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