Rantara FF Humsafar UPDATED PG 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: honeybees22

thnks abhi decide karna hai that who will write which part

lets talk on our usual adda...sonias FF! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

thnks abhi decide karna hai that who will write which part

okay 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

lets talk on our usual adda...sonias FF! 😆

haan 😆😆 warna kuch readers yaha se hi story read karke chale jayenge 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nice i cant wait for the chapters 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice concept
would love to read more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
hey hina
dear continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Loved it pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hey nice start..
Pls pm me..
Do continue soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1:


raghu and antaras wedding day:

all the preparations for the wedding were going on

raghu was in his room getting ready

raghu: (to himself) mujhe miss call se baat karni hogi shadi se pehle par kaise kar paunga yaha toh sab mujhe jane nai denge aur wahan sab mujhe antara se milne nai denge aur agar hume milne denge phir mai kya bolunga ki maine hi tumhare papa ko mara hai par mai nai janta tha ki uss parcel mai bomb tha im sorry antara mai yeh toh nai bol sakunga woh toot jayegi

a tear rolled down his cheek

satya was shocked on what he just heard

satya: oh toh yeh baat hai ab mai sabke samne tumhara yeh raaz kholunga raghu tu ab dekh mere pyaar ko mujhse cheena hai na tumne ab mai bhi tumko antara nai pane dunga

on the other side antara was also getting ready

antara: finally aaj meri aur raghu ki shaadi hai (happily)

rukhsana walks into the room

rukhsana: antara tum aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho raghu tuhe dekhta hi reh jayega

antara blushes

antara: thank you tum bhi aaj bohot nice lag rahi ho

rukhsana: thanks ab thodi hi der reh gayi hai aur tum phir raghu ki hamesha ke liye ho jaogi

antara: haan (smiles)

rukhsana: mai ab dekh ke ati hun ki agar kuch kaam hai

antara: okay

dm's place:

dm: tum aaj mere saath aoge aur antara ko yeh bataoge ki rghu ne tumhari madat ki thi uske baap ko marne mai

aman: par raghu nai toh na jaante hue woh present waha rakha tha

dm: joh maine kaha woh hi karna warna...

aman got scared and said

aman: theek hai

naik sadan:

raghu was walking around the room worried because he cant speak to antara

a while later satya walked in and said ab tumhe neeche ana hai tumhari dulhan ati hogi thodi der mai

raghu was getting really upset an worried upset because he had to tell antara that he killed her dad and worried for her reaction on finding out

satya took raghu downstairs and made him sit at the mandap

a while later antara was called she came too and sat down next to raghu she smiled at him whilst he was lost in her

he was so lost in her that he did not notice that the wedding had started taking place

he realised once they had to get up for the phere

raghu: (in his mind) mai ye kaise karsakta hun mujhe antara ko sab sach batana hoga abhi

raghu was about to speak up when they all heard amans voice

aman: ruko yeh shaadi nai ho sakti...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is supposed to be my own FF but i haven't read it myself 😆
RES! 🤣

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