Rantara ss :shadi se pahle shadi k bad updated PART 10 PAGE 29 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thnks yaar nice raghu sings for antara
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

thanks dear...waiting fr update


welcum dear thnx 4 commenting 😊
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow thnks yaar nice raghu sings for antara


thnx honey 😛 there is much more awaiting in next part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww! Its lovely precap dear!our fav song!update soon
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Woww! Its lovely precap dear!our fav song!update soon


thnx n ya our fav song 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice precap..plz do cont soon..
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Thnx dear 😊 have started updating
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eagerly waiting for update..
n plz give long update... :)
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Hey guys i m back with my next update bt first i would lyk to thank all my friends who lyked n commented on the updates really means alot 2 me thanku so much 🤗 😊 😛

well here is part 5 happy reading

PART 5

antara:thanku so much machmach
machmach:its ok bhabhi
antara was blushing hearing d word "bhabhi" from him raghu noticed her blushing nd smiled
raghu:lekin machmach tum yaha kashmir me kya kar rae ho?
Machmach:kya raghu tujhe kya laga ki main tjhe akele aane dunga kashmir aaji ke sath dost hu tera tere itne bade decision me main tera sath nae dunga to kaun dega aur vaise bhi apni hone wali bhabhi se bhi to milna tha mjhe to bs aa gaya apna saman pack karke
raghu:tu kbi nae sudhrega


machmach suddenly notices that both of them were wounded n said:arey ye kya tum dono ko to bahut chot lagi hai chalo main tumhe hospital le chalta hu
rantara agrees they sit in his car n heads to d hospital

IN THE HOSPITAL

Doctor dresses their wounds n says antara "u must be his wife(rantara looks at each other n smiles) pls see ki inki(raghu) ki patti aap tym tym par badalti rahe"
antara nods


raghu antara nd machmach leaves from d hospital nd reaches antara's home

mr nd mrs kaul sees bandages over raghu nd antara nd gets worried
mrs kaul:antara raghu beta ye sab kya ho gaya ye itni chot kaise lag gae tum ko

raghu:auntyji aap dariye mat hum thik hai
he explains everything what happened
mr kaul:bobby tum bacho ke liye haldi wala dudh banao usse inhe better lagega (looking at machmach)ji aap kaun?
Antara:papa ye raghu ke dost hai machmach
machmach touch his feet nd takes his blessings

mr kaul:aaiye machmach aapka swagat hai hame bhut acha laga ki aap aaye
machmach:thanku uncle


"Arey kya koi mera swagat bhi karega ya nhi"

all of them looked in the direction of voice
antara(excited):RUKSANA
ruksana:han main tu to mjhe bhul gae na antara
antara:nae ruku aisa nae hai vo
ruku:aisa hi hai tbi to tune mjhe bataya nae ki tune mere jiju dhundh liye hai(she misunderstands machmach to be his jiju)haye allah kitne ache hai
antu:NAE NAE ruku vo to machmach hai raghu ke dost ye hai tumhare jiju(blushing nd pointing raghu)
machmach:or nae to kya vaise bhi main to abhi bhi single hu(machmach n ruksana looks at each other)
ruku:haye allah mjhe maf kardo jiju mjhe laga
raghu:koi bt nae sali sahiba vaise ek bt kahu aap hai to bdi khubsurat
antara was getting jealous
ruku:jiju mjhpar line marne ki koshish kar rae ho
raghu(flirting)arey tumne suna nae sali aadhi ghar wali hoti hai

nw both antara n machmach were getting jealous
antara leaves the place in anger n this didnt get notice by raghu
he goes after her

aapa:raghu kaha ja rae ho
raghu:ji vo
aaji:arey jane do noor isse antara ko manana jo hai

everybody laughs n raghu leaves blushing

IN ANTARA'S ROOM
Antara was very angry by raghu's behaviour suddenly raghu enters her room
raghu:ANTARA
antara:aap yaha kyu aaye hai jaiye apni sali ke pass
raghu smirks n says:aap jal rae hai antara?
Antara:main kyu jalungi bhala
n she tries to leave d room
bt raghu
closes d door n pins her to d wall
antara:ye aap kya rae hai raghu jane dijiye mjhe
raghu:man lo antara ki tumhe jalan hui
antara:nae
raghu:acha?he comes her more close 2 her antara gets scared n closes her eyes raghu comes near her nw they were nt even inches upart he whispers in her ears ruksana meri adhi ghar wali hai antara lekin tum meri puri ghar wali hu
antara opens her eyes n asks kya lagti hu main tumhari?

Raghu:
Sabkuch
Antara blushes she push him n leaves the room raghu smirks n was abt 2 leave d room when he hits a table nd a file falls he picks it up n reads it it was written
This is my first song i have written myself n this is very closed to me bt i never showed it to anyone as i want my husband 2 sing it 4 me

(the song was mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu)

Raghu reads d song nd smiles as it was very beautiful
raghu leaves d room nd go downstairs
aaji:raghu beta hame ab hotel ke liye nikalna chahiye

mr kaul:nae aaji aap log abhi nae ja paenge bahar snowfall ho raha hai sare roads block ho gae hai
aaji:acha thik hai
raghu was happy to hear that nd even antara was very happy

ruksana:to kyu na hum sab ek game khele truth n dare kaisa rahega?
Machmach:arey bhut acha hai
raghu(teasing antara again)arey sali to meri hai to ache ideas to degi hi
raghu winks at antara n she was getting jealous

everybody sits in a circle raghu tried 2 sit with antara bt she sits with machmach nd aapa while raghu sits with ruksana
the game starts nd ruksana rolls d bottle nd it stops at machmach
ruksana:machmach tumhe ek gana gana hoga or vo bhi kisi SPECIAL ke liye machmach could only think of ruksana
machmach(blushing):"nazar ke samne jigar ke pass koi rahta hai vo hu tum"
machmach rolls d bottle now nd it stops at raghu
machmach:raghu tjhe ab meri hone wali bhabhi ke liye gana gana hoga
raghu thinks for a while nd starts singing

Heer teri ek da zarave ve main ki kara ki kara mahiya
mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu
Rab hai razi jo tu hai razi tu hi mera maula or qazi suni suni si ye sari rahein ve tjhko tarse meri nigahe ve mjhko tjhme fana ho jane de teri baho me mjhe kho jane deAnkhiya nu rahn de aaa ooo mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mahi tu mera ranjhan tu mera mahi tu mera ranjhan tuAntara was shocked on hearing this song antara:(in her mind)ye gana raghu ko kaise...ye to maine us file me...khi raghu ko vo file to nhi mil gae
she was shocked as well as happy as raghu has fulfilled her wish
raghu looked at her smiling face n was smiling to

raghu rolls the bottle n nw it was antara's turn
raghu:so antara truth ya dare
ruku:arey jiju dare isse nae hoga iske liye truth hi thik hai..
Antara(angrily):DARE
ruku:antara tum or dare?par agar tum dare chahti ho to ab tumhara challenge bhi main bataungi TO ANTARA TUMHE RAGHU KO KISS KARNA HOGA...

Thats it guys pls leave ur comments n tell me whether u lyked it or nt sry if i made u bore 😆
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Edited by ..Twinks.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb waiting for the next update

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