Rantara ss :shadi se pahle shadi k bad updated PART 10 PAGE 29

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Hey guys its a weekend again means no rantara i was getin bore so thought of writing dis ss bt dis is my 1st tym m writing so it may nt b very gud bt still m trying so bear it n pls leave ur response


INDEX:
PART 1 BELOW
PART2 PAGE 3
PART3 PAGE 5
PART 4 PAGE 6
PRECAP PAGE 10
PART 5 PAGE 11
PART 6 PAGE 14
PART 7 PAGE 17
PART 8 PAGE 22
PART 9 PAGE 26
PART 10 PAGE 29
"antara tu tayar ho gae beta?"asked mrs kaul
"ji mamma"
"beta ladke wale aate hi honge to unse ache se bat karna pyar se"
"ji mamma main unse ache se bat karungi ache se shadi karungi hamare ache ache bache honge ab aap jaoge mamma"said antara d most beautiful still d most simple girl of kashmir..she was getting ready as she has 2 meet a boy n his family 4 marriage..she wore a white color suit wid net sleeve.
Half an hour later
d boy's family comes 2 meet antara.kaul family welcomes dem n noor aapa brings antara wid her...d boy who see her coming cud nt take her eyes from her she was luking so gorgeous so innocent as if an angel has descended on earth...
"mjhe lagta hai ki hume ladke ladki ko aapas me bt karne deni chaiye"said aaji
"ji zarur antara beti jao"says mr kaul
antara comes 2 d terrace wid d boy n both of dem sits...it was a huge silence for sometime as d boy was lost in her beauty n was continuosly staring her while antara was silent due 2 her shyness...
Bt finally d it was d boy who breaks d silence..
"To tum ho antara hi mera nam raghu hai vaise tumse milkar acha laga to apne bare me kuch batao apni lykes dislykes k bare me"
"ji mjhe gane ka bhut shauk hai or guitar bajane ka bhi music meri zindagi hai"
"wow music ye to mera b shauk hai infact main bhi mouth organ baja leta hu(excited)to iska matlab apni jodi khub jamegi"
antara looks at him while raghu looks at antara n dey hav an eyelock raghu tries 2 divert d topic "apne bare me kuch or batao"
"mjhe hamesha se hi simple lyf chahiye koi aisho aaram nae 21st century ki hote hue bhi mjhe modern lyf kabi achi nae lagi mjhe aaj b cutting chai chaiye champein nae...
Raghu was impressed bcoz she was d kind of girl he had always desired of...
"vaise aap kya karte hai?"antara asked
"main ca hu vaise delhi me mera ek khud ka rockband bhi hai or usi band me main apne dosto k sath mouth organ bajatu hu"
antara smiled
"vaise mera band zyada famous nae hai vo kya hai na music mera shauk hai main use apni kamai ka zaria nae banana chahta"said raghu
"achi bat hai meri b soch tumhari jaisi hi hai isliye main school teacher bhi hu"
both raghu and antara continued their talks when noor aapa comes
"raghu antara aao beta sab tumhe neeche bula rae hai"
both of dem comes wid her in d hall where every1 was waiting 4 dem..
"to raghu kya khyal hai tumhara antara k bare me?"asked aaji
"didi kaise lage aapko mere hone wale jiju?"asked excited ishan...

precap-rantara's decision regarding marriage

hope u lyk it dont forget 2 leave ur response




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nice start update soon nd pm me please ;)
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nice 1 dear pls update soon
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Nice start.. update soon..:) keep writing...:D
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Mast .. 😊 😃 👏
keep on ...
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great
I loved it
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nice start update soon and pm me the next time dear😊
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Great start! Music connects them.. Haww!! Continue soon :)
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nice concept dear
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That is a very cute and nice start plz update soon and pm me!

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