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Posted: 11 years ago
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I DON'T WRITE BUT I JUST TRIED BY THE WAY I DON'T KNW HINDI SO SOS:

PART 1

Three weeks after both had admitted their love:

It was 9.00am mama, noor apa and mama had gone out for Antara's mother treatment and Ishu was at school. Antara was in the bathroom washing her face, while turning around she slipped but someone caught her;

Antara: RAGHUUU

Raghu: Haa meh, kyu kya huwa?

Antara: Kuch bi nahi - Antara got back up.

There was an akward silence and that Antara said ;

Antara: Tum andar kaise hai? Door aur window sab lock hai

Raghu: Tumhe kyu batoa mera secret hai - waise bhi meh yaha apnay good morning kiss ke liya ayah hu.

Antara: Nahi miligie

Raghu grabbed he hand and blocked her with the toilet wall

Raghu: Kaha jaigi tu

Antara: Chaliy jao gi

Raghu: Koshish to kar

Antara thought for a while and started to cough Raghu got worried and let go and just as antara got the chance she ran to the kitchen.

Raghu followed her and caught her.

Raghu: (IN A ANGRY VOICE) MUJAY AISE MAT DARAYA KORA.

Antara's eyes swelled up and she started crying. Seeing this Raghu felt guilty.

Raghu: Please ro mat dekh meh sorry bolraha hu.

Antara: Nahi mante

Raghu kissed her on the cheek and said : Abb?

Antara : Nahi

Raghu than started kissng her on the neckline and and on her neck while she caressed his hair,

Raghu: Abb

Antara: Abb man gi

They than shared a tight and passionate hug.

PART 1 = PAGE 1

PART 2 = PAGE 2

PART 3 = PAGE 2


Edited by HELLO999 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow short and sweet :) nice 1 write more :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good i love short OS always😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow soo nice and captivating
pls write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww that short and sweet loved it yaar!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️ly yaar... well done...👍🏼
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PART 2

Raghu than started kissng her on the neckline and and on her neck while she caressed his hair,

Raghu: Abb

Antara: Abb man gi

They than shared a tight and passionate hug

Antara: Abb tum jao

Raghu: Kyu?

Antara: Mujay tayaar ho na hai.

Raghu: To tum jao meh tumhara yaha wait karu ga

Antara left the room

Raghu thought to himself: Is yeri ko nai miss kaul ko kya huwa hai itni parishaan kyu lag rahi hai?

IN ANATARA'S ROOM:

Antara was ready and was looking beautiful like always. She got a call from an private number but there never was anyone on the line, this had been going on for a week or two now. Antara picked up.

Antara : Hello

And for the first time someone was on the other end.

On the other line: Heloo,baby

It sounded like a man

Antara: Kon bol raha hai?

Man: Tumhara janay man

Antara: Apni bakwas band karo.

Man: Kyu kya kar lo gi tum? Apnay Raghu ko bataow gi?

Antara: Tum usay kaisay jante ho?

Man: Wo mera bohat kareeb hai!

Antara: Wo tumhe choray ga nahi

And she hangs up.

Antara runs to Raghu and hugs him and starts crying.

Raghu: Miss kaul kya huwa? Tum raw kyu rahi ho

And antara narrated the whole story.

Raghu: Tum gabro mat mei usay aisa sabak sikao ga ki wo humasha yaad rakay ga.

Saying this Raghu hugged Antara and left her house. Antara felt a whole lot better telling Raghu everything.

On the way Raghu saw MM and told him everything, MM got worried,

MM: Bhai aap fikar mat karo hum us larkay ko doond kay uski band bajay gay.

Raghu: Wo to thik hai leykin mujay miss kaul ki chinta hora hi hay.

Antara was listening to everything

Antara: Agar tum maray saath ho to mujay chinte karany ki kya zoorat hai? Bikaar ho gai gi.

Edited by HELLO999 - 11 years ago
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PART 3

On the way Raghu saw MM and told him everything, MM got worried,

MM: Bhai aap fikar mat karo hum us larkay ko doond kay uski band bajay gay.

Raghu: Wo to thik hai leykin mujay miss kaul ki chinta hora hi hay.

Antara was listening to everything

Antara: Agar um maray saath ho to mujay chinte karany ki kya zoorat hai? Bikaar ho gi.

Raghu smile and so did MM

MM= Meri yeri behna jo bhi tujay parishaan kar raha hai meh usay charu ga nahiy.

Antara felt relived knowing she had some people she could completely rely on.

Antara left and Raghu was about to leave aswell when MM stopped him.

MM: Bhai aap kuch bhool to nahi ray?

Raghu: Nahi to, Agar hai to tu mujay bata

MM: Aaj yeri ka

Raghu gives him a stern look

MM: Nahi wo miss kaul ka janam din hai

Raghu: Kya? Meh kaisa bhool sakta hu? Meh bhi bout bara yera hu!!!

MM: Hamay kuch to karna paray ga

Raghu: Wo to hai lekin wo kya kehtay hai? Hai SURPRISE ho ga tum yedi ko nahi bataiy ga.

MM: Hai acha tikhay

MM and Raghu book a small hall and start decorating cos it was a party only for those three.

It was 7.oo and Raghu told Antara to come outside and asked her to come with her

Antara: Lekin Ishu?

Raghu: Wo Ruksaana usay dehk li giy

Antara: Tik hai.

He tells her to through the door. She does what she is told.

Inside it is very dark and suddenly the lights turn on.

MM & RAGHU: SURPRISE

Antara strted smiling uncontrollably

Raghu: Kya huwa?

Antara hugs Raghu tightly and then goes and hugs MM but loosely.

Raghu: Aaa dance karte hai.

The song Naa Jaane Kahan Se Aaya Hai came on

And they have a blast

MM: Ek romantic song bhi bajana chaiyay

He puts on Ishk wala love

Raghu grabs Antara by the waist.

Raghu: Chal shuru ho jao

Antara puts her head on Raghu's shoulder and Raghu kisses her head.

And they do a slow dance.

Edited by HELLO999 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey read your story is really nice.. keep udating n happy writing:) rantara are accepted. In every way of story...:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW yaaar so nice! hayeee bday party!

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